摘要:
该高中英语讲义聚焦高考应用文写作核心考点,针对求助信题型构建“题型特征-写作框架-范例讲解-自主演练”的系统复习体系,通过梳理“说明身份+描述困难+具体请求+期待回复”核心要素,提供分层方法指导(如词汇句式升级策略)和真题训练(经典范例解析与情境写作演练),帮助学生建立规范写作思路,突破表达难点。
资料创新采用“语言能力提升+思维品质培养”双路径教学,如设计“基础表达-高级替换”词汇对比表(如“face”升级为“be confronted with”)和长难句结构解析(如“find it+adj.+to do”形式宾语用法),结合范文模板应用与自主情境创作,高效提升学生的语言组织与逻辑表达能力,为教师精准把控复习进度、强化学生应考技能提供实用支撑。
内容正文:
高考英语二轮复习之求助信
一、题型特征
求助信用于就遇到的困难请求对方帮助,核心是"说明身份+描述困难+具体请求+期待回复"。困难要具体,请求要明确,语气要诚恳礼貌。
二、写作框架
第一段:自我介绍+点明求助目的
第二段:具体描述遇到的困难(分点说明)
第三段:提出具体请求+感谢+期待回复
三、经典范例
假定你是李华,正在准备一个关于"中国传统节日"的英语演讲比赛,但在内容选择和语言表达上遇到困难。请给外教Ms. Lee写邮件求助。内容包括:
1. 说明遇到的困难;2. 请求具体帮助;3. 表达感谢。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【高分范文】
Dear Ms. Lee,
I'm Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. I'm writing to turn to you for professional guidance regarding my preparation for the forthcoming English Speech Contest on the theme of Chinese traditional festivals.
Currently, I am confronted with two principal obstacles. For one thing, I find it rather challenging to narrow down which festival to concentrate on, given the abundance of captivating options. For another, I am grappling with rendering some culture-specific expressions into idiomatic English, which considerably undermines the persuasiveness of my speech. I would be profoundly grateful if you could spare some time to offer me constructive feedback on my draft and recommend some authentic reference materials.
I'm looking forward to your favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
四、范文讲解
1.重点词汇升级
中文含义
基础简单表达
升级高级表达
求助
ask for help
turn to sb. for guidance
即将到来的
coming
forthcoming
面对
face
be confronted with
主要的
main
principal
困难
problem
obstacle
缩小范围
choose
narrow down
专注于
focus on
concentrate on
丰富
many
abundance of
努力解决
try hard
grappling with
地道的
natural
idiomatic
削弱
make...worse
undermines
感激的
thankful
profoundly grateful
2.句式升级:简单句→高级同义句
原句:I'm writing to turn to you for professional guidance regarding my preparation for the forthcoming English Speech Contest on the theme of Chinese traditional festivals.
拓展句:I'm writing to turn to you for professional guidance regarding my preparation for the forthcoming English Speech Contest, whose theme is Chinese traditional festivals.
3.长难句解析
句1:For one thing, I find it rather challenging to narrow down which festival to concentrate on, given the abundance of captivating options.
【解析】find it + 形容词 + to do结构中,it为形式宾语,真正宾语是to narrow down...;which festival to concentrate on为"疑问词+不定式"作narrow down的宾语;given为介词,意为"考虑到,鉴于"。
句2:For another, I am grappling with rendering some culture-specific expressions into idiomatic English, which considerably undermines the persuasiveness of my speech.
【解析】grapple with doing sth.意为"努力解决做某事的困难";render...into...意为"把……翻译成……";culture-specific为复合形容词;which引导非限制性定语从句,指代前面整件事。
4.范文模板(升级版)
I'm ______(身份). I'm writing to turn to you for professional guidance regarding ______(求助事由).
Currently, I am confronted with ______(困难数量)principal obstacles. For one thing, I find it rather challenging to ______(困难一), given ______(原因). For another, I am grappling with ______(困难二), which ______(带来的影响). I would be profoundly grateful if you could spare some time to ______(具体请求).
I'm looking forward to your favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
五、自主演练
假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧,准备参加学校英语戏剧节,但在表演细节上遇到困难。请给外教Mr. Davis写邮件求助。内容包括:
1. 介绍短剧概况;2. 说明遇到的困难;3. 请求指导。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 请按如下格式作答。
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Davis,
I'm Li Hua, a Senior 2 student. I'm writing to turn to you for professional guidance regarding a short play my classmates and I have adapted from our English textbook for the forthcoming School Drama Festival.
Currently, we are confronted with two principal obstacles. For one thing, we find it rather challenging to fully grasp the emotional nuances of the characters, given the dramatic fluctuations in the plot. For another, we are grappling with employing appropriate body language on stage, which considerably undermines the impact of our performance. I would be profoundly grateful if you could spare some time to offer us constructive feedback after watching our rehearsal.
I'm looking forward to your favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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