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专题练(二十九) 读后续写高级句式
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【情境主线】Tom与Jack周末登山遇暴风雨迷路,在困境中互相鼓励,后获护林员相助脱险,最终领悟勇气与友谊的真谛。
一、情绪渲染句
1.【现在分词作状语】恐惧涌上心头,Tom紧紧抓住Jack的手臂,浑身发抖。
A wave of fear seized Tom, ________________________, trembling all over.
2.【形容词短语作状语】又冷又怕,两个男孩躲在岩石后面,等待暴风雨过去。
________________________, the two boys hid behind a rock, waiting for the storm to pass.
3.【过去分词作状语】被巨大的雷声吓坏了,Jack一句话也说不出来。
________________________, Jack couldn't utter a single word.
4.【独立主格】眼泪顺着脸颊流下,Tom为自己的鲁莽感到后悔。
________________________, Tom regretted his own foolishness.
5.【独立主格】他的心脏狂跳不止,Tom深吸一口气试图冷静下来。
________________________, Tom took a deep breath, trying to calm himself down.
6.【无灵主语】一阵绝望感涌上Jack的心头,他几乎要放弃了。
________________________ that he nearly gave up.
7.【无灵主语】当看到远处的灯光时,一阵喜悦涌上他们的心头。
The moment they caught sight of a light in the distance, ________________________.
8.【副词作状语】令人欣慰的是,护林员及时发现了他们并提供了帮助。
________________________, the ranger found them in time and offered help.
二、动作推进句
9.【三连动】Jack跳下岩石,冲到Tom身边,扶他站了起来。
Jack ________________________, ________________________ and ________________________.
10.【三连动】Tom忍住疼痛,深吸一口气,一步步向前挪动。
Tom ________________________, ________________________ and ________________________ step by step.
11.【三连动】护林员推开门,点燃壁炉,给他们端来热汤。
The ranger ________________________, ________________________ and ________________________.
12.【现在分词作状语】看到Tom扭伤了脚踝,Jack立刻脱下外套给他保暖。
________________________, Jack immediately took off his jacket to keep him warm.
13.【with复合结构】他们在泥泞的小路上艰难前行,雨水顺着脸颊往下淌。
They struggled along the muddy path, ________________________.
14.【with复合结构】Tom的脚踝肿得很厉害,每走一步都疼痛难忍。
________________________, Tom suffered great pain with every step.
15.【倒装】他们刚到达小屋,大雨就倾盆而下。
________________________ than the heavy rain poured down.
16.【倒装】他们不仅找到了避雨的地方,还得到了热心的照顾。
________________________, but they were also taken good care of.
三、环境烘托句
17.【无灵主语】顷刻间,黑暗笼罩了整片森林。
Immediately, ________________________.
18.【无灵主语】狂风呼啸着穿过树林,树枝发出可怕的声音。
________________________, making the branches make terrible noises.
19.【拟人】乌云在天空中翻滚,仿佛要吞噬整个世界。
________________________, as if ready to swallow the whole world.
20.【比喻】雨像鞭子一样抽打着他们的脸,他们几乎睁不开眼睛。
The rain ________________________, and they could hardly open their eyes.
21.【with复合结构】暴风雨渐渐平息,星星在夜空中闪烁。
________________________, stars were shining in the night sky.
22.【非限制性定语从句】第二天早晨,阳光透过窗户洒进小屋,给一切镀上了一层金色。
The next morning, sunlight poured through the window into the cottage, ________________________.
23.【形容词短语作状语】安静而祥和,森林在雨后显得格外美丽。
________________________, the forest looked extraordinarily beautiful after the rain.
24.【独立主格】太阳缓缓升起,他们开始了下山的旅程。
________________________, they started their journey down the mountain.
四、心理转折句
25.【主语从句+表语从句】让Tom最感动的是,Jack在他受伤后一直没有离开他。
________________________ was ________________________.
26.【同位语从句】他们永远不会忘记这个事实:真正的朋友在困难时刻才会显现。
They will never forget the truth ________________________.
27.【虚拟语气】要是他们出发前看了天气预报就好了。
________________________ before they set off.
28.【虚拟语气】要不是护林员的帮助,他们不可能在山上度过那个夜晚。
________________________, they couldn't have survived the night on the mountain.
29.【状语从句】无论多么困难,他们都决定不放弃。
________________________, they made up their minds not to give up.
30.【it作形式主语】他们突然想到可以用口哨声发出求救信号。
________________________ they could use whistles to send signals for help.
31.【倒装】直到那时Tom才意识到团队合作有多么重要。
________________________ how important teamwork was.
32.【倒装】他全神贯注于寻找出路,完全忘记了疼痛。
________________________ that he completely forgot the pain.
五、结局升华句
33.【强调句型】正是这次经历让他们明白了勇气的真正含义。
________________________ the true meaning of courage.
34.【强调句型】直到安全回到家,他们才真正放松下来。
________________________ that they truly relaxed.
35.【倒装】他们不仅收获了一次难忘的经历,还懂得了珍惜友谊。
________________________, but they also learned to treasure friendship.
36.【非限制性定语从句】这次登山之旅最终成为了他们一生中最宝贵的回忆,这将永远激励着他们。
The mountain climbing trip eventually became the most precious memory of their lives, ________________________.
37.【无灵主语】一种深深的满足感涌上他们的心头,因为他们成功地克服了困难。
________________________ because they had managed to overcome the difficulties.
38.【比喻】他们的友谊像这座山一样坚固,经得起任何风雨的考验。
Their friendship ________________________, able to stand any storm.
39.【主语从句】让他们最欣慰的是,他们在最困难的时候没有放弃彼此。
________________________ was that they hadn't given up on each other in the hardest time.
40.【副词作状语】令人惊讶的是,这次可怕的经历反而拉近了他们之间的距离。
________________________, this terrifying experience brought them closer together.
答案精析
1.grabbing Jack's arm firmly
解析:现在分词短语作伴随状语,逻辑主语是Tom,与grab是主动关系,故用现在分词。firmly“紧紧地”修饰grab。
2.Cold and frightened
解析:形容词短语作状语,说明主语the two boys的状态,相当于and they were cold and frightened。两个形容词并列,描述又冷又怕。
3.Frightened by the loud thunder
解析:过去分词短语作原因状语,逻辑主语是Jack,与frighten是被动关系(被雷声吓到),故用过去分词。
4.Tears rolling down his cheeks
解析:独立主格结构:名词Tears+现在分词rolling,Tears与roll是主动关系。该结构在句中作伴随状语,相当于and tears rolled down his cheeks。
5.His heart beating wildly
解析:独立主格结构:名词His heart+现在分词beating,heart与beat是主动关系。wildly“疯狂地、剧烈地”。
6.A sense of desperation washed over Jack
解析:无灵主语句,以抽象名词a sense of desperation作主语,wash over sb“涌上某人心头”,比Jack felt desperate更有画面感和文学性。
7.a burst of joy welled up inside them
解析:无灵主语句,a burst of joy作主语,well up“涌上、涌出”。burst在此表示“一阵、突发”。
8.Thankfully/Fortunately
解析:副词作评注性状语,修饰整个句子,表示“令人欣慰的是、幸运的是”。同类副词有unfortunately, surprisingly, hopefully等。
9.jumped off the rock rushed to Tom's side helped him to his feet
解析:三连动结构,三个并列谓语按动作先后顺序排列:跳下→冲到→扶起。help sb to his feet“扶某人站起来”。
10.fought back the pain took a deep breath dragged himself forward
解析:三连动结构,按心理到动作的顺序:忍痛→吸气→挪动。fight back“忍住、抑制”;drag oneself forward“拖着身子向前走”。
11.pushed open the door lit the fireplace brought them hot soup
解析:三连动结构,三个连续动作:推门→点火→端汤。light的过去式为lit;bring sb sth“给某人端来某物”。
12.Seeing that Tom had hurt his ankle
解析:现在分词短语作原因状语,逻辑主语是Jack,与see是主动关系。that引导宾语从句,用过去完成时had hurt表示动作发生在主句之前。
13.with rain pouring down their faces
解析:with复合结构:with+宾语rain+现在分词pouring,rain与pour是主动关系。pour down“倾泻、往下流”。
14.With his ankle badly swollen
解析:with复合结构:with+宾语his ankle+形容词swollen作宾语补足语,表示脚踝的状态。badly“严重地”修饰swollen。
