内容正文:
人教新版
Unit 3 Same or Different
初二上
写作精讲精练
写作话题·Write a reply to a post on friends(回帖谈论朋友间的异同)
人教新版初二上Unit3 Same or Different?写作精讲精练
写作任务Write a reply to a post on friends(回帖谈论朋友间的异同)
一、审题
1文体
论坛回帖(非正式信件格式,但需有称呼、正文、结尾署名)
,称呼:Hi[用户名],或Hello everyone,
〉正文:直接表达观点+举例说明
,结尾:总结看法+署名(如Yours,Li Hua或Best,Li Hua)
2话题
谈论自己和好朋友之间的相同点和不同点
,必须同时提到“相同”和“不同”两方面
3人称
第一人称I为主,提到朋友时用第三人称he/she
4时态
一般现在时(描述常态)
5要点
>回应帖子,引出话题
>列出1~2个相同点(爱好、性格、习惯等)
,列出12个不同点(性格、特长、喜好等)
,简单说明自己的看法:相同或不同都不影响友谊
6字数
80~100词
二、文章结构(三段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
回应帖子,引出话题
I saw your post.I'd like to share something about my best friend and me.
中间
先写相同点(Ne both./We have.in common),再写不同点(However,we are
different in...He/She is...but I am...)
结尾
表达对友谊的看法,总结升华
In my opinion,it's OK if friends are the same or different.The most
important thing is that we care about each other.
三、核心组词造句
核心词汇
词same相同的
different不同的
similarity相似点
词
difference不同点
both两者都
hobby爱好
词personality性格
share分享;共有
in common共同点
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
1
have a lot in common
有很多共同点
2
share the same hobby
有相同的爱好
be different from
与..不同
4
get along well with
与..…相处融洽
5
in some ways
在某些方面
6
care a bout each other
关心彼此
基础造句
1 My best friend and I both like playing basketball.
2 We have a lot in common,such as reading and traveling.
3 However,she is very outgoing,but I am a little shy
4 Different hobbies don't stop us from being good friends.
四、好词好句
(更详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
similar
相似的
序号
单词
释义
2
opposite
相反的
3
outgoing
外向的
4
shy
害羞的
5
independent
独立的
6
creative
有创造力的
加分句型
介绍相同点
Both of us enjoy love like doing...
We share the same interest in...
One thing we have in common is that...
介绍不同点
He/She is more...than me.
While I prefer...,he/she likes...
The biggest difference between us is that...
结尾升华
Even though we are different in some ways,we understand each other well.
It doesn't matter if friends are the same or different.What really matters is that we support
each other.
Our differences make our friendship more interesting.
五、写作模板
Hi
I read your post about friends.I'd like to share something about my best friend and me
We have some things in common.For example,we both
Also,we
However,we are different in some ways.He/She is
but I am
Another
difference is that_
In my opinion,it's OK to have both similarities and differences.Friends help us grow and
understand each other.So don't worry too much!
Best,
六、作文仿写
题目
假设你在论坛上看到网友Tom发帖:“Do you think friends should be the same or different?”请你
回帖,介绍你和你最好的朋友的异同,并表达你的看法。
范文
Hi Tom,
I saw your post.I'd like to share something about my best friend and me.
We have a lot in common.For example,we both love playing basketball.We also share the
same hobby of reading science books.However,we are different in some ways.Mike is very
outgoing and likes to talk with everyone,but I am a little shy.Another difference is that he is
good at math,while I do better in English.
In my opinion,it doesn't matter if friends are the same or different.What really matters is that
we care about and help each other.That's true friendship.
Best,
Li Hua
(约110词,符合初中要求)
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1
回帖谈论朋友间的异同
约95词
Dear Mike,
You asked about similarities and differences between friends.Here's what I think.
My best friend and I share many hobbies:both love reading and playing basketball.That's
why we enjoy hanging out together.
2 But we also have differences.For example,I am outgoing while he is shy.I prefer pop
music;he likes classical.These differences actually make our friendship richer.
3 The secret is to respect each other's choices and learn from each other.Friends don't need
to be the same.
Hope my reply helps you!
Yours,
Tom
拓展范文2
回帖谈论朋友间的异同
约97词
Dear Sam,
I'd like to share my thoughts on friends'similarities and differences.
1 Similarities:My friend Lucy and I both love drawing and watching cartoons.We often
share our artworks.Also,we have the same study habits-we both review notes before
exams.
2 Differences:She is good at sports;I prefer reading.She likes traveling;I enjoy staying
home.We often teach each other new skills.
3 My advice:Don't worry if you and your friend are different.Differences let you grow
together and make friendship stronger.
Best wishes,
Emma