2027届高三英语读后续写专项复习 友谊的修复 导学案

该高中英语导学案聚焦读后续写专项，系统梳理友谊修复类文本的情节发展、情感线索和语言表达等核心考点，通过角色分析、时空线梳理、细节问答等模块构建知识网络，以问题链引导学生自主推导情节逻辑与情感变化，形成从文本解读到续写创作的完整认知体系。 亮点在于诊断性学习设计与分层指导，开篇细节问答帮助学生自测文本理解漏洞，续写框架分步骤引导从道歉沟通到合作表演的情节构思，培养语言能力与思维品质。每个模块配有情感线分析表和句式仿写任务，助力学生个性化提升，教师可通过学情数据实施精准教学，有效培养自主复习能力。

2027届高三英语读后续写专项复习---友谊的修复+导学案 阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Lily and Emma had been inseparable since the first day of high school. They did everything together—studying in the library, sharing lunch in the cafeteria, and dreaming about performing in the school art festival together. But three months ago, everything changed. Lily had spent weeks preparing a dance routine for the festival, and Emma had promised to be her partner. However, on the day of the audition, Emma never showed up. Lily was forced to perform alone, and she failed to make the cut. Feeling betrayed, Lily refused to answer Emma's calls or texts. Emma tried to explain that her mother had suddenly fallen ill and she had to rush her to the hospital, but Lily was too hurt to listen. The two girls who used to share everything now walked past each other in the hallway without a word. As the weeks passed, Lily began to notice changes in Emma. The once cheerful girl now sat alone at lunch, her eyes red from crying. Lily's best friend, Sophie, told her that Emma's mother was still in the hospital and that Emma had been visiting her every day after school. One evening, Lily passed by the hospital on her way home. Through the window, she saw Emma sitting beside her mother's bed, holding her hand and singing softly. Tears welled up in Lily's eyes as she realized how selfish she had been. She had lost her best friend over a misunderstanding, and Emma had been suffering alone all this time. 注意： （1）所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； （2）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； Paragraph 1: That night, Lily picked up her phone and called Emma for the first time in three months. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: On the day of the art festival, Lily and Emma stood backstage, holding each other's hands tightly. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 Lily and Emma were best friends--- _________________ ---Lily felt betrayed and refused to talk to Emma--- _________________ ---Lily saw Emma in the hospital and realized her mistake（续写） 4. 细节问答 What did Lily and Emma dream about doing together?：_________________________________________________________________ What happened on the day of the audition? ________________________________________________________________________ Why did Emma fail to show up?：______________________________________________________________________ How did Lily react to Emma's absence?：________________________________________________________________________ What did Sophie tell Lily about Emma?：_______________________________________________________________________ What did Lily see through the hospital window?：________________________________________________________________________ How did Lily feel after seeing Emma in the hospital?：________________________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________________________________ 5．情节线 莉莉和艾玛是形影不离的好朋友→_________________ →莉莉感到被背叛，拒绝与艾玛说话→_________________ →莉莉路过医院，看到艾玛照顾母亲，意识到自己的自私（续写） 6．情感线 Lily: happy and close→___________→hurt and angry→___________→guilty and regretful→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：________________________________________________________________________ 英文：________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句　　___________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 友谊修复类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: That night, Lily picked up her phone and called Emma for the first time in three months. 衔接句1——What did Lily say? How did Emma respond? ________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: On the day of the art festival, Lily and Emma stood backstage, holding each other's hands tightly. 衔接句2——What did they do? What was the final feeling and theme? ________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：那天晚上，莉莉拿起手机，三个月来第一次给艾玛打电话。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：艺术节那天，莉莉和艾玛站在后台，紧紧握着彼此的手。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 段落续写 Paragraph 1: That night, Lily picked up her phone and called Emma for the first time in three months. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: On the day of the art festival, Lily and Emma stood backstage, holding each other's hands tightly. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Lily（重视友谊、因误会受伤、最终学会理解与原谅的女孩）；Emma（善良孝顺、默默承受困难、珍视友谊的女孩）；Emma's mother（生病住院、需要照顾的母亲）；Sophie（告知真相、促成和解的朋友） 2．视角 第三人称 3．时空线 Lily and Emma were best friends--- Emma failed to show up at the audition and Lily felt betrayed ---Lily refused to talk to Emma--- Lily learned the truth from Sophie and saw Emma in the hospital ---Lily realized her mistake and decided to make up with Emma（续写） 4. 细节问答 What did Lily and Emma dream about doing together?：They dreamed about performing in the school art festival together. What happened on the day of the audition?：Emma never showed up, and Lily was forced to perform alone and failed to make the cut. Why did Emma fail to show up?：Her mother had suddenly fallen ill and she had to rush her to the hospital. How did Lily react to Emma's absence?：She felt betrayed and refused to answer Emma's calls or texts. What did Sophie tell Lily about Emma?：She told Lily that Emma's mother was still in the hospital and that Emma visited her every day. What did Lily see through the hospital window?：She saw Emma sitting beside her mother's bed, holding her hand and singing softly. How did Lily feel after seeing Emma in the hospital?：She felt guilty and regretful, realizing how selfish she had been. What does the story tell us?：True friendship requires understanding and forgiveness, and we should not let misunderstandings destroy precious relationships. 5．情节线 莉莉和艾玛是形影不离的好朋友→艺术节试演当天艾玛缺席，莉莉独自表演失败→莉莉感到被背叛，拒绝与艾玛说话→莉莉从索菲口中得知真相，并在医院看到艾玛照顾母亲→莉莉意识到自己的自私与错误，决定修复友谊→两人冰释前嫌，携手登上艺术节舞台，友谊更加深厚（续写） 6．情感线 Lily: happy and close→shocked and disappointed→hurt and angry→confused and concerned→guilty and regretful→relieved and grateful（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：莉莉和艾玛曾是最好的朋友，却因一次误会闹翻。当莉莉得知艾玛是因为母亲突发疾病才缺席试演，并亲眼看到她在医院照顾母亲时，她深感愧疚，主动道歉，两人最终冰释前嫌，携手登上艺术节舞台。 英文：Lily and Emma were best friends, but a misunderstanding drove them apart. When Lily learned that Emma had missed the audition because her mother was seriously ill and saw her caring for her mother in the hospital, she felt deeply regretful and apologized. The two girls finally reconciled and performed together at the art festival. 8. 句式 状语从句：When Lily passed by the hospital, she saw Emma through the window. 非谓语动词：Tears welled up in her eyes as she realized how selfish she had been. 定语从句：Lily, who had been too hurt to listen, finally understood the truth. 宾语从句：Lily realized that she had lost her best friend over a misunderstanding. 并列句：She picked up the phone; her hands were trembling with nervousness. 9. 本文主题 友谊修复类：真正的友谊需要理解与宽容，不要让误会摧毁珍贵的情谊，主动沟通与道歉能让友谊更加深厚。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: That night, Lily picked up her phone and called Emma for the first time in three months. 衔接句1——What did Lily say? How did Emma respond? Lily apologized sincerely for not listening to Emma's explanation and expressed how much she missed her. Emma, who was sitting beside her mother's bed, was moved to tears and forgave Lily immediately. They talked for hours, and the ice between them finally melted. Paragraph 2: On the day of the art festival, Lily and Emma stood backstage, holding each other's hands tightly. 衔接句2——What did they do? What was the final feeling and theme? They performed their dance routine perfectly, and the audience cheered loudly. After the performance, Emma's mother, who had recovered enough to attend, hugged both girls with tears of joy. The experience taught them that true friendship could overcome any misunderstanding, and their bond became stronger than ever. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：那天晚上，莉莉拿起手机，三个月来第一次给艾玛打电话。 →①莉莉真诚道歉，承认自己太自私，没有听艾玛解释→②艾玛深受感动，原谅了莉莉，两人聊了很久，冰释前嫌→③她们约定一起重新准备艺术节的舞蹈； 第二段：艺术节那天，莉莉和艾玛站在后台，紧紧握着彼此的手。 →④两人完美表演了舞蹈，观众热烈欢呼→⑤艾玛康复的母亲来到现场，感动地拥抱两个女孩→⑥她们领悟到真正的友谊能跨越一切误会，情谊更加深厚。 四、标准范文 Paragraph 1: That night, Lily picked up her phone and called Emma for the first time in three months. "Emma, I'm so sorry," Lily said, her voice trembling. "I was so selfish and stubborn. I should have listened to you." On the other end of the line, Emma burst into tears. She had been waiting for this moment for weeks. "I missed you so much," Emma whispered. "I wanted to explain, but you wouldn't answer my calls." They talked late into the night, sharing everything that had happened during their separation. Lily learned that Emma's mother was slowly recovering, and Emma promised to help Lily prepare a new dance routine for the festival. By the time they hung up, the wall between them had completely crumbled. Paragraph 2: On the day of the art festival, Lily and Emma stood backstage, holding each other's hands tightly. "We can do this," Emma said with a confident smile. When their names were announced, they walked onto the stage and danced with all their hearts. Every move was perfectly synchronized, and the audience watched in amazement. As the music ended, the auditorium erupted in thunderous applause. After the performance, they found Emma's mother waiting in the lobby, looking much better. She hugged both girls tightly, tears of joy streaming down her face. "Thank you for being such good friends to my daughter," she said. Lily and Emma looked at each other and smiled. They had learned that true friendship could survive any storm, and their bond was now stronger than ever. 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $