内容正文:
如果可以听到自然与人类的对话,在这片美丽的高岭上,这声音就是飞鸟的振翅,是草木的。生长。是临海的松涛。是弧面的荡漾。如今眼前的景象正如他最初时的样子,是河的。源头。云的故乡。花的世界。林的海洋。
Changes in my life. Now that I am older, my life is different from when I was in primary school. For example, my primary school was near my home, so I used to walk to school with my parents. Now my junior high school is farther from home. I take a bus every day with my friends. My home has changed to my family. Used to live in a small flat, but now we have moved to a much larger one. My grandma lives with us now as well. SHE has her own room and her own T, V set. I am glad that I get to see her everyday. The way I study is also different. I have become more confident in my studies and often attend group discussions. I enjoy studying with my friends. It's amazing how much we have achieved together. My life has changed in many ways, but one thing has stayed the same, the feeling of love and happiness shared by my family.
Unit 1
The Changing World
课型:读写课
Section B 3a-3d
Learning Objectives
通过本节课的学习,学生能够:
1.掌握本单元核心词汇,理解一般过去时、一般现在时的对比用法,掌握“I used to…”核心句型,读懂总—分—总的篇章结构,夯实单元语言基础。(学习理解)。
2.利用思维导图梳理写作思路,积累素材,模仿范文,结合个人经历完成成长变化主题写作,灵活运用所学知识,提升书面表达逻辑与规范度。(应用实践)。
3.训练构思逻辑,实现清晰的书面表达;通过对比人生不同阶段,反思自我成长历程,提升批判性思维能力。(迁移创新)。
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01
Lead in
Great changes have taken place in our environment. How about our life?
How has your life changed in the past three years?
I used to ..., but now I ....
There were few ..., but there are ...now.
The ... was/were ..., now it was/ they are ....
Free talk:
02
Pre-
writing
Skim the passage and answer the answers.
Fast reading
1. What’s the main idea
of the passage?
2. What type of writing
is the text?
It’s about changes in my life.
It’s an expository writing(说明文).
Now that I am older, my life is different from when I was in primary school. For example, my primary school was near my home, so I used to walk to school with my parents. Now my junior high school is farther from home. I take a bus every day with my friends.
Changes in My Life
My home has changed too. My family used to live in a small flat, but now we have moved to a much larger one. My grandma lives with us now as well. She has her own room and her own TV Set, I am glad that I get to see her every day.
The way I study is also different. I have become more confident in my studies and often attend group discussions. I enjoy studying with my friends. It’s amazing how much we have achieved together.
My life has changed in many ways, but one thing has stayed the same: the feeling of love and happiness shared
by my family.
Read the text. What has stayed the same in the student’s life?
3a
Changes in My Life
Now that I am older, my life is different from when I was in primary school. For example, my primary school was near my home, so I used to walk to school with my parents. Now my junior high school is farther from home. I take a bus every day with my friends.
now that意为“现在”,引导时间状语从句;也可意为“既然”,引导原因状语从句
总述
学校方面的变化
primary school
junior high school
senior high school
小学
初中
高中
be different from 与...不同
反:the same as 与...一样
My home has changed too. My family used to live in a small flat, but now we have moved to a much larger one. My grandma lives with us now as well. She has her own room and her own TV set. I am glad that I get to see her every day.
也(用于肯定句末)
家庭方面的变化
公寓
one’s own+名词
某人自己的……
get to do sth
有机会做某事
The way I study is also different. I have become more confident in my studies and often attend group discussions. I enjoy studying with my friends. It’s amazing how much we have achieved together.
My life has changed in many ways, but one thing has stayed the same: the feeling of love and happiness shared by my family.
become confident in
在……方面变得自信
学习方面的变化
总述,指出不变的东西,升华主题
It’s+形容词+主语从句.
……真是……
have a disscusion (about sth.) (就某事)进行讨论
Aspect Past Present
school
home
study
near my home
used to walk to school
farther from home
take a bus to school
used to live in a small flat
live in a much larger flat
get to see my grandma every day
not mentioned
(less confident)
become more confident
often attend group discussions
enjoy studying with friends
Complete the table with the information from the text.
3b
03
While
writing
Think back to when you were in primary school. In what ways has your life changed? Make notes in a table like the one in 3b.
home
school
study
neighbourhood
transport
environment
3c
Aspect Past Present
Step 1: 素材准备
文体:
人称:
时态:
Step 2: 审题
Choose three changes. Write a short passage about them. End with one thing that has stayed the same.
3d
说明文
第一人称和第三人称
一般过去时,
现在完成时
一般现在时
话题是“家乡和社会的变迁”,与此相关的写作一般是谈论个人生活或某地今昔对比,包括衣食住
行等。
Step 3:列提纲
How can we write an article about changes?
For example, my primary school was near my home, so I used to walk to school with my parents. Now my junior high school is farther from home. I take a bus every day with my friends.
My home has changed too. My family used to live in a small flat, but now we have moved to a much larger one. My grandma lives with us now as well. She has her own room and her own TV Set, I am glad that I get to see her every day.
The way I study is also different. I have become more confident in my studies and often attend group discussions. I enjoy studying with my friends. It’s amazing how much we have achieved together.
My life has changed in many ways, but one thing has stayed the same: the feeling of love and happiness shared by my family.
Body:
details about changes
Conclusion: express feelings
Changes in My Life
Now that I am older, my life is different from when I was in primary school.
Opening:
lead in the topic
开头:引出话题
段落布局
中间:详细介绍自己各方面的变化
结尾:总结全文,升华主题
My life is different from what it was when I was in primary school.
Although many things have changed, one thing has stayed the same: ...
住所:We moved from a... to a...
学校:I no longer... to school. My
new school is...
社区:My neighbourhood is... In
the past... But now, ...
Step 4: 积句成篇
Opening: lead in the topic
进阶版
How time flies! Almost two years has passed since I came to … I find great changes in my life.
My life has changed a lot since I left primary school. Let me share three big changes with you.
Pre-writing
Step 4:积句成篇
Now that I am a ninth-grader, my life has changed a lot since primary school, but some warm things never fade away.
Growing up means many changes, and my life has changed a lot since I was in primary school. Three of these changes have shaped me into who I am today.
Pre-writing
Step 4:积句成篇
Pre-writing
Step 4:积句成篇
Body: Details about changes
First, my school life is totally different. …
My primary school was close to my home, so I used to walk there alone every day. Now my junior high school is much farther, so I take the school bus with my classmates. On the bus, we chat and laugh, and I have made many new friends.
通过first, second, third等 来使文章结构紧凑,增强文章的逻辑,
用课文重点结构 used to do,同时搭配对比句型 ..., (but) now...来描述今夕变化。
细节支撑句能够丰富文章内容,使文章有理有据、不单调。
I used to share a bedroom with my little sister, but now I have my own room. I can read books and listen to music there quietly, and I feel more independent.
Second, my home life have changed greatly.
Pre-writing
Step 4:积句成篇
I used to be afraid to speak in class, so I never answered teachers’ questions. Now I am more confident. I like joining group discussions and sharing my ideas with my classmates.
Third, the way I study has changed a lot.
Pre-writing
Step 4:积句成篇
My parents always make my favorite food and encourage me when I am tired. This love will always be the most important thing in my life.
Although many things have changed, one thing has stayed the same:________________________.
Conclusion: express feelings
the love from my family
Pre-writing
Step 4:积句成篇
04
Post-
writing
Checklist 评价表
Items 评价项目 Standard Scores
标准分值 Scores
得分
内容完整 1.包含3 个不同维度的生活变化(如 school/home/study/transport 等)
2. 结尾有1 个始终不变的事物(亲情 / 友情 / 爱好等)
3.内容贴合 “过去与现在对比” 的主题,无跑题
4.词数达标(80-120 词,符合九年级要求) 5
语言标准 1. used to 结构使用正确(描述过去的状态 / 习惯)
2.时态正确(一般过去时描述过去,一般现在时描述现在)
3.拼写错误≤2 个 3
篇章结构 1.采用 “总 - 分 - 总” 结构:开头点题→中间 3 个变化→结尾升华 2.段落划分合理,逻辑清晰,对比关系明确 3
表达丰富 1.句式多样(简单句 + 并列句,如 but/and 连接)
2.词汇不重复,能使用课本相关主题词汇 2
书写规范 单词书写正确,不潦草,卷面整洁,分段清晰, 2
My life has changed a lot since primary school.
First, my home is bigger now. I used to live in a small flat, but now I have a bigger house with a big garden.
Second, my school is more fun. There used to be no clubs in primary school. But now I have many new clubs, such as the music club, and I can play the guitar now.
Third, I study differently. I used to do homework alone, but now I study in groups and enjoy group discussions with my friends.
One thing stays the same: the love from my family. They always support me and make me happy.
范文赏析
05
Exercise
假如你是李华,下周你班的英语课堂分享将以“变化中的我们”为主题,请你根据下面提示和要求,以“Changes in My Life Since Junior High”为题,用英语写一篇发言稿,与同学们分享你进入初中以来的变化。
Aspect Past Present
study lazy, didn’t like... ...
thoughts cared about myself, ... ...
personality shy, ... ...
要求:
1. 须包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 词数100左右。
06
Summary
Summary
New words
junior, flat, discussion, aspect
Writing
write about the changes in your life
07
Homework
Homework
Need to do:
1.Recite the key words and sentences of this lesson.
2.Write a short passage about the changes in your life.
Choose to do:
Give a presentation to your class about the differences between then and now.
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