2027届高三英语读后续写专项复习---登山自省，破执成长---读后续写导学案

该高中英语高考导学案系统覆盖读后续写题型核心考点，将文本分析（角色、视角、时空线等）、情节构造与续写框架有机整合，通过问题导向的细节问答和任务驱动的续写步骤设计，引导学生自主梳理情节线与情感线，构建完整的叙事逻辑体系。 亮点在于自主诊断与思维进阶设计，如开篇设置“作者的内心挣扎是什么”等诊断性问题链，结合续写框架中的“内心挣扎→选择→行动”步骤，培养学生的思维品质与学习能力。每个模块配有情节线梳理表和情感变化分析任务，帮助学生自主发现叙事漏洞，教师可依据学生的续写框架完成度精准指导，实现个性化备考。

　 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 I’ve recently become interested in mountain climbing. It’s mainly due to my friend Tim, an experienced hiker. Initially, I saw hiking as pointless — exhausting muscles under the burning sun, carrying heavy loads, with no easy way back. Why endure (忍受) that? 　　Last month, Tim convinced me to join him in climbing a small hill. To my surprise, the view from the top was breathtaking. I witnessed an amazing sunset over the sea. That humble peak offered unexpected joy, awakening a desire for more — cloud seas, sunrises, and bird’s-eye views. After a few more mountain climbing attempts, I declared, “I will challenge the Hero’s Route!” It was a demanding 20-kilometer trail (小径) across several high peaks, a test of “heroes.” 　　But Tim tried to cool me down. “It’s not easy,” he warned. “It requires training, not just enthusiasm.” But I believed “Nothing is impossible in front of a willing heart,” so the following weekend I set off alone without telling Tim. I decided to give him a big surprise. 　　At the foot of the mountain, I saw some groups of climbers with walkie-talkies. I laughed — real heroes journey alone. The first peak was rewarding, with cool winds and glimpses of the sea. But as I pushed onward, the trail turned wild and rugged. Steep rocks forced me to crawl on all fours. The sky darkened, threatening rain. Tiredness set in, and the other climbers had all overtaken me, leaving me completely alone. The trail seemed endless. Rain soon poured and I was wet through. The rocks became slippery, making every step a struggle. To make matters worse, my phone had no signal. Desperation mounted in me. 　　Around 5:30 PM, there were still two peaks ahead. Exhausted and having barely progressed, I found a weak signal on my phone and hurriedly called Tim. He was shocked, but after checking my location, he calmly gave me instructions. “Stop going ahead. You’ve just passed a side trail down to a village. It is marked with a blue ribbon (丝带). Find it and take the path — I’ll meet you midway.” 注意： （1）所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； （2）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； Paragraph 1: But now I hesitated, because taking the side trail meant failure. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Climbing down the path to the village at night was still very challenging. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　________________________________________________________ 2．视角 　　第________人称 3．时空线 　　The author was uninterested in mountain climbing at first--- _________________ ---The author fell in love with climbing after a pleasant experience--- _________________ ---The author insisted on challenging a tough route alone despite Tim’s warning--- _________________ ---The author got trapped in bad weather and dangerous situation--- _________________ ---The author turned to Tim for help and received guidance 4. 细节问答 　　What did the author think of hiking at first? ：___________________________________ 　　What made the author fall in love with mountain climbing?：_________________________________ 　　Why did Tim warn the author against the Hero’s Route?：________________________________________________ 　　Why did the author choose to climb alone?：__________________________________________ 　　What difficulties did the author meet on the mountain?：_____________________________________________ 　　What kind of person was the author at first?：_________________________________________________ 　　What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 　　作者起初认为爬山毫无意义、辛苦费力→_________________ →一次小型登山的绝美风景，让作者爱上登山、心生挑战欲→_________________ →无视好友Tim的善意提醒，自负地独自挑战高难度路线→_________________ →山路艰险、暴雨突至、手机无信号，作者陷入绝境→无奈求助Tim，得到下山指引→（续写）作者内心挣扎，放下骄傲选择妥协下山→（续写）雨夜下山艰难重重，偶遇Tim，领悟真正的勇者之道 6．情感线 　　The author: indifferent and unwilling→___________→arrogant and confident→___________→desperate and helpless→hesitant and reflective 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：________________________________________________________________________ 　　英文：________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 　　宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；固定句型　　___________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 　　成长感悟类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: But now I hesitated, because taking the side trail meant failure. 　　衔接句1——What was the author’s inner struggle? What final choice did he make? ________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Climbing down the path to the village at night was still very challenging. 　　衔接句2——What difficulties did the author meet? How did Tim help him? What lesson did he learn? ________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：但我犹豫了，因为走这条辅路意味着认输失败。 　　→①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：夜里沿着小路下山返回村庄依旧充满挑战。 　　→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 4. 段落续写 Paragraph 1: But now I hesitated, because taking the side trail meant failure. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Climbing down the path to the village at night was still very challenging. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　The author（初学登山、自负冲动、善于反思、最终成长的登山爱好者）；Tim（经验丰富、沉稳理智、热心善良、时刻关心朋友的资深登山者） 2．视角 　　第一人称 3．时空线 　　The author was uninterested in mountain climbing at first--- he thought hiking was tiring and meaningless ---The author fell in love with climbing after a pleasant experience--- he desired to challenge the difficult Hero’s Route ---The author insisted on challenging a tough route alone despite Tim’s warning--- he was overconfident and set off alone secretly ---The author got trapped in bad weather and dangerous situation--- he suffered rain, slippery rocks and loss of signal ---The author turned to Tim for help and received guidance 4. 细节问答 　　What did the author think of hiking at first? ：He thought hiking was pointless, tiring and exhausting. 　　What made the author fall in love with mountain climbing?：The breathtaking sunset and wonderful scenery on the hill brought him unexpected joy. 　　Why did Tim warn the author against the Hero’s Route?：Because the tough route required professional training instead of mere enthusiasm. 　　Why did the author choose to climb alone?：He was overconfident and wanted to give Tim a big surprise. 　　What difficulties did the author meet on the mountain?：He faced dark sky, heavy rain, slippery rocks, endless trail and no phone signal. 　　What kind of person was the author at first?：He was impulsive, arrogant and overconfident, lacking self-awareness. 　　What does the story tell us?：True bravery lies in modesty and self-awareness, not blind arrogance and reckless persistence. 5．情节线 　　作者起初认为爬山毫无意义、辛苦费力→觉得登山劳累无用，对其毫无兴趣→一次小型登山的绝美风景，让作者爱上登山、心生挑战欲→眼界开阔后渴望挑战高难度英雄路线→无视好友Tim的善意提醒，自负地独自挑战高难度路线→坚信心之所向无所不成，执意独自出发→山路艰险、暴雨突至、手机无信号，作者陷入绝境→无奈求助Tim，得到下山指引→（续写）作者内心挣扎，放下骄傲选择妥协下山→（续写）雨夜下山艰难重重，偶遇Tim，领悟真正的勇者之道 6．情感线 　　The author: indifferent and unwilling→amazed and passionate→arrogant and confident→exhausted and frightened→desperate and helpless→hesitant and reflective 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：作者初次登山便心生热爱，因自负冲动独自挑战高难度山路，中途遭遇险境进退两难，最终在朋友帮助下脱险，并领悟到真正的勇敢绝非盲目逞强。 　　英文：Fascinated by mountain climbing, the author challenged a tough trail alone out of overconfidence and got trapped in danger. With his friend Tim’s help, he escaped safely and learned that true courage requires reason and self-awareness. 8. 句式 　　非谓语动词：The rocks became slippery, making every step a struggle. 状语从句：But I believed “Nothing is impossible in front of a willing heart,” so I set off alone. 定语从句：It was a demanding 20-kilometer trail across several high peaks. 宾语从句：He warned that the route required professional training. 固定句型：To make matters worse, my phone had no signal. 9. 本文主题 　　成长感悟类：摒弃盲目逞强，保持清醒自知，理性坚守、适时取舍才是真正的勇敢。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: But now I hesitated, because taking the side trail meant failure. 　　衔接句1——What was the author’s inner struggle? What final choice did he make? The author was unwilling to admit failure due to pride, but realizing the dangerous situation, he abandoned blind persistence and decided to find the blue ribbon to go down the mountain. Paragraph 2: Climbing down the path to the village at night was still very challenging. 　　衔接句2——What difficulties did the author meet? How did Tim help him? What lesson did he learn? The author struggled with slippery roads and dark nights. Fortunately, Tim came to meet him halfway. The author finally learned that true heroism lies in reason rather than recklessness. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：但我犹豫了，因为走这条辅路意味着认输失败。 　　→①内心骄傲作祟，不甘半途而废、承认失败→②环顾恶劣环境，认清自身处境凶险→③放下自负执念，理智选择寻路下山； 第二段：夜里沿着小路下山返回村庄依旧充满挑战。 　　→①雨夜山路湿滑漆黑，行走艰难、心生恐惧→②Tim及时赶来接应，暖心陪伴护送→③作者幡然醒悟，收获成长与人生真谛。 四、标准范文 　　But now I hesitated, because taking the side trail meant failure. Pride welled up in my heart, refusing to admit my rashness. I had boasted of conquering the Hero’s Route and dreamed of surprising Tim with my bravery. Standing in the cold rain, I stared at the endless rugged peaks, exhausted and shivering. The thought of giving up stung badly. However, the fading daylight, slippery rocks and dead phone signal reminded me of my dangerous situation. Realizing blind persistence was not courage but foolishness, I finally swallowed my pride and started searching for the blue ribbon. 　　Climbing down the path to the village at night was still very challenging. The rain never stopped, making the narrow path extremely slippery. I moved slowly and cautiously, grasping nearby branches tightly to avoid falling. Darkness surrounded me, and fear crept in constantly. Just as I was about to lose hope, I spotted a familiar figure with a flashlight walking towards me. It was Tim. He rushed over, helped me with my gear and comforted me gently. On the way down, I learned a valuable lesson. True heroism lies not in reckless bravery, but in modesty, self-awareness and timely compromise. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $