Unit 3 课时4 Section 3 Writing（分层作业）英语新教材沪教版七年级上册

**基本信息** 分层清晰，从词汇句型夯实到语篇写作应用递进，适配新授课知识巩固与语言能力梯度提升 **分层设计** |层次|知识覆盖|设计特色| |----|----------|----------| |A组|核心词汇、短语|单词拼写与短语翻译，直接巩固基础语言知识| |B组|核心句型|句子翻译练习，强化句型结构应用能力| |C组|语篇写作|多情境写作任务（征文、邮件、汇报等），提升综合语言表达与思维品质|

Unit 3 The seasons 课时4 Section 3 Writing 分层作业 A组 巩固过关 C组 思维拔高 B组 能力进阶 ( 写作词汇与 article n. 文章 reason n. 原因；理由 alive adj. 有生气的；有活力的 sandcastle n. 沙堡 keep me cool 使我保持凉爽 the summer holiday 暑假 have lots of time to do sth. 有大量时间做某事 do fun things 做有趣的事 enjoy going swimming 喜欢去游泳 go running in the park 在公园跑步 exercise outdoors 在户外锻炼 eat ice cream 吃冰淇淋 on a hot day 在炎热的一天 go to the beach 去海滩 build sandcastles 堆沙堡 句型 1. I live in Guangzhou. My favourite season is summer. 我住在广州，我最喜欢的季节是夏天。 2. Everything is alive. 万物生机勃勃。 3. The trees have a lot of green leaves, and they can help keep me cool on sunny days. 树木长满绿叶，晴天它们帮我保持凉爽。 4. The best thing about summer is the summer holiday! 夏天最棒的就是暑假！ 5. It is great to exercise outdoors in summer, and it is nice to eat ice cream on a hot day. 夏天在户外锻炼很棒，大热天吃冰淇淋很惬意。 6. Summer is the best for sure! 夏天无疑是最好的！ ) 一、根据句意及中文提示写出单词 1.Please write an a________ (文章) about your favourite season. 2.Can you tell me the r________ (理由) why you like summer? 3.In spring, everything is a________ (有生气的). 4.My sister likes to build s________ (沙堡) on the beach. 5.Summer h________ (假期) is my favourite time of year. 【答案】1. article 2. reason 3. alive 4. sandcastles 5. holiday 二、短语中译英 ( 1 / 6 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.使我保持凉爽 ________________________ 2.暑假 ________________________ 3.有大量时间做某事 ________________________ 4.做有趣的事 ________________________ 5.喜欢去游泳 ________________________ 6.在公园跑步 ________________________ 7.在户外锻炼 ________________________ 8.吃冰淇淋 ________________________ 9.在炎热的一天 ________________________ 10.去海滩 ________________________ 11.堆沙堡 ________________________ 【答案】1.keep me cool 2.the summer holiday 3.have lots of time to do sth. 4.do fun things5.enjoy going swimming 6.go running in the park 7.exercise outdoors 8.eat ice cream 9.on a hot day 10.go to the beach 11.build sandcastles 句子翻译 1. 我最喜欢的季节是夏天。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】My favourite season is summer. 2. 我住在广州，我最喜欢的季节是夏天。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I live in Guangzhou. My favourite season is summer. 3. 万物生机勃勃。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Everything is alive. 4. 树木长满绿叶，晴天它们帮我保持凉爽。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The trees have a lot of green leaves, and they can help keep me cool on sunny days. 5. 夏天也有许多漂亮的花，它们闻起来很香。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】There are also many beautiful flowers in summer. They smell really nice. 6. 夏天最棒的就是暑假！ _______________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The best thing about summer is the summer holiday! 7. 我有很多时间做有趣的事。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I have lots of time to do fun things. 8. 我喜欢和朋友去游泳。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】I enjoy going swimming with my friends. 9. 夏天在户外锻炼很棒。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】It is great to exercise outdoors in summer. 10. 大热天吃冰淇淋很惬意。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】It is nice to eat ice cream on a hot day. 11. 有时候我和家人去海边，我喜欢和妹妹在那里堆沙堡。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Sometimes I go to the beach with my family. I like to build sandcastles there with my little sister. 12. 夏天无疑是最好的！ _______________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Summer is the best for sure! （一） （25-26七年级上·广东深圳·期中）假如你是李明，上个星期你所在的城市举办了主题为 “我最喜欢的季节” 的英语征文活动。请你根据下面的提示，写一篇文章进行投稿，介绍你最喜欢的季节。 内容包括： 1. 这个季节包含的月份； 2. 这个季节的天气及风景； 3. 这个季节最常见的活动。 注意： 1. 词数 80 左右 (标题已给出，不计入总词数)； 2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 My favourite season ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My favourite season My favourite season is spring. Spring is the first season in a year. It lasts from March to May. The weather gets warm. A lot of colourful flowers come out. The trees begin to turn green. The sky is blue. There are white clouds and pretty birds in the sky. What a beautiful season! In spring, it is very nice to climb mountains and go for a picnic. I like flying kites with my friends too. I love spring best. What’s your favourite season? 【详解】写作步骤    [第一步：审题立意]   确定文体：说明文，全文以一般现在时为主 明确要点：写明季节对应月份、季节天气与风景、季节常见活动 确定人称：第一人称(I\my)，身份为李明 注意事项：词数80词左右，不出现真实校名与人名，要点完整，行文流畅连贯    [第二步：构思布局]    三段式结构：    开头段：点明自己最喜欢的季节，交代该季节包含的月份 主体段：分层描写该季节的天气、自然风光，及常做的户外活动 结尾段：抒发对该季节的喜爱，简单收尾提问    [第三步：要点展开]    要点一：季节包含的月份    时间：spring/summer/fall/winter/March/April/May/June/July/August等    要点二：季节天气及风景    天气：warm/cool/sunny/soft wind等 风景景物：colourful flowers/green trees/blue sky/white clouds/birds等    要点三：季节最常见的活动    具体活动：climb mountains/go for a picnic/fly kites/go boating/make snowmen等 （二） （25-26七年级上·辽宁沈阳·期中）假设你是李辉，你的澳大利亚好友Alex给你发来一封电子邮件，请你仔细阅读这封邮件并写一封回信，内容包括： 1.介绍四季的特点以及人们的活动；2.推荐并邀请。 Dear Li Hui, How is everything? I’m planning a trip to China next year. I’m so excited! But I don’t know what the weather is like in different seasons. Could you tell me about the four seasons in your city? Which season do you think is the best for visiting? Yours, Alex 要求： 1.词数80—100词，开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 Dear Alex, Thanks for your email. I am happy to talk about the seasons in my city. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui 【答案】 参考范文 Dear Alex, Thanks for your email. I am happy to talk about the seasons in my city. There are four seasons in my city. Spring is warm and beautiful. People often go for a picnic to enjoy the flowers. Summer is hot, so swimming in the pool is very popular. Autumn is cool and comfortable. It is a good time to climb mountains and pick fruits. Winter is cold and sometimes it snows. We can make snowmen and have snowball fights. I think autumn is the best season for visiting because the weather is neither too hot nor too cold. I hope you can come to my city this autumn. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hui 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体和时态：应用文（书信），以一般现在时为主。 明确要点：1.介绍所在城市四季的特点及人们的活动；2.推荐最佳旅游季节并发出邀请。 确定人称：第一人称（I, my）和第二人称（you）。 注意事项：词数80—100，开头结尾已给出，不得出现真实信息。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 第一段（承接已给开头）：承接已给开头“Thanks for your email. I am happy to talk about the seasons in my city.”，自然过渡到对四季的介绍。 第二段（四季特点+活动）：分述春夏秋冬四个季节的天气特点和人们的活动。 第三段（推荐+邀请+结尾）：推荐最佳旅游季节，发出邀请，表达期待回复。 要点一：四季特点与活动 Spring: warm and beautiful/go for a picnic/enjoy the flowers/fly kites/take a walk in the park等 Summer: hot/go swimming/eat ice-cream/stay in air-conditioned rooms/go to the beach等 Autumn: cool and comfortable/climb mountains/pick fruits/enjoy the colorful leaves/ go hiking等 Winter: cold/make snowmen/have snowball fights/wear warm coats/stay at home等   要点二：推荐与邀请 I think autumn is the best season for visiting./The weather is neither too hot nor too cold./You can enjoy the beautiful views./I hope you can come to my city./I’m looking forward to your reply./Welcome to my hometown.等 （三） 近日，你校英语报开展主题为“Different Seasons, Different Lives”的征文活动，请你结合以下图示，写一篇短文，分享你和家人在不同季节一起常做的活动及感受，并向报社投稿。 注意事项： 1. 内容须涵盖所有提示信息，可适当发挥： 2. 语言规范，行文连贯，表达准确： 3. 词数：80(开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 Different Seasons, Different Lives Every season gives special moments to my family and me. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Different Seasons, Different Lives Every season brings special moments to my family and me. In spring, it gets warm and flowers come out. We often fly kites and go hiking outside. Summer is my favourite season. It is great to eat ice cream and go swimming. When autumn arrives, leaves turn yellow and fall down. We take walks in the park and enjoy its beautiful golden views. In cold winter, we have fun eating hot pot together. These wonderful seasonal activities make us love every moment of our life. 【详解】 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性记叙文，一般现在时为主 明确要点：描写四季特征，介绍我和家人的季节活动，表达活动带来的美好感受 确定人称：第一人称（I /my/we） 注意事项：作文不要出现真实姓名、学校信息 [第二步：构思布局]（三段式） 开头段：总起，每个季节都带给我和家人特别的时光 主体段：按春→夏→秋→冬顺序，描写季节景象 + 家人的特色活动，运用本单元核心句型 It is great to do… 结尾段：总结，四季活动让我们珍惜生活中的每一刻，升华主旨 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：四季特点与家庭活动 spring‑fly kites and go hiking；summer‑eat ice cream and go swimming；autumn‑walk in the park and enjoy golden views；winter‑eat hot pot together 要点二：表达感受：favourite, have fun, wonderful, love every moment of our life (四) （25-26七年级上·广东广州·期中）假设你将代表学校参加市里的对外宣传征文活动，主题为“你最喜爱哪个季节? ”请你根据以下思维导图的内容，用英文写一篇短文来表达你的观点，并具体描写广州在该季节中的特点，以及喜爱的原因。 要求： 1）文章必须包含题干和思维导图中所有的要点，并适当发挥； 2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分； 3）词数不少于80词（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 My Favorite Season in Guangzhou Each season brings its own charm. As for me, my favorite one in Guangzhou is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Favorite Season in Guangzhou Each season brings its own charm. As for me, my favorite one in Guangzhou is spring. The weather is mild and pleasant, making it ideal for outdoor activities. Parks and gardens are filled with blooming flowers and green trees, creating a beautiful and peaceful environment. What’s more, you can hear a number of birds singing in the tree happily. There are many different kinds of cultural events in spring, such as the Flower Fair, the International Food Festival, the Kites Flying Festival and so on. People always get together and have a lot of fun. Spring in Guangzhou is a season of beauty, culture, and joy, making it the most wonderful time of the year. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏图中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我最喜欢春天”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“天气、动植物、活动”几个方面重点介绍； 第三步，书写结语。表达“对春天的感受”。 [亮点词汇] ① a number of许多 ② different kinds of不同种类的 [高分句型] There are many different kinds of cultural events in spring, such as the Flower Fair, the International Food Festival, the Kites Flying Festival and so on.