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Unit 1 写作指导
如何用英语介绍自己尊敬的人
写作任务
你校正在组织以“The scientist I respect”为题的英语写作比赛,请你写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1. 人物简介;
2. 说明原因。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80 个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
The scientist I respect
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写作指导
一、审题
本写作任务要求写一篇短文,介绍一位你尊敬的科学家,属于记叙文的写作范畴。介绍
人物的关键之处在于突出其主要经历和贡献。介绍其经历和贡献时一般用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。
二、布局
本写作可分为三部分:
第一部分:简要介绍你尊敬的科学家;
第二部分:具体介绍他/她的主要经历及贡献;
第三部分:说明你尊敬他/她的原因。
三、常用表达
第一部分:简要介绍你尊敬的科学家。
I have a lot of respect for ...
I hold ... in high regard.
The scientist I respect most / look up to is ...
This remarkable scientist is known for his / her pioneering work in ...
As a leading authority in ..., this scientist has set the standard for research through his / her
work.
Known for his / her groundbreaking discoveries in ..., this scientist has significantly
advanced our understanding of ...
第二部分:具体介绍他/她的主要经历及贡献。
Born in ..., ... grew up during the war years.
From an early age, ... showed an interest in ...
... pursued higher education at ..., where he / she focused on ...
After graduating from ..., ... joined ...
Despite limited resources, ... made groundbreaking contributions to ...
... conducted pioneering research in ..., which led to the discovery of ...
Thanks to his / her efforts, ... was a complete success.
His / Her groundbreaking work in ... has opened up possibilities for future research.
第三部分:说明你尊敬他/她的原因。
... is a real model because ...
What impressed me most is that ...
It is ... that will encourage me forever.
I was inspired by his / her great contributions to ...
His / Her ... and ... are qualities that I greatly admire.
Beyond his / her scientific achievements, I deeply respect ... for his / her ...
范文
The scientist I respect
The scientist I respect most is Yu Min, a famous Chinese nuclear physicist.
Born in 1926, Yu grew up during the war years, which strengthened his determination to serve his country through science. After graduating from Peking University in 1951, he joined China’s top-secret nuclear weapons program. Despite limited resources, he made groundbreaking contributions to the theoretical foundation of the hydrogen bomb. Thanks to his tireless efforts, the test of China’s first hydrogen bomb in 1967 was a complete success.
Beyond his scientific achievements, I deeply respect Yu for his lifelong commitment to his country, which stands as an inspiration, continuing to motivate us all.
写作练习
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为
题写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 人物简介及事迹;
2. 意义或启示。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80 个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
A Historical Figure in China
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答案
One possible version:
A Historical Figure in China
Wen Tianxiang was a Chinese national hero during the Southern Song Dynasty.
Wen was born in 1236, a time of national crises. To fight against the enemy’s attack, he
built a voluntary army in 1275. Despite being caught by the enemy, he refused to give in. His famous poem, Sailing on Lonely Ocean, is a good example of such spirit. Wen was
eventually put to death at age 47, but his love for his country has made him a symbol of Chinese national pride.
Wen’s life reminds us that true love for one’s homeland means staying loyal and brave,
no matter the cost.
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