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该高中英语高考复习学案系统梳理了读后续写专题核心考点，涵盖文本角色分析、情节逻辑构建、情感线索梳理等内容，按“文本分析-情节构造-续写实践”层次组织知识，通过细节问答和续写框架设计，引导学生自主推导文本内在逻辑，形成读后续写的完整认知体系。 亮点在于诊断性自测与个性化思维训练，开篇设置细节问答诊断文本理解能力，续写框架任务培养学生逻辑推理与情感表达的思维品质，范文解析提升语言组织的语言能力。每个模块配有情节线梳理表和续写反思日志，帮助学生自主诊断薄弱环节，教师可依据学生续写成果精准指导，有效培养自主复习能力。

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文｡ Over 200 residents of Beckenham, southeast London, had raised nearly £ 3 000 to send Paul Spiers, a well‑liked street cleaner, on a summer break to Portugal. However, he couldn’t go on a crowdfunded (众筹) holiday because his employer, Veolia, had rules against accepting gifts. But then, the travel company On the Beach created a special “competition” with very specific entry requirements: You must be 64 years old, have the last name Spiers, be a street cleaner in Beckenham, and be respected by your community. Not surprisingly, Paul won. Finally, Veolia permitted him to accept the£ 3 000 holiday voucher (代金券) as a “prize”. 　　Paul’s dedication to his job was evident in the little things he did every day. For instance, he once found a lost wallet while sweeping the streets and went out of his way to return it to its owner, who then expressed great gratitude. His friendly greetings and cheerful spirits constantly brought smiles to the residents he served. 　　A company representative said, “We have no objection to him accepting his win. We are very thankful for the support and recognition shown by the community to Paul, who, along with a hard‑working street cleaning team, gives a hand in keeping Bromley’s streets clean.” 　　Paul’s story is an example to the impact one person can have on a community through devotion. The residents’ efforts to reward him show how much they appreciate his hard work and positive attitude. 注意： （1）所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； （2）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； Paragraph 1: When Paul held the holiday voucher in his hands, he was overwhelmed with excitement. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Having enjoyed his wonderful holiday, Paul returned to his familiar streets. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　________________________________________________________ 2．视角 　　第________人称 3．时空线 　　Residents raised money to reward devoted street cleaner Paul--- _________________ ---Paul was forbidden to accept crowdfunded gifts by his company--- _________________ ---A travel company created a special competition tailor-made for Paul--- _________________ ---Paul won the prize legally and got company’s permission--- Paul’s devotion and positivity won wide community recognition 4. 细节问答 　　Why did residents raise money for Paul? ：___________________________________ 　　Why couldn’t Paul accept the residents’ gift at first?：_________________________________ 　　What did the travel company do to help Paul?：________________________________________________ 　　What small deeds show Paul’s dedication?：__________________________________________ 　　What attitude did Paul hold towards his work?：_____________________________________________ 　　What kind of person is Paul?：_________________________________________________ 　　What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 　　清洁工Paul勤恳敬业、待人热忱，深受社区居民喜爱→_________________ →居民众筹奖金为他兑换度假福利，却因公司规定受阻→_________________ →旅游公司贴心定制专属比赛，巧妙规避规则帮助Paul获奖→_________________ →Paul合法获得度假代金券，敬业付出收获认可与回报→（续写）Paul满心感恩，开启美好假期、放松身心→（续写）度假归来初心不改，依旧热忱工作、温暖社区 6．情感线 　　Paul: dedicated and positive→___________→frustrated and helpless→___________→grateful and joyful→devoted and warm-hearted 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：________________________________________________________________________ 　　英文：________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 　　宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；固定句型　　___________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 　　价值传递类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: When Paul held the holiday voucher in his hands, he was overwhelmed with excitement. 　　衔接句1——What did Paul feel and do before the holiday? What was his expectation? ________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Having enjoyed his wonderful holiday, Paul returned to his familiar streets. 　　衔接句2——What changes did Paul have? How did he repay the community’s kindness? What theme is reflected? ________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：当保罗手握度假代金券时，他激动万分。 　　→①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：度过完美的假期后，保罗回到了熟悉的街道。 　　→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 Paragraph 1: When Paul held the holiday voucher in his hands, he was overwhelmed with excitement. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Having enjoyed his wonderful holiday, Paul returned to his familiar streets. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　Paul Spiers（勤恳敬业、善良热忱、默默奉献、懂得感恩的资深清洁工）；Beckenham residents（心怀善意、懂得感恩、回馈善举的社区居民）；Travel company（暖心贴心、灵活变通、助力善举的暖心企业） 2．视角 　　第三人称 3．时空线 　　Residents raised money to reward devoted street cleaner Paul--- Paul won wide love and recognition for his dedication and kindness ---Paul was forbidden to accept crowdfunded gifts by his company--- strict company rules prevented him from receiving residents’ kindness ---A travel company created a special competition tailor-made for Paul--- the company helped Paul get the reward in a legal way ---Paul won the prize legally and got company’s permission--- Paul’s devotion and positivity won wide community recognition 4. 细节问答 　　Why did residents raise money for Paul? ：Because Paul was devoted to his work, served residents wholeheartedly and brought warmth to the community. 　　Why couldn’t Paul accept the residents’ gift at first?：Because his company had rules forbidding employees from accepting gifts. 　　What did the travel company do to help Paul?：It created a tailor-made competition for Paul, allowing him to win the holiday voucher legally. 　　What small deeds show Paul’s dedication?：He returned a lost wallet to its owner and always greeted residents warmly with positive spirits. 　　What attitude did Paul hold towards his work?：He was dedicated, earnest, positive and responsible for his work. 　　What kind of person is Paul?：He is hard-working, kind, positive, devoted and grateful. 　　What does the story tell us?：Sincere dedication and kindness will be seen and rewarded, and kindness can be passed on in the community. 5．情节线 　　清洁工Paul勤恳敬业、待人热忱，深受社区居民喜爱→日常坚守岗位、暖心助人，用善意温暖邻里→居民众筹奖金为他兑换度假福利，却因公司规定受阻→善意回报陷入困境，令人惋惜→旅游公司贴心定制专属比赛，巧妙规避规则帮助Paul获奖→用专属公正的方式成全居民的善意→Paul合法获得度假代金券，敬业付出收获认可与回报→（续写）Paul满心感恩，开启美好假期、放松身心、治愈自我→（续写）度假归来初心不改，依旧热忱工作、回馈社区善意 6．情感线 　　Paul: dedicated and positive→grateful and touched→frustrated and helpless→surprised and delighted→grateful and joyful→devoted and warm-hearted 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：勤恳善良的清洁工保罗因敬业奉献收获居民认可，在企业和旅游公司的助力下顺利获得度假奖励，用故事诠释了善意与坚守终会被温柔回馈。 　　英文：Devoted and kind street cleaner Paul won residents’ recognition. With the help of a travel company and his employer, he finally got a holiday reward, proving that sincere dedication and kindness will always be rewarded. 8. 句式 　　非谓语动词：Having enjoyed his wonderful holiday, Paul returned to his familiar streets. 状语从句：However, he couldn’t go on a crowdfunded holiday because his employer had rules against accepting gifts. 定语从句：He once found a lost wallet while sweeping the streets and went out of his way to return it to its owner, who then expressed great gratitude. 宾语从句：We are very thankful for the support and recognition shown by the community to Paul. 固定句型：Not surprisingly, Paul won. 9. 本文主题 　　价值传递类：平凡坚守彰显不凡，善意双向奔赴，付出终有回报。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: When Paul held the holiday voucher in his hands, he was overwhelmed with excitement. 　　衔接句1——What did Paul feel and do before the holiday? What was his expectation? Deeply touched by everyone’s kindness, Paul expressed sincere thanks to residents and the travel company. He looked forward to relaxing himself and enjoying the beautiful scenery in Portugal. Paragraph 2: Having enjoyed his wonderful holiday, Paul returned to his familiar streets. 　　衔接句2——What changes did Paul have? How did he repay the community’s kindness? What theme is reflected? Refreshed and grateful, Paul continued to work earnestly. He kept spreading warmth and positivity, repaying the community’s kindness with consistent devotion. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：当保罗手握度假代金券时，他激动万分。 　　→①内心满是感动与惊喜，真诚感谢居民与企业的善意→②长久辛勤工作终于迎来放松的机会→③满心期待美好假期，准备奔赴全新旅程； 第二段：度过完美的假期后，保罗回到了熟悉的街道。 　　→①休整过后精神饱满，初心不改重返岗位→②依旧勤恳工作、热忱待人，持续温暖社区→③双向善意循环传递，平凡坚守成就不凡价值。 四、标准范文 　　When Paul held the holiday voucher in his hands, he was overwhelmed with excitement. He had never expected that his ordinary devotion would bring him such a precious reward. Grateful from the bottom of his heart, he thanked the warm-hearted residents and the travel company repeatedly. Overjoyed, he made careful preparations for his coming holiday, looking forward to experiencing the scenery and culture of Portugal. After years of hard work on the streets, he was finally able to take a well-deserved break to relax himself. 　　Having enjoyed his wonderful holiday, Paul returned to his familiar streets. Refreshed and energetic, he threw himself into his work wholeheartedly again. He still greeted every resident warmly and stuck to his post earnestly as usual. To repay the community’s kindness, he spared no effort to keep the streets cleaner and brought more positivity to people around him. His story perfectly proves that every sincere dedication deserves recognition, and kindness and devotion can always form a warm cycle in society. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $