2027届高三英语读后续写专项复习---帮狗狗除蜱虫的陌生人---读后续写导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案系统梳理了读后续写核心考点，从文本分析（角色、视角、时空线等）到情节构造再到续写实践，构建完整知识网络。通过细节问答、情节线梳理等问题导向设计，引导学生自主推导文本逻辑与情感脉络，形成对续写规律的系统认知。 亮点在于自主诊断与分层指导，如“细节问答”模块帮助学生自测文本关键信息把握，“段落续写框架”分步骤引导构建情节，培养思维品质与语言能力。每个环节配有反思总结表，助力学生个性化提升，教师可依学情精准指导，有效培养自主复习能力。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。　　 I came to know this unique individual in a very simple way. One afternoon, in the little town where I then lived, I was taking my dog for a walk when he began to behave strangely. He rolled crazily on the ground, rubbed himself against every tree, cried and growled constantly. 　　While I was wondering what was wrong with him, I became aware that someone was walking by my side——a man of about 30, poorly dressed. A beggar, I thought, and I was about to put my hand in my pocket to get him some change. But the stranger smiled peacefully at me as though we were old friends. “He’s got a tick (蜱虫叮咬), poor chap, ” he said, pointing to my dog. “Come along! We’ll have it out. ” 　　I was surprised, but there was such warm friendliness in his gaze that I took no offence at his familiarity. I followed him to a park bench and sat down. He called the dog with a shrill whistle. 　　And, strange to say, my dog, who was usually afraid of strangers, responded at once, and, at a sign, put his head on the man's knee. Searching the dog's coat with long, sensitive fingers, the stranger finally uttered a satisfied “A‑ha!” “Here it is, ” he laughed, joyfully holding something in the air. “Now run along, doggie. ” 　　As the dog scurried off, the stranger rose with a nod and walked on. His departure was so sudden that it did not occur to me until later that I should have given him something for his trouble or at least should have thanked him. But there was the same finality and self‑possession about his coming. 注意： （1）所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； （2）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； Paragraph 1: I stood there, staring at his back disappearing down the street. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Several days later, I happened to meet the stranger again in the town square. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 The author’s dog acted strangely while walking--- _________________ ---A poorly dressed stranger offered to help cure the dog--- _________________ ---The stranger successfully removed the tick and left suddenly--- _________________ 4. 细节问答 What was wrong with the author’s dog? ：___________________________________ What did the author think of the stranger at first?：_________________________________ Why did the author agree to follow the stranger?：________________________________________________ What did the stranger do for the dog?：__________________________________________ Why did the author feel regretful after the stranger left?：_____________________________________________ What kind of person is the stranger?：_________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 作者遛狗时，狗狗突发异常、躁动不安→_________________ →衣着朴素的陌生人主动上前帮忙诊治狗狗→_________________ →陌生人利落治好狗狗，悄然离去，作者来不及道谢心生愧疚→（续写）作者目送背影，内心感慨反思→（续写）再度偶遇陌生人，读懂纯粹善意 6．情感线 The author: confused and puzzled→___________→grateful and regretful→___________→moved and enlightened 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：________________________________________________________________________ 英文：________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句　　___________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 温情治愈类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: I stood there, staring at his back disappearing down the street. 衔接句1——What did the author feel and think? What realization did he have? ________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Several days later, I happened to meet the stranger again in the town square. 衔接句2——What did the author do to repay him? What is the final theme? ________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：我站在原地，望着他消失在街道尽头的背影。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：几天后，我在小镇广场偶然再次遇见了这位陌生人。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 4. 段落续写 Paragraph 1: I stood there, staring at his back disappearing down the street. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Several days later, I happened to meet the stranger again in the town square. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 The author（善于观察、心怀感恩、懂得反思的路人）；The stranger（衣着朴素、善良纯粹、乐于助人、不求回报的神秘陌生人） 2．视角 第一人称 3．时空线 The author’s dog acted strangely while walking--- the author felt confused and had no idea what to do ---A poorly dressed stranger offered to help cure the dog--- the stranger skillfully removed the tick and relieved the dog ---The stranger successfully removed the tick and left suddenly--- the author felt regretful for failing to thank him 4. 细节问答 What was wrong with the author’s dog? ：The dog got a tick, behaving crazily, rolling and growling constantly. What did the author think of the stranger at first?：The author thought he was a beggar and planned to give him some change. Why did the author agree to follow the stranger?：The stranger had warm and friendly gaze, which made the author feel trustworthy. What did the stranger do for the dog?：He skillfully found and removed the tick from the dog’s coat. Why did the author feel regretful after the stranger left?：The stranger left suddenly, leaving the author no time to thank or reward him. What kind of person is the stranger?：He is warm-hearted, helpful, pure and generous, helping others without asking for reward. What does the story tell us?：True kindness is pure and selfless, which deserves our respect and gratitude. 5．情节线 作者遛狗时，狗狗突发异常、躁动不安→作者满心困惑、束手无策，偶遇衣着朴素的陌生人→衣着朴素的陌生人主动上前帮忙诊治狗狗→陌生人凭借娴熟手法顺利取出蜱虫，治愈狗狗→陌生人利落治好狗狗，悄然离去，作者来不及道谢心生愧疚→（续写）作者目送背影，内心感慨反思→（续写）再度偶遇陌生人，真诚致谢，读懂纯粹善意 6．情感线 The author: confused and puzzled→surprised and trusting→grateful and regretful→excited and sincere→moved and enlightened 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：作者遛狗时狗狗因蜱虫叮咬躁动不安，一位看似平凡的陌生人心怀善意、无偿出手相助，治愈了狗狗后悄然离去，让作者领悟到不求回报的纯粹善意最是动人。 英文：When the author’s dog suffered from a tick and behaved strangely, a poorly dressed stranger kindly helped cure the dog for free and left quietly, making the author realize the beauty of selfless kindness. 8. 句式 状语从句：I was taking my dog for a walk when he began to behave strangely. 非谓语动词：Searching the dog's coat with long, sensitive fingers, the stranger finally found the tick. 定语从句：My dog, who was usually afraid of strangers, responded at once to the stranger’s call. 宾语从句：I became aware that someone was walking by my side. 结果状语从句：His departure was so sudden that I had no time to thank him. 9. 本文主题 温情治愈类：善意无关外表，纯粹无私的助人之心，温暖人间、治愈人心。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: I stood there, staring at his back disappearing down the street. 衔接句1——What did the author feel and think? What realization did he have? The author felt extremely regretful for not thanking the stranger. He realized he judged the stranger by his appearance and was touched by his selfless kindness. Paragraph 2: Several days later, I happened to meet the stranger again in the town square. 衔接句2——What did the author do to repay him? What is the final theme? The author rushed to him, expressed sincere thanks and wanted to reward him. The stranger refused politely, showing true kindness needs no reward. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：我站在原地，望着他消失在街道尽头的背影。 →①内心满是愧疚与懊悔，遗憾未曾道谢→②反思自己以貌取人，心生惭愧→③感慨陌生人纯粹无私的善意； 第二段：几天后，我在小镇广场偶然再次遇见了这位陌生人。 →①作者立刻上前拦住对方，真诚致歉道谢→②主动拿出报酬表达心意，被对方婉拒→③领悟善意本真，心怀敬畏与温暖。 四、标准范文 　　Paragraph 1: I stood there, staring at his back disappearing down the street. A strong sense of regret flooded my heart. I felt ashamed that I had judged him as a beggar merely by his plain clothes at first. He offered selfless help without any expectation of reward, yet I failed to utter a single word of thanks. Watching his fading figure, I was deeply touched by his pure kindness and gentle warmth, which made me realize never to judge a person by their appearance. 　　Paragraph 2: Several days later, I happened to meet the stranger again in the town square. I rushed towards him immediately and expressed my sincere gratitude repeatedly. I took out some money to repay his kindness, but he refused it politely with the same peaceful smile. He said helping others in need was just a small thing for him. From this experience, I truly learned that genuine kindness is simple, selfless and priceless, and I decided to pass on such warm kindness in my life. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $