内容正文:
第一次月考复习之应用文写作20篇
(浙江专用)
篇目
文体
核心主题
话题分类
Passage 1
邮件建议信
给高一新生 Adam 提建议,帮助适应高中校园生活
人际交往・适应新环境
Passage 2
邮件建议信
安慰新同学 Peter,给出适应校园、交友、时间管理建议,并邀请参加校园野餐活动
人际交往・适应新环境
Passage 3
邮件建议信
安慰 Peter,解决新生活交友与时间管理难题,邀约校园活动
人际交往・适应新环境
Passage 4
书信提议信
学生会主席向校长提议艺术节新增 “探寻城市文脉” 户外活动,分析安全、经费问题并请求批准
校园活动・文化实践建议
Passage 5
邮件建议信
安慰笔友 Susan,解决转学后课堂注意力差、难以融入小组活动的烦恼
人际交往・适应新环境
Passage 6
回信建议信
专栏编辑安慰学生,针对容易发脾气、情绪失控给出调节情绪的建议
心理健康・情绪管理
Passage 7
邮件建议信
给英国笔友 Jack 提供学习汉语的学习方法建议
语言学习・学习困难指导
Passage 8
邮件分享信
高一新生写给初中老师,分享开学典礼见闻与个人感悟
校园生活・成长感悟
Passage 9
邮件建议信
安慰美国朋友 Adan,缓解高中学习焦虑,给出适应高中学习生活的对策
心理健康・学业压力疏导
Passage 10
回信建议信
编辑安慰高一新生 Jack,解决高中压力大、失眠问题,给出减压助眠建议
心理健康・压力调节
Passage 11
邮件建议信
给新生 Jack 支招,平衡课外活动和学业时间
学习规划・学业与社团平衡
Passage 12
邮件建议信
开导英国笔友 David,分析升入高中焦虑的原因,提供适应新生活的建议
心理健康・适应新环境
Passage 13
自荐信
高一新生应聘校报英语记者岗位,介绍个人特长、相关经历,表达求职意愿
申请求职・校园岗位自荐
Passage 14
书信建议信
学生写信给校长,就改善全校学生心理健康提出可行方案
校园管理・心理健康建设建议
Passage 15
邮件建议信
安慰外国好友 Caroline,因长胖情绪低落,给出健康饮食、运动方面的建议
健康生活・身心调节
Passage 16
邮件欢迎 + 建议信
欢迎交换生 Mike,给出快速适应本校学习生活的建议
人际交往・接待外国友人
Passage 17
邮件建议信
安慰英国笔友 Jim,缓解繁重学业带来的心理压力,传授减压方法
心理健康・学业压力疏导
Passage 18
邮件建议信
开导 Paul,化解自己想报绘画社团和父母期待报学习社团之间的矛盾
亲子沟通・兴趣与学业冲突调解
Passage 19
书信建议信
劝说好友 Jim 学会和父母有效沟通,解决周末安排引发的亲子争吵问题
人际交往・亲子关系沟通
Passage 20
回信建议信
校报编辑给留学生 Chris 支招,帮助其走出交友困境,交到新朋友
人际交往・校园交友指导
1.假设你是李华,你的朋友Adam刚上高一,还不适应高中的校园生活,请你给他写一封邮件给出一些建议,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.建议内容。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.请在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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2.假设你是李华,来自美国的新同学 Peter刚转入你班。他不太适应新的校园生活,在与人交流和时间管理上遇到了一些困难。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 表达理解和关心;2. 给出具体建议;3. 邀请他参加一项校园活动。
注意:
1. 词数80 左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re having a hard time getting used to our school life.
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Yours,
Li Hua
3.假设你是李华,来自美国的新同学 Peter刚转入你班。他不太适应新的校园生活,在与人交流和时间管理上遇到了一些困难。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 表达理解和关心;
2. 给出具体建议;
3. 邀请他参加一项校园活动。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re having a hard time getting used to our school life.
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Yours,
Li Hua
4.假定你是学生会主席李华。你校一年一度的校园艺术节即将来临,学生会提议本届艺术节增加一个名为“探寻城市文脉”(Discovering Our City’s Culture)的户外活动项目。请给校长写一封信,内容包括:
1.阐述此项活动的意义;
2.分析活动中可能存在的挑战(如安全、费用等)并提出应对建议;
3.请求批准并征求校方的意见。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.请按如下格式在答题卡上作答。
Dear Principal,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5.假设你是李华,你的笔友苏珊刚转学到一所新高中,在交流中流露出自己很难适应。在课堂上无法集中精力,也无法融入小组活动。请你给苏珊写一封80词左右的建议信,内容包括:
1.表达共情;
2.给出建议;
3.给予信心。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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6.为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie,收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容要点如下:
1. 表示理解并给予安慰;
2. 提出建议并说明理由。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
3. 信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:lose one’s temper 发脾气
Hi Worried,
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Yours,
Jamie
7.假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Jack在学习汉语的过程中遇到了一些困难,给你发电子邮件询问一些如何学汉语的建议。请你给他回复一封邮件,内容要点如下:
1.表示理解;
2.给出建议和理由;
3.表达祝愿;
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8.假定你是高一新生李华,上周参加了学校举行的迎新生开学典礼(opening ceremony for freshmen) 。请你给初中英语老师写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:
1. 你最感动的环节;
2. 你的感想。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr/ Ms. . . ,
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Yours,
Li Hua
9.假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Adan来信提到,他不能适应高中的学习和生活,经常感到焦虑。请用英文写一封回信,内容包括:
1. 表示安慰;
2. 给予建议。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10.假如你是李华,是学校英文报“Advice”栏目的编辑。你收到一封署名为Jack的来信。信中该同学诉说了自己的困扰:进入高中后经常感到压力大,晚上睡不好,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容包括:
1. 表示理解并给予安慰;
2提出建议并说明理由。(至少两条建议)
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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11.假定你是李华,是学校英文报“Advice”栏目的编辑。你校高一新生Jack刚刚入学,发现高中科目很多,同时学生社团同时也在招募成员,许多新同学表示无法兼顾课外活动和学习,请用英文给该同学写一封建议信。
1. 表示理解并给予安慰。
2. 提出建议并说明理由。(至少两条建议)
3. 表示祝愿
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2. 书写保持整洁
参考词汇:extra-curricular activities 课外活动 balance 平衡
Dear Jack,
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Yours ,
Li Hua
12.假设你是李华,你的英国笔友David刚升入高中,但因一时无法适应高中生活而感到焦虑,写信给你倾诉他的想法,请你给他回复一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示理解;
2. 分析原因;
3. 给出建议。
注意:
1. 词数不少于80词;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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13.假定你是高一新生李华,你在校园的海报上(poster)看见校学生会的各个部门将在校内招新。你对校报的英语新闻记者一职非常感兴趣。因此,你要给校报的主编写一封自荐信。要点如下:
1. 自我介绍(包括个性特长、兴趣爱好等)。
2. 参加相关活动的经历。
3. 表达期望。
注意:1. 词数80左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear chief editor,
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Yours,
Li Hua
14.随着社会的发展,心理健康越来越受到人们的关注。10月10日是“世界精神卫生日”。假定你是李华,请你给校长就如何改善学生心理健康状况写一封信。
内容包括:(1)心理健康的重要性;(2)你的建议及理由。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80左右;(2)可以适当增加情节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Principal,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
15.假定你是李华,最近收到了你的外国朋友 Caroline的来信。信中说:她最近因身体发胖而情绪低落。请你根据她的问题给她回信。内容包括:
1.提出建议;
2.表达祝愿。
注意:
1.写作词数应为 80 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
16.假如你是李华,你的朋友Mike即将来你校做一年的交换生。他来信向你寻求如何尽快适应你校学习和生活的建议,请你写一封回信,内容包括:
1.表示欢迎;
2.提供建议;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
17.假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他最近学习压力很大,他为此感到苦恼。请你给他回复邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示理解;
2. 你的建议及理由。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
18.假定你是李华,你的英国笔友 Paul 想参加绘画社团,而他父母希望他选择学习类的社团,为此他很苦恼,请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:1.表示理解;2.提出建议(至少两条)。
注意:1. 词数80左右。开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
Dear Paul,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
LiHua
19.假设你是李华,你的好朋友Jim最近经常因周末时间安排和父母争吵,请你就此情况给他写一封信,就如何与父母更好地交流提出你的建议。内容包括:
1.表示理解
2.提出建议
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
20.假如你是你校英语报社的编辑李华,现在留学生Chris在交友过程中遇到了困难,请你用英语给他回信,给他提出一些建议和意见。要点包括:
1. 回应来信:
2. 表示理解:
3. 建议和意见。
词数:80左右。
注意:开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I’m sorry you are having trouble in making friends.
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Yours,
Li Hua
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第一次月考复习之应用文写作20篇
(浙江专用)
篇目
文体
核心主题
话题分类
Passage 1
邮件建议信
给高一新生 Adam 提建议,帮助适应高中校园生活
人际交往・适应新环境
Passage 2
邮件建议信
安慰新同学 Peter,给出适应校园、交友、时间管理建议,并邀请参加校园野餐活动
人际交往・适应新环境
Passage 3
邮件建议信
安慰 Peter,解决新生活交友与时间管理难题,邀约校园活动
人际交往・适应新环境
Passage 4
书信提议信
学生会主席向校长提议艺术节新增 “探寻城市文脉” 户外活动,分析安全、经费问题并请求批准
校园活动・文化实践建议
Passage 5
邮件建议信
安慰笔友 Susan,解决转学后课堂注意力差、难以融入小组活动的烦恼
人际交往・适应新环境
Passage 6
回信建议信
专栏编辑安慰学生,针对容易发脾气、情绪失控给出调节情绪的建议
心理健康・情绪管理
Passage 7
邮件建议信
给英国笔友 Jack 提供学习汉语的学习方法建议
语言学习・学习困难指导
Passage 8
邮件分享信
高一新生写给初中老师,分享开学典礼见闻与个人感悟
校园生活・成长感悟
Passage 9
邮件建议信
安慰美国朋友 Adan,缓解高中学习焦虑,给出适应高中学习生活的对策
心理健康・学业压力疏导
Passage 10
回信建议信
编辑安慰高一新生 Jack,解决高中压力大、失眠问题,给出减压助眠建议
心理健康・压力调节
Passage 11
邮件建议信
给新生 Jack 支招,平衡课外活动和学业时间
学习规划・学业与社团平衡
Passage 12
邮件建议信
开导英国笔友 David,分析升入高中焦虑的原因,提供适应新生活的建议
心理健康・适应新环境
Passage 13
自荐信
高一新生应聘校报英语记者岗位,介绍个人特长、相关经历,表达求职意愿
申请求职・校园岗位自荐
Passage 14
书信建议信
学生写信给校长,就改善全校学生心理健康提出可行方案
校园管理・心理健康建设建议
Passage 15
邮件建议信
安慰外国好友 Caroline,因长胖情绪低落,给出健康饮食、运动方面的建议
健康生活・身心调节
Passage 16
邮件欢迎 + 建议信
欢迎交换生 Mike,给出快速适应本校学习生活的建议
人际交往・接待外国友人
Passage 17
邮件建议信
安慰英国笔友 Jim,缓解繁重学业带来的心理压力,传授减压方法
心理健康・学业压力疏导
Passage 18
邮件建议信
开导 Paul,化解自己想报绘画社团和父母期待报学习社团之间的矛盾
亲子沟通・兴趣与学业冲突调解
Passage 19
书信建议信
劝说好友 Jim 学会和父母有效沟通,解决周末安排引发的亲子争吵问题
人际交往・亲子关系沟通
Passage 20
回信建议信
校报编辑给留学生 Chris 支招,帮助其走出交友困境,交到新朋友
人际交往・校园交友指导
1.假设你是李华,你的朋友Adam刚上高一,还不适应高中的校园生活,请你给他写一封邮件给出一些建议,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.建议内容。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.请在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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【答案】Dear Adam,
Hearing that you failed to adapt to the high school life, I’m writing to provide you with some practical advice that may help you out.
The top priority is to give yourself time. Adjusting to a new environment takes time, so be patient with yourself. Equally important is that you should get involved in extracurricular activities where you will meet like-minded peers and gain a sense of belonging. It would be more beneficial if you manage your time wisely. Try creating a simple schedule to balance your studies, hobbies and rest and this will make your school life more relaxing and attractive.
Hope my suggestions helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求学生写一封建议信,帮助Adam适应高中生活。
【详解】1.词汇积累:
适应:adapt to→be accustomed to
有用的:practical→valuable
参加:get involved in→throw oneself into
重要的:important→significant
2.句式拓展:
并列句变复杂句
原句:Try creating a simple schedule to balance your studies, hobbies and rest and this will make your school life more relaxing and attractive.
拓展句:Try creating a simple schedule to balance your studies, hobbies and rest, which will make your school life more relaxing and attractive.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Equally important is that you should get involved in extracurricular activities where you will meet like-minded peers and gain a sense of belonging.(运用了倒装句和where引导定语从句)
【高分句型2】Hearing that you failed to adapt to the high school life, I’m writing to provide you with some practical advice that may help you out.(运用了现在分词作状语和that引导定语从句和宾语从句)
2.假设你是李华,来自美国的新同学 Peter刚转入你班。他不太适应新的校园生活,在与人交流和时间管理上遇到了一些困难。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 表达理解和关心;2. 给出具体建议;3. 邀请他参加一项校园活动。
注意:
1. 词数80 左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re having a hard time getting used to our school life.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter.
I’m sorry to hear that you’re having a hard time getting used to our school life. It’s totally normal to feel this way when you’re in a new place, so don’t worry too much.
As for making friends, you can join our class study groups. We often discuss lessons after class, and it’s a great chance to talk to classmates. About time management, try making a daily schedule. Note down classes, homework and free time — it’ll help you stay organized.
By the way, our class is having a picnic this Saturday. It’ll be relaxing and fun-packed, and you can get to know everyone better. I’d love to meet you there.
I hope my advice will be of great help to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份,给刚转入班级且不太适应新校园生活的美国新同学Peter写一封电子邮件,表达理解关心、给出建议并邀请他参加一项校园活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
完全:totally → completely
担心:worry → fear
帮助:help → assist
安排表:schedule → timetable
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:It’s totally normal to feel this way when you’re in a new place, so don’t worry too much.
拓展句:Since it’s totally normal to feel this way when you’re in a new place, you don’t need to worry too much.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s totally normal to feel this way when you’re in a new place, so don’t worry too much.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句、It作形式主语、不定式to feel作真正的主语)
【高分句型2】I hope my advice will be of great help to you.(运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句作hope的宾语)
3.假设你是李华,来自美国的新同学 Peter刚转入你班。他不太适应新的校园生活,在与人交流和时间管理上遇到了一些困难。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 表达理解和关心;
2. 给出具体建议;
3. 邀请他参加一项校园活动。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re having a hard time getting used to our school life.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re having a hard time getting used to our school life. It’s totally normal to feel this way when you’re in a new place, so don’t worry too much.
