读后续写微语段专项练习12(鼓励与建议; 感激陌生人的善意)-2027届高三英语一轮复习专项

**基本信息** 聚焦读后续写高频场景，通过“词汇积累-语法应用-句式升级-情境仿写”四级训练体系，系统培养语言表达与逻辑构建能力，提升语言能力与学习策略。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |词汇积累|2类10组短语|分类整合动作/心理描写词汇|从基础词汇到主题表达，构建场景词汇网络| |挖空训练|3题/主题|非谓语结构应用技巧|语法规则与语境融合，强化语言准确性| |改写练习|1题/主题|句式优化与信息增补|基础句到高分句的表达升级，提升思维品质| |变式语段|3题/高考场景|高考情境迁移方法|从通用到特定场景，增强应试适应性| |仿写任务|1题/情境|综合运用与输出创造|知识内化到自主表达，发展学习能力|

读后续写微语段专项练习12 (给予鼓励与建议；感激陌生人的善意) Day1 主题：给予鼓励和建议 场景设定：人物遭遇挫折、情绪低落，他人给予安慰、鼓励并提出可行建议；读后续写亲情、友情、陌生人互助高频素材，侧重神态动作、语言细节、心理抚慰描写。 一、高分核心词汇积累 鼓励建议动作短语 中文释义 心理环境描写短语 中文释义 cheer sb up 使某人振作起来 restore one’s fading confidence 重拾日渐消退的信心 offer practical suggestions 给出切实可行的建议 relieve one’s inner frustration 排解内心的沮丧 give sb a pat on the shoulder 拍一拍某人的肩膀 a spark of hope flickers in one’s heart 心底燃起一丝希望 urge sb to do sth 力劝某人做某事 one’s spirits lift gradually 情绪渐渐振作起来 point out the bright side 指出积极的一面 regain one’s courage to move forward 重获前行的勇气 二、基础挖空训练 中文翻译：她拍了拍我的肩膀，想让我振作起来，还给我提供切实可行的建议。她指出事情积极的一面，力劝我不要放弃。听着她的话语，我内心的沮丧得以排解，心底燃起一丝希望。 1. She gave me a pat on the shoulder, ______ (cheer) me up and ______ (offer) me practical suggestions. 2. ______ (point) out the bright side, she urged me ______ (not give) up. 3. Hearing her words, I felt my inner frustration ______ (relieve), with a spark of hope ______ (flicker) in my heart. 三、进阶改写练习 原基础句：She gave me a pat on the shoulder and cheered me up. 要求：使用 offer practical suggestions / restore one’s fading confidence 两组短语，保持原意，不少于30词。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 四、同类高考变式语段 变式场景：比赛失利，少年垂头丧气。好友看到他的失落，上前安慰鼓励，给出改进建议，少年慢慢重拾前行的勇气。 中文：看到男孩垂头丧气，好友拍了拍他的肩膀，想要让他振作起来。好友指出事情积极的一面，给他提出切实可行的建议。男孩听后，情绪渐渐振作，重获前行的勇气。 1. Seeing the boy in low spirits, his friend gave him a pat on the shoulder, ______ (try) to cheer him up. 2. ______ (point) out the bright side, the friend ______ (present) him with practical suggestions. 3. After absorbing those words, his spirits ______ (lift) gradually and he regained his courage ______ (move) forward. 五、自主仿写任务（输出型练习，巩固运用） 情境：你考试失利，心情低落。你的同桌察觉到你的沮丧，过来安慰你，给予鼓励，并且给你一些学习上的建议。 要求：至少使用表格内2个动作短语+1个心理短语，运用非谓语结构，字数30词以上。 ___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________ Day2 主题：感激陌生人的善意 场景设定：身处困境，得到素不相识之人的援手，内心满怀感动与感激；读后续写助人为乐类高频考点；侧重困境处境、陌生人动作细节、内心触动、感恩抒发。 一、高分核心词汇积累 助人感恩动作短语 中文释义 心理情感短语 中文释义 come to one’s rescue 赶来救助某人 a wave of gratitude sweep over sb 一阵感激涌上心头 reach out to sb 向某人伸出援手 be overcome with heartfelt gratitude 满心由衷的感激 extend a helping hand 伸出援助之手 warmth flood one’s whole body 暖意席卷全身 owe one’s thanks to sb 向某人表达谢意 touch sb to the core 深深触动某人内心 grasp sb’s hands tightly 紧紧握住某人的双手 leave a lasting impression on sb 给某人留下难以磨灭的印象 二、基础挖空训练 中文翻译：就在我陷入困境之时，一位陌生人向我伸出援助之手，赶来救助我。一阵感激涌上我的心头，暖意席卷我的全身。我紧紧握住他的双手，满心由衷的感激，这份善意深深触动我的内心。 1. When I got stuck in trouble, a stranger extended a helping hand, ______ (come) to my rescue. 2. A wave of gratitude ______ (sweep) over me, warmth ______ (flood) my whole body. 3. Grasping his hands tightly, I ______ (overcome) with heartfelt gratitude, his kindness ______ (touch) me to the core. 三、句式升级改写练习 原句：A stranger extended a helping hand when I was in trouble and I felt very thankful. 要求：使用 come to one’s rescue / be overcome with heartfelt gratitude 至少两组短语，增添动作细节描写，30词左右。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 四、高考同类变式语段 场景：雨天女孩被困路边，没有带伞。一位陌生女士主动分享雨伞，护送她到公交站。女孩深受触动，向陌生人真诚道谢 中文：女孩被困在路边，大雨倾盆。一位陌生女士向她伸出援手，赶来帮助她。女孩紧紧握住女士的手，一阵感激涌上心头，这份善意给她留下难以磨灭的印象。 1. Caught in the heavy rain by the roadside, the girl saw a strange lady ______ (extend) a helping hand, coming to her rescue. 2. She grasped the lady’s hands tightly, a wave of gratitude ______ (sweep) over her. 3. The stranger’s kindness ______ (leave) a lasting impression on the girl, who was overcome with sincere thanks. 五、自主仿写任务（输出型练习，巩固运用） 情境：徒步时你不小心崴了脚，寸步难行。一位路过的陌生人停下脚步帮助你，你内心充满感激。 要求：至少使用表格内2个动作短语+1个心理短语，体现陌生人善意以及你的感恩之情，35词以上。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 Day1 参考答案 基础挖空答案 1. cheering; offering 2. Pointing; not to give 3. relieved; flickering 完整标准语段： She gave me a pat on the shoulder, cheering me up and offering me practical suggestions. Pointing out the bright side, she urged me not to give up. Hearing her words, I felt my inner frustration relieved, with a spark of hope flickering in my heart. 进阶改写参考范文 She gave me a pat on the shoulder to cheer me up. Besides, she offered practical suggestions for my problem, which helped restore my fading confidence when I was trapped in difficulty. 变式语段填空答案 1. trying 2. Pointing; presented 3. lifted; to move 变式完整段落： Seeing the boy in low spirits, his friend gave him a pat on the shoulder, trying to cheer him up. Pointing out the bright side, the friend presented him with practical suggestions. After absorbing those words, his spirits lifted gradually and he regained his courage to move forward. Day2 参考答案 基础挖空答案 1. coming 2. swept; flooding 3. was overcome; touching 完整标准语段： When I got stuck in trouble, a stranger extended a helping hand, coming to my rescue. A wave of gratitude swept over me, warmth flooding my whole body. Grasping his hands tightly, I was overcome with heartfelt gratitude, his kindness touching me to the core. 句式升级参考范文 When I was trapped in difficulty, a stranger extended a helping hand and came to my rescue. I grasped his hands tightly and was overcome with heartfelt gratitude for his self‑less kindness. 变式语段填空答案 1. extend/extending 2. sweeping 3. left 变式完整段落： Caught in the heavy rain by the roadside, the girl saw a strange lady extend a helping hand, coming to her rescue. She grasped the lady’s hands tightly, a wave of gratitude sweeping over her. The stranger’s kindness left a lasting impression on the girl, who was overcome with sincere thanks. 附加拓展：同主题万能句式模板（早读背诵专用） 表示给予鼓励和建议万能句 1. Giving me a pat on the shoulder, she offered practical suggestions to cheer me up, restoring my fading confidence. 拍了拍我的肩膀，她给出切实可行的建议让我振作起来，重拾我日渐消退的信心。 2. Pointing out the bright side of the matter, she urged me not to give up, and a spark of hope flickered in my heart. 她指出事情积极的一面，力劝我不要放弃，我的心底燃起一丝希望。 3. My spirits lifted gradually as I followed her valuable advice and regained my courage to move forward. 听从她宝贵的建议后，我的情绪渐渐振作，重获前行的勇气。 表示感激陌生人的善意万能句 1. When I was stuck in trouble, a stranger extended a helping hand, and a wave of gratitude swept over me. 当我陷入困境时，一位陌生人向我伸出援手，一阵感激涌上我的心头。 2. Warmth flooded my whole body as I grasped his hands tightly, totally overcome with heartfelt gratitude. 我紧紧握住他的双手，暖意席卷全身，心中满是由衷的感激。 3. What he did touched me to the core and left a lasting impression on my mind. 他的所作所为深深触动我的内心，给我留下难以磨灭的印象。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $