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Unit 4 Role Models
初二上
写作精讲精练
写作话题·Introduce a Role Model(介绍一位榜样人物)
Unit 4 Role Models
写作任务Introduce a Role Model(介绍一位榜样人物)
一、
申题
1文体
人物介绍类短文(记叙文或说明文,无需书信格式,但需要清晰的开头、主体和结尾)》
2话题
介绍一位你敬佩的榜样人物(可以是名人、家人、老师、同学等)
③人称
以第三人称he/she为主,也可适当使用第一人称I表达感受
4时态
一般现在时(描述榜样的品质和日常行为);若提及过去的成就或事迹,可用一般过去时
5要点
,点明榜样是谁(姓名、身份)
>描述榜样2~3个具体品质或行为(如努力、善良、坚持等)
,用事例或细节支撑这些品质
,说明你为什么敬佩他/她(对你的影响或后发)
6字数
80~100词(初中标准要求)
二、文章结构
(三段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
开内见山,介绍榜样人物是谁、身份。
中间
分条描述榜样的品质+具体事例或理由。
段落
内容要点
结尾
总结榜样对你的影响,表达敬佩或向其学习的决心。
三、核心组词造句
核心词汇
序号
词汇
释义
1
role model
榜样
2
admire
钦佩,敬佩
3
hard-working
努力工作的,勤奋的
kind-hearted
心地善良的
5
encourage
鼓励
6
overcome
克服(困难)
7
dream
梦想
achieve
实现(目标)
9
perseverance
毅力,坚持
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
1
look up to sb
仰望敬佩某人
2
set a good example
树立好榜样
never give up
永不放弃
4
work hard at on
努力做.…
5
help others in need
帮助有需要的人
6
be ready to help
乐于助人
7
learn from sb
向某人学习
6
make a difference
产生影响,有所作为
基础造句
1 My role model is my English teacher,Ms.Wang.She is always kind and patient.
2 She often stays up late to prepare lessons for us.That shows how hard-working she is.
3 He never gives up when he meets difficulties.This teaches me to face challenges bravely.
四、好词好句(更详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
1
diligent
勤奋的(此hard-working更正式)
2
compassionate
有同情心的
3
persistent
坚持不懈的
4
inspiring
鼓舞人心的
outstanding
杰出的
6
positive influence
积极的影响
加分句型
引出榜样
The person I admire most is...
>..has been my role model since I was young.
描述品质+事例
One of the reasons I look up to him her is that...
For example,when...,she he...
Because of his her...,I have learned to...
表达影响与后发
>..has taught me the importance of...
His Her words encourage me to...
I believe I can become a better person if I follow his her example.
结尾升华
I hope one day I can be as excellent as...
Everyone needs a role model,and ..is the best one for me.
五、写作模板
My role model is
He/She is
(身份/职业)
First,
is very
(品质).For example,
(具体事例).Second,
always
(行为/习惯).This makes him/her
(评价)
I admire
because
(对你的影响/理由).He/She has taught me to
I will try my best to learn from him her.
六、作文仿写
题目
请以“My Role Mode"为题,介绍一位你敬佩的榜样人物,并说明敬佩他/她的理由。
要求:80~100词,内容完整、条理清晰。
范文
My Role Model-My Father
My role model is my father.He is a doctor and works very hard every day.
First,my father is very responsible.For example,he often goes to the hospital at night when
there is an emergency.He never complains.Second,he is also kind-hearted.He always helps
poor patients and never asks for money.
I admire my father because he teaches me to be a useful person.His words encourage me to
study harder and help others.I want to be as good as him in the future.
(字数:约85词)
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1
介绍哥哥作为榜样
约95词
Dear Tom,
I'd like to introduce my role model-my elder brother Li Ming.
First,he is hard-working and always gets good grades in exams.Second,he is kind and often
helps me with my homework.Third,he never gives up when facing difficulties,which inspires
me a lot.
I learn from him to be patient and responsible.He shows me that success comes from daily
effort.
I hope you can also find a good role model in your life
Yours,
Zhang Wei
拓展范文2
介绍袁隆平爷爷作为榜样
约93词
Dear Jenny,
Let me introd uce my role model-Yuan Longping,the "Father of Hybrid Rice".
First,he spent his whole life solving hunger for billions of people.Second,he worked in the
fields even when he was very old,showing great dedication.Third,he always said "dream
farther,work harder".
I admire his spirit of innovation and persistence.He teaches me to care about others and
never stop trying.
I will try my best to be a useful person like him.
Yours,
Li Hua