内容正文:
人教新版
Unit 3 My School
初一上
写作精讲精练
写作话题·Email a friend to describe your school
(发邮件向朋友介绍学校)
人教新版初一上Unit3 My School
导作任务Email a friend to describe your school(发邮件向朋友介绍学校)
一、申题
1文体
电子邮件(邮件格式,必须有称呼、正文、祝福语、署名)
注意:电子邮件格式与书信基本一致,可写“Dear.,"开头,“Yours,"或“Best wishes,"结尾。
2话题
向朋友介绍自己的学校,包括学校环境、设施、特色等
3人称
以第一人称I/We为主(介绍“我们学校"),也可以适当用you邀请朋友来参观
4时态
一般现在时(描述学校现状)
5要点
>点明写信目的:介绍学校/分享校园生活
,描述2~3个学校的特点(如教学楼、图书馆、操场、课程、活动)
,简单说明自己为什么喜欢这些地方或它们的好处
,结尾表达邀请或期待朋友的回复
6字数
80~100词(初中标准要求)
文章结构
(三段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
问候+说明写信目的(想介绍自己的学校)
中间
分2~3点介绍学校的不同方面(每个点加一句感受或理由)
段落
内容要点
结尾
表达希望(如欢迎朋友来参观)+祝福语+署名
三、核心组词造句
核心词汇
词school学校
classroom教室
library图书馆
词playground操场
gym体育馆
building楼房
词beautiful美丽的
modern现代化的
bright明亮的
词big大的
clean干净的
friendly友好的
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
1
in the middle of...
在..中间
2
on the left right
在左边/右边
3
between...and...
在…和.…之间
next to ..
紧挨着..
5
a lot of lots of
许多
6
have fun doing sth
玩得开心做某事
7
be good for…
对..…有好处
8
have...floors
有…层楼
基础造句
1Our school is big and beautiful.
2 There is a large playground in front of the classroom building
3 We often read books in the library after class.
4 The teachers are very friendly and helpful.
四、好词好句
(更详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
1
spacious
宽做的
2
bright
明亮的
3
well-equipped
设备齐全的
4
colourful
多姿多彩的
序号
单词
释义
5
relaxing
合人放松的
6
convenient
方便的
7
popular
受欢迎的
8
amazing
合人惊叹的
加分句型
介绍地点
(There be句型)
There is/are...in our school.
In our school,you can find ..
说明位遣
(方位介词)
The library is next to the teaching building
The playground lies between the gym and the dining hall.
表达感受】(含原因)
I like the library best because it is quiet and I can read many books there.
The playground is my favourite place because we can play basketball and have fun with
friends.
结尾邀请句
If you come to my school,I will show you around.
I hope you can visit my school one day.It is really a wonderful place.
五、写作模板
Dear
How is everything going?I am writing to tell you about my school.It is very nice and I
really like it.
First,
It is
because
Second
We often
there.It is
Third,
I think it is
What about your school?Please write back and tell me.I hope you can visit my school
some day.
Best wishes,
六、作文仿写
范文
Dear Mike,
How is everything going?I am writing to tell you about my school.It is very nice and I really
like it.
First,our school has a big and clean playground.We often play basketball and run there after
class.It is a good place to do sports.Second,the library is next to the classroom building.It is
quiet and there are many interesting books.I like reading in the library very much.Third,the
teachers are all friendly and helpful.They make our lessons fun and easy to understand.
What about your school?Please write back and tell me.I hope you can visit my school some
day.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1介绍学校环境与设施
约96词
Dear Tom,
Let me tell you something about my school.It is very beautiful with tall trees and a clean
playg round.
1 Our library is big.There are many books and computers.
2 We have a modern science lab where we can do experiments.
3 The sports hall is my favorite place.We play basketball and badminton there after class.
I really enjoy studying here.Hope you can visit one day!
Yours,
Li Ming
拓展范文2
介绍学校课程与课外活动
约93词
Dear Mike,
I'd like to introduce my school to you.The courses here are interesting and helpful.
1We learn English,math,art and many other subjects.
2 Every week we have a reading club and a drama club.
s Teachers often organize fun activities like sports day and singing competitions.
The school life is colorful.I believe you will love it too.
Yours,
Chen Wei