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污教新版
U3 The seasons
初一上
写作精讲精练
写作话题·Write an article about your favourite season(写文章介绍最喜欢的季节)
河教新版初一上Unit3 The seasons
写作任务Write an article about your favourite season(写一篇文章介绍你最喜欢的季节)
一、申题
包文体
介绍文/描述文(非书信,无需称呼、祝福、署名)
2话题
介绍自己最喜欢的季节,包括季节名称、天气特点、典型景色、可做活动、个人感受
3人称
以第一人称I为主,也可适当用we或you增强代入感
4时态
一般现在时(描述特点、习惯、感受)
5要点
,点明最喜欢的季节是什么
,描述该季节的天气、景色等特征
,写出在这个季节里常做的活动
,表达喜欢的原因或感受
6字数
80~100词(初中标准要求)
二
文章结构
(三段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
直接说出最喜欢的季节,并简单总述理由
My favourite season is spring,because everything comes back to life.
中间
从天气、景色、活动等方面具体描写
天气:warm/cool/windy/rainy
段落
内容要点
景色:flowers bloom/leaves turn yellow/snow covers the ground
活动:fly kites/go swimming/have a picnic/make a snowman
结尾
总结感受,表达对这个季节的喜爱
示例:I really enjoy this season and I always look forward to it..
三、
核心组词造句
核心词汇
季节
weather
景色相关
活动湘关
感受
spring
warm,rainy
flowers,green trees
fly kites,plant trees
fresh,lively
hot,sunny
beach,ice cream
swim,eat
fun,exciting
summer
watermelon
cool,windy
leaves,golden
go hiking,pick
comfortable,
autumn
fruits
beautiful
cold,snowy
snow,ice
make a snowman,
joyful,magical
winter
ski
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
1
come back to life
复苏
2
fly kites
放风筝
3
go swimming
去游泳
4
have a picnic
去野餐
5
make a snowman
堆雪人
6
enjoy the cool wind
享受凉风
7
start to grow
开始生长
8
the best time to do sth
做某事的最佳时间
基础造句
Spring is warm and everything begins to grow.
2 In summer,I can go swimming with my friends
sAutumn is the season of harvest and beautiful colours.
4I love winter because I can play in the snow.
四、好词好句(更详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
1
lovely
可爱的今人愉快的
2
colourful
色彩丰富的
3
enjoyable
合人享受的
4
peaceful
宁静的
refreshing
令人神清气爽的
6
delightful
合人高兴的
加分句型
引出季节
Among all the seasons,I like...best.
My favourite season is...for many reasons.
描述天气与景色
The weather is neither too hot nor too cold.
The leaves turn yellow and red,making the world colourful.
Everything looks fresh and new after the rain.
描写活动
It's a great time to...(do sth)
I often...with my family friends
>..is one of the most popular activities in this season.
表达感受
I feel happy relaxed peaceful when...
>This season makes me feel full of energy.
There is no season like...in my heart.
五、写作模板
My Favourite Season
Among all the seasons,I like
best.The weather is
The
(景色)
are beautiful.
In this season,I can
(活动1).Sometimes|also
(活动2).It is the best
time to
(活动3).I always have a great time.
(季节)makes me feel
(感受).It is really a wonderful season!
六、作文仿写
题目
My Favourite Season
请以“My Favourite Season"为题,写一篇介绍你最喜欢季节的文章。
范文
My Favourite Season
Among all the seasons,I like autumn best.The weather is cool and the sky is blue.The leaves
turn yellow and red,making the world colourful.
In this season,I often go hiking with my family.We walk in the park and enjoy the cool wind.
Sometimes we have a picnic under the trees.It is also a great time to pick fruits like apples
and oranges.
Autumn makes me feel comfortable and peaceful.It is such a beautiful and enjoyable season!
(字数:约95词)
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1给笔友介绍秋天
约96词
Dear Lucy,
Autumn is my favourite season.Let me tell you why.
1 The weather is cool and comfortable,perfect for outdoor activities.
2 The leaves turn golden and red,making the countryside look like a painting
3We have the Mid-Autumn Festival,when families get together to enjoy mooncakes and
admire the full moon.
I love everything about autumn-the colours,the fresh air,and the festive feeling.Hope you
can visit me this fall!
Yours,
Zhang Wei
拓展范文2
给表妹介绍春天
约94词
Dear Xiaomei,
Spring is my favourite season.Here are three reasons.
1 Everything comes back to life-flowers bloom and birds sing.It's so nice to see green
everywhere.
2 The weather is warm but not too hot.I can go cycling and fly kites with friends.
3 We have spring outings and enjoy the fresh air.It always makes me feel happy and full of
energ y.
I hope you can spend a spring with me someday.You will love it!
Yours,
Li Ming