As for making friends, you can join our class study groups. We often discuss lessons after class, and it’s a great chance to talk to classmates. About time management, try making a daily schedule. Note down classes, homework and free time — it’ll help you stay organized.
By the way, our class is having a picnic this Saturday. It’ll be relaxing and fun-packed, and you can get to know everyone better. I’d love to meet you there.
I hope my advice will be of great help to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Peter写一封电子邮件,表达理解和关心、给出具体建议以及邀请他参加一项校园活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
尝试:try→make an attempt to
机会:chance→opportunity
空闲时间:free time→leisure time
有帮助的:be of great help→helpful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Note down classes, homework and free time — it’ll help you stay organized.
拓展句:Note down classes, homework and free time, which will help you stay organized.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s totally normal to feel this way when you’re in a new place, so don’t worry too much.(运用了when引导时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】As for making friends, you can join our class study groups.(运用了动名词作宾语)
4.假定你是学生会主席李华。你校一年一度的校园艺术节即将来临,学生会提议本届艺术节增加一个名为“探寻城市文脉”(Discovering Our City’s Culture)的户外活动项目。请给校长写一封信,内容包括:
1.阐述此项活动的意义;
2.分析活动中可能存在的挑战(如安全、费用等)并提出应对建议;
3.请求批准并征求校方的意见。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.请按如下格式在答题卡上作答。
Dear Principal,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Principal,
I’m Li Hua, the student union president. With the annual campus art festival approaching, we propose adding an outdoor activity “Discovering Our City’s Culture”. It can help students feel the city’s cultural charm and improve cultural literacy.
There may be challenges. For safety, we’ll arrange teachers to accompany and remind students to stay together. For fees, we’ll seek sponsorship from local businesses and use the student union’s funds properly.
We sincerely hope you approve this activity. Please let us know your opinions.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给校长写一封信,提议本届艺术节增加一个名为“探寻城市文脉”(Discovering Our City’s Culture)的户外活动项。
【详解】1.词汇积累
帮助:help→assist
陪伴:accompany→escort
寻求:seek→go in for
合适地:properly→appropriately
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m Li Hua, the student union president.
拓展句:I’m Li Hua, who is the student union president.
【点睛】[高分句型1]With the annual campus art festival approaching, we propose adding an outdoor activity “Discovering Our City’s Culture”.(运用了with的复合结构作状语)
[高分句型2]We sincerely hope you approve this activity.(运用了省略了that的宾语从句)
5.假设你是李华,你的笔友苏珊刚转学到一所新高中,在交流中流露出自己很难适应。在课堂上无法集中精力,也无法融入小组活动。请你给苏珊写一封80词左右的建议信,内容包括:
1.表达共情;
2.给出建议;
3.给予信心。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Susan,
I’m sorry to hear you’re struggling to adapt to your new high school. It’s totally normal to feel this way when entering a new environment — many people go through the same phase.
For class focus, try sitting a bit closer to the teacher. This can help you avoid distractions. For group activities, start with small talks like asking about homework. It’ll make you feel more comfortable joining in.
Give yourself some time. You’re smart and friendly, and you’ll definitely fit in soon. I’m here for you whenever you want to talk.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是李华,你的笔友苏珊刚转学到一所新高中,在交流中流露出自己很难适应。在课堂上无法集中精力,也无法融入小组活动。要求考生给苏珊写一封80词左右的建议信,表达共情、给出建议以及给予信心。
【详解】1.词汇积累
适应:adapt to→adjust to
进入:enter→have access to
避免:avoid→avert
肯定:definitely→certainly
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:For class focus, try sitting a bit closer to the teacher. This can help you avoid distractions.
拓展句:For class focus, try sitting a bit closer to the teacher, which can help you avoid distractions.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m sorry to hear you’re struggling to adapt to your new high school.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】It’s totally normal to feel this way when entering a new environment — many people go through the same phase.(运用了状语从句的省略)
6.为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie,收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容要点如下:
1. 表示理解并给予安慰;
2. 提出建议并说明理由。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
3. 信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:lose one’s temper 发脾气
Hi Worried,
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Yours,
Jamie
【答案】One possible version:
Hi Worried,
I’m truly sorry to hear that you’ve been struggling with your temper lately, but please know you’re not alone. Many teenagers go through similar feelings due to stress or changes in life, and it’s completely okay to ask for help.
Here are a few suggestions that might help. First, try to identify what triggers your anger — being aware is the first step toward control. When you feel upset and about to lose your temper, take a few deep breaths or step away for a moment to calm down. Regular exercise and enough sleep can also stabilize your mood. Most importantly, don’t hesitate to talk to someone you trust, like a teacher or family member. Sharing your feelings can lighten your burden.
Remember, managing emotions takes time and practice. Be patient with yourself.
Yours,
Jamie
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以中学英文报“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏编辑Jamie的身份,给署名Worried的求助同学写回信,针对其“近日容易发脾气、影响学习生活”的困扰表示理解与安慰,并提出建议及理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
由于:due to→owing to
经历:go through→experience
引发:trigger→cause
减轻:lighten→ease
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Most importantly, don’t hesitate to talk to someone you trust, like a teacher or family member.
拓展句:Most importantly, don’t hesitate to talk to someone who you trust and who can offer you practical advice, like a teacher or family member.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m truly sorry to hear that you’ve been struggling with your temper lately, but please know you’re not alone.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】First, try to identify what triggers your anger — being aware is the first step toward control.(运用了what引导的宾语从句以及动名词短语作主语)
7.假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Jack在学习汉语的过程中遇到了一些困难,给你发电子邮件询问一些如何学汉语的建议。请你给他回复一封邮件,内容要点如下:
1.表示理解;
2.给出建议和理由;
3.表达祝愿;
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】 Dear Jack,
I’m really pleased to hear from you. You mentioned in the email that you had trouble in learning Chinese, which actually is very common as Chinese is a hard language. There are some pieces of advice that may help you.
To begin with, Talking with Chinese friends or writing in Chinese will serve as good options. Besides, it may be of great help with a professional teacher helping you. Last but not the least, stick to it. While the process can be hard, all the efforts you make will pay off.
I’m looking forward to the day when we can talk freely in Chinese.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国笔友Jack在学习汉语的过程中遇到了一些困难,要求考生给他回信对于其问题提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:pleased→ glad
此外:besides→ what’s more
充当:serve as→ act as
坚持:stick to→ persist in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: I’m really pleased to hear from you.
拓展句: I’m really pleased when I hear from you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】You mentioned in the email that you had trouble in learning Chinese, which actually is very common as Chinese is a hard language.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I’m looking forward to the day when we can talk freely in Chinese.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
8.假定你是高一新生李华,上周参加了学校举行的迎新生开学典礼(opening ceremony for freshmen) 。请你给初中英语老师写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:
1. 你最感动的环节;
2. 你的感想。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr/ Ms. . . ,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr/Ms...,
As one of your previous students, I am pleased to share my recent experience at the opening ceremony for freshmen with you.
It was an incredible ceremony filled with a passion for exploring the unknown. The headmaster delivered a speech using several previous students who had overcome obstacles to achieve their dreams as examples, which moved me most. It inspired me to set high goals for myself and to work hard to achieve them. I feel motivated to embrace this new chapter in my life. I’m incredibly grateful for your continuous encouragement and I will do my best to make you proud.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给初中英语老师写一封邮件,分享学校举行的迎新生开学典礼的经历。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:pleased→delighted
难以置信的:incredible→unbelievable
充满:be filled with→be full of
克服:overcome→get over
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:It was an incredible ceremony filled with a passion for exploring the unknown.
拓展句:It was an incredible ceremony, which was filled with a passion for exploring the unknown.
【点睛】[高分句型1]The headmaster delivered a speech using several previous students who had overcome obstacles to achieve their dreams as examples, which moved me most.(运用了who引导限制性定语从句,which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]It was an incredible ceremony filled with a passion for exploring the unknown.(运用了过去分词短语作后置定语)
9.假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Adan来信提到,他不能适应高中的学习和生活,经常感到焦虑。请用英文写一封回信,内容包括:
1. 表示安慰;
2. 给予建议。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Adan,
Learning that you are facing some troubles in learning and feel anxious, I am writing to give you some advice. It is normal for us to have difficulties when adapting to senior high school life, so I can fully understand your feelings.
First of all, we need to believe in ourselves and we can overcome these challenges soon. Next, in order to improve your study, it’s vital for you to set a goal, because setting goals makes you more confident. Finally, you’d better make a good plan and manage your time well. I hope my suggestions will be of great help to you and may you enjoy your high school life.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。考生的美国朋友Adan来信提到,他不能适应高中的学习和生活,经常感到焦虑。请用英文写一封回信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
得知:learn→be informed of
建议:advice →recommendation
期望:hope→anticipate
帮助:help→assistance
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句:Finally, you’d better make a good plan and manage your time well.
拓展句:Finally, it is advisable that you make a good plan and manage your time well.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning that you are facing some troubles in learning and feel anxious, I am writing to give some advice to you.(使用了现在分词短语作状语,that引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I hope my suggestions will be of great help to you and may you enjoy your high school life.(使用了“be of +抽象名词”结构和省略that的宾语从句)
10.假如你是李华,是学校英文报“Advice”栏目的编辑。你收到一封署名为Jack的来信。信中该同学诉说了自己的困扰:进入高中后经常感到压力大,晚上睡不好,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容包括:
1. 表示理解并给予安慰;
2提出建议并说明理由。(至少两条建议)
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Jack,
I understand how challenging it can be to adjust to the increased pressures of high school life. It's normal to feel overwhelmed at times, but remember that you're not alone. Many students experience similar struggles when transitioning into a new academic environment.
To help manage your stress and improve your sleep, I recommend incorporating some relaxation techniques into your daily routine. Deep breathing exercises or meditation before bed can work wonders for calming the mind. Additionally, establishing a consistent sleep schedule by going to bed and waking up at the same time every day can greatly benefit your overall well-being.
Don't hesitate to reach out to teachers, friends, or family members if you need someone to talk to. You've got this!
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一封建议信,要求作为学校英文报 “Advice” 栏目的编辑给署名 Jack 的同学回信,针对他进入高中后压力大、睡不好的困扰给予理解、安慰并提出建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
压力:pressure → stress
感到不知所措:feel overwhelmed → feel out of one's depth
调整:adjust to → adapt to
改善睡眠:improve your sleep → enhance your sleep quality
2. 句式拓展
同义句改写
原句:I understand how challenging it can be to adjust to the increased pressures of high school life.
拓展句:I am fully aware of the challenges that come with adapting to the heightened stress of high school, which many students find difficult.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】It's normal to feel overwhelmed at times, but remember that you're not alone.(使用了it作形式主语以及连接代词that连接的宾语从句)
【高分句型 2】Deep breathing exercises or meditation before bed can work wonders for calming the mind.(使用了动名词短语作主语)
11.假定你是李华,是学校英文报“Advice”栏目的编辑。你校高一新生Jack刚刚入学,发现高中科目很多,同时学生社团同时也在招募成员,许多新同学表示无法兼顾课外活动和学习,请用英文给该同学写一封建议信。
1. 表示理解并给予安慰。
2. 提出建议并说明理由。(至少两条建议)
3. 表示祝愿
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2. 书写保持整洁
参考词汇:extra-curricular activities 课外活动 balance 平衡
Dear Jack,
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Yours ,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Jack,
I am sorry to hear that you’re having trouble adjusting to your high school life, where you think you cannot balance extra-curricular activities and study. Actually, many freshmen are confused about high school life, so don’t worry about it too much. I’m writing to offer you some useful advice.
First, I recommend that you sign up for extra-curricular activities which can be beneficial to your study and make more new friends. In this way you will feel less lonely and your school life will become more colorful and interesting. Second, you should make a good schedule and focus on your studies, making you feel relaxed in your school life.
I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you and you will have a good time every day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一份信给刚刚升入高一的新生Jack,就他进入高中后发现的问题进行安慰并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
伤心的:sorry→ sad
有困难做某事:have trouble doing sth. → have difficulty doing sth.
建议:advice→ suggestion/tip
专心:focus on → concentrate on
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句:
原句:I’m writing to offer you some useful advice.
拓展句:I’m writing to offer you some useful advice, which is listed as follows.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
I am sorry to hear that you’re having trouble adjusting to your high school life, where you think you cannot balance extracurricular activities and study. (运用了that引导宾语从句以及where引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Second, you should make a good schedule and focus on your studies, making you feel relaxed in your school life.(运用了现在分词短语作状语)
12.假设你是李华,你的英国笔友David刚升入高中,但因一时无法适应高中生活而感到焦虑,写信给你倾诉他的想法,请你给他回复一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示理解;
2. 分析原因;
3. 给出建议。
注意:
1. 词数不少于80词;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear David,
I’m sorry to hear that you are anxious about adjusting to high school. I understand you quite well since I’ve been there.
Going to senior high school is really a big challenge, especially when you face the higher academic pressure and new interpersonal relationship. However, you can make it easier by following some golden rules. First, I suggest working out an appropriate schedule because good time management helps reduce your stress. If necessary, turn to the school adviser for help, who is experienced in tackling tricky problems for students like you. Finally, stay positive all the time, because a positive attitude sparks extraordinary results.
I truly hope the suggestions will be of help to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给他英国笔友David回信,帮助他分析无法适应高中生活而感到焦虑的原因并给出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
然而:however→nevertheless
遵守:follow→observe
解决:tackle→settle
建议:suggestion→tip
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:However, you can make it easier by following some golden rules.
拓展句:However, what makes it easier is following some golden rules.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Going to senior high school is really a big challenge, especially when you face the higher academic pressure and new interpersonal relationship.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】If necessary, turn to the school adviser for help, who is experienced in tackling tricky problems for students like you.(运用了who引导的非限定性定语从句)
13.假定你是高一新生李华,你在校园的海报上(poster)看见校学生会的各个部门将在校内招新。你对校报的英语新闻记者一职非常感兴趣。因此,你要给校报的主编写一封自荐信。要点如下:
1. 自我介绍(包括个性特长、兴趣爱好等)。
2. 参加相关活动的经历。
3. 表达期望。
注意:1. 词数80左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear chief editor,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear chief editor,
I’m Li Hua, a freshman in high school. I am very interested in the position in your poster. I faithfully look forward to becoming a member of the school newspaper, so I write to recommend myself to you.
I’m an outgoing and curious student with a passion for writing and reporting. I love reading English books and articles, which has greatly improved my English skills. I once participated in a school news reporting activity and gained some experience. I’m confident that I can do well as an English news reporter for the school newspaper.
I sincerely hope to have the opportunity to join your team and contribute to the school newspaper. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的自荐信。要求考生给学校的主编写封信,向其自荐校报英语新闻记者一职。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
喜爱:love → be fond of
提高:improve → enhance
参加:participate in → take part in
做贡献:contribute to → make contributions to
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m an outgoing and curious student with a passion for writing and reporting.
拓展句:I’m an outgoing and curious student who has a passion for writing and reporting.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I love reading English books and articles, which has greatly improved my English skills. (运用了which引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】I’m confident that I can do well as an English news reporter for the school newspaper. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
14.随着社会的发展,心理健康越来越受到人们的关注。10月10日是“世界精神卫生日”。假定你是李华,请你给校长就如何改善学生心理健康状况写一封信。
内容包括:(1)心理健康的重要性;(2)你的建议及理由。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80左右;(2)可以适当增加情节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Principal,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Principal,
I hope this letter finds you well. As we observe World Mental Health Day on October 10th, I would like to bring to your attention the critical issue of student mental health. In today’s fast-paced and competitive environment, maintaining good mental health is essential for our overall well-being and academic success.
To support our mental health, I suggest implementing regular mental health awareness programs. These could include workshops led by professionals that teach coping strategies and stress management techniques. Additionally, establishing a school counseling center where students can seek help confidentially would provide a safe space for those in need. Such initiatives not only foster a supportive community but also reduce the stigma associated with seeking help.
Thank you for considering these suggestions. I believe they will contribute positively to our school environment.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就如何改善学生心理健康状况给校长写一封信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
意识:awareness →consciousness
此外:additionally →besides/furthermore/moreover
与……相关的:associated with→related to
有助于:contribute to → lead to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To support our mental health, I suggest implementing regular mental health awareness programs.
拓展句:To support our mental health, I suggest that we implement regular mental health awareness programs.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As we observe World Mental Health Day on October 10th, I would like to bring to your attention the critical issue of student mental health. (运用了as引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】Additionally, establishing a school counseling center where students can seek help confidentially would provide a safe space for those in need. (运用了动名词作主语和where引导的定语从句)
15.假定你是李华,最近收到了你的外国朋友 Caroline的来信。信中说:她最近因身体发胖而情绪低落。请你根据她的问题给她回信。内容包括:
1.提出建议;
2.表达祝愿。
注意:
1.写作词数应为 80 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Caroline,
I’m sorry to hear you are upset because you have put on weight. Here are some tips to help you.
First of all, to keep fit, you’d better have a balanced diet, which contains various foods, such as grain, meat, vegetables, fruit and milk. Moreover, it’s of great importance to take regular exercise and have adequate sleep. Sports like riding and walking are beneficial to your health. As we all know, enough sleep makes your body relaxed at night. Most importantly, there is no need to worry about weight gain and weight loss. Instead, you should focus your attention on your lessons. If you follow my advice, I’m convinced that you will feel much better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就外国朋友 Caroline来信中陈述的“因身体发胖而情绪低落”问题,回信提出建议并表达祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
沮丧的:upset → despondent
各种各样的:various → a variety of
此外:moreover → what’s more
应该:should → be supposed to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Sports like riding and walking are beneficial to your health.
拓展句:Sports like riding and walking are beneficial to your health, which can help keep you in shape.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m sorry to hear you are upset because you have put on weight. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】First of all, to keep fit, you’d better have a balanced diet, which contains various foods, such as grain, meat, vegetables, fruit and milk. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
16.假如你是李华,你的朋友Mike即将来你校做一年的交换生。他来信向你寻求如何尽快适应你校学习和生活的建议,请你写一封回信,内容包括:
1.表示欢迎;
2.提供建议;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mike,
I’m thrilled to hear that you’re coming to our school as an exchange student. A warm welcome awaits you here. I understand that it is challenging to adapt to a new environment, so here are a few suggestions that might help you settle in quickly.
First of all, it’s important to actively participate in classroom activities, which will help you better understand and grasp the knowledge. And don’t be afraid to reach out to your teachers and classmates for help if you need it. Joining a club is also a great way, because you will meet new friends and become more involved in the school community.
I wish you all the best during your stay here. Looking forward to your arrival!
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生给朋友Mike写一封回信,就如何尽快适应学校学习和生活提出建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
兴奋的:thrilled→excited
知道:understand→know
建议:suggestion→advice
首先:first of all→to begin with
2. 句式拓展
同义句替换
原句:I understand that it is challenging to adapt to a new environment, so here are a few suggestions that might help you settle in quickly.
拓展句:I understand that it is challenging to adapt to a new environment, so here are a few suggestions, which might help you settle in quickly.
【点睛】[高分句型1]First of all, it’s important to actively participate in classroom activities, which will help you better understand and grasp the knowledge.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Joining a club is also a great way, because you will meet new friends and become more involved in the school community.(because引导的原因状语从句)
17.假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他最近学习压力很大,他为此感到苦恼。请你给他回复邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示理解;
2. 你的建议及理由。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m sorry to learn that you’ve been under a lot of pressure lately. It is natural to feel pressured when you attend a new school. Here are some suggestions that can help you deal with stress.
First, try to build up your confidence. Study is a long-term process and confidence plays an important role in it. So never give up no matter what happens. Second, you should find your own strengths and weaknesses, and seek help from both teachers and classmates when facing difficulties and stress. Last but not least, doing more physical exercise can keep you fit as well as relax yourself.
I hope you will get out of your trouble soon. I believe it will all work out. Cheer up! Let me know if I can help further.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jim回复邮件,对他因学习压力很大感到苦恼表示理解,并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:suggestion→advice
压力:stress→pressure
健康的:fit→healthy
摆脱:get out of→get rid of
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:First, try to build up your confidence. Study is a long-term process and confidence plays an important role in it.
拓展句:First, try to build up your confidence because study is a long-term process and confidence plays an important role in it.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to learn that you’ve been under a lot of pressure lately. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Last but not least, doing more physical exercise can keep you fit as well as relax yourself. (运用了动名词短语作主语)
18.假定你是李华,你的英国笔友 Paul 想参加绘画社团,而他父母希望他选择学习类的社团,为此他很苦恼,请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:1.表示理解;2.提出建议(至少两条)。
注意:1. 词数80左右。开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
Dear Paul,
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Yours,
LiHua
【答案】Dear Paul,
I understand your dilemma regarding joining the art club while your parents prefer you to choose an academic club. Here are a couple of suggestions to help you reach a compromise.
Firstly, emphasize the educational benefits of art. Highlight how it enhances creativity and critical thinking. Secondly, propose a time management plan to balance study and art.
Remember, communication is key. Talk openly with your parents about your passion for art and how it can positively impact your overall growth.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国笔友Paul想参加绘画社团,而他父母希望他选择学习类的社团,为此他很苦恼,要求考生按照要求给他写一封回信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
理解:understand→ comprehend
关于:regarding→ concerning
建议:suggestion→ proposal
达到:reach→ achieve
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Firstly, emphasize the educational benefits of art.
拓展句:Firstly, emphasize the educational benefits of art, which is the priority.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Secondly, propose a time management plan to balance study and art.(运用了不定式作后置定语)
【高分句型2】Highlight how it enhances creativity and critical thinking.(运用了how引导的宾语从句)
19.假设你是李华,你的好朋友Jim最近经常因周末时间安排和父母争吵,请你就此情况给他写一封信,就如何与父母更好地交流提出你的建议。内容包括:
1.表示理解
2.提出建议
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】范文一:
Dear Jim.
I understand quite well what you’re going through. It’s not unusual for us teenagers to have difficulty getting along well with parents.
Take it easy! But remember it’s significant to learn to control your anger. After all, those who easily get irritated are less likely to become a good listener and communicator. Thus, when your parents criticize your weekend arrangements, don’t explode but explain tenderly and patiently. Besides, don’t forget to tell them how much you love them.
Hope you’ll find these suggestions helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua范文二:
Dear Jim.
Hearing that you find it hard to get along well with your parents, I’d like to give some suggestions.
First, take it easy! You’re not alone. It’s a problem that has troubled most teenagers. But remember it’s significant to learn to control your anger. After all, those who easily get irritated are less likely to become a good listener and communicator. Thus, when your parents criticize your weekend arrangements, don’t explode but explain tenderly and patiently. Besides, don’t forget to tell them how much you love them.
Hope you’ll find these suggestions helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Jim就最近经常因周末时间安排和父母争吵这一问题写一封建议信,表示理解他,并在“如何与父母更好地交流”方面提出自己的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
经历:go through → undergo
控制你的愤怒:control your anger → control your temper
做某事有困难:have difficulty doing…→ struggle with…
此外:besides → what’s more
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:After all, those who easily get irritated are less likely to become a good listener and communicator.
拓展句:After all, anyone who easily gets irritated is less likely to become a good listener and communicator.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I understand quite well what you’re going through.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Thus, when your parents criticize your weekend arrangements, don’t explode but explain tenderly and patiently.(运用了when引导时间状语从句)
20.假如你是你校英语报社的编辑李华,现在留学生Chris在交友过程中遇到了困难,请你用英语给他回信,给他提出一些建议和意见。要点包括:
1. 回应来信:
2. 表示理解:
3. 建议和意见。
词数:80左右。
注意:开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I’m sorry you are having trouble in making friends.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Chris,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble in making friends. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions may come to your aid.
First, I think you may need to communicate with your classmates as much as possible to show you are willing to make friends with them. Second, it might be beneficial for you to take part in more activities, which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore helpful for developing friendly relationships.
I sincerely hope my advice will be of use to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校留学生Chris回信,主要内容是对他在交友过程中遇到困难表示理解,并给出一些建议和意见。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:suggestions→proposals
参加:take part in→participate in
通常:usually→ordinarily
诚挚地:sincerely→genuinely
2.句式拓展
It作形式主语的句子改成不定式作主语的句子
原句:Second, it might be beneficial for you to take part in more activities, which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore helpful for developing friendly relationships.
拓展句:Second, to take part in more activities might be beneficial for you, which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore helpful for developing friendly relationships.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First, I think you may need to communicate with your classmates as much as possible to show you are willing to make friends with them. (运用了不定式作目的状语)
【高分句型2】Second, it might be beneficial for you to take part in more activities, which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore helpful for developing friendly relationships. (运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)
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