15.No sooner had they reached the cottage
解析:No sooner...than...“一……就……”,No sooner置于句首引起部分倒装,助动词had提到主语they之前,且主句用过去完成时。
16.Not only did they find shelter from the rain
解析:Not only置于句首引起部分倒装,助动词did提到主语they之前,find还原为原形。shelter from the rain“避雨”。
17.darkness covered the whole forest
解析:无灵主语句,以darkness作主语,cover“笼罩、覆盖”。比The forest became dark更简洁有力。
18.A strong wind blew through the woods
解析:无灵主语句,以a strong wind作主语。blow through“吹过、穿过”;woods“树林、林地”,常用复数。
19.Dark clouds were rolling in the sky
解析:拟人手法,roll“翻滚”,赋予乌云以人的动作。as if引导方式状语从句,表示“仿佛、好像”。
20.beat against their faces like a whip
解析:比喻修辞,like a whip“像鞭子一样”。beat against“拍打、抽打”。明喻结构A like B是读后续写常用修辞。
21.With the storm dying down
解析:with复合结构:with+宾语the storm+现在分词dying,storm与die down是主动关系。die down“逐渐平息、减弱”。
22.which painted everything in gold
解析:which引导非限制性定语从句,指代前面整个主句“阳光洒进小屋”。paint...in gold“给……镀上金色”,是拟人化表达。
23.Quiet and peaceful
解析:形容词短语作状语,说明主语the forest的状态。两个形容词并列,描绘雨后森林宁静祥和的氛围。
24.The sun rising slowly
解析:独立主格结构:名词The sun+现在分词rising,sun与rise是主动关系。相当于As the sun rose slowly,作时间状语。
25.What moved Tom most that Jack had never left him after he got injured
解析:What引导主语从句,在从句中作主语;that引导表语从句,不作成分但不可省略。after引导时间状语从句。
26.that a true friend shows up in times of difficulty
解析:that引导同位语从句,解释说明truth的具体内容,that不作成分但不可省略。show up“出现、露面”;in times of difficulty“在困难时刻”。
27.If only they had checked the weather forecast
解析:If only“要是……就好了”,引导虚拟语气。对过去的虚拟用过去完成时had checked。weather forecast“天气预报”。
28.But for the ranger's help
解析:But for“要不是、如果没有”,表示含蓄虚拟条件,相当于If it hadn't been for...。主句用couldn't have survived表示对过去的虚拟。
29.No matter how difficult it was
解析:No matter how引导让步状语从句,how修饰形容词difficult,语序为no matter how+形容词+主语+谓语。可替换为However difficult it was。
30.It hit them that
解析:It作形式主语,that引导的从句是真正主语。It hits sb that...“某人突然想到……”,同类结构还有It occurs to sb that.../It strikes sb that...。
31.Only then did Tom realize
解析:Only+副词then置于句首引起部分倒装,助动词did提到主语Tom之前,realize还原为原形。“直到那时才意识到”。
32.So absorbed was he in finding a way out
解析:So+形容词absorbed置于句首引起部分倒装,was提到主语he之前。be absorbed in“全神贯注于”。正常语序为He was so absorbed in...。
33.It was this experience that taught them
解析:强调句型It is/was+被强调部分+that+其余部分。此处强调主语this experience。去掉It was...that后句子仍完整:This experience taught them...。
34.It was not until they got home safely
解析:强调句型强调not until引导的时间状语,结构为It was not until...that...。注意that后不用倒装。“直到……才……”。
35.Not only did they gain an unforgettable experience
解析:Not only置于句首引起部分倒装,助动词did提前。gain an experience“获得一次经历”。but also后用正常语序。
36.which would inspire them forever
解析:which引导非限制性定语从句,指代前面整个主句“这次旅行成为最宝贵的回忆”。would表示过去将来,inspire“激励、鼓舞”。
37.A deep sense of satisfaction welled up inside them
解析:无灵主语句,以a deep sense of satisfaction作主语,well up“涌上心头”。比They felt satisfied更有文学色彩。
38.was as firm as the mountain
解析:比喻修辞,as...as...“像……一样”,明喻结构。firm“坚固的、坚定的”。stand any storm“经得起任何风雨”。
39.What relieved them most
解析:What引导主语从句,在从句中作主语,相当于The thing that。relieve sb“使某人宽慰、减轻某人的痛苦”。
40.Surprisingly
解析:副词作评注性状语,修饰整个句子,表示“令人惊讶的是”。-ing结尾的形容词变副词,修饰全句时通常置于句首,用逗号隔开。
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