摘要:
该高中英语讲义聚焦高考应用文写作中的道歉信专题,覆盖真诚致歉、缘由阐述、补救方案设计及时态运用(一般现在时描述现状、一般将来时安排后续)等核心考点。知识点按题型特征、写作框架、原创试题、范文讲解(词汇升级、句式转换、长难句解析)、自主演练的逻辑层次展开,通过考点梳理明确写作要点,方法指导提供高级表达与句式模板,真题训练(原创试题与自主演练)强化实战应用,助力学生系统构建道歉信写作能力。
资料以提升语言能力和思维品质为核心,创新采用“基础-升级表达对比表”帮助学生积累高级词汇,通过解析非限制性定语从句、虚拟条件句倒装等长难句培养语法分析能力。设计“模板套用+细节拓展”教学活动,如让学生用升级版模板完成自主演练,在有限时间内掌握规范结构与灵活表达,既提升学生应考效率,也为教师精准把控复习进度提供清晰路径。
内容正文:
高考英语二轮应用文专题之道歉信
一、题型特征
道歉信多用于因自身失误、突发客观状况无法履约时向对方致歉。写作核心要抓住三点:真诚表达歉意、客观阐述缘由、提出可行补救方案。时态上,描述现状多用一般现在时,谈及后续安排多用一般将来时。
二、写作框架
第一段:开门见山,直接致歉,点明约定事项。
第二段:阐述具体客观原因,提出改期或者其他补救办法。
第三段:再次表达歉意,礼貌期待对方回复。
三、原创试题
假定你是李华,你和英国交换生Chris约好周末一同前往城市美术馆观看版画特展,但是你突然接到社区安排的志愿帮扶任务,无法如约赴约。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表达歉意并说明缘由;
2. 提出改期的可行方案。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
高分范文
Dear Chris,
I'm writing to extend my sincere apology to you, for I cannot honor our appointment to pay a visit to the city art gallery for the print-making exhibition this weekend.
Enrolled as a community volunteer, I have been assigned to deliver tutoring services for left-behind children this Saturday, which will occupy my entire daytime. I wonder whether it would be feasible for us to pay a visit to the exhibition next Sunday. Should you be available then, I will secure electronic tickets in advance so that we can bypass the lengthy queue at the entrance.
I feel awfully sorry for the abrupt alteration to our original plan. Looking forward to your prompt reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
四、范文讲解
1.重点词汇升级
中文含义
基础简单表达
升级高级表达
守约
keep our appointment
honor our appointment
参观
visit
pay a visit to
参加(志愿)
be a volunteer
enrolled as a volunteer
提供辅导
offer tutoring
deliver tutoring services
可行的
workable
feasible
预定
reserve
secure
避开
skip
bypass
长长的
long
lengthy
非常地
very
awfully
突然的
sudden
abrupt
改变
change
alteration
2.同义句转换
原句:I wonder whether it would be feasible for us to pay a visit to the exhibition next Sunday.
拓展句:I’m curious as to whether it would be viable for us to pay a visit to the exhibition next Sunday.
3.长难句解析
句1:Enrolled as a community volunteer, I have been assigned to deliver tutoring services for left-behind children this Saturday, which will occupy my entire daytime.
【解析】Enrolled as为过去分词短语作原因状语;have been assigned为现在完成时被动语态;which引导非限制性定语从句,指代前面整件事。
句2:Should you be available then, I will secure electronic tickets in advance so that we can bypass the lengthy queue at the entrance.
【解析】Should you be available为虚拟条件句倒装形式,相当于If you should be available;so that引导目的状语从句;bypass the lengthy queue意为"避开长长的队伍"。
4.范文模板(升级版)
Dear ______,
I'm writing to extend my sincere apology to you, for I cannot honor our appointment to ______(原定活动).
Enrolled as ______(身份情况), I have been assigned to ______(客观事由), which will ______(带来影响). I wonder whether it would be feasible for us to ______(改期方案). Should you be available then, I will ______(具体安排).
I feel awfully sorry for the abrupt alteration to our original plan. Looking forward to your prompt reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
五、自主演练
假定你是李华,你的外国好友Eric邀请你参加他周五晚上的家庭电影聚会,但你学校要组织一场重要的英语竞赛集训,无法到场。请写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表达歉意;2. 说明原因;3. 送上祝福。
注意:词数80左右;
【参考范文】
Dear Eric,
I'm writing to convey my sincere regret that I cannot turn up at your family movie gathering this Friday night as we anticipated.
Selected as a contestant, I shall participate in the pre-competition training for the provincial English contest, which will run from Friday afternoon deep into the evening. Consequently, I have no opportunity to join your get-together. I have acquired a set of classic movie postcards as a delicate souvenir for you, which I will hand over upon our next encounter. May you embrace a delightful night full of pleasure.
Sorry once more for my absence. Looking forward to our subsequent reunion.
Yours,
Li Hua
本篇关键升级:
say sorry→convey my sincere regret
show up→turn up
so→consequently
Wish you→May you embrace
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