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Unit1 The Changing World
Section B How do changes influence us?
(3a-3d)
读写课公开课
单元主题范畴:人与社会&人与自我
单元主题内容:社会变迁与进步,家乡与国家发展;个人生活与自身成长变化
(2024新版)人教版 九年级(上册)
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Learning Objectives
1. 通过阅读3a范文,获取作者在school, home, study三个方面的过去与现在信息,完成3b表格;识别范文的篇章结构(总—分—总),感知used to do和现在完成时在文中的功能;概括范文的写作框架(Introduction → Body → Conclusion),整合可用于自身写作的句型表达。(学习理解)
2.分析范文的段落功能和逻辑连接方式,判断哪些表达可以迁移到自己的写作中;运用范文中的核心句型和连接词,完成3c的个人变化笔记整理;运用目标语言,口头描述自己在学校、家庭、学习等方面的变化。
(应用实践)
3.依托课文文本与课堂整理的素材表格,熟练运用今昔对比表达,以第一人称撰写介绍自身生活变化的短文; 拥抱成长带来的崭新生活,也要珍惜身边恒定不变的亲情与美好,带着爱与温暖奔赴更好的自己。(迁移创新)
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In this unit, we have seen many great changes.
Sec A 1b&1c
Sec A 3a
Sec A 4c
Sec B 1b
Sec B 2c
The world is changing. Our country is changing. Our hometown is changing.
What about you?
Have you changed?
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I used to________to primary
school.
Now I ______________to work.
walk
take the subway
I used to live in
_______________.
Now I live
in _________________.
a small house
a bigger apartment
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Past
Now
I used to keep only
________,
but now I also keep
_________.
a pet cat
a pet dog
Past
Now
I used to ___________
my study, but now I
have ___________ my
study because of my
hard work.
do badly in
improved
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Think and say
Pre-reading
Let’s travel through the time machine to see how we have changed.
Past & Now Challenge
Game Time
1. I will say a word/phrase about your life.
2. You need to answer with the sentence pattern:
"I used to … But now …"
3. Speak clearly and quickly. The first one to answer correctly wins!
1. get up 2. go to school
3. homework 4. free time
5. play outside 6. bedtime
7. food 8. hobbies
9. personality 10. friends
11. study habits 12. TV time
13. transport 14. pets
15. sports
Key words
Rules
💡 eg:I used to get up early, but now I get up a bit later.
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Listen and sing
Pre-reading
Changes all around me, day after day,
Old days fade away, new steps I take,
Though my life shifts in every single way,
Warm happy feelings always stay!
I used to be lazy, hate to write down notes,
Wasted lots of time, just played and joked.
Now I plan my time,
listen when the teacher spoke,
I make great progress,
that’s what I’ve hoped!
I walked to primary,
with my parents side by side,
The road was short, not far away to ride.
Now I take the bus,
chat with friends along the ride,
We head to junior high, joyful and bright!
Changes all around me, day after day,
Old days fade away, new steps I take!
Changes All Around Me
What aspects of changes does this song describe?
This song describes changes in
study and transport in ______
high.
junior
/ˈæspekt/ n.方面
/ˈdʒuːniə(r)/ adj. 初级的
What changes have taken place in your life since primary school?
Today we’ll read about a student’s life changes, and then write about our own!
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Changes in My Life
The text mainly talks about the writer’s life changes in many ways.
What is the passage mainly about?
Tip 1:
The title can help us get the main idea of the passage.
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Read and answer
Fast reading
1.How many paragraphs are there?
2.Underline the topic sentence.
3.What type of writing is the text?
A. A narrative (记叙文)
B. An expository writing (说明文)
C. An argumentative writing (议论文)
D. A poem (诗歌)
1
2
3
4
Four paragraphs.
Tip 2:The topic sentence usually appears at the beginning to introduce the whole text's topic.
Now that I am older, my life is different from when I was in primary school.
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Fast reading
3a
Read the text. What stays the same in the student’s life?
1. What has stayed the same in the student's life?
The feeling of love and happiness shared by his/her family has stayed the same.
2. How many changes are mentioned here? And what are they?
Tip 3:Read quickly and circle the key words.
保持不变
The way to go to school; ② The
living house and family members;
③ The way of studying.
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Careful reading
Find the changes in the past and now
描述过去(Past)
描述现在(Present)
1.How does the author organize the text?
2.Under the topic sentence of each
paragraph.
A. By giving examples.
B. By making a comparison.
C. By describing scene.
D. By listing various numbers.
also the topic sentence of the whole text.
3. What’s the structure of this
passage?
Beginning
Body:
changes about school, home and study
Ending
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Read and complete
Fast reading
3b
Complete the table with the information from the text.
My primary school was near my home, so I used to walk to school with my parents.
My junior high school is farther from home. I take a bus every day with my friends.
My family used to live in a small flat.
We live in a much larger flat.
My grandma lives with us now.
specific ways not mentioned
I have become more confident in my studies and often attend group discussions. I enjoy studying with my friends.
What topics are mentioned in each aspect?
the distance
the way to go to school
the house's size
the family member
the personality
the way of studying
Use “used to” or past tense for PAST
Use “now” or present tense for NOW
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Careful reading
Read Para.1 and fill in the blanks.
Now that I am older, my life is different from when I was in primary school. For example, my primary school was near my home, so I used to walk to school with my parents. Now my junior high school is farther from home. I take a bus every day with my friends.
Central topic: Changes of 。
going to school
School location: my home
Way to school: with parents
School location: from home
Way to school: with friends
near
walked to school
farther
take a bus
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What other aspects can we write about the changes of school
Think and answer
Write
GL takes notes.
(组长做好笔记)
Share
Think and answer questions .
(思考并回答问题)
Get ready to share.
(准备分享)
Past:Only play games after class.
Present:Join sports clubs...
After-school activities
Classrooms
Time
Past:Simple desks and blackboards.
Present:Smart screens, new desks ...
Past:It took me only 5 minutes to get to school.
Present:I need to spend 20 minutes on the bus.
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Careful reading
Read Para.2 and answer the questions.
1. Where did his family use to live?
2. What about their room now?
3. What does this sentence She has
her own room and her own TV set
mean?
4.What does the word "flat" mean in the text?
A. a single house with a garden
B. a set of rooms on one floor of a building
C. a shop
D. a classroom
5.Why does the writer feel happy now?
A. He has a new big TV.
B. He still lives in a small flat.
C. He goes to a new school.
D. He can stay with his grandma every day.
They used to live in a small flat.
They live in a much larger flat
and his grandma lives with them.
It means grandma lives with the family in the new larger flat. She can have a separate room and a TV for herself. Her living conditions become much better than before.
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Careful reading
Read Paras.3&4 and complete the following tasks.
1.What does the word "discussions" mean in the text?
A. homework B. sports games
C.talking about study together D. TV shows
2.Mark True or False.
1)The writer prefers studying alone instead of with friends. ( )
2)The writer thinks they make great progress with friends. ( )
/dɪˈskʌʃn/ n. 讨论
Tip:Find key words in the
question and match them
with the text.
F
T
3. What’s different about
his study?
He is more confident and often attend group discussions.
What does the last paragraph tell you?Use your own words.
(20词以内)
Many things change, but my family’s warm love never changes.
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Careful reading
Read the text again and answer the questions.
1. Does the writer like these changes? How do you know?
2. Has everything changed?
Yes.
By using positive words.
No, it hasn’t.
3. The writer talks about many
changes. Why does he/she write
the last paragraph?
To tell readers that although life has
changed a lot, family love always
stays the same, and raise the theme
of the passage.
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primary school 小学
junior high school 初中
senior high school 高中
as well 也用于肯定句句末
one’s own+名词 某人自己的……
get to do sth有机会做某事
become confident in
在....方面变得自信
It’s+形容词+主语从句.
……真是……
保持不变
the feeling of .....的感受
What can we learn from the passage?
Life changes a lot, but family love always stays with us.
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Post reading
Retell
Now that I am older, my life is different from when I was in primary school.
... was near my home, so I used to ... with my parents. Now ... is farther from home. I ... with my friends.
My family used to live in ..., but now we have moved to ... .
I have become ... in my studies and often ... . I enjoy ... with my friends.
My life has changed in many ways, but one thing stays the same: ... .
Loud and fluent.
(声音洪亮,复述流利)
Completely.
(描述完整)
Be confident.
(充满自信)
Checklists
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Changes make us grow, while family love never fades away
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3c
Think back to when you were in primary school. In what ways has your life changed? Make notes in a table like the one in 3b.
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3c
Think back to when you were in primary school. In what ways has your life changed? Make notes in a table like the one in 3b.
Aspect Past Present
Used to only do homework after school.
Used to live in a small flat with only 2 rooms.
Now live in a bigger apartment with my own room.
Primary school was near my home.
Now have more subjects and
join study groups.
I have become more confident in my studies and often attend group discussions. I enjoy studying with my friends.
home
school
study
Changes in my life
Used to only do homework after school
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3c
Think back to when you were in primary school. In what ways has your life changed? Make notes in a table like the one in 3b.
Aspect Past Present
Used to only do homework after school.
Changes in my life
Used to play outside with neighbours every day.
Now most neighbours are strangers.
Used to walk to school with my parents.
Now take the school bus with my classmates.
Used to play in a small playground.
Now the school has a big library and sports hall.
neighbourhood
transport
environment
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3d
Choose three changes. Write a short passage about them. End with one thing that stays the same.
home
home
school
study
neighbourhood
transport
environment
Do you know how to
write this composition?
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写作指导
话题分析
文本体裁
人称
时态
写一篇关于自己从小学到初中生活变化的短文
介绍生活变化,属于记叙文/说明文
第一人称
一般过去时(描述过去)、一般现在时/现在完成时(描述现在)
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写作思路
My changes
引入话题:我的改变
介绍变化如何形成及原因
变化带给自己的收获
My life has changed a lot ...
I used to … when I was in primary school.
Now I … because …
I started … when I entered junior high school.… is different now
....helps me.....
It also lets me....
I feel relaxed when I ......
结尾:不变的东西
No matter how my life changes, … will always be an important part of my life.
3 changes
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Useful expressions
一、开头段(引出话题,总述变化)
My life has changed a lot since I went to junior high school.
Now that I am older, my life is different from when I was in primary school.
There are many ways my life has changed over the past few years.
二、中间段(讲述具体变化、原因及感受)变化的过去与现在对比(核心句型)
I used to … when I was in primary school, but now I …
In the past, I … but now I … Before, I often …, but these days I …
变化的原因与过程
My life changed because I moved to a new house.
I started taking the bus to school when I entered Grade 7.
These changes happened little by little as I grew older.
变化带来的影响与感受
I like the new change because … One good thing about the change is that …
The new way of life helps me become more confident. I enjoy … now because it makes me …
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三、结尾段(总结变化,点明不变的事物)
These changes have made my life different and better.
Many things have changed, but one thing stays the same: …
In a word, my life has changed a lot, but the love from my family is always there.
It is clear that these changes are helping me grow.
Useful linking words
引出话题/总起 Now, …First, …To begin with, …
- 表示对比(过去 vs 现在)
but however while in the past … but now … used to … but now …
- 表示顺序/列举 Second, …Third, …What’s more, …Besides, …Also, …
- 表示原因 because ,since ,as
- 表示结果/影响 so,as a result,because of this
- 表示转折/让步 but,however,though,even though
- 总结/结尾 In a word, …All in all, …In conclusion, …That’s why …
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My life has changed a lot since I started junior high school.
First, my daily habits are different. I used to get up late in the morning, but now I get up at 6:30 every day to prepare for school. I also go to bed earlier, because I know I need more sleep for the new subjects.
Second, my hobbies have changed. I used to spend most of my free time playing computer games, but now I like reading books and playing basketball with my classmates. These activities make me feel relaxed and help me make new friends.
Third, my relationship with my classmates has changed. I used to be very quiet and shy, but now I talk more with others and take part in many class activities. I feel more outgoing and happy at school.
Many things have changed, but one thing stays the same: the love from my family. They always support me and help me when I meet problems. It makes me feel warm and brave.
Sample writing
Beginning-general introduction
Body-details about 3 changes
Ending-one thing stays the same
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Checklist 评价表
Items 评价项目 Standard Scores
标准分值 Scores
得分
内容完整 1.包含3 个不同维度的生活变化(如 school/home/study/transport 等)
2. 结尾有1 个始终不变的事物(亲情 / 友情 / 爱好等)
3.内容贴合 “过去与现在对比” 的主题,无跑题
4.词数达标(80-120 词,符合九年级要求) 5
语言标准 1. used to 结构使用正确(描述过去的状态 / 习惯)
2.时态正确(一般过去时描述过去,一般现在时描述现在)
3.拼写错误≤2 个 3
篇章结构 1.采用 “总 - 分 - 总” 结构:开头点题→中间 3 个变化→结尾升华 2.段落划分合理,逻辑清晰,对比关系明确 3
表达丰富 1.句式多样(简单句 + 并列句,如 but/and 连接)
2.词汇不重复,能使用课本相关主题词汇 2
书写规范 单词书写正确,不潦草,卷面整洁,分段清晰, 2
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假如你是李华,下周你班的英语课堂分享将以 “变化中的我们” 为主题,请你根据下面提示和要求,以 “Changes in My Life Since Junior High” 为题,用英语写一篇发言稿,与同学们分享你进入初中以来的变化。
Aspect Past Present
study lazy, didn’t like… …
thoughts cared about myself, … …
personality shy, … …
要求:
须包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥;
意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
词数 100 左右。
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Step 1: Order-outline.
Beginning
Body
Ending
I’d like to share the changes in my life since I entered junior high school.
开头:引出话题
中间:详细介绍自己各方面的变化
学习:In the past, I was lazy and didn’t like ... Now I learn to manage my time wisely and ...
思想:I used to only care about myself ... Now, I enjoy helping ...
性格:I was shy and afraid to ... Now, I have become confident and ...
结尾:总结全文,升华观点
My life has changed in many ways, but one thing has stayed the same ...
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Step 2:Wording and phrasing[遣词造句]
Beginning
1.自从上初中以来我的生活变化很大。
My life has changed a lot since junior high.
2.我想分享自进入初中以来我的生活发生的变化。
I’d like to share the changes in my life since I entered junior high school.
1.变化使我成为更好的人。
Changes make me a better person.
2.我的生活在许多方面都发生了变化,但有一件事始终未变。
My life has changed in many ways, but one thing has stayed the same.
Ending
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Step 2:Wording and phrasing[遣词造句]
Body
1.我过去熬夜玩手机游戏。现在我每天早起晨跑。 stay up
I used to stay up to play phone games. Now I get up early and go for a morning run every day.
2.过去,我很懒惰,一点儿也不喜欢做笔记。然而,现在我学会了合理规划时间,并在课堂上认真听讲。
In the past, I was lazy and didn’t like taking notes at all. However, now I learn to plan my time wisely and listen carefully in class.
3. 我曾经只顾自己,从不考虑他人。但现在,我喜欢帮助同学们解决问题。
I used to only care about myself and never thought of others. But now, I enjoy helping my classmates solve problems.
4.以前我很害羞,不敢在公众场合发言。如今我变得自信起来,敢于分享自己的想法。
I was shy and afraid to speak in public before. Now, I have become confident and dare to share my ideas.
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Possible Version
Changes in My Life Since Junior High
Good morning, everyone. I’m Li Hua. Today, I’d like to share the changes in my life since I entered junior high school.
In the past, I was lazy in my studies and didn’t like taking notes at all. However, now I learn to manage my time wisely and listen carefully in class, which helps me make great progress.Besides, I used to only care about myself and never thought of others. But now, I enjoy helping my classmates solve problems and feel happy when they get better. What’s more, I was shy and afraid to speak in public before. Now, I have become confident and dare to share my ideas in class.
My life has changed in many ways, but one thing has stayed the same: to be a better person and keep moving forward.
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ASSESSMENT(评价标准)
Structure (结构)2分 Does it have a clear beginning,body and ending?
Content(内容)4分 Does it include the main points?
Linking words(连接词)2分 Any linking words?
Grammar(语法)2分 Any mistakes (spelling or grammar)
Language(语言)4分 Any good vocabulary or sentences?
Handwriting(书写)1分 Is it clean and tidy?
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Every change helps us grow into a better version of ourselves.
每一次改变都在让我们成为更好的自己。
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Summary
Life keeps changing, skies may turn,
Old homes, new schools, we live and learn.
Very true,these memories we hold,
Ever remain, forever new.
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一、用括号内所给词的适当形式填空。
Now my junior high school is much ______________ (far) from my home than before.
One thing stays the same: the __________ (feel) of love and happiness shared by my family.
I often take part in group __________ (discuss), which helps me become more active in class.
It’s amazing how much we _____________ (achieve) together since we entered junior high.
I am glad that I get ______ (see) my grandma every day now.
farther/further
feeling
discussions
have achieved
to see
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二、根据汉语提示完成句子。
1.过去,我爷爷住在乡下。
My grandfather __________ __________ live in the countryside.
现在我的初中离家更远了。
Now my junior high school is __________ __________ home.
3.我奶奶现在也和我们住在一起。
My grandma lives with us now __________ __________.
4.我很高兴我得以更多地了解西方文化。
I am glad that I __________ __________ learn more about Western culture.
used to
farther from
as well
get to
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Must do:
Write a short paragraph (60–80 words) about your own life changes. Include at least two changes and one thing that stays the same. Use the structure “I used to… but now…”
Choose to do:
Record a 1-minute audio describing your life changes using the sentences you wrote in the paragraph.
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Assessment
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How well can you do these things? Very well OK Needs work
1. I can master the new words and phrases.
2.I can read the text Changes in My Life and pick out past & present details and use "used to", simple past and present perfect to talk about my own changes.
3.I can write a short passage about three life changes with an unchanged feeling at the end.
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Changes in my life. Now that I am holder, my life is different from when I was in primary school. For example, my primary school was near my home, so I used to walk to school with my parents. Now my junior high school is farther from home. I take a bus every day with my friends. My home has changed to my family. Used to live in a small flat, but now we have moved to a much larger one. My grandma lives with us now as well. He has her own room and her own TV SAT. I am glad that I get to see her everyday. The way I study is also different. I have become more confident in my studies and often attend group discussions. I enjoy studying with my friends. It's amazing how much we have achieved together. My life has changed in many ways, but one thing stays the same, the feeling of love and happiness shared by my family.
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