内容正文:
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was an arrogant high school boy full of blind self-confidence, firmly believing that I was more capable than all my classmates at organizing and managing group tasks. I always thought careful planning and cautious preparation were a waste of time, and only strength and ability mattered. When our teacher formally announced that our school would hold a lively campus charity fair to raise money for poor children in remote villages, I volunteered without hesitation to take charge of the second-hand book stall. I also actively persuaded nearly ten warm-hearted classmates to donate their unused books to support my booth.
My thoughtful classmate Lina had kindly reminded me in advance to classify different kinds of books, mark clear and reasonable prices, and design simple promotional posters to attract visitors. However, I rudely turned down her sincere advice and even laughed openly at her for being overly cautious. I gathered large piles of various books, including interesting storybooks, popular magazines and practical exam reference books. Without any careful arrangement, I stuffed these mixed books randomly into several rough cardboard boxes and made no detailed preparations at all.
On the day of the charity fair, while other groups devoted plenty of time and energy to decorating their stalls with colorful ribbons, balloons and beautiful handwritten signs, I did almost nothing. I simply poured all my books in a total mess on the table and wandered around the campus casually, firmly convinced that high-quality books alone would naturally draw a large number of buyers.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
As noon slowly rolled around, I finally realized how terribly wrong I was.
Paragraph 2:
Just as I was trapped in great embarrassment and self-blame, Lina walked straight towards me.
一、文本分析
1.角色
________________________________________________________
2.视角
第________人称
3.时空线
I was an arrogant high school student overconfident in my ability--- _________________ --- I volunteered to run a book stall for a charity fair--- _________________ --- I refused Lina’s careful advice and made no preparations--- _________________ --- I casually arranged messy books and trusted my so-called ability.
4. 细节问答
What kind of person was the author at first? :___________________________________
What activity would the school hold?:_________________________________
What was the author in charge of?:________________________________________________
What suggestions did Lina offer?:__________________________________________
How did the author treat Lina’s advice?:_____________________________________________
What did the author do for his book stall?:_________________________________________________
What did other groups do for the charity fair?:________________________________________________________
What does the story tell us?:________________________________________________
5.情节线
作者年少自大,盲目自信,轻视细致准备的重要性→学校举办校园慈善义卖,为乡村贫困儿童筹款→作者主动请缨负责二手书摊位,召集同学捐书→细心的丽娜提前给出整理、定价、宣传的合理建议→________________________→其他摊位精心装饰,作者依旧自负轻敌→(续写)作者中午意识到自己的严重失误,摊位无人问津→(续写)丽娜主动上前帮忙,作者知错悔改、学会谦逊
6.情感线
I:arrogant and overconfident→___________→careless and conceited→___________→embarrassed and regretful→___________(续写)
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
英文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8. 句式
宾语从句;状语从句;非谓语;并列句
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9. 本文主题
成长反思类:_______________________________________
二.情节构造
Paragraph 1: As noon slowly rolled around, I finally realized how terribly wrong I was.
衔接句1——What terrible situation did the author face? How did he feel?
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2: Just as I was trapped in great embarrassment and self-blame, Lina walked straight towards me.
衔接句2——What did Lina do? What lesson did the author learn?
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
三.段落续写框架
第一段:正午悄然来临,我终于意识到自己错得有多离谱。
→①我的摊位杂乱无章,无人驻足,生意惨淡→②对比其他热闹精致的摊位,我羞愧不已→③我_________________________;
第二段:正当我陷入窘迫与自责时,丽娜径直朝我走来。
→①丽娜不计前嫌,主动帮我整理书籍、布置摊位→②摊位焕然一新,渐渐吸引访客、卖出书籍→③__________________________。
四. 段落续写
As noon slowly rolled around, I finally realized how terribly wrong I was.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Just as I was trapped in great embarrassment and self-blame, Lina walked straight towards me. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案
一、文本分析
1.角色
I(自大自负、轻视细节、后期知错能改、学会谦逊的高中生);Lina(细心体贴、善良大度、做事严谨、乐于助人的同学)
2.视角
第一人称
3.时空线
I was an arrogant high school student overconfident in my ability→I believed ability outweighed careful preparation→I volunteered to run a book stall for a charity fair→I collected donated books from classmates→I refused Lina’s practical and careful suggestions→I arranged books randomly with no preparation→Other stalls were well-decorated while my stall was messy.
4. 细节问答
What kind of person was the author at first? :He was arrogant,blindly confident and thought preparation was useless.
What activity would the school hold?:The school would hold a campus charity fair to raise money for poor remote village children.
What was the author in charge of?:He took charge of the second-hand book stall in the charity fair.
What suggestions did Lina offer?:She advised him to classify books, mark reasonable prices and design promotional posters.
How did the author treat Lina’s advice?:He rudely turned down her kindness and laughed at her excessive caution.
What did the author do for his book stall?:He stuffed mixed books randomly into boxes and made no detailed preparations or decoration.
What did other groups do for the charity fair?:They decorated their stalls with ribbons, balloons and beautiful handwritten signs carefully.
What does the story tell us?:No one can succeed with blind arrogance; careful preparation and modesty are the key to success.
5.情节线
作者性格自大,盲目自信,认为实力大于一切准备→学校举办慈善义卖,为贫困乡村儿童筹款→作者主动负责二手书摊位,号召同学捐书→细心的丽娜给出分类、定价、宣传的实用建议→作者傲慢拒绝,随意堆放书籍,完全不做筹备→其他摊位精心装饰、精致美观,作者依旧轻敌懈怠→(续写)正午时分,作者摊位无人问津,惨淡冷清,幡然醒悟→(续写)丽娜大度帮忙,摊位焕然一新,作者深刻反省,摒弃傲慢、学会谦逊严谨
6.情感线
I:arrogant and overconfident→rude and conceited→careless and dismissive→shocked and awkward→embarrassed and regretful→humble and grateful(续写)
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:自大的高中生轻视细致筹备,拒绝同学的善意建议,导致慈善义卖的书摊惨淡冷清,最终在同学的帮助下醒悟,懂得谦逊与细节筹备的重要性。
英文:An arrogant high school boy ignored careful preparation and his classmate’s sincere advice, resulting in a poor-performing booth at a charity fair. He finally realized his mistake and learned the value of modesty and careful planning.
8. 句式
宾语从句: I always thought careful planning and cautious preparation were a waste of time, and only strength and ability mattered.
状语从句:While other groups devoted plenty of time to decorating, I did almost nothing.
非谓语动词:I wandered around the campus casually, firmly convinced that high-quality books would attract buyers.
并列句:I classified no books, marked no prices and designed no promotional posters.
9. 本文主题
成长反思类:傲慢使人落后,谦逊与细致的筹备方能成就事情,虚心听取建议是成长的必修课。
二.情节构造
Paragraph 1: As noon slowly rolled around, I finally realized how terribly wrong I was.
衔接句1——What terrible situation did the author face? How did he feel?
My messy booth attracted almost no visitors while others were crowded, making me extremely embarrassed and regretful for my arrogance.
Paragraph 2: Just as I was trapped in great embarrassment and self-blame, Lina walked straight towards me.
衔接句2——What did Lina do? What lesson did the author learn?
Lina forgave my rudeness and helped me reorganize the booth patiently, which made me realize the importance of modesty and careful preparation.
三.段落续写框架
第一段:正午悄然来临,我终于意识到自己错得有多离谱。
→①我的摊位杂乱不堪,全程无人驻足购买→②反观其他摊位热闹非凡、生意火爆→③我羞愧难当,深深懊悔自己的自大与轻敌;
第二段:正当我陷入窘迫与自责时,丽娜径直朝我走来。
→①丽娜不计前嫌,耐心帮我整理书籍、定价、摆放摊位→②我的摊位焕然一新,渐渐吸引不少访客→③我诚恳道歉,彻底醒悟,明白谦逊和细节的重要意义。
四. 段落续写
As noon slowly rolled around, I finally realized how terribly wrong I was. All the beautifully decorated stalls around me were packed with enthusiastic buyers, while my messy book booth remained totally deserted. Randomly piled books failed to draw any visitors, and no one was willing to stop to browse. Standing awkwardly beside the table, I was overwhelmed by embarrassment and regret. I couldn’t help blaming myself for my stupid arrogance and ignoring Lina’s valuable suggestions earlier.
Just as I was trapped in great embarrassment and self-blame, Lina walked straight towards me. To my great surprise, she showed no anger for my previous rudeness. Instead, she offered to help me reorganize the books, sort out different categories and mark clear prices. With her patient assistance, my booth soon became tidy and attractive, drawing lots of buyers. I apologized sincerely to Lina. It was this experience that taught me a precious lesson: true ability always goes hand in hand with modesty and careful preparation.
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