内容正文:
2027年高考英语应用文二轮复习之人物描写
一、题型特征
人物描写用于介绍某位人物(名人、身边人、历史人物等),核心是"引出人物+生平事迹+评价/启示"。事迹要具体,评价要有理有据,避免空泛。
二、写作框架
第一段:引出人物(身份+总体评价)
第二段:生平/事迹(时间、经历、成就)
第三段:人物品质+对自己的启示/评价
三、经典范例
你校英文报"People We Admire"栏目征稿。请介绍一位你敬佩的中国科学家。内容包括:
1. 人物简介;
2. 主要事迹;
3. 你的评价。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 请按如下格式作答。
The Scientist I Admire Most
【高分范文】
The Scientist I Admire Most
Among the multitude of distinguished Chinese scientists, Tu Youyou is the figure I hold in the highest esteem, whose groundbreaking discovery of artemisinin has rescued millions of lives across the globe.
Born in 1930, Tu Youyou dedicated herself to medical research from her early years. Confronted with the formidable challenge of discovering a cure for malaria, she meticulously tested hundreds of traditional Chinese herbal medicines, working indefatigably around the clock. In 1972, she ultimately succeeded in isolating artemisinin, which subsequently earned her the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine.
Her unwavering perseverance and selfless dedication serve as a perpetual source of inspiration, motivating me to pursue my aspirations with resolute determination.
四、范文讲解
1.重点词汇升级
中文含义
基础简单表达
升级高级表达
许多
many
multitude of
杰出的
great
distinguished
敬佩
admire
hold in the highest esteem
开创性的
great
groundbreaking
拯救
saved
rescued
全球
around the world
across the globe
致力于
worked hard on
dedicated herself to
面对
faced with
Confronted with
艰巨的
big
formidable
仔细地
carefully
meticulously
不知疲倦地
hard
indefatigably
成功
found
succeeded in isolating
随后
later
subsequently
坚定的
strong
unwavering
无私的
great
selfless
永恒的
constant
perpetual
坚定的决心
hard work
resolute determination
2.句式升级:同义句转换
原句:Among the multitude of distinguished Chinese scientists, Tu Youyou is the figure I hold in the highest esteem, whose groundbreaking discovery of artemisinin has rescued millions of lives across the globe.
拓展句:Among the multitude of distinguished Chinese scientists, Tu Youyou is the figure I hold in the highest esteem, her groundbreaking discovery of artemisinin rescuing millions of lives across the globe.
3.长难句解析
句1:Among the multitude of distinguished Chinese scientists, Tu Youyou is the figure I hold in the highest esteem, whose groundbreaking discovery of artemisinin has rescued millions of lives across the globe.
【解析】Among the multitude of为介词短语作范围状语;I hold in the highest esteem为省略that的定语从句,修饰the figure;whose引导非限制性定语从句,whose = Tu Youyou's,在从句中作定语修饰discovery;across the globe意为"全球"。
句2:Confronted with the formidable challenge of discovering a cure for malaria, she meticulously tested hundreds of traditional Chinese herbal medicines, working indefatigably around the clock.
【解析】Confronted with为过去分词短语作原因状语,she与confront为被动关系(be confronted with);of discovering为介词+动名词结构;meticulously为副词修饰tested;working indefatigably为现在分词作伴随状语;around the clock意为"昼夜不停地"。
4.范文模板(升级版)
Among the multitude of ______(范围), ______(人物)is the figure I hold in the highest esteem, whose ______(成就/贡献)has ______(影响).
Born in ______(年份), ______(人物)dedicated herself/himself to ______(事业)from her/his early years. Confronted with the formidable challenge of ______(挑战), she/he meticulously ______(行动), working indefatigably around the clock. In ______(年份), she/he ultimately succeeded in ______(成就), which subsequently earned ______(荣誉).
Her/His unwavering perseverance and selfless dedication serve as a perpetual source of inspiration, motivating me to ______(对自己的启示).
五、自主演练
你校英文报"People We Admire"栏目征稿。请介绍一位你敬佩的老师。内容包括:
1. 老师简介;
2. 主要事迹;
3. 你的评价。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 请按如下格式作答。
The Teacher I Admire Most
【参考范文】
The Teacher I Admire Most
Among the multitude of educators I have encountered, Ms. Wang, my English teacher, is the figure I hold in the highest esteem, whose unwavering devotion to teaching has profoundly influenced my academic journey.
Born in a small town, Ms. Wang dedicated herself to education after graduating from university. Confronted with the formidable challenge of teaching students with diverse English proficiency levels, she meticulously prepared her lessons, working indefatigably to render every class engaging and enlightening. Whenever I encountered academic difficulties, she would invariably spare her time to assist me patiently, which enabled me to make remarkable progress.
Her boundless patience and selfless dedication serve as a perpetual source of inspiration, motivating me to become a more compassionate and resilient individual.
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