摘要:
该高中英语高考复习课件聚焦应用文写作中的道歉信专题,依据高考评价体系明确了内容要点(告知不能赴约、说明原因、希望下次赴约)、语言得体性和结构完整性三大考查要求。通过梳理2027广东春季高考真题,归纳出道歉信“原因解释+弥补措施”的核心考点权重,构建了“开篇道歉—原因分析—重新约定—再次致歉”的标准写作框架,体现备考的针对性。
课件亮点在于“真题精析+模板运用+即时训练”的实战策略,以2027广东春季高考“流感失约”真题为例,拆解“The reason why...is that...”等模板句型,培养学生的语言表达能力和逻辑思维品质。提供“常用短语库”和“易错点警示”,通过“打篮球受伤失约”等变式训练,让学生熟练掌握道歉信写作技巧,教师可据此开展精准教学,助力学生高效冲刺高考。
内容正文:
道歉信
2027广东春季高考
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写作指导
写作指导
道歉信应对自己具体的过失和疏忽作出解释,道歉的原因一定要真实而且容易接受,语言要得体委婉,表现出诚意。
道歉信由以下三部分组成:
★第一段:开门见山,交代写信目的,表达歉意。
★第二段:说明道歉的合理原因(主)并提出弥补措施或解决办法(辅)
★第三段:再次表示道歉
03
模板句型
常用短语
常用句式
apologize to sb for sth
=make an apology to sb for sth
feel terribly sorry
fail to do sth
keep the appointment
on time
因某事向某人道歉
感到十分抱歉
未能做某事
赴约
准时
常用短语
常用句式
be late for
cause you trouble
by accident
heavy traffic jam
make it another time
迟到
给你造成麻烦
不小心,意外
严重堵车
改时间
compensate for
赔偿
常用短语
常用句式
something urgent came up
as soon as possible
forgive me
promise not to do it again
cause inconvenience
突发急事
尽快
原谅我
保证不再犯
造成不便
I would be grateful if you...
如果你.....我将不胜感激
模板背诵
Dear ____,
I am writing to express my sincere apology for+动词ing形式短语(道歉理由). I hope this change will not cause you too much trouble.
The reason why I can’t make an appointment is that+句子(解释原因). I have to deal with it immediately. Therefore, I have no choice but to cancel our original arrangement. If it is convenient for you, can we make another appointment? Shall we rearrange the appointment on+具体日期(重新安排时间)?
模板背诵
I am terribly sorry again for the inconvenience caused to you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my sincere apology and forgive me.
Yours,
Li Hua
模板拆解
Dear ____,
I am writing to express my sincere apology for+动词ing形式短语(道歉理由). I hope this change will not cause you too much trouble.
注意:express my sincere apology 表达我真挚的歉意
cause you much trouble 造成你太多麻烦
模板拆解
The reason why I can’t make an appointment is that+句子(解释原因). I have to deal with it immediately.
注意:make an appointment 赴约
deal with 解决
immediately 立即
模板拆解
Therefore, I have no choice but to cancel our original arrangement. If it is convenient for you, can we make another appointment? Shall we rearrange the appointment on+具体日期(重新安排时间)?
注意:have no choice but to 别无选择只好做某事
cancel our original arrangement 取消最初安排
if it is convenient for you 如果你方便的话
rearrange the appointment 重新安排见面
模板拆解
I am terribly sorry again for the inconvenience caused to you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my sincere apology and forgive me.
注意:terribly sorry 非常抱歉
the inconvenience caused to you 对你造成的不方便
I would appreciate it if you ... 如果......我将不胜感激
accept my sincere apology 接受我真挚的道歉
forgive me 原谅我
02
真题重现
假定你是李华,你和外国朋友Robert约定下周一去参加晚会,但你得了流感,医生建议你休息一段时间,因此不能赴约。请你给Robert写一封电子邮件。
内容包括:
(1)告知不能赴约
(2)说明不能赴约的原因
(3)希望下次赴约
注意:(1)词数90左右
作文讲解
审题:
写信背景:你和外国朋友Robert约定下周一去参加晚会,但你得了流感,医生建议你休息一段时间
写信目的:告知不能赴约
写信要点:告知不能赴约;说明原因;希望下次赴约
人称:第一人称
时态:一般现在时
作文讲解
要点翻译:
约定下周一去参加晚会
attend the evening party with you next Monday
你得了流感
catch the flu
医生建议你休息一段时间
the doctor advises me to rest for a period of time
作文讲解
Dear ____,
I am writing to express my sincere apology for+动词ing形式短语(道歉理由). I hope this change will not cause you too much trouble.
Dear Robert,
I am writing to express my sincere apology for being unable to attend the evening party with you next Monday. I hope this change will not cause you too much trouble.
作文讲解
The reason why I can’t make an appointment is that+句子(解释原因). I have to deal with it immediately.
The reason why I can’t make an appointment is that I catch the flu and the doctor advises me to rest for a period of time. I have to deal with it immediately.
作文讲解
Therefore, I have no choice but to cancel our original arrangement. If it is convenient for you, can we make another appointment? Shall we rearrange the appointment on+具体日期(重新安排时间)?
Therefore, I have no choice but to cancel our original arrangement. If it is convenient for you, can we make another appointment? Shall we rearrange the appointment next Friday?
作文讲解
I am terribly sorry again for the inconvenience caused to you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my sincere apology and forgive me.
I am terribly sorry again for the inconvenience caused to you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my sincere apology and forgive me.
范文呈现
Dear Robert,
I am writing to express my sincere apology for being unable to attend the evening party with you next Monday. I hope this change will not cause you too much trouble.
The reason why I can’t make an appointment is that I catch the flu and the doctor advises me to rest for a period of time. I have to deal with it immediately. Therefore, I have no choice but to cancel our original arrangement.
范文呈现
If it is convenient for you, can we make another appointment? Shall we rearrange the appointment next Friday?
I am terribly sorry again for the inconvenience caused to you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my sincere apology and forgive me.
Yours,
Li Hua
04
即时训练
假定你是李华。你和外国朋友Robert约定本周去看电影。由于今天下午你和同学打篮球时受伤,医生告知腿骨折了。建议你卧床休息一段时间,因此不能赴约。请给Robert写一封电子邮件。
内容包括:
(1)告知不能赴约
(2)说明不能赴约的理由
(3)希望下次再约
注意:(1)词数80左右
作文讲解
审题:
写信背景:你和外国朋友Robert约定本周去看电影。由于今天下午你和同学打篮球时受伤,医生告知腿骨折了。
写信目的:告知不能赴约
写信要点:告知不能赴约;说明原因;希望下次再约
人称:第一人称
时态:一般现在时;一般过去时
作文讲解
要点翻译:
约定本周去看电影
watch the movie with you this week
今天下午你和同学打篮球时受伤
I got injured when I was playing basketball with my classmates this afternoon
医生告知腿骨折了
The doctor said my leg was broken
范文呈现
Dear Robert,
I am writing to express my sincere apology for being unable to watch the movie with you this week. I hope this change will not cause you too much trouble.
The reason why I can’t make an appointment is that I got injured when I was playing basketball with my classmates this afternoon. The doctor said my leg was broken and advised me to rest in bed for some time. I had to deal with it immediately.
范文呈现
Therefore, I have no choice but to cancel our original arrangement. If it is convenient for you, can we make another appointment? Shall we rearrange the appointment next weekend after I recover?
I am terribly sorry again for the inconvenience caused to you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my sincere apology and forgive me.
Yours,
Li Hua
Thank you !
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