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Unit 2 We're Family!
初一上
写作精讲精练
写作话题·Introduce your family using a photo
(用照片介绍家人)
Unit 2 We're Family!
写作任务Introduce your family using a photo(用照片介绍家人)
申题
1文体
照片介绍短文(以描述为主,可以适当抒发情感;不需要书信格式,直接成文即可)
2话题
通过一张家庭照片介绍自己的家人
3人称
以第一人称I/We为主,介绍家人时用第三人称he/she/they
4时态
一般现在时(描述现状、长相、性格、爱好)
5要点
,开头点明照片内容(何时何地拍的,照片里有哪些人)
>依次介绍每个家庭成员(称呼、外貌特征、性格特点、喜好等),选取2~3个细节
,表达对家人的感情(如:We are a happy family../I love my family.)
6字数
80~100词(初中标准要求)
二、
文章结构
(三段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
引出照片,简单交代照片中的人物
Here is a photo of my family.There are four people in it:my father,my
mother,my sister and me.
中间
分人物简要介绍(每个家人1~2句话)
段落
内容要点
外貌、性格、爱好等,可结合照片中的动作或表情
结尾
总结家庭氛围,表达爱/自豪
示例:We are a happy family,I love them very much.
三、核心组词造句
核心词汇
分类
词汇
家庭成员
father,mother,parents,brother,sister,grandparents,uncle,aunt,cousin
外貌特征
tall,short,thin,big/small eyes,long/short hair,glasses,smile
性格
kind,friendly,funny,hard-working,patient,smart,outgoing
爱好
like love doing,enjoy,be good at,hobby,often do
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
1
in the photo
在照片里
2
a family of four five
四/五口之家
3
on the left right
在左边/右边
4
next to
在..…旁边
in front of
在.…前面
6
look+形容词(look young/happy)
看起来…
7
be always ready to help
总是乐于助人
8
have a lot of fun together
一起玩得很开心
基础造句
1My father is tall and has short black hair.He is a teacher.
2 My mother is kind and patient.She likes cooking
3My younger sister is very cute.She loves playing with dolls.
4We often go for a walk together after dinner.
5 In the photo,everyone is smiling.We look very happy.
四、好词好句(更详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
1
energetic
精力充沛的
2
humorous
幽默的
warm-hearted
热心的
4
neat
整洁的(描述外貌或房间)
optimistic
乐观的
6
be crazy about
对..…着迷
7
take after
长得像(遗传)
加分句型
外貌描写
(含定语)
,The woman with long curly hair is my mother.(那个留着长卷发的女人是我妈妈。)
,My brother,who wears a pair of glasses,looks very clever.(我戴眼镜的哥哥看起来很聪明.)
性格十爱好复合句
My father is humorous,which makes everyone around him laugh easily.
My sister is a girl who loves reading,so she always has a book in her hand.
真情结尾句
Though we are busy,we always try to spend time together.
Family is the most important part of my life.
This photo reminds me of how lucky I am to have such a loving family.
五、导作模板
My Family Photo
Here is a photo of my family.There are
people in it:
(列出全部成员)
On the left,
is
(姓名/称呼),He/She
(外貌或动作).He/She is
(性格)and enjoys
(爱好).Next to him/her is
(描
写第二个成员),In the middle,
(第三个成员)is
(特征).Everyone looks
(表情/氛围)
I love my family.We always have fun together.
六、作文仿写
范文
My Family Photo
Here is a photo of my family.There are four people in it:my father,my mother,my younger
sister and me.
On the left,my father is standing tall with short black hair.He is kind and always helps me
with my homework.He enjoys reading newspapers every morning.Next to him is my mother.
She has long straight hair and a warm smile.She is a great cook and often makes delicious
meals for us.In the front,my little sister is making a funny face.She is only five years old,but
she is very cute and lovely.I am sitting beside her,holding her hand.
I love my family very much.We are a happy family and always have a good time together.
字数统计:约120词(符合初中要求,可略删减至90~100词)
使用句型:外貌描写(has long straight hair)、性格描写(kind and always helps)、爱好描写(enjoys reading)、表
情描写(making a funny face)。
教辅提示
,如果照片中人数较少,可以对每个成员多加一两句细节(如年龄、工作、最喜欢做的事)。
,注意人称一致:介绍家人时用he/she/they
可以加入照片颜色或场景(如:in the living room/in the park)让内容更丰富。
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1
用照片介绍家人给笔友
约95词
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your letter.You asked about my family,so I'd like to introduce them with this
photo.
In the photo,you can see four people.1.The tall man in a blue shirt is my father.He is a kind
doctor.2.The pretty woman next to him is my mother.She is a teacher.3.The boy with
glasses is my brother.He is 15 years old.4.And the little girl in the middle is me!We are all
smiling because it was our family trip.
I hope you can see how much we love each other.
Yours,
Li Hua
拓展范文2
用照片介绍家人给新朋友
约93词
Dear Sarah,
Nice to meet you!Let me introduce my family using this photo I took last weekend.
Look at the photo carefully:The man on the left is my father,a hardworking engineer.The
woman beside him is my mother-she cooks delicious food.The boy holding a basketball is
my elder brother,Mike.And the cute baby in my mother's arms is my little sister.I am the one
wearing a red cap behind them.
We often take family photos to remember happy moments.I really love my warm family.
Yours,
Chen Wei