内容正文:
Section B How do you feel at home?
(3a~3c)
Unit 2 Home Sweet Home
八年级上
目 录
Warming Up
2
Writing
3
Summary
4
Learning Objectives
1
At the end of the class, we are able to:
1. get writing structures by reading the letter from Zhang Peng to his friend John;
2. write an email to ask a friend to help decorate our room.
Learning Objectives
Warming Up
If the picture on the right is your room, and you want to decorate it, how would you do it?
Put a desk and a chair near the window
Paint the wall blue/pink
Add a garbage can
Hang up a photo on the wall
Put some flowers
Who can help you?
parents/sister/brother/friends/
classmates...
What objects do you need?
desk/chair/paint/brush/garbage can/photos/flowers...
Zhang Peng and his brother were going to decorate their room, and he asked his friend John for help. Let’s see what happened.
3a Read the email and find out what Zhang Peng asks his friend to do.
EMAIL
To:
Subject:
Hi John,
It was fun to decorate your room last month. I share a room with my brother. We want to decorate it too. Can you help us?
v. /ˈdekəreɪt/
share…with…
Writing
Pre-writing
EMAIL
To:
Subject:
Right now, the walls are blue. There are cute animals on them, but the animals look too young for us. We want to cover the animals
and paint the walls light green. What do you think about the colour?
On Sunday, we can meet at the paint shop near the shopping centre and choose the paint together.
v. /ˈkʌvə(r)/ cover...with...;
be covered with...
paint sth+颜色
EMAIL
To:
Subject:
Then we can paint the room with my brother.
I loved the brushes we used for your room.
Can you bring them?
After painting, could you help choose some
photos to hang on the walls? Let me know
what you think.
Best,
Zhang Peng
Zhang Peng asks his friend John to help decorate the room.
Beginning
Body
Ending
Greeting
Background&Purpose
Arrangements(安排)
Requested matter
Another request & Hope
Signature(署名)
Read and think!
Letter of Request
________ ask John to bring the brushes
________ ask John to help decorate the room
________ ask John to help choose some photos to hang on the walls
________ describe how the room looks now
________ tell John about the plan for the walls
________ ask John to meet on Sunday at the paint shop
3b Put the things in order to see how Zhang Peng organizes his ideas in writing.
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3c Write an email to ask a friend to help decorate your room. Below is a list of things you may need help with.
buy some flowers make a poster
go shopping bring a pair of scissors buy glue bring a brushmake paper-cuts bring a painting …
n. /ˈpəʊstə(r)/
n. (pl.) /ˈsɪzəz/
n. /ɡluː/
n. /ˈpeɪpə(r)kʌt/
请以 “Do me a favor” 为题,给好朋友写一封邮件,邀请他/她来帮你装房间。邮件中需包含以下内容:
· 简要说明需要帮忙的原因;
· 列出至少三项需要对方协助的具体事项
(可从题目提供的清单中选择);
· 表达感谢并约定合适的时间。
主题:请求朋友帮忙装饰房间
人称:第一人称&
第二人称
时态:一般现在时
文体:应用文
要点:①说明原因;②列出至少三项具体事项;③表达感谢;④约定时间
一阶:审好题,定方向
While-writing
要求:1. 参考以上提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现任何你的真实信息(校名、姓名和地名等);
4. 词数80~100词左右。
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二阶:列框架,写句子
开头
介绍写邮件的背景和目的
1. I am writing to invite you to help me...
2. I was wondering if you could possibly help me with...
3. I hope you’re doing well. I’m working on ...and I really need your help.
4. I know you’re really good at.... I’m having some trouble with ... and would appreciate your advice.
中间
列出需要帮助的具体事项
1.First, I need help with..., such as...
2. First of all, I want to... I hope you can help me...
3.Second, could you please assist me in...? For example...
4. Also, I will....Can you give me some advice?
5. I also want to make some...
6.Finally, it would be great if you could ....
7.What’s more, when we...we can...
结尾
表达感谢并约定时间
1.Thank you so much in advance! I really appreciate your help.
2.I know you’re busy, so it means a lot to me that you’re willing to help.
3.Would you be free this Saturday afternoon or Sunday morning?
4.If you have time next weekend, maybe we could do it then. Just tell me when you’re available!
Dear Sarah,
Can you help me decorate my room? I want to make it nicer but need your help.
First of all, I want to make some paper-cuts. I will prepare a pair of scissors, and I hope you can help me cut the paper. Also, I will draw some lovely animals and hang the pictures on the walls.
首段开门见山,直接点明写信的目的(邀请装饰房间)
三阶:巧衔接,赏美文
使用“Can you...?”来表达需要好友提供建议的委婉请求,邀请语气礼貌且真诚
Can you give me some advice? Let me know what you think. I also plan to make some baskets and put some fresh flowers in them. What’s more, when we finish these things, we can go shopping together to buy some snacks and enjoy ourselves in my new room.
I know you’re busy, so it means a lot to me that you’re willing to help. If you have time next weekend, maybe we could do it then. Just tell me when you’re available!.
Yours,
Li Hua
使用if引导的条件状语从句以假设性的语气提出邀请,尊重对方的日程安排,避免显得强求。
Checklist Point(s)
Content Salutation (1 point)
Request& Requested matter& Arrangements& Hope (4 points)
Signature (1 point)
Others (1 point)
Structure Beginning Body Ending (3 points)
Expressions Good expressions (2 points)
No mistakes (grammar, tense, spelling) (2 points)
Handwriting clean&tidy (1 point)
Check your partner’s article according to the checklist.
Post-writing
Write an email to ask a friend to help decorate your room.
Summary
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