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2027届安徽高考英语读后续写逻辑递进短语清单
第一部分:递进追加短语(补充新信息,层层累加)(★★★★★)
◆ 基础递进(5 个)
1. What's more 更重要的是 — What's more, the money he had saved was barely enough for the bus fare.
2. Moreover 此外 — Moreover, the weather was getting worse by the hour.
3. In addition 此外 — In addition, the old man gave him a map of the mountain trails.
4. Besides 除此之外 — Besides, she had promised her mother she would be back before dark.
5. On top of that 在此之上 — On top of that, his phone battery had just died.
◆ 高级递进(5 个)
6. To make matters worse 更糟的是 — To make matters worse, the bridge across the river had been washed away.
7. Worse still 更糟糕的是 — Worse still, nobody knew where they were.
8. More importantly 更重要的是 — More importantly, he had finally learned to believe in himself.
9. Above all 最重要的是 — Above all, never lose faith in the people you love.
10. Not to mention 更不用说 — Not to mention the fact that they had left all their food back at the camp.
第二部分:强调突出短语(聚焦重点,画龙点睛)(★★★★)
◆ 特别强调(5 个)
11. In particular 特别地 — The old photograph, in particular, brought back a flood of memories.
12. Most notably 最引人注目的是 — Most notably, his hands no longer trembled when he held the brush.
13. Strangely enough 奇怪的是 — Strangely enough, the more he practiced, the more confident he became.
14. Interestingly 有趣的是 — Interestingly, it was the smallest act that made the biggest difference.
15. Remarkably 非凡地 — Remarkably, the injured bird had learned to fly again.
◆ 确实 / 毫无疑问(4 个)
16. Indeed 确实 — Indeed, it was the happiest day of her life.
17. Without doubt 毫无疑问 — Without doubt, this was the turning point of his career.
18. Undoubtedly 毋庸置疑 — Undoubtedly, the experience had changed them both.
19. Beyond question 毫无疑问 — Beyond question, she had proven herself worthy of the title.
第三部分:解释阐明短语(补充说明,澄清观点)(★★★★)
◆ 换句话说 / 也就是说(5 个)
20. In other words 换句话说 — In other words, the key to success was not talent but persistence.
21. That is to say 也就是说 — That is to say, he had to choose between his dream and his family.
22. To put it simply 简单来说 — To put it simply, she had to start from scratch.
23. Namely 也就是 — Only one person could help them, namely, the old fisherman.
24. ... in the sense that... 在……意义上 — It was a victory in the sense that he had overcome his own fear.
◆ 举例说明(5 个)
25. For instance 例如 — For instance, he would spend hours practising just one stroke.
26. Take... for example 以……为例 — Take Mrs. Chen for example — she had taught for over thirty years.
27. A case in point is... 一个典型的例子是…… — A case in point is the story of the young girl who saved her village.
28. Such as... 例如(列举)— He loved all kinds of sports, such as swimming, running and cycling.
29. To illustrate... 为了说明…… — To illustrate this point, let us look at what happened next.
第四部分:对比让步短语(两面对照,深化思考)(★★★★)
◆ 对比两个事物(5 个)
30. While / Whereas 然而(对比)— While the city offered excitement, the countryside offered peace.
31. Unlike 与……不同 — Unlike his brother, Tom preferred reading to sports.
32. In contrast 相比之下 — In contrast, the second approach yielded far better results.
33. On the one hand... on the other hand... 一方面……另一方面…… — On the one hand, he longed for adventure; on the other hand, he feared the unknown.
34. Just as... 如同……一样 — Just as the seed needs rain to grow, children need love to flourish.
◆ 让步 / 尽管(5 个)
35. Despite / In spite of 尽管 — Despite the setbacks, the team never lost hope.
36. Even though / Even if 即使 — Even though the road was rough, they kept going.
37. No matter how... 无论多么…… — No matter how hard the training was, she never complained.
38. Admittedly 诚然 — Admittedly, the task was harder than they had expected.
39. Whether... or... 无论……还是…… — Whether it rained or shone, the old man walked to the sea every morning.
第五部分:条件假设短语(5 个)
40. As long as 只要 — As long as they stuck together, nothing could defeat them.
41. Provided that... 倘若…… — Provided that the weather held up, they would reach the summit by noon.
42. In case of... 万一…… — In case of emergency, press the red button.
43. If it were not for... 若不是…… — If it were not for his teacher's encouragement, he would have given up long ago.
44. Assuming that... 假设…… — Assuming that the plan worked, they would be home by midnight.
第六部分:总结归纳短语(5 个)
45. In conclusion 总之 — In conclusion, the journey had taught them more than any classroom could.
46. All in all 总而言之 — All in all, it was a day that none of them would ever forget.
47. To sum up 概括来说 — To sum up, courage, kindness and perseverance were the three keys to their success.
48. In a word 一句话 — In a word, hope was what kept them going.
49. All things considered 综合考虑 — All things considered, the trip was a resounding success.
第七部分:逻辑递进组装示范(一段话用 6 个不同类别的递进短语)
情境:Li Hua 参加志愿服务后的感悟。
完整段落示范
[递进] What's more, the experience had taught him skills that no textbook could offer. [强调] Above all, he learned the true meaning of responsibility. [举例] For instance, when the elderly woman refused to eat, it was Li Hua who patiently fed her spoon by spoon. [解释] In other words, volunteering was not about grand gestures but about small, consistent acts of care. [对比] While the work was tiring, the sense of fulfillment was immeasurable. [总结] All in all, this volunteering experience had planted a seed of compassion in his heart that would grow for years to come.
(此外,这段经历教会了他课本给不了的技能。最重要的是,他懂得了责任的真正含义。例如,当那位老奶奶拒绝吃饭时,是李华一勺一勺耐心地喂她。换句话说,志愿服务不在于轰轰烈烈的举动,而在于细水长流的关怀。虽然工作很累,但那份成就感无法衡量。总而言之,这次志愿服务在他心中种下了一颗慈悲的种子,将来会长成参天大树。)
递进短语标注
What's more(递进追加)→ Above all(强调突出)→ For instance(举例说明)→ In other words(解释阐明)→ While(对比让步)→ All in all(总结归纳)
组装要领
① 每段选 3-5 个不同类别的递进短语,覆盖「追加→强调→举例→解释→总结」完整链条。
② 递进短语放在段首或句间,不要连续两句都用同类短语。
③ 结尾段用总结归纳短语(In conclusion / All in all)收束,与开头段的递进短语形成呼应。
④ 不要每个句子都加递进短语——自然流露出递进关系比强行标注更高级。
第八部分:逻辑递进短语五大易错
1. What's more 和 Moreover 混用级别错误:Moreover 更正式,适合书面语;What's more 更口语化,适合对话或非正式叙述。
2. For instance 和 Such as 混淆:For instance 引导完整句子,Such as 引导短语列举(不能接完整句)。
3. While 表对比时不要放在句尾:While the city offered excitement, the countryside offered peace.(While 从句在前)不能写 The city offered excitement, while the countryside offered peace 的后半句独立成句。
4. In conclusion 用于叙事续写太正式:叙事段收尾用 All in all 或 In a word 更自然,In conclusion 留给议论文。
5. 递进逻辑不成立:「他很高兴。此外,他昨天吃了午饭」——两句话之间没有递进关系,加 What's more 反而暴露逻辑混乱。
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