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第一次月考复习之应用文写作20篇
(江苏专用)
序号
文体类型
核心写作主题
1
建议信(回信)
给朋友 Cheery 提高中英语学习建议,不要轻言放弃、多加练习培养兴趣
2
安慰 + 建议邮件
笔友 Lisa 因父母过高期待倍感压力,给予安慰并给出沟通建议
3
建议邮件
美国交换生 Jim 来华求学,为其提供高中学习、社团交友两方面适应建议
4
建议信(写给校长)
提议学校成立武术社团,介绍社团对于传播中国文化、强身健体的益处
5
建议邮件
好友 Rebecca 与父母关系紧张,分析矛盾成因并给出改善亲子关系的建议
6
安慰 + 建议回信
笔友 Mike 疏于运动身心疲惫,劝说其抽出时间锻炼、恢复精力
7
建议信
好友 John 常和父母争吵冷战,劝导冷静沟通、换位思考化解亲子矛盾
8
建议回信
Jack 因学业压力和父母发生争吵,建议坦诚交流、制定学习计划修复家庭关系
9
记叙文式回信
向好友 Peter 分享暑假志愿经历,介绍崭新的高中校园生活以及未来学习规划
10
议论文(发言稿)
阐述高中阶段设定目标的重要性,讲解如何科学、合理地制定学习目标
11
建议邮件
高一新生 Eric 不知如何挑选校园社团,结合兴趣方向给出选社团的建议
12
安慰回信(编辑→学生)
李华遭遇学习困难、亲子矛盾,编辑给出时间管理、家校交友等疏导建议
13
安慰 + 建议回信
美国笔友 Tom 难以适应高中新生活,劝导积极参与校园活动平衡学习与休息
14
建议回信
林涛缺少锻炼频繁生病,强调运动的重要性,建议坚持日常体育锻炼
15
专栏回信(编辑)
学生受学习压力、亲子关系困扰,给出时间规划、主动和父母敞开心扉的建议
16
建议信(投稿)
向校报建言开设英语角,对英语角开展的时间、地点、活动主题提出方案
17
劝导回信
Jim 沉迷手游被父母没收手机引发争吵,劝导减少游戏时间、主动和解沟通
18
建议回信
John 难以融入新班级,建议真诚待人、主动沟通,改善和新同学的人际关系
19
投稿(记叙文)
向英文杂志介绍入学一个多月以来自己丰富多彩、充满挑战的高中新生活,畅谈成长目标
20
建议邮件
Eric 和父母关系紧张,建议多交流换位思考,用行动表达对父母的爱与感恩
1.你的朋友Cheery进入高中后觉得学习英语的方式和初中相比有很大的不同,苦恼之余向你写信寻求建议。请你以李华的名义给她写一封回信,给她提供一些英语学习方面的建议。要点如下:
1.开始学习高中英语时,不要轻言放弃;
2.尽量多练习,对英语感兴趣;
3.……(自由发挥)
注意:1.词数80左右; 2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Cheery,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2.假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Lisa给你发来一封邮件,说进入高中后父母对她的学习期望值太高,为此她感到压力很大,请你给她回复一封邮件,内容包括:1. 表示理解并给予安慰;2. 提出建议;3. 表达美好祝愿。
写作要求:
1. 词数80左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Lisa,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
3.假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Jim来信告诉你,在新学期他要来中国当交换生,想让你给他一些建议,帮助他尽快适应中国的高中学习和生活。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括如下:
1. 学习建议(课堂、课后);
2. 生活建议(多交朋友,参加社团等);
3. 期待。
要求:字数100词左右。不要逐句翻译,可以增加适当细节,令行文连贯。
Dear Jim,
I’m delighted that you will come to China as an exchange student next term.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4.假设你是李华,目前在英国做交换生。请根据提示给校长Mr. Brown写一封建议信。内容包括:
1. 建议学校成立武术社团(Martial Arts Club);
2. 成立该社团的好处;
3. 希望得到学校支持。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Brown,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
5.假定你是中学生李华,你的朋友Rebecca最近和父母关系紧张,发邮件向你咨询如何改善与父母的关系。请你回复邮件,内容包括:
1. 写信目的
2. 分析与父母关系紧张的常见原因并提出建议
3. 表达美好愿望
Dear Rebecca,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6.假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike发来邮件,说他因为学业繁重,很少运动, 最近总是感到疲惫和精力不足。请你给他回信,内容包括:1.向迈克表示安慰,
2. 针对他的问题,提出关于运动的建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7.假定你是李华,你正值青春期的好友John给你来信,提及他时常和父母争吵冷战,为此他感到非常苦恼,不知如何是好。请你给John写一封建议信,告诉他如何更好地处理亲子之间的矛盾。
内容包括:1. 表示理解;2. 提供建议(至少2点);3. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数80左右。
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear John,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
8.假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Jack因为学业压力很大和父母发生争吵,导致家庭关系紧张。他因为不知道如何与父母相处而感到苦恼。请用英文给Jack写一封建议信。内容要点如下:
内容包括:1. 表示理解并给予安慰;2. 提出建议并说明理由。3. 表达祝愿。
写作要求:1. 词数80左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。信的开头结尾已给出。
Dear Jack,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
9.假定你是高一新生李华,你的好友 Peter 发来邮件,询问你暑假的活动,并想了解你对高中生活的感受。请根据以下要点给他写一封回信:
1. 假期中你做了什么有意义的事情;
2. 你对新学校和新同学的印象;
3. 你对未来高中学习的计划或期望。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
How are you doing? I feel so grateful to receive your letter asking about my summer vacation and my new high school life. As for me, everything is a new start.
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10.进入高中,挑战与机遇并存。只有设定好目标并朝着目标努力奋进才能实现个人潜能。请你就设定目标展开写作,具体包括以下几点:
1. 设定目标的重要性;
2. 如何设定目标。
要求:词数 100 左右;适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
11.假设你是中学生李华,你的朋友Eric刚进入高中,面对学校的各种社团不知道如何选择,发邮件向你询问。请你回复邮件,内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 提出建议并说明理由;
3. 表达美好希望。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Eric,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
12.假设你是报社编辑Cynthia,高一新生李华在进入高中后,在学习上遇到困难,和父母的关系也变得紧张,故写信向你求助。请你写一封回信给予帮助。(80字左右)
内容包括: 1. 表示安慰及写信目的;
2. 提出具体建议及原因;
3. 表达美好祝愿。
Dear Li Hua,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Cynthia
13.假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Tom 刚上高中,感觉学习生活遇到了很多挑战。他写信向你寻求建议,请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信:
1.表示理解;
2.给出建议;
3.表达祝愿。
要求:字数100字左右,可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
14.假定你是李华,你的笔友林涛来信说,因学习忙,锻炼少,他最近经常生病,同时也影响了他的学习。请你给他写一封英文回信,内容包括:
1. 锻炼的重要性 2. 提出锻炼的建议
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
15.假如你是校英文报Problem& Advice栏目的编辑,收到一个学生的求助信,信中他说近期学习压力大,与父母关系很紧张,请你回信给予建议,内容包括:
1.表示理解和安慰;2.给出建议;3.表达祝愿。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右。2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear Worried Friend,
I’m sorry to know that you are going through a tough time.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Loving Editor
16.假定你是李华。你校即将开设英语角,校英文报现面向全体学生征集建议。请你写一封信,内容包括:
1. 提供建议(如时间、地点、主题等);
2. 表达期待。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
17.假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Jim最近因为沉迷于手机游戏被父母没收手机,从而与父母发生争执,他写信向你抱怨此事。请你就此给他回信,劝他与父母和好。要点包括:
1. 给予安慰并指出Jim的错误;
2. 给出建议(至少两条)。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
18.假设你是李华,你的好友John给你发来信件,提及他在进入高中后发现很难和新同学和睦相处,希望你能给他一些建议。请你给他回一封信,内容包括:
1. 表示理解;2. 提供建议 (至少2点);3. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数80左右。
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear John,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
19.假定你是李华,进入高中学习已经一个多月了。现在你以“My Senior School Life”为题给Teens 杂志投稿,描述你的高中生活。要点如下:
你已在高中学习一个多月。高中课程,对你有点挑战,但是老师和同学都很友好。他们鼓励你接受挑战。同时学校提供了很多的选修课程。你参加了中国书法来开阔视野。
千里之行始于足下。你会建立目标,这会帮助你养成良好的学习习惯。在接下来的三年,你会保持积极的心态,充分利用学校资源来实现自己的潜能,享受个人成长。
注意:
(1)词数100词左右(标题已为你写好,但不计入总词数);
(2)注意过渡和衔接;
(3)注意书写和卷面。
My Senior School Life
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20.假定你是中学生李华,你的朋友Eric最近和父母关系紧张,发邮件向你询问如何改善与父母的关系。请你给他回复邮件,内容包括:
1.写信目的;2.提出建议并说明理由;3.表达美好希望。
注意:
1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Eric,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
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第一次月考复习之应用文写作20篇
(江苏专用)
序号
文体类型
核心写作主题
1
建议信(回信)
给朋友 Cheery 提高中英语学习建议,不要轻言放弃、多加练习培养兴趣
2
安慰 + 建议邮件
笔友 Lisa 因父母过高期待倍感压力,给予安慰并给出沟通建议
3
建议邮件
美国交换生 Jim 来华求学,为其提供高中学习、社团交友两方面适应建议
4
建议信(写给校长)
提议学校成立武术社团,介绍社团对于传播中国文化、强身健体的益处
5
建议邮件
好友 Rebecca 与父母关系紧张,分析矛盾成因并给出改善亲子关系的建议
6
安慰 + 建议回信
笔友 Mike 疏于运动身心疲惫,劝说其抽出时间锻炼、恢复精力
7
建议信
好友 John 常和父母争吵冷战,劝导冷静沟通、换位思考化解亲子矛盾
8
建议回信
Jack 因学业压力和父母发生争吵,建议坦诚交流、制定学习计划修复家庭关系
9
记叙文式回信
向好友 Peter 分享暑假志愿经历,介绍崭新的高中校园生活以及未来学习规划
10
议论文(发言稿)
阐述高中阶段设定目标的重要性,讲解如何科学、合理地制定学习目标
11
建议邮件
高一新生 Eric 不知如何挑选校园社团,结合兴趣方向给出选社团的建议
12
安慰回信(编辑→学生)
李华遭遇学习困难、亲子矛盾,编辑给出时间管理、家校交友等疏导建议
13
安慰 + 建议回信
美国笔友 Tom 难以适应高中新生活,劝导积极参与校园活动平衡学习与休息
14
建议回信
林涛缺少锻炼频繁生病,强调运动的重要性,建议坚持日常体育锻炼
15
专栏回信(编辑)
学生受学习压力、亲子关系困扰,给出时间规划、主动和父母敞开心扉的建议
16
建议信(投稿)
向校报建言开设英语角,对英语角开展的时间、地点、活动主题提出方案
17
劝导回信
Jim 沉迷手游被父母没收手机引发争吵,劝导减少游戏时间、主动和解沟通
18
建议回信
John 难以融入新班级,建议真诚待人、主动沟通,改善和新同学的人际关系
19
投稿(记叙文)
向英文杂志介绍入学一个多月以来自己丰富多彩、充满挑战的高中新生活,畅谈成长目标
20
建议邮件
Eric 和父母关系紧张,建议多交流换位思考,用行动表达对父母的爱与感恩
1.你的朋友Cheery进入高中后觉得学习英语的方式和初中相比有很大的不同,苦恼之余向你写信寻求建议。请你以李华的名义给她写一封回信,给她提供一些英语学习方面的建议。要点如下:
1.开始学习高中英语时,不要轻言放弃;
2.尽量多练习,对英语感兴趣;
3.……(自由发挥)
注意:1.词数80左右; 2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Cheery,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Cheery,
Knowing (that) you have difficulty learning English in senior high school, today I will offer you some useful and practical suggestions to help you.
First and foremost, there is no doubt that you aren’t supposed to give up English easily when you begin to learn English in senior high school. In addition, doing more exercises is a good way to make you more interested in English. Last but not least, of equal importance is that you can ask teachers and classmates for help when you meet problems.
All in all, if you could take good consideration of my suggestions, you would solve your problems soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Cheery写一封回信,给她提供一些英语学习方面的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
做某事有困难:have difficulty doing sth. → have trouble doing sth.
提供:offer → provide
帮助:help → assist
此外:in addition → besides/what’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In addition, doing more exercises is a good way to make you more interested in English.
拓展句:In addition, doing more exercises is a good way that can make you more interested in English.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First and foremost, there is no doubt that you aren’t supposed to give up English easily when you begin to learn English in senior high school. (运用了that引导的同位语从句,when引导的状语从句)
【高分句型2】All in all, if you could take good consideration of my suggestions, you would solve your problems soon. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
2.假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Lisa给你发来一封邮件,说进入高中后父母对她的学习期望值太高,为此她感到压力很大,请你给她回复一封邮件,内容包括:1. 表示理解并给予安慰;2. 提出建议;3. 表达美好祝愿。
写作要求:
1. 词数80左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Lisa,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Lisa,
I am sorry to hear that you are going through a hard time at the moment. But there is no need for you to feel anxious. Here I’d like to offer you some useful suggestions.
First of all, try to put yourself into your parents’ shoes, and then you will understand why they expect so much of you. Second, you could try communicating your feelings to your parents in a friendly way, which will help you reduce your stress.
I sincerely hope you can free yourself from your stress soon and improve your relationship with your parents. Looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给进入高中后因父母期望值过高而倍感压力的英国笔友Lisa写封邮件,内容包括:1. 表示理解并给予安慰;2.提出建议;3.表达美好祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
困难的:hard→tough
忧虑的:anxious→uneasy
期待:expect→anticipate
压力:stress→pressure
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Here I’d like to offer you some useful suggestions.
拓展句:Here I’d like to offer you some suggestions, which may be of great help.
【点睛】[高分句型1] First of all, try to put yourself into your parents’ shoes, and then you will understand why they expect so much of you. (运用了why引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Second, you could try communicating your feelings to your parents in a friendly way, which will help you reduce your stress. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
3.假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Jim来信告诉你,在新学期他要来中国当交换生,想让你给他一些建议,帮助他尽快适应中国的高中学习和生活。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括如下:
1. 学习建议(课堂、课后);
2. 生活建议(多交朋友,参加社团等);
3. 期待。
要求:字数100词左右。不要逐句翻译,可以增加适当细节,令行文连贯。
Dear Jim,
I’m delighted that you will come to China as an exchange student next term.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Jim,
I’m delighted that you will come to China as an exchange student next term. Here are my suggestions to help you adapt quickly.
For studies, Chinese high schools emphasize discipline and active participation. Teachers appreciate students who ask questions, so don’t hesitate to speak up in class. After school, review notes promptly and join study groups, which will deepen your understanding of subjects like math and science, where problem-solving is key.
Regarding life, making friends is crucial. Smile and greet classmates, and they’ll gladly help you practice Chinese! Clubs like calligraphy or basketball are great for bonding. Also, try local dishes because food is a universal language here.
Please remember adapting takes time. While you may face challenges initially, stay open-minded. I’m sure you’ll thrive, and I can’t wait to show you around!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份,给即将来中国当交换生的笔友Jim回复电子邮件,为他提供尽快适应中国的高中学习和生活的建议,需从学习和生活两方面提供具体建议,并表达美好的期待。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
适应:adapt→fit in
重视:emphasize→stress, highlight
重要的:crucial→vital, essential
面临:face→encounter, experience, confront
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Smile and greet classmates, and they’ll gladly help you practice Chinese!
拓展句:If you smile and greet classmates, they’ll gladly help you practice Chinese!
【点睛】[高分句型1] Teachers appreciate students who ask questions, so don’t hesitate to speak up in class. (运用了who引导限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] While you may face challenges initially, stay open-minded. (运用了While引导让步状语从句)
4.假设你是李华,目前在英国做交换生。请根据提示给校长Mr. Brown写一封建议信。内容包括:
1. 建议学校成立武术社团(Martial Arts Club);
2. 成立该社团的好处;
3. 希望得到学校支持。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Brown,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Brown,
I am Li Hua, an exchange student from China. I would like to make a suggestion in my letter. Since many people are interested in Chinese culture, especially martial arts, I suggest that the school should set up a Martial Arts Club. The reasons are as follows.
First of all, the establishment of a Martial Arts Club is one of the ways to enrich school life, which makes students have more choices in clubs. Secondly, wushu is one of the traditional cultures of China. Setting up a Martial Arts Club is beneficial to students to understand Chinese culture. Finally, learning martial arts can help us keep fit. Please take my suggestions into consideration.
Looking forward to getting support from the school.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校长Mr. Brown写一封建议信,建议学校成立武术社团、成立该社团的好处以及希望得到学校支持。
【详解】1.词汇积累
考虑:take...into consideration→take...into account
提出建议:make a suggestion→put forward a proposal
建立:set up→establish
选择:choice→option
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Setting up a Martial Arts Club is beneficial to students to understand Chinese culture.
拓展句:Setting up a Martial Arts Club is beneficial, which can help students to understand Chinese culture.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Since many people are interested in Chinese culture, especially martial arts, I suggest that the school should set up a Martial Arts Club.(运用了since引导的原因状语从句、that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】First of all, the establishment of a Martial Arts Club is one of the ways to enrich school life, which makes students have more choices in clubs.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
5.假定你是中学生李华,你的朋友Rebecca最近和父母关系紧张,发邮件向你咨询如何改善与父母的关系。请你回复邮件,内容包括:
1. 写信目的
2. 分析与父母关系紧张的常见原因并提出建议
3. 表达美好愿望
Dear Rebecca,
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【答案】
Dear Rebecca,
I’m writing to offer you some advice on improving your relationship with your parents.
The reasons for the tension may be that you and your parents have distinct views on things, which often leads to disagreements. Besides, a lack of communication is also a factor. I suggest you actively talk with them, sharing what’s on your mind. What matters is that you should let them know you respect and love them, which can help build a closer bond.
I sincerely hope you can resolve the issues and enjoy a harmonious relationship with your parents.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以中学生李华的身份,给朋友Rebecca回邮件,针对她与父母关系紧张的问题,说明写信目的、分析原因并提建议,最后表达美好愿望。
【详解】1.词汇积累
改善:improve → enhance
因素:factor → element
缺乏:lack → shortage
尊重:respect → esteem
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m writing to offer you some advice on improving your relationship with your parents.
拓展句:I’m writing to offer you some advice, which is about improving your relationship with your parents.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The reasons for the tension may be that you and your parents have distinct views on things, which often leads to disagreements.(运用了that引导的表语从句、which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】What matters is that you should let them know you respect and love them, which can help build a closer bond.(运用了what引导的主语从句、that引导的表语从句、省略引导词that的宾语从句、which引导的非限制性定语从句)
6.假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike发来邮件,说他因为学业繁重,很少运动, 最近总是感到疲惫和精力不足。请你给他回信,内容包括:1.向迈克表示安慰,
2. 针对他的问题,提出关于运动的建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
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【答案】Dear Mike,
I am sorry to hear that you’ve been feeling tired and low on energy recently. I believe that a lack of physical activity might be a key reason. So, I’d like to offer some suggestions.
To begin with, it is highly recommended that you should set aside at least 30 minutes a day for physical activities. In addition, you can start with some simple exercise, such as jogging, swimming or playing badminton. They can effectively refresh your mind and increase your energy level. Last but not least, it makes sense to join a sports club, which is a great way for you to stay motivated.
I’ll be more than glad if these suggestions can be beneficial to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Mike回信,对他因学业繁重少运动而感到疲惫、精力不足表示安慰,并提出相关运动建议。
【详解】词汇积累
疲惫的:tired → exhausted
提供:offer → afford
留出(时间):set aside → spare
提升:increase → boost
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In addition, you can start with some simple exercise, such as jogging, swimming or playing badminton.
拓展句:In addition, you can start with some simple exercise, which can include jogging, swimming or playing badminton.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】To begin with, it is highly recommended that you should set aside at least 30 minutes a day for physical activities.(运用了that连接的宾语从句和虚拟语气)
【高分句型 2】Last but not least, it makes sense to join a sports club, which is a great way for you to stay motivated.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
7.假定你是李华,你正值青春期的好友John给你来信,提及他时常和父母争吵冷战,为此他感到非常苦恼,不知如何是好。请你给John写一封建议信,告诉他如何更好地处理亲子之间的矛盾。
内容包括:1. 表示理解;2. 提供建议(至少2点);3. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数80左右。
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear John,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear John,
I understand how frustrating it can be when you often argue with your parents and then fall into silence. It’s totally normal during adolescence, as both sides may have different perspectives, so don’t be too upset.
Here are some suggestions. First, try to calm down and communicate with them patiently when conflicts arise, sharing your thoughts and listening to theirs. Second, understand their care behind strictness — they just want what’s best for you, even if their way feels harsh sometimes.
Hope you can bridge the gap and get along well with your parents soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给青春期好友John写一封建议信,针对John与父母争吵冷战的困扰,表达理解并提供至少两点建议,最后表达祝愿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
建议:suggestion → advice
出现:arise → occur
严格:strictness → harshness
相处融洽:get along well with → have a good relationship with
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Here are some suggestions.
拓展句:Here are some suggestions that can help you improve your relationship with your parents.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First, try to calm down and communicate with them patiently when conflicts arise, sharing your thoughts and listening to theirs.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句;以及现在分词短语sharing your thoughts and listening to theirs作状语)
【高分句型2】Second, understand their care behind strictness — they just want what’s best for you, even if their way feels harsh sometimes(运用了what引导的宾语从句,what在从句中作主语;以及even if引导的让步状语从句)
8.假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Jack因为学业压力很大和父母发生争吵,导致家庭关系紧张。他因为不知道如何与父母相处而感到苦恼。请用英文给Jack写一封建议信。内容要点如下:
内容包括:1. 表示理解并给予安慰;2. 提出建议并说明理由。3. 表达祝愿。
写作要求:1. 词数80左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。信的开头结尾已给出。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m truly sorry to hear that you're having conflicts with your parents due to academic stress. It’s completely normal to feel overwhelmed sometimes, and many teenagers face similar challenges.
Here are some suggestions that might help. First, have an open talk with your parents when everyone is calm. Explain your feelings honestly and listen to their concerns, thus building mutual understanding. Second, create a practical study schedule together. This shows your responsibility while ensuring you get enough rest. Remember, your parents ultimately want what’s best for you.
I believe you can overcome this difficulty. Wishing you a closer relationship with your parents!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份针对Jack因学业压力与父母产生矛盾的情况,写一封表达理解、提供建议并表示祝愿的回信。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
冲突:conflicts → disagreements
理解:mutual understanding → mutual comprehension
实际的:practical → realistic
克服:overcome → get through
2. 句式拓展
合并句子
原句:Second, create a practical study schedule together. This shows your responsibility while ensuring you get enough rest.
拓展句:Second, create a practical study schedule together, which shows your responsibility while ensuring you get enough rest.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Explain your feelings honestly and listen to their concerns, thus building mutual understanding. (运用了现在分词短语作状语)
【高分句型2】Remember, your parents ultimately want what’s best for you.(运用了what引导宾语从句)
9.假定你是高一新生李华,你的好友 Peter 发来邮件,询问你暑假的活动,并想了解你对高中生活的感受。请根据以下要点给他写一封回信:
1. 假期中你做了什么有意义的事情;
2. 你对新学校和新同学的印象;
3. 你对未来高中学习的计划或期望。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
How are you doing? I feel so grateful to receive your letter asking about my summer vacation and my new high school life. As for me, everything is a new start.
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【答案】参考范文:
Dear Peter,
How are you doing? I feel so grateful to receive your letter asking about my summer vacation and my new high school life. As for me, everything is a new start.
This summer, I did something truly meaningful by volunteering at a local community center, teaching English to primary school students. It was rewarding to see their progress. My new school has a beautiful campus with modern facilities, and my classmates are all friendly and hardworking. We’ve already formed study groups to help each other.
For my high school plan, I aim to build a solid foundation in all subjects while developing my interest in physics. I also want to join the debate club to improve my critical thinking.
What about your recent life? Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以高一新生李华的身份,回复好友Peter关于暑假活动和高中生活感受的询问,需涵盖假期经历、对新环境的印象及未来学习规划。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
暑假:summer vacation → summer holiday
勤奋的:hardworking → diligent
提高:improve → enhance
期待:looking forward to → anticipate
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:This summer, I did something truly meaningful by volunteering at a local community center, teaching English to primary school students.
拓展句:This summer, I did something truly meaningful by volunteering at a local community center, where I taught English to primary school students.
【点睛】【高分句型1】This summer, I did something truly meaningful by volunteering at a local community center, teaching English to primary school students. (运用了现在分词短语作状语)
【高分句型2】For my high school plan, I aim to build a solid foundation in all subjects while developing my interest in physics. (运用了时间状语从句中的省略结构)
10.进入高中,挑战与机遇并存。只有设定好目标并朝着目标努力奋进才能实现个人潜能。请你就设定目标展开写作,具体包括以下几点:
1. 设定目标的重要性;
2. 如何设定目标。
要求:词数 100 左右;适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】One possible version
Entering high school brings both challenges and opportunities. To achieve our full potential, it is important to set clear goals and work hard toward them.
Setting goals helps us stay focused. Without goals, we might lose our way or waste time. But with clear goals, we know what steps to take each day. Goals also give us motivation. When we face difficulties, remembering our goals encourages us to work harder. Most importantly, achieving small goals builds confidence and pushes us closer to bigger dreams.
To set effective goals, we should be specific. Instead of saying “I want to improve my English,” we can aim to “learn 20 new words every week.” Besides, goals should be realistic. Start with small targets and move step by step. Finally, write down your goals and make a plan. Regularly check your progress and adjust your plan if needed.
By setting and going after meaningful goals, we grow stronger and build a bright future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就设定目标展开写作,说明设定目标的重要性以及如何设定目标。
【详解】1.词汇积累
实现:achieve→realize
重要:important→essential
记住:remember→keep in mind
光明:bright→promising
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Setting goals helps us stay focused. Without goals, we might lose our way or waste time.
拓展句:Setting goals helps us stay focused because without goals, we might lose our way or waste time.
【点睛】【高分句型1】But with clear goals, we know what steps to take each day.(运用了疑问词+不定式作宾语)
【高分句型2】By setting and going after meaningful goals, we grow stronger and build a bright future.(运用了动名词作宾语)
11.假设你是中学生李华,你的朋友Eric刚进入高中,面对学校的各种社团不知道如何选择,发邮件向你询问。请你回复邮件,内容包括:
1. 写信目的;
2. 提出建议并说明理由;
3. 表达美好希望。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Eric,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version
Dear Eric,
I’m glad to receive your email asking for advice on choosing school clubs.
Since you’re new to high school, I think you should first consider your interests. If you like communicating with others, the English Club would be a good choice because it can improve your language skills through different activities like debates and speech contests. If you enjoy sports, the Basketball Club is perfect as it helps you stay healthy and make friends.
Don’t worry about making the wrong choice. Many clubs allow you to try out for a few weeks. I hope you can find a club that suits you and have a great time in high school!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件,给刚上高中的朋友Eric提供关于选择学校社团的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:advice→suggestions
首先:first→above all
考虑:consider→take into account
担心:worry about→be concerned about
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m glad to receive your email asking for advice on choosing school clubs.
拓展句:I’m glad to receive your email that asks for advice on choosing school clubs.
【点睛】【高分句型1】If you like communicating with others, the English Club would be a good choice because it can improve your language skills through different activities like debates and speech contests.(运用了if引导条件状语从句和because引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】 I hope you can find a club that suits you and have a great time in high school!(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句和省略that的宾语从句)
12.假设你是报社编辑Cynthia,高一新生李华在进入高中后,在学习上遇到困难,和父母的关系也变得紧张,故写信向你求助。请你写一封回信给予帮助。(80字左右)
内容包括: 1. 表示安慰及写信目的;
2. 提出具体建议及原因;
3. 表达美好祝愿。
Dear Li Hua,
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Yours,
Cynthia
【答案】Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to hear about your struggles you have met after entering the high school. As an editor, I’d like to offer some advice.
Firstly, create a study plan to manage time efficiently, which can help you to reduce stress. Secondly, talk openly with your parents about your feelings and they’ll understand if you explain calmly. Finally, join school clubs to make friends and you can gain support from them. High school challenges are normal, and things will improve, so don’t worry too much.
Wish you confidence and happiness!
Yours,
Cynthia
【导语】本篇书面表达属于慰问信。要求考生给高一新生李华回信,就他在求助信中提到的进入高中后所遇到的学习和与父母关系问题上的困难,表示安慰,说明写信目的、提出具体建议及原因,并表达美好祝愿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累:
提供:offer→provide
高效地、有效地:efficiently→effectively
减少:reduce→decrease
获得:gain→attain
2. 句式拓展:
同义句转换:
原句: I’m sorry to hear about your struggles you have met after entering the high school.
拓展句: I’m sorry to hear about your struggles you have met after you entered the high school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 Firstly, create a study plan to manage time efficiently, which can help you to reduce stress.(运用了以关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句。)
【高分句型2】Secondly, talk openly with your parents about your feelings and they’ll understand if you explain calmly. (运用了以连词if引导的条件状语从句。)
13.假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Tom 刚上高中,感觉学习生活遇到了很多挑战。他写信向你寻求建议,请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信:
1.表示理解;
2.给出建议;
3.表达祝愿。
要求:字数100字左右,可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re worried about the challenges in your high school life, and you don't know how to deal with them. However, I want you to know that it’s completely normal to feel this way. Here are some suggestions for you.
Firstly, I suggest that you try to get involved in school activities. This will help you make new friends and have fun experiences. Secondly, you should create a schedule to balance your study and relaxation time. Make sure you’re giving yourself enough time to rest and recharge. I know it might be difficult right now, but I believe you have the strength to overcome this.
Keep your head up and remember that things can always get better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的美国笔友Tom 刚上高中,感觉学习生活遇到了很多挑战并向你寻求建议,写一封回信表示理解,提出你的建议并表达祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
焦虑的:worried → anxious
然而:however → nevertheless
建议:suggest → advise/propose
困难的:difficult → tough
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Secondly, you should create a schedule to balance your study and relaxation time. Make sure you’re giving yourself enough time to rest and recharge.
拓展句:Secondly, you should create a schedule to balance your study and relaxation time so that you can give yourself enough time to rest and recharge.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to hear that you’re worried about the challenges in your high school life. (运用了连词that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Firstly, I suggest that you try to get involved in school activities. (运用了连词that引导宾语从句和虚拟语气)
14.假定你是李华,你的笔友林涛来信说,因学习忙,锻炼少,他最近经常生病,同时也影响了他的学习。请你给他写一封英文回信,内容包括:
1. 锻炼的重要性 2. 提出锻炼的建议
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【答案】Dear Lin Tao,
Knowing that you have been under the weather for days, I am writing to show my concern for you and offer you some advice.
To begin with, working out can not only improve your immune system but also make you full of energy everyday. Only when in good health can you carry on studying and increase your study efficiency. What’s more/ Moreover, I suggest that you take at least one hour’s exercise every day, and make a detailed schedule for your exercise, which can help you stick with an exercise routine. Last but not least, it might be a good idea to join a sports club in your school, for the partners in the club can inspire you to work out regularly.
I do hope you will find my advice helpful. If you have any question, don’t hesitate to contact me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。现要求考生就笔友林涛因缺乏锻炼最近经常生病并影响了他的学习这事,给他写一封英文回信。其内容包括:锻炼的重要性和提出锻炼的意义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:advice →suggestion
首先:to begin with→first
帮助:help→ assist
激励:inspire → motivate
2.句式拓展
句式转换
原句:To begin with, working out can not only improve your immune system but also make you full of energy everyday.
拓展句:To begin with, not only can working out improve your immune system but also make you full of energy everyday. (部分倒装)
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you have been under the weather for days, I am writing to show my concern for you and offer you some advice.(运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】 What’s more/ Moreover, I suggest that you take at least one hour’s exercise every day, and make a detailed schedule for your exercise, which can help you stick with an exercise routine.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
15.假如你是校英文报Problem& Advice栏目的编辑,收到一个学生的求助信,信中他说近期学习压力大,与父母关系很紧张,请你回信给予建议,内容包括:
1.表示理解和安慰;2.给出建议;3.表达祝愿。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右。2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear Worried Friend,
I’m sorry to know that you are going through a tough time.
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Loving Editor
【答案】Dear Worried Friend,
I’m sorry to know that you are going through a tough time. It’s normal to face some challenges in both studies and family relationships. Everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so don’t worry too much. Here are some tips that may help you.
To improve your learning efficiency, engaging yourself in class actively can help a lot because answering teachers’ questions and thinking positively leave little room for you to be absent-minded. Organizing your time and prioritizing your tasks are also important. When it comes to strengthening the relationship with your parents, it is advisable for you to be open with them. Promise to them that you will be responsible for your schoolwork. Try to understand their perspective and listen to their concerns.
Hopefully, these suggestions will be of some help to you and wish you the best of luck in overcoming your challenges.
Loving Editor
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是校英文报Problem& Advice栏目的编辑,收到一个学生的求助信,信中他说近期学习压力大,与父母关系很紧张,请你回信给予建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
加强:strengthen → build up
明智的:advisable → wise
负责:be responsible for → take responsibility for
建议:suggestion → advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:It’s normal to face some challenges in both studies and family relationships.
拓展句:It’s normal that you face some challenges in both studies and family relationships.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so don’t worry too much.(运用了when引导定语从句)
【高分句型2】Organizing your time and prioritizing your tasks are also important.(运用了动名词短语作主语)
16.假定你是李华。你校即将开设英语角,校英文报现面向全体学生征集建议。请你写一封信,内容包括:
1. 提供建议(如时间、地点、主题等);
2. 表达期待。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Editor,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Editor,
Learning that an English corner will be open in our school, I’m writing to give some advice.
First of all, the English corner can be arranged every Friday in our language lab so that we will be offered a chance to practice our oral English using multimedia devices. What’s more, the theme of the English corner should be about improving our language competence, in particular, spoken English, various topics included.
I hope my advice is worth taking and the first session will arrive on time!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就学校即将要开设英语角这一事写一封建议信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:advice→suggestion
机会:chance→opportunity
提高,加强:improve→strengthen
各种的:various→ a variety of
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:What’s more, the theme of the English corner should be about improving our language competence, in particular, spoken English, various topics included.
拓展句:What’s more, the English corner should include various topics, the theme of which is about improving our language competence, in particular, spoken English.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, the English corner can be arranged every Friday in our language lab so that we will be offered a chance to practice our oral English using multimedia devices.(运用了so that引导的状语从句和现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】What’s more, the theme of the English corner should be about improving our language competence, in particular, spoken English, various topics included.(运用了独立主格结构)
17.假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Jim最近因为沉迷于手机游戏被父母没收手机,从而与父母发生争执,他写信向你抱怨此事。请你就此给他回信,劝他与父母和好。要点包括:
1. 给予安慰并指出Jim的错误;
2. 给出建议(至少两条)。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Jim,
I’m sorry to hear you are upset about the argument between you and your parents. To be honest, this time it is your fault for being so obsessed with the mobile-phone.
Attractive as mobile phones are, they do cost you too much time and energy, which does harm to your health and study. Thus, it is advisable to focus more on study and reduce the time spent on the mobile phone. Besides, having an honest communication calmly can help you to improve the relationship between you and your parents.
I sincerely hope that you can go through this and enjoy your high school life.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给沉迷于手机游戏的美国朋友Jim回一封信,劝他与父母和好。
【详解】1.词汇积累
不安的:upset→troubled/confused
集中于:focus on→concentrate on/fix on
此外:besides→ what’s more /furthermore/in addition
提高:improve→enhance/boost/raise
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I’m sorry to hear you are upset about the argument between you and your parents.
拓展句:Hearing you are upset about the argument between you and your parents, I am sorry.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Attractive as mobile phones are, they do cost you too much time and energy, which does harm to your health and study. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。)
【高分句型2】Thus, it is advisable to focus more on study and reduce the time spent on the mobile phone. (运用了it作形式主语,to do为真正的主语以及过去分词作后置定语。)
18.假设你是李华,你的好友John给你发来信件,提及他在进入高中后发现很难和新同学和睦相处,希望你能给他一些建议。请你给他回一封信,内容包括:
1. 表示理解;2. 提供建议 (至少2点);3. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数80左右。
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear John,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear John,
Sorry to hear that you have trouble getting on well with your new classmates and I understand your feelings. Try the following suggestions.
Firstly, keep in mind that any good relationship is based on understanding, trust and respect. If we respect others and treat them sincerely, we are sure to gain their respect in return. Besides, regular and honest communication plays a significant role in keeping a healthy relationship. When faced with some problems with your classmates, you should calm down, explain your feelings clearly and address your problems together.
Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Good luck with your new relationship with others!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是应用文。假设你是李华,你的好友John给你发来信件,提及他在进入高中后发现很难和新同学和睦相处,希望你能给他一些建议。请你给他回一封信,内容包括:1. 表示理解;2. 提供建议 (至少2点);3. 表达祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:suggestions→proposals/tips
记住:keep in mind→bear in mind
此外:Besides→In addition
解决:address→deal with
2.句式拓展
简单句变强调句
原句:Besides, regular and honest communication plays a significant role in keeping a healthy relationship.
拓展句:Besides, it is regular and honest communication that plays a significant role in keeping a healthy relationship.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Sorry to hear that you have trouble getting on well with your new classmates and I understand your feelings. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Firstly, keep in mind that any good relationship is based on understanding, trust and respect.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
19.假定你是李华,进入高中学习已经一个多月了。现在你以“My Senior School Life”为题给Teens 杂志投稿,描述你的高中生活。要点如下:
你已在高中学习一个多月。高中课程,对你有点挑战,但是老师和同学都很友好。他们鼓励你接受挑战。同时学校提供了很多的选修课程。你参加了中国书法来开阔视野。
千里之行始于足下。你会建立目标,这会帮助你养成良好的学习习惯。在接下来的三年,你会保持积极的心态,充分利用学校资源来实现自己的潜能,享受个人成长。
注意:
(1)词数100词左右(标题已为你写好,但不计入总词数);
(2)注意过渡和衔接;
(3)注意书写和卷面。
My Senior School Life
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【答案】 My Senior School Life
I have been in senior high school for more than a month. The courses are a bit challenging to me, but teachers and classmates are always helpful. They encourage me to rise to challenges bravely. Meanwhile, there are many optional courses to take. I choose Chinese calligraphy course to broaden my horizons.
A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. I will set goals, which may help me develop good habits. Over the next three years, I will keep a positive attitude, make the most of school resources to realize my potential and enjoy personal growth.
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生以“My Senior School Life”为题向Teens 杂志投稿,描述你的高中生活。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
课程:course→lesson
鼓励:encourage→inspire
选择:take→select
目标:goal→target
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The courses are a bit challenging to me, but teachers and classmates are always helpful. They encourage me to rise to challenges bravely.
拓展句:The courses are a bit challenging to me, but teachers and classmates are always helpful, who encourage me to rise to challenges bravely.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I will set goals, which may help me develop good habits.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Over the next three years, I will keep a positive attitude, make the most of school resources to realize my potential and enjoy personal growth.(排比句)
20.假定你是中学生李华,你的朋友Eric最近和父母关系紧张,发邮件向你询问如何改善与父母的关系。请你给他回复邮件,内容包括:
1.写信目的;2.提出建议并说明理由;3.表达美好希望。
注意:
1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Eric,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Eric,
I’m sorry to hear that you have a tense relationship with your parents. Here are some suggestions for you. Firstly, communicate with them more. Let them know your thoughts and feelings. Secondly, try to understand their perspective. They may have different concerns and expectations. Finally, show your appreciation and love for them. Do something nice for them, such as cooking a meal or giving them a hug.
I hope these suggestions can help you improve your relationship with your parents. Remember, family is the most important thing in life.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Eric回复邮件,就如何改善与父母的关系提出建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
紧张的:tense → strained
建议:suggestion → advice
理解:understand → comprehend
感激:appreciation → gratitude
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Firstly, communicate with them more. Let them know your thoughts and feelings.
拓展句:Firstly, communicate with them more, which can let them know your thoughts and feelings.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to hear that you have a tense relationship with your parents. (运用了连词that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I hope these suggestions can help you improve your relationship with your parents. (运用了省略连词that的宾语从句)
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