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北师大新版
Unit 2 Safety
初二上
写作精讲精练
写作话题·Safety Rules
(撰写安全守则)
Unit 2 Safety
导作任务Safety Rules(撰写安全守则)
在校园、家庭或户外活动中,安全是第一位的。本写作任务要求你写一封建议信,向同学或朋友介绍2~3条重
要的安全规则,并说明理由。这既是一份“安全守则”,也是一封充满关心的信。
一、审题
工文体
建议信(必须有称呼、正文、祝福语、署名)
2话题
给同学/朋友提出安全规则方面的建议
3人称
以you(第二人称)和we(第一人称)为主
4时态
一般现在时(陈述事实和一般规律)
5要点
,点明写信目的:分享安全规侧
,列出2~3条具体、可行的安全规则
,简要说明遵守规则的理由(对自身或他人的好处)
,结尾表达希望与祝福(如“祝你平安”)
6字数
80~100词(初中标准)
文章结构(三段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
开内见山,说明写信目的(如“我想和你分享一些重要的安全规则”)
段落
内容要点
中间
分条写具体规则十简短理由
第一条:规则+原因
第二条:规则+原因
第三条:规则+原因(可选)
结尾
总结愿望并送上祝福(如“希望你能一直安全”)
三、核心组词造句
核心词汇
词safety安全
rule规则
cross穿过traffic lights交通灯
词helmet头盔
dangerous危险的
protect保护
词careful小v心的
accident事故
safe安全的
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
1
follow safety rules
遵守安全规则
2
cross the road
过马路
3
at the traffic lights
在红绿灯处
4
wear a helmet
戴头盔
5
keep away from fire
远离火源
6
be careful with
小心…
1
stay safe
保持安全
基础造句
1 You should always cross the road at the traffic lights.
2 We must wear a helmet when riding a bike to protect our heads.
3 It's important to keep away from fire because it can be very dangerous.
四、好词好句
(更详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
1
essential
必要的
2
crucial
关键的
3
ensure
确保
序号
单词
释义
4
prevent
预防
5
avoid
避免
6
danger
危险
加分句型
提建议万能句
You should shouldn't ..
You'd better...
It's necessary important for you to...
说明理由(含长句)
Because it can prevent accidents and keep you safe.
Doing so can help you avoid danger and stay healthy.
Following these rules will make both you and others feel safer.
结尾升华句
If you follow these safety rules,you can enjoy your school life without worries.
Let's all work together to create a safe environment.
五、写作模板
Dear
How are you?I am writing to share some important safety rules with you.
First,you should
Because
Second,you'd better
It can help you
Third,please remember to
It is also important for us to
I hope you will always stay safe.
Yours,
六、作文仿写
范文
Dear Tom,
How are you?I am writing to share some important safety rules with you.
First,you should always cross the road at the traffic lights.Because it can help you avoid
traffic accidents and keep you safe.Second,you'd better wear a helmet when riding a bike.It
can protect your head in case you fall.Third,please remember not to run in the hallway at
school.It is also important for us to keep away from danger.
I hope you will always stay safe.
Yours,
Li Hua
拓展苑文背诵积累
拓展范文1给新同学的校园安全建议
约96词
Dear Mike,
Welcome to our school!To keep you safe,I'd like to share some important safety rules.
First,you should always walk,not run,in the hallways to avoid falls.Second,you'd better not
touch any electrical sockets or wires in the classroom.Third,please remember to report any
broken eq uipment to the teacher immediately.
Follow these rules and you will stay safe and enjoy your school life here.
Yours,
Wang Lei
拓展范文2给家人的家庭安全守则
约98词
Dear Mom and Dad,
To make our home safer,I have some simple rules for everyone to follow.
First,you should turn off the gas stove after cooking to prevent fire.Second,you'd better
keep medicines and cleaners out of kids'reach.Third,please remember to check the smoke
alarm every month.
Let's work together to keep our family safe and sound.
Yours,
Xiaoming