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该高中英语高考复习学案聚焦读后续写核心考点，系统整合文本分析（角色、视角、时空线等）、情节构造、续写框架等模块，按“理解-分析-创造”逻辑构建知识网络，通过问题链（如细节问答）和任务驱动（如情节衔接设计）引导学生自主梳理续写要素，形成完整解题思路。 亮点在于诊断性自测与分层任务设计，开篇设置文本分析细节问答（如作者情感变化、情节线梳理）进行学情诊断，续写框架按“衔接句设计-段落框架搭建-范文赏析”分层推进，培养学生思维品质与语言能力。每个模块配有反思总结表，帮助学生个性化归因提升，教师可依据学生答题情况实施精准指导，有效支持因材施教。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Most days, I believe my seventeen‑month‑old is doing just fine. He seems to be on track developmentally. He’s discovering the freedom of walking, giggling (咯咯笑) at his mommy’s silly songs, playing with his toys, and conversing with my husband and me. In fact, all was well… until I took him to a playgroup. 　　In a room full of little people, I measured my son against his peers and felt the comparison monster emerged within me. As I watched little Simon walking around the room saying cat, dog, house and other English words, I wondered why the only recognizable word from my son was a repetitive “this, this” in the form of a question. As I scanned the play center, the comparison monster, sinking his claws inside my mind, consumed me. Across the room, little Johnny put puzzle pieces in the right places, and sorted all of the blocks—all within a matter of minutes. Meanwhile, my son repetitively banged a stacking ring (叠叠圈) on the hardwood just to hear the loud sound. 　　I went home and asked my husband, “Honey, is there something wrong with our son?” His answer surprised me. “We tend to focus on the capabilities of our children, but how often do we focus on character?” My husband’s words remind me that by the time our son is eighteen he will most likely be able to talk, read, write, solve problems, but what about his character? Will we have modeled love, joy, patience, kindness, and self‑control? Will we have installed (灌输) in him the willingness to give and serve? I have realized that perhaps asking these questions is the path toward training our son in the way he should go. 　　注意： 　　（1）所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 　　（2）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 　　Paragraph 1: The next week, I took my son to the playgroup again with a brand‑new mindset. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　Paragraph 2: One warm evening, a small incident made me fully understand my husband’s words.　_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　________________________________________________________ 2．视角 　　第________人称 3．时空线 　　The author thought her son developed normally--- _________________ ---The author compared her son with peers and felt anxious--- _________________ ---The author doubted her son’s development and consulted her husband--- _________________ ---The husband reminded her to focus on children’s character rather than abilities--- The author began to reflect on parenting 4. 细节问答 　　What did the author think of her son’s development at first? ：___________________________________ 　　Why did the author feel anxious in the playgroup?：_________________________________ 　　What were other kids able to do while her son could not?：________________________________________________ 　　What question did the author ask her husband?：__________________________________________ 　　What is her husband’s opinion on children’s education?：_____________________________________________ 　　What did the author realize in the end?：_________________________________________________ 　　What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 　　作者原本认为十七个月大的儿子发育正常、状态良好→_________________ →在亲子活动班对比其他孩子，发现儿子语言、动手能力较弱→_________________ →内心产生焦虑，怀疑孩子发育存在问题→_________________ →丈夫及时点拨，教育不应只关注能力，更要重视品格培养→作者开始反思自己的育儿观念→（续写）作者调整心态，重新观察孩子，发现孩子的善良与温暖→（续写）生活小事让作者彻底领悟育儿真谛 6．情感线 　　Author: relieved and satisfied→___________→doubtful and anxious→___________→reflective and calm→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：________________________________________________________________________ 　　英文：________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 　　宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句　________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 　　亲情育儿类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 　　Paragraph 1: The next week, I took my son to the playgroup again with a brand‑new mindset. 　　衔接句1——What changes did the author have? What strengths did she find in her son? ________________________________________________________________________ 　　Paragraph 2: One warm evening, a small incident made me fully understand my husband’s words. 　　衔接句2——What incident happened? What did the author realize finally? ________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 　　第一段：第二周，我带着全新的心态再次带儿子去了亲子活动班。 　　→①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 　　第二段：一个温暖的傍晚，一件小事让我彻底读懂了丈夫的话。 　　→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 4. 段落续写 　　Paragraph 1: The next week, I took my son to the playgroup again with a brand‑new mindset. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　Paragraph 2: One warm evening, a small incident made me fully understand my husband’s words.　_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　The author（爱子心切、善于反思、及时转变育儿观念的母亲）；The author’s husband（理性通透、见解深刻、重视孩子品格教育的父亲）；The author’s son（语言、动手能力发展较慢，但纯真善良、天性温暖的幼童）；Other kids（能力发展较快、各有所长的同龄孩子） 2．视角 　　第一人称 3．时空线 　　The author thought her son developed normally--- she took her son to a playgroup for the first time ---The author compared her son with peers and felt anxious--- she found her son inferior to peers in abilities ---The author doubted her son’s development and consulted her husband---the husband put forward the importance of character education ---The husband reminded her to focus on children’s character rather than abilities--- The author began to reflect on parenting 4. 细节问答 　　What did the author think of her son’s development at first? ：She believed her son developed normally and was in good condition. 　　Why did the author feel anxious in the playgroup?：She compared her son with other kids and found his language and practical abilities were weaker. 　　What were other kids able to do while her son could not?：Other kids could speak simple English words and sort puzzles and blocks, while her son could only repeat simple words and bang toys. 　　What question did the author ask her husband?：She doubted whether there was something wrong with her son’s development. 　　What is her husband’s opinion on children’s education?：Parents should pay more attention to children’s character cultivation rather than merely focusing on their abilities. 　　What did the author realize in the end?：Character education is the key to children’s growth and long-term development. 　　What does the story tell us?：True education lies in nurturing good virtues, and kindness and good character are more precious than temporary abilities. 5．情节线 　　作者原本认为十七个月大的儿子发育正常、状态良好→带儿子参加亲子活动班，接触同龄孩子→在亲子活动班对比其他孩子，发现儿子语言、动手能力较弱→攀比心理作祟，内心深陷焦虑与自我怀疑→内心产生焦虑，怀疑孩子发育存在问题→向丈夫倾诉疑惑、寻求答案→丈夫及时点拨，教育不应只关注能力，更要重视品格培养→作者开始反思自己的育儿观念→（续写）作者调整心态，重新观察孩子，发现孩子的善良与温暖→（续写）生活小事让作者彻底领悟育儿真谛 6．情感线 　　Author: relieved and satisfied→comparative and anxious→doubtful and anxious→shocked and thoughtful→reflective and calm→grateful and enlightened（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：母亲因孩子能力发展慢于同龄人而焦虑，在丈夫的点拨下幡然醒悟，明白育儿不应攀比能力，塑造善良美好的品格才是教育的核心。 　　英文：Anxious about her son’s slower development in abilities, the author was enlightened by her husband and realized that parenting focuses more on character cultivation than blind comparison of talents. 8. 句式 　　宾语从句：I believe my seventeen-month-old is doing just fine. 　　时间状语从句：As I scanned the play center, the comparison monster consumed me. 　　让步状语从句：He will most likely be able to learn various skills, but character matters more. 　　非谓语动词：Will we have installed in him the willingness to give and serve? 　　并列句：He giggles at songs, plays with toys and communicates with his parents. 9. 本文主题 　　亲情育儿类：育儿切忌盲目攀比，技能可以后天习得，善良、耐心、乐于奉献的美好品格，是孩子一生最宝贵的财富。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1 　　衔接句1——What changes did the author have? What strengths did she find in her son? 　　The author abandoned the idea of comparison and observed her son’s virtues. She found her son was kind, generous and willing to help others, which was his unique strength. Paragraph 2 　　衔接句2——What incident happened? What did the author realize finally? 　　The son comforted the author gently when she was upset. The author thoroughly understood that good character is far more important than temporary abilities in children’s growth. 三．段落续写框架 　　第一段：第二周，我带着全新的心态再次带儿子去了亲子活动班。 　　→①我不再攀比孩子的能力，专注观察他的闪光点→②面对同伴的争执，儿子主动分享玩具、待人温和→③他热心帮助他人，展现出纯粹的善良与耐心； 　　第二段：一个温暖的傍晚，一件小事让我彻底读懂了丈夫的话。 　　→①我不慎打翻水杯、心生烦躁→②儿子笨拙上前，温柔递纸巾、安抚我的情绪→③我彻底顿悟，优良品格远比一时的能力差距更加珍贵。 四、标准范文 　　The next week, I took my son to the playgroup again with a brand‑new mindset. Instead of comparing his abilities with other kids, I chose to observe his unique strengths carefully. While other kids argued over toys, my son shared his stacking rings willingly and smiled sweetly at his playmates. When a little girl accidentally dropped her toys, he bent down patiently to help pick them up. He might not speak many words or finish puzzles skillfully, but he showed surprising kindness, patience and warmth in every small move. 　　One warm evening, a small incident made me fully understand my husband’s words. I accidentally knocked over a glass of water and felt annoyed at the mess. Seeing this, my little son walked towards me clumsily. He handed me a tissue gently and patted my arm softly, as if comforting me. At that moment, my heart was filled with warmth. I finally realized that academic skills can be learned gradually with time, but good character is the most precious treasure that accompanies a child’s whole life. True parenting lies in nurturing kindness and virtue rather than blindly pursuing temporary excellence. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $