内容正文:
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I've grown used to the pause. When someone hears my name --- Goodluck --- they often look at me with confusion. It's something I didn't think would require much explanation. Back in Nigeria, it didn't. Names like Precious or Beauty were common. Mine was just another name.
I didn't realize how different my name was until I traveled to the U.S. for my education at 19. That was the first time "Goodluck" stopped blending in. I thought it would be easy to remember, but instead of recognition, it met disbelief. I had to spell it and explain that I was not joking. I couldn’t understand why something normal back home needed so much clarification. Many times, I faced strange looks and repeated questions, which once made me feel awkward and isolated in the new environment.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:Gradually, I began to embrace my special name and felt grateful for it.
Paragraph 2:As time went by, I finally understood the true meaning of my name.
一、文本分析
1.角色
________________________________________________________
2.视角
第________人称
3.时空线
The author had a common name Goodluck in Nigeria--- _________________ --- The author went to the US for further study at 19--- _________________ --- The name brought people’s disbelief and strange reactions--- _________________ --- The author felt awkward and isolated in the new environment.
4. 细节问答
How did people treat the name Goodluck in Nigeria? :___________________________________
When did the author find her name unusual?:_________________________________
How did Americans react to the author’s name?:________________________________________________
What trouble did the author meet with her name?:__________________________________________
How did the author feel about her name at first?:_____________________________________________
Why did the author feel confused at first?:_________________________________________________
What change will happen to the author’s attitude?:________________________________________________________
What does the story tell us?:________________________________________________
5.情节线
作者的名字Goodluck在尼日利亚十分普通常见→十九岁赴美留学→独特的名字引来美国人的质疑与异样目光→____________________→对自己的名字感到不适与不解→(续写)作者慢慢接纳、坦然拥抱自己的名字并心生感恩→(续写)作者最终领悟名字真正的内涵与意义
6.情感线
I:normal and casual→___________→awkward and isolated→___________→grateful and peaceful→___________(续写)
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
英文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8. 句式
宾语从句;定语从句;状语从句;非谓语;并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9. 本文主题
成长感悟类:_______________________________________
二.情节构造
Paragraph 1: Gradually, I began to embrace my special name and felt grateful for it.
衔接句1——What change happened to the author’s attitude? What influence did the name bring? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2: As time went by, I finally understood the true meaning of my name.
衔接句2——What is the real meaning of the name? What did the author learn?
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
三.段落续写框架
第一段:渐渐地,我开始接纳这个特别的名字,并心怀感恩。
→①我不再因他人异样的眼光自卑尴尬→②___________________→③我坦然接纳自己的与众不同;
第二段:随着时间推移,我终于读懂了自己名字真正的含义。
→①名字不仅代表好运,更承载着家人的祝福与期许→②______________________________→③我为自己的名字骄傲,活出属于自己的精彩。
四. 段落续写
Gradually, I began to embrace my special name and felt grateful for it.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
As time went by, I finally understood the true meaning of my name. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案
一、文本分析
1.角色
I(来自尼日利亚、赴美留学、从自卑困惑到坦然接纳自我、收获成长的留学生);American people(对特殊名字感到好奇、产生疑惑的美国人)
2.视角
第一人称
3.时空线
The author had a common name Goodluck in Nigeria→Names with beautiful meanings were ordinary in hometown→The author went to the US for further study at 19→Her name became special and unfamiliar to Americans→The name brought people’s disbelief and strange looks→The author had to explain repeatedly and felt awkward and lonely.
4. 细节问答
How did people treat the name Goodluck in Nigeria? :It was a very common and ordinary name in Nigeria.
When did the author find her name unusual?:When she studied in the US at the age of 19.
How did Americans react to the author’s name?:They felt confused and disbelieved, always giving strange looks and asking repeated questions.
What trouble did the author meet with her name?:She had to spell and explain her name over and over again.
How did the author feel about her name at first?:She felt awkward, confused and isolated.
Why did the author feel confused at first?:A normal name in her hometown needed constant explanation in a new country.
What change will happen to the author’s attitude?:She will embrace her special name and feel grateful for it.
What does the story tell us?:We should embrace our uniqueness, accept ourselves bravely and find positive meaning in our differences.
5.情节线
作者的名字Goodluck在尼日利亚十分普遍寻常→十九岁的作者赴美留学,开启异国求学之旅→独特的英文名让美国人倍感陌生疑惑,引来异样目光→作者需要反复解释名字,内心尴尬、倍感孤独→起初无法理解普通的名字为何需要再三阐释→心态逐渐转变,坦然接纳自己的与众不同→最终领悟名字的深层意义,实现自我接纳与成长
6.情感线
I:normal and casual→confused and puzzled→awkward and isolated→calm and open-minded→grateful and peaceful→proud and confident(续写)
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:一名尼日利亚留学生因独特的名字在异国遭遇不解与孤立,从最初的尴尬困惑,逐渐坦然接纳自我,最终领悟名字承载的美好意义与独特价值。
英文:A Nigerian student felt awkward and isolated because of her special name in the US. Gradually, she learned to embrace her uniqueness and understood the positive meaning behind her name.
8. 句式
宾语从句:I didn't realize how different my name was until I traveled to the U.S.
定语从句:It's something I didn't think would require much explanation.
状语从句:Many times, I faced strange looks and repeated questions, which once made me feel awkward and isolated.
非谓语动词:They often look at me with confusion when hearing my name.
并列句:I thought it would be easy to remember, but instead of recognition, it met disbelief.
9. 本文主题
成长感悟类:接纳自身的与众不同,正视差异、拥抱独特,方能收获自信与成长,活出独特的人生价值。
二.情节构造
Paragraph 1: Gradually, I began to embrace my special name and felt grateful for it.
衔接句1——What change happened to the author’s attitude? What influence did the name bring?
I no longer felt embarrassed by others’ strange looks. Instead, my special name helped me stand out, make new friends and leave a deep impression on others.
Paragraph 2: As time went by, I finally understood the true meaning of my name.
衔接句2——What is the real meaning of the name? What did the author learn?
The name represents blessings and hope. True good luck comes from self-acceptance and bravery, which inspires me to face new life positively.
三.段落续写框架
第一段:渐渐地,我开始接纳这个特别的名字,并心怀感恩。
→①我不再因他人异样的眼光自卑尴尬→②独特的名字让我更容易被记住、收获善意与友谊→③我坦然接纳自己的与众不同;
第二段:随着时间推移,我终于读懂了自己名字真正的含义。
→①名字不仅代表好运,更承载着家人的祝福与期许→②我明白真正的幸运源于自信、勇敢与接纳自我→③我为自己的名字骄傲,活出属于自己的精彩。
四. 段落续写
Gradually, I began to embrace my special name and felt grateful for it. I stopped feeling ashamed or embarrassed when others reacted with confusion. Instead, I smiled patiently, spelled my name and shared its meaning calmly. Surprisingly, my unique name made me distinctive among international students. It served as a special icebreaker, helping me gain others’ attention, start conversations and make more new friends on campus.
As time went by, I finally understood the true meaning of my name. It was never just a random title, but a sincere blessing from my family, who hoped I would be blessed and stay positive in life. I realized true luck lies in self-acceptance and courage to be different. Now I take pride in my name Goodluck. It constantly encourages me to embrace my uniqueness and face challenges in the new life with confidence and optimism.
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