（There be 句型） （五） 假如你是李华，今天英语课上班里各小组分享了“最喜欢的季节(My favorite seasons)”，以下是你们小组成员的分享内容。请你作为小组代表做英语汇报，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。 组员 最喜欢的季节 原因 心情 Ben 春天、秋天 气候舒适、外出野餐 充满希望的、感恩的 Jenny 夏天 去海边、暑假旅游 欢乐的 Li Hua (自行补充1点) (自行补充至少2点) (自行补充1点) 写作要求：1.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内，要根据要点提示适当发挥； 2.书写规范、卷面整洁； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等真实信息，否则不予评分。 参考词汇；火锅 hotpot  感恩的 thankful Our group members have their own favourite seasons. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Our group members have their own favourite seasons. Ben likes spring and autumn because the climate is comfortable and he can go out for a picnic. In these seasons, he feels hopeful and thankful. While Jenny enjoys summer because she can go to the seaside and travel during the summer vacation. She is happy in summer. In my opinion, I like winter best. The snow-covered scenery is very beautiful. And I can eat hotpot with my family. It makes me feel warm and satisfied. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括组员名字、最喜欢的季节、原因以及心情。考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，并适当添加细节以丰富内容，同时突出写作重点，即每个组员对季节的独特感受和理由。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开头句“Our group members have their own favourite seasons.”直接点明了文章的主题，即小组成员各自最喜欢的季节，为后文的详细介绍做了铺垫； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。文章从Ben、Jenny和作者自己三个角度，分别介绍了他们最喜欢的季节、原因以及心情。对于每个组员，都按照“最喜欢的季节-原因-心情”的结构进行了详细阐述，条理清晰，易于理解； 第三步，书写结语。虽然例文中没有明确的结语句，但通过对每个组员喜好的介绍，文章自然收尾，同时通过作者对自己最喜欢季节的描述，隐含了希望与读者分享这种美好感受的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①comfortable舒适的 ②go out for a picnic外出野餐 ③hopeful and thankful充满希望的、感恩的 ④enjoy喜欢 ⑤go to the seaside去海边 [高分句型] ①Ben likes spring and autumn because the climate is comfortable and he can go out for a picnic.（“because”引导的原因状语从句） ②In my opinion, I like winter best.（插入语） $Unit 3 The seasons 课时4 Section 3 Writing 分层作业 A组 巩固过关 C组 思维拔高 B组 能力进阶 ( 写作词汇与 article n. 文章 reason n. 原因；理由 alive adj. 有生气的；有活力的 sandcastle n. 沙堡 keep me cool 使我保持凉爽 the summer holiday 暑假 have lots of time to do sth. 有大量时间做某事 do fun things 做有趣的事 enjoy going swimming 喜欢去游泳 go running in the park 在公园跑步 exercise outdoors 在户外锻炼 eat ice cream 吃冰淇淋 on a hot day 在炎热的一天 go to the beach 去海滩 build sandcastles 堆沙堡 句型 1. I live in Guangzhou. My favourite season is summer. 我住在广州，我最喜欢的季节是夏天。 2. Everything is alive. 万物生机勃勃。 3. The trees have a lot of green leaves, and they can help keep me cool on sunny days. 树木长满绿叶，晴天它们帮我保持凉爽。 4. The best thing about summer is the summer holiday! 夏天最棒的就是暑假！ 5. It is great to exercise outdoors in summer, and it is nice to eat ice cream on a hot day. 夏天在户外锻炼很棒，大热天吃冰淇淋很惬意。 6. Summer is the best for sure! 夏天无疑是最好的！ ) 一、根据句意及中文提示写出单词 1.Please write an a________ (文章) about your favourite season. 2.Can you tell me the r________ (理由) why you like summer? 3.In spring, everything is a________ (有生气的). 4.My sister likes to build s________ (沙堡) on the beach. 5.Summer h________ (假期) is my favourite time of year. 二、短语中译英 ( 1 / 6 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.使我保持凉爽 ________________________ 2.暑假 ________________________ 3.有大量时间做某事 ________________________ 4.做有趣的事 ________________________ 5.喜欢去游泳 ________________________ 6.在公园跑步 ________________________ 7.在户外锻炼 ________________________ 8.吃冰淇淋 ________________________ 9.在炎热的一天 ________________________ 10.去海滩 ________________________ 11.堆沙堡 ________________________ 句子翻译 1. 我最喜欢的季节是夏天。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 我住在广州，我最喜欢的季节是夏天。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 万物生机勃勃。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 4. 树木长满绿叶，晴天它们帮我保持凉爽。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 5. 夏天也有许多漂亮的花，它们闻起来很香。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 6. 夏天最棒的就是暑假！ _______________________________________________________________________________________ 7. 我有很多时间做有趣的事。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 我喜欢和朋友去游泳。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 夏天在户外锻炼很棒。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 10. 大热天吃冰淇淋很惬意。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 11. 有时候我和家人去海边，我喜欢和妹妹在那里堆沙堡。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 12. 夏天无疑是最好的！ _______________________________________________________________________________________ （一） （25-26七年级上·广东深圳·期中）假如你是李明，上个星期你所在的城市举办了主题为 “我最喜欢的季节” 的英语征文活动。请你根据下面的提示，写一篇文章进行投稿，介绍你最喜欢的季节。 内容包括： 1. 这个季节包含的月份； 2. 这个季节的天气及风景； 3. 这个季节最常见的活动。 注意： 1. 词数 80 左右 (标题已给出，不计入总词数)； 2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥； 3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 My favourite season ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） （25-26七年级上·辽宁沈阳·期中）假设你是李辉，你的澳大利亚好友Alex给你发来一封电子邮件，请你仔细阅读这封邮件并写一封回信，内容包括： 1.介绍四季的特点以及人们的活动；2.推荐并邀请。 Dear Li Hui, How is everything? I’m planning a trip to China next year. I’m so excited! But I don’t know what the weather is like in different seasons. Could you tell me about the four seasons in your city? Which season do you think is the best for visiting? Yours, Alex 要求： 1.词数80—100词，开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 Dear Alex, Thanks for your email. I am happy to talk about the seasons in my city. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui （三） 近日，你校英语报开展主题为“Different Seasons, Different Lives”的征文活动，请你结合以下图示，写一篇短文，分享你和家人在不同季节一起常做的活动及感受，并向报社投稿。 注意事项： 1. 内容须涵盖所有提示信息，可适当发挥： 2. 语言规范，行文连贯，表达准确： 3. 词数：80(开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 Different Seasons, Different Lives Every season gives special moments to my family and me. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (四) （25-26七年级上·广东广州·期中）假设你将代表学校参加市里的对外宣传征文活动，主题为“你最喜爱哪个季节? ”请你根据以下思维导图的内容，用英文写一篇短文来表达你的观点，并具体描写广州在该季节中的特点，以及喜爱的原因。 要求： 1）文章必须包含题干和思维导图中所有的要点，并适当发挥； 2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分； 3）词数不少于80词（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 My Favorite Season in Guangzhou Each season brings its own charm. As for me, my favorite one in Guangzhou is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （五） 假如你是李华，今天英语课上班里各小组分享了“最喜欢的季节(My favorite seasons)”，以下是你们小组成员的分享内容。请你作为小组代表做英语汇报，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。 组员 最喜欢的季节 原因 心情 Ben 春天、秋天 气候舒适、外出野餐 充满希望的、感恩的 Jenny 夏天 去海边、暑假旅游 欢乐的 Li Hua (自行补充1点) (自行补充至少2点) (自行补充1点) 写作要求：1.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内，要根据要点提示适当发挥； 2.书写规范、卷面整洁； 3.不得透露学校、姓名等真实信息，否则不予评分。 参考词汇；火锅 hotpot  感恩的 thankful Our group members have their own favourite seasons. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $