2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---仰望星海，守护蔚蓝 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案系统梳理了读后续写核心考点，将文本分析（角色、视角、时空线等）、情节构造、续写框架按“理解原文-构建逻辑-自主表达”的内在联系组织，通过细节问答问题链和续写步骤任务单，引导学生自主梳理情节线与情感线，形成续写的系统性认知框架。 亮点在于诊断性自测与进阶式方法指导，如开篇设置细节问答诊断原文理解，续写框架分步骤引导情节发展，培养学生的思维品质与语言能力。每个模块配有情感线分析表和续写衔接句设计，帮助学生建立个性化续写策略，教师可通过学情精准指导，提升备考实效。

阅读下面短文，根据所给段落开头语续写两段。 Earlier this year, I had a chance to go into space as an astronaut. I had undergone continuous professional training for this mission. Finally, the day arrived. Now I was really on top of the world. With all the deafening noise and violent shake, we lifted off. As we rose, I was aware that the force of gravity was pulling at me. There was an instrument to show us how many g’s we were experiencing. At two g’s, I tried to raise my arm, but I could barely make it. At three g’s, I felt my face being pushed down into my seat. Feeling dizzy, I thought, “Will I pass out?” Suddenly, no g’s. Weightlessness! We were floating (漂浮)! Staring into space, I found everything beyond my anticipation. I saw a cold, black emptiness. It was unlike any blackness we can see or feel on Earth. My initial excitement disappeared, and I felt really down. I turned my head toward the light of Mother Earth — the white of the clouds and the blue of the sky. The unexpected contrast between the coldness of space and the warm nurturing of Earth below filled me with great sorrow. I was sad that we were doing many things that posed great threat to our survival on Earth. I know it’s time we should commit ourselves to our planet, to each other, to life and love all around us. 注意： 1.续写词数应为 150 左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1： Floating in space, I kept gazing at our blue planet hanging in the dark universe. Paragraph 2： Back on the ground, I shared my reflections with more people. 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 The author received professional training for a space mission--- _________________ ---The spacecraft lifted off with huge noise and shake--- _________________ ---The author experienced strong gravity and then weightlessness in space--- _________________ ---The author felt disappointed at the cold, empty black space--- _________________ ---The sharp contrast between cold space and warm Earth made him sad about human’s damage to the planet---He determined to devote himself to protecting the Earth 4. 细节问答 What did the author do before the space mission? ：___________________________________ What did the author experience during the lift-off?：_________________________________ What special state did the author finally reach in space?：________________________________________________ Why did the author’s initial excitement fade away?：__________________________________________ What contrast struck the author deeply in space?：_____________________________________________ What made the author feel sorrowful?：_________________________________________________ What decision did the author make after the space trip?：________________________________________________________ What does the original story imply?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 作者历经长期专业训练，获得太空航行机会→火箭轰鸣升空，亲历超重压迫的眩晕与不适→成功进入太空，迎来失重漂浮的奇妙状态→凝望浩瀚漆黑的宇宙，最初的兴奋逐渐消散→冰冷荒芜的太空，与蔚蓝温暖的地球形成强烈反差→目睹美景心生感慨，痛心人类对地球家园的肆意破坏→深刻领悟守护地球、守护生命与美好的重要意义→（续写）太空漂浮之际，久久凝望悬浮宇宙的蓝色星球，心生敬畏与眷恋→（续写）重返地面后分享太空感悟，呼吁众人守护家园、珍爱地球 6．情感线 I：excited and expectant→___________→disappointed and sorrowful→___________→grateful and determined（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 　　宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句　________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 　　环保感悟类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Floating in space, I kept gazing at our blue planet hanging in the dark universe. 　　衔接句1——What did the author observe and think in space? What feeling did he have?　______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Back on the ground, I shared my reflections with more people. 　　衔接句2——What did the author share? What positive influence did his words bring? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 　　第一段：漂浮在太空中，我久久凝望着悬浮在浩瀚宇宙中的蓝色星球。 　　①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 　　第二段：重返地面之后，我将自己的所思所感分享给了更多人。 　　④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四. 段落续写 　　Floating in space, I kept gazing at our blue planet hanging in the dark universe.　_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　Back on the ground, I shared my reflections with more people.　_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　I（历经训练、奔赴太空、心怀敬畏、善于反思、呼吁环保的宇航员）；Earth（蔚蓝温暖、孕育生命、亟待人类守护的唯一家园） 2．视角 　　第一人称 3．时空线 　　The author received long-term professional training for a space mission---He finally embarked on the space journey full of expectation---The spacecraft lifted off violently and he experienced powerful gravity and dizziness---He entered the space and enjoyed weightlessness eventually---He felt upset at the cold, empty and lifeless space---The warm and lively Earth formed a sharp contrast with the cold universe---He felt sorrowful for human’s destructive behaviors towards the planet and made up his mind to protect Earth 4. 细节问答 　　What did the author do before the space mission? ：He received continuous professional training to prepare for the space mission. 　　What did the author experience during the lift-off?：He experienced deafening noise, violent shake and strong gravity which made him dizzy. 　　What special state did the author finally reach in space?：He got rid of gravity and experienced weightlessness, floating freely in space. 　　Why did the author’s initial excitement fade away?：The cold, black and empty space was totally beyond his expectation and made him feel down. 　　What contrast struck the author deeply in space?：The cold emptiness of space contrasted sharply with the warm, lively and nurturing Earth. 　　What made the author feel sorrowful?：He felt sad that human beings had done many things threatening Earth’s survival. 　　What decision did the author make after the space trip?：He determined to devote himself to protecting the planet, life and love on Earth. 　　What does the original story imply?：Earth is our only warm home, and all humans have the responsibility to cherish and protect it. 5．情节线 　　作者历经长期专业训练，获得太空航行机会→火箭轰鸣升空，亲历超重压迫的眩晕与不适→成功进入太空，迎来失重漂浮的奇妙状态→凝望浩瀚漆黑的宇宙，最初的兴奋逐渐消散→冰冷荒芜、毫无生机的太空，与蔚蓝温暖、孕育生命的地球形成强烈反差→俯瞰家园心生感慨，痛心人类的破坏行为正在威胁地球生态→深刻觉醒，立志倾尽所能守护地球家园与世间美好→（续写）太空漂浮之际，久久凝望蔚蓝星球，真切体悟地球的珍贵与独特，满心敬畏与感恩→（续写）返程落地后积极分享太空见闻与感悟，呼吁众人摒弃破坏行为，携手守护唯一家园 6．情感线 　　I：excited and expectant→painful and dizzy→disappointed and sorrowful→awaken and grateful→determined and responsible（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：作者亲历太空之旅，在冰冷荒芜的宇宙中见证了地球的蔚蓝与温暖，由此深刻反思人类破坏环境的行为，坚定了守护地球家园、呼吁环保的初心。 　　英文：During his space trip, the author witnessed the sharp contrast between the cold universe and the warm Earth. Deeply touched, he reflected on human’s environmental damage and decided to devote himself to protecting our only home. 8. 句式 　　状语从句：As we rose, I was aware that the force of gravity was pulling at me. 　　非谓语动词：Feeling dizzy, I thought, “Will I pass out?” 　　宾语从句：I was sad that we were doing many things that posed great threat to our survival on Earth. 　　定语从句：It’s time we should commit ourselves to our planet, to each other, to life and love all around us. 9. 本文主题 　　环保感悟类：宇宙荒芜冰冷，地球是人类唯一的温暖家园，敬畏自然、珍爱地球、守护生态，是每个人的责任与使命。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Floating in space, I kept gazing at our blue planet hanging in the dark universe. 　　衔接句1——What did the author observe and think in space? What feeling did he have? 　　The author admired the breathtaking beauty of Earth, realized its uniqueness and preciousness, and felt guilty and urgent to protect it. Paragraph 2: Back on the ground, I shared my reflections with more people. 　　衔接句2——What did the author share? What positive influence did his words bring? 　　He spread his unique space experience and environmental awareness, calling on people to cherish and protect Earth, arousing public attention to ecological protection. 三．段落续写框架 　　第一段：漂浮在太空中，我久久凝望着悬浮在浩瀚宇宙中的蓝色星球。 　　①静静俯瞰云层与碧海交织的绝美地球，震撼于家园的璀璨珍贵→②对比荒芜冰冷的宇宙，深切体会地球的独一无二与温暖包容→③心生愧疚与紧迫，彻底明白守护家园的重大意义； 　　第二段：重返地面之后，我将自己的所思所感分享给了更多人。 　　①主动讲述太空见闻，传递俯瞰地球的震撼与反思→②呼吁众人停止破坏环境的行为，珍爱唯一的蓝色家园→③带动更多人践行环保，以点滴行动守护地球生机与美好。 四. 段落续写 　　Floating in space, I kept gazing at our blue planet hanging in the dark universe. Against the endless lifeless blackness, Earth looked incredibly gentle and brilliant. The blue oceans and white clouds we usually take for granted turned out to be the most precious scenery in the cold universe. I suddenly realized how lucky we were to inhabit such a beautiful planet. All the damage and pollution humans had caused to Earth flashed through my mind, making me feel extremely regretful. I made up my mind to do whatever I could to guard our warm homeland. 　　Back on the ground, I shared my reflections with more people. I told them the unique feeling of overlooking Earth from space and the huge contrast between the cold universe and our warm home. I called on everyone to abandon destructive behaviors and cherish every resource on the planet. My sincere words touched countless people. More and more people began to raise their awareness of environmental protection and commit themselves to protecting our lovely Earth. I believed our joint efforts would make our blue home always brilliant and vibrant. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $