2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习 A Rescue Through the Snowstorm 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案聚焦读后续写核心考点，系统整合文本分析（角色、视角、时空线等）、情节构造、续写框架等模块，按“文本解构-情节推演-语言表达”逻辑构建知识体系，通过细节问答问题链和续写任务单设计，引导学生自主梳理情节线与情感线，形成完整的叙事思维框架。 亮点在于诊断性文本分析工具与分层续写任务设计，如通过时空线填空、情感线梳理等自测活动诊断文本理解能力，依托续写框架分步完成段落创作，培养学生的语言能力与思维品质。每个模块配有情节构造示例和反思总结表，帮助学生自主发现叙事逻辑薄弱点，教师可依据学生续写成果精准指导，有效提升复习针对性与备考实效。

　阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 　On November 29, a terrible snowstorm hit New York State Route 5. Many drivers and passengers were very afraid because they were trapped on the road. Among them, a 64‑year‑old woman’s situation was extremely urgent. She was on her way to Cleveland Clinic in Ohio for a heart transplant surgery (移植手术). At that time, she was using a battery‑powered device to keep her heart working. When the bad weather stopped her journey, her husband asked a nurse at the clinic for help. The nurse then immediately called the New York State Police. 　　The state police carried out a(n) amazing rescue. It was a difficult process with many steps, including a plane ride. First, the police took the woman to the Portland Fire Department and then to Westfield Memorial Hospital. After that, they transported her to the Jamestown Airport where the weather was better. Finally, she was flown to Cleveland Clinic by plane. 　　The police also posted a short message online. They put up some photos of cars and trucks stuck in the snow. They reminded people to stay off the roads for safety while the workers were cleaning the roads. 　　It’s really heart‑warming that the patient’s daughter left a comment to thank the police. She said words could never show how grateful her family was. She was really thankful that the police saved her mom and helped her get a chance for a new heart. 　　注意： 　　（1）所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 　　（2）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 　　Paragraph 1: Days later, the heart transplant operation was successfully completed. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　Paragraph 2: Several months afterwards, the woman and her daughter paid an in‑person visit to the police station. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　________________________________________________________ 2．视角 　　第________人称 3．时空线 　　A heavy snowstorm trapped many people on the road--- _________________ ---A sick woman was blocked on her way to receive heart transplant surgery--- _________________ ---The police launched a multi-step rescue and sent her to the hospital by plane--- _________________ ---The police posted online reminders and received thanks from the patient’s daughter 4. 细节问答 　　What caused the traffic trap on New York State Route 5? ________________________ 　　Why was the 64-year-old woman’s situation urgent? ________________________ 　　How did people ask for help finally? ________________________ 　　What did the police do to rescue the woman? ________________________ 　　What else did the police do after the rescue? ________________________ 　　How did the patient’s family feel about the rescue? ________________________ 5．情节线 　　暴风雪突袭道路，大量车辆人员被困→_________________ →一位等待心脏移植的重病老人被困，生命危急→_________________ →家人求助医护，警方紧急介入开展多层救援→_________________ →警方成功转运病人、线上发布安全提示，收获家属感恩→（续写）手术顺利完成、老人顺利康复→（续写）母女登门致谢、传递温暖 6．情感线 　　Family: terrified and desperate→___________→grateful and relieved→___________ 　　Police: responsible and brave→___________ 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：________________________________________________________________________ 　　英文：________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 ________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 　　温情救援类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 　　Paragraph 1: Days later, the heart transplant operation was successfully completed. 　　衔接：How was the woman after the operation? What did she think of the rescue? ________________________________________________________________________ 　　Paragraph 2: Several months afterwards, the woman and her daughter paid an in‑person visit to the police station. 　　衔接：What did they do and say? What theme is reflected? ________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 　　第一段：几天后，心脏移植手术顺利完成。 　　→①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 　　第二段：几个月后，这位女士和女儿亲自来到警局致谢。 　　→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 4. 段落续写 　Paragraph 1: Days later, the heart transplant operation was successfully completed. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　Paragraph 2: Several months afterwards, the woman and her daughter paid an in‑person visit to the police station. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　A 64-year-old patient（病危、急需手术的老人）；Her family（焦急无助、心怀感恩）；New York State Police（勇敢负责、不畏艰险、施救及时）；Clinic nurse（热心助人、及时求助） 2．视角 　　第三人称 3．时空线 　　A heavy snowstorm trapped many people on the road--- traffic was blocked and people fell into panic ---A sick woman was blocked on her way to receive heart transplant surgery--- her life was in danger without medical support ---The police launched a multi-step rescue and sent her to the hospital by plane--- the difficult rescue guaranteed her chance of surgery ---The police posted online reminders and received thanks from the patient’s daughter 4. 细节问答（答案） 　　What caused the traffic trap on New York State Route 5?A terrible snowstorm hit the area and blocked the road. 　　Why was the 64-year-old woman’s situation urgent? She needed a heart transplant surgery and relied on a device to keep her heart working. 　　How did people ask for help finally? The woman’s husband turned to a clinic nurse, who called the state police. 　　What did the police do to rescue the woman? They transported her through different departments and sent her to the hospital by plane. 　　What else did the police do after the rescue? They posted photos and safety reminders online. 　　How did the patient’s family feel about the rescue?They were extremely grateful to the police for saving the woman’s life. 5．情节线 　　暴风雪突袭道路，大量车辆人员被困→恶劣天气造成交通彻底中断，众人受困→一位等待心脏移植的重病老人被困，生命危急→依靠设备维持心跳，耽误手术将危及生命→家人求助医护，警方紧急介入开展多层救援→水陆空多环节接力，完成艰难生命转运→警方成功转运病人、线上发布安全提示，收获家属感恩→（续写）手术顺利完成、老人顺利康复、重获新生→（续写）母女登门致谢，感恩善意与担当，升华温情主题 6．情感线 　　Family: terrified and desperate→hopeful and relieved→grateful and relieved→sincere and moved 　　Police: responsible and brave→warm and devoted 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：一场暴雪阻断道路，病危老人手术受阻，警方不畏艰险开展接力救援，为她争取到手术机会，最终让患者重获新生，尽显人间温情与公职担当。 　　英文：Trapped by a severe snowstorm, a dying elderly woman was saved by the state police’s difficult but timely rescue, which offered her a precious chance to receive surgery and start a new life. 8. 句式重点 　　状语从句、非谓语动词、定语从句、并列句、被动语态（新闻叙事高频句式） 9. 本文主题 　　温情救援类：风雪无情人有情，责任与善意跨越困境、守护生命，平凡的坚守造就不凡的温暖。 二.情节构造 　　Paragraph 1: The woman recovered well after the successful surgery. She cherished her new life and felt extremely thankful for the police’s selfless rescue. 　　Paragraph 2: They visited the police station in person to express sincere gratitude. The touching interaction showed that responsibility and kindness can warm the world and pass on positive energy. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：几天后，心脏移植手术顺利完成。 　　→①老人手术成功、身体逐渐康复→②不再依赖设备维持心跳，重获新生→③内心满是对救援人员的感激； 第二段：几个月后，这位女士和女儿亲自来到警局致谢。 　　→①母女携带感谢信与鲜花登门道谢→②警察暖心回应坚守职责初心→③一家人深受触动，感悟善意与责任的力量。 四、标准范文 　　Days later, the heart transplant operation was successfully completed. The woman recovered steadily in the hospital with careful medical treatment. Her physical condition improved day by day, and she no longer relied on the battery-powered device to sustain her heart. Knowing that she had gained a new life thanks to the police’s timely and brave rescue, she was filled with immense gratitude. She kept telling her daughter that she would never forget those rescuers who fought against the fierce snowstorm to clear her way to survival. 　　Several months afterwards, the woman and her daughter paid an in‑person visit to the police station. They brought a carefully-written thank-you letter and a bunch of flowers to express their sincere thanks. Smiling warmly, the police officers said it was their duty to protect people’s lives. The woman held their hands tightly, tears rolling down her cheeks. This unforgettable rescue taught the whole family that kindness and responsibility can defeat severe disasters. It was the selfless help from strangers that gave her the precious chance to embrace a brand-new life. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $