2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---忠犬守护，温柔成长 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案聚焦读后续写核心考点，系统梳理文本分析（角色、视角、情节线、情感线）、情节逻辑构建及语言表达（句式、衔接）等要素，通过问题链（如细节问答）和任务驱动（续写框架设计）引导学生自主搭建“文本理解-情节发展-语言输出”的知识网络，体现考点梳理的系统性和层次性。 亮点在于自主诊断与思维品质培养，开篇设置文本细节问答（如“母亲为何犹豫”“罗科如何表现”）帮助学生自测文本理解，续写框架（分段落衔接句、情节发展步骤）引导学生分析逻辑、推断合理情节，提升语言能力与思维品质。每个模块配有情感线梳理表和句式仿写任务，助力学生个性化提升，教师可通过学情精准指导，支持因材施教。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 　　It was a warm and bright sunny day when my 14-year-old daughter Ava came to me with big, begging eyes. She asked me to take care of our neighbour Joyce's dog Rocco for six weeks. Joyce was leaving for Australia to visit her daughter，who had just given birth to twin babies. Without our help, Rocco, a huge, gentle German Shepherd （牧羊犬） with soft fur and bright eyes, would have to stay alone in a cold, empty kennel (犬舍), and Ava could not bear to see him lonely. 　　Ava loved Rocco deeply and often ran next door after school to play with him. However, I had been afraid of large dogs since childhood. When I was young, a big dog bit me suddenly, and that painful memory left a deep fear in my heart. Ava could not understand my nervousness. She kept saying, “Rocco is so gentle and friendly, Mum. He would never hurt anyone.” I hesitated. Ava had just moved to a new school. Surrounded by unfamiliar faces, she grew quiet, withdrawn and easily upset, and I wanted to do anything to make her feel safe and happy again. 　　Then, could I get over my lifelong fear of large dogs because of Ava？Nervous and uneasy, I still agreed to take care of Rocco for a one-week trial. 　　At first, I kept my distance from Rocco and felt nervous every time I saw him. As days went by, I walked him in the local park every morning and evening. Rocco was smart and gentle; he sensed my fear and never jumped on me. He always stayed close to Ava, quiet and loyal. Gradually, I relaxed and even enjoyed our walks. I met many friendly dog owners and talked with them, becoming more outgoing. 　　To help Ava open up more and gain confidence, I brought her walking the dog with me on purpose, yet nothing changed until that day. While we were walking, a group of fierce dogs suddenly appeared, surrounding Ava and growling（低声吼叫）angrily. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按所给开头语完成两段续写。 　　Just as the fierce dogs prepared to attack，Rocco jumped out bravely. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　This unexpected hero not only saved Ava but also changed her life greatly. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　________________________________________________________ 2．视角 　　第________人称 3．时空线 　　Ava begged Mum to take care of neighbor’s dog Rocco--- _________________ --- Mum suffered from lifelong fear of big dogs but agreed for Ava’s sake--- _________________ --- Mum gradually overcame fear and became outgoing--- _________________ --- Fierce dogs surrounded Ava and threatened her safety 4. 细节问答 　　Why did Joyce need others to take care of Rocco? ：___________________________________ 　　Why did Mum hesitate at first?：_________________________________ 　　What was wrong with Ava after moving to a new school?：________________________________________________ 　　How did Rocco behave when Mum was afraid?：__________________________________________ 　　What change happened to Mum after walking Rocco?：_____________________________________________ 　　What was Mum’s purpose of bringing Ava to walk the dog?_________________________________________________ 　　What accident happened during their walk?________________________________________________________ 　　What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 　　女儿艾娃恳求母亲代为照料邻居的狗狗罗科→_________________ →母亲自幼怕大狗，却为了内向的女儿妥协尝试→每日遛狗相处，罗科温顺体贴、治愈母亲的恐惧→_________________ →母亲刻意带女儿遛狗，希望帮女儿打开心扉、建立自信→_________________ →（续写）危急时刻罗科挺身而出，勇敢护主、驱离恶犬→（续写）这场意外彻底改变女儿，让她变得勇敢开朗、收获成长 6．情感线 　　Mum：scared and hesitant→___________→relaxed and joyful→___________ 　　Ava：lonely and withdrawn→___________→frightened and helpless→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 　　宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句　________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 　　温情成长类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Just as the fierce dogs prepared to attack，Rocco jumped out bravely. 　　衔接句1——What did Rocco do to protect Ava? What was the result? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: This unexpected hero not only saved Ava but also changed her life greatly. 　　衔接句2——What changes took place in Ava? What is the ending? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：就在恶犬准备发起攻击时，罗科勇敢地冲了出来。 　　→①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：这位意外的英雄不仅救下了艾娃，也极大地改变了她的生活。 　　→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 　　Just as the fierce dogs prepared to attack，Rocco jumped out bravely. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　This unexpected hero not only saved Ava but also changed her life greatly. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　Mum（幼时被大狗咬伤、惧怕大狗、深爱女儿、勇于突破自我的母亲）；Ava（转学后内向孤僻、善良柔软、最终勇敢蜕变的少女）；Rocco（温顺忠诚、聪慧机敏、危难护主的德国牧羊犬） 2．视角 　　第一人称 3．时空线 　　Ava begged Mum to take care of neighbor’s dog Rocco--- Joyce would go abroad and Rocco would be left alone --- Mum suffered from lifelong fear of big dogs but agreed for Ava’s sake--- Mum took Rocco for daily walks and gradually overcame fear --- Mum became more outgoing through communicating with dog owners --- Mum brought Ava to walk dogs to help her adapt to new life--- Fierce dogs surrounded Ava and threatened her safety 4. 细节问答 　　Why did Joyce need others to take care of Rocco? ：Because Joyce would leave for Australia to visit her newly-born twin grandchildren. 　　Why did Mum hesitate at first?：Because she was bitten by a big dog in childhood and had a lifelong fear of large dogs. 　　What was wrong with Ava after moving to a new school?：She felt unfamiliar with new surroundings, becoming quiet, withdrawn and easy to get upset. 　　How did Rocco behave when Mum was afraid?：He was gentle and sensitive, sensing Mum’s fear and keeping well-behaved without jumping on her. 　　What change happened to Mum after walking Rocco?：She overcame her fear of big dogs and became more outgoing by talking with other dog owners. 　　What was Mum’s purpose of bringing Ava to walk the dog?：She hoped the outdoor walks could help Ava open up and build confidence. 　　What accident happened during their walk?：A group of fierce dogs suddenly surrounded Ava and growled angrily, intending to attack her. 　　What does the story tell us?：Loyal companions bring warmth and courage, and unexpected experiences can help people break through inner barriers and achieve growth. 5．情节线 　　女儿艾娃恳求母亲代为照料邻居的狗狗罗科→邻居出国探亲，罗科无人照料、将被独自关在犬舍→母亲自幼怕大狗，却为了内向的女儿妥协尝试→每日遛狗相处，罗科温顺体贴、治愈母亲的恐惧，让母亲变得开朗→母亲刻意带女儿遛狗，希望帮女儿打开心扉、建立自信→散步途中恶犬突袭，围困艾娃、情势危急→（续写）危急时刻罗科挺身而出，勇敢护主、驱离恶犬化解危机→（续写）这场意外彻底治愈女儿的怯懦，让她变得勇敢开朗、主动社交，实现蜕变成长 6．情感线 　　Mum：scared and hesitant→relaxed and peaceful→relaxed and joyful→grateful and relieved 　　Ava：lonely and withdrawn→calm and ordinary→frightened and helpless→brave and confident（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：心怀犬类恐惧的母亲为帮助转学后内向孤僻的女儿，尝试照料温顺的牧羊犬罗科，不仅治愈了自己的心理阴影，更在一次意外危机中，见证了忠犬守护带给女儿的巨大成长与蜕变。 　　英文：In order to help her withdrawn daughter adapt to new life, a mother overcame her lifelong fear of big dogs and took care of a gentle dog. The dog’s brave protection in an emergency helped the daughter build confidence and achieve great growth. 8. 句式 　　定语从句：She asked me to take care of our neighbour Joyce's dog Rocco, who was gentle and loyal. 　　状语从句：When I was young, a big dog bit me suddenly, leaving a deep shadow in my heart. 　　非谓语动词：Surrounded by unfamiliar faces, she grew quiet and withdrawn. 　　并列句：Rocco was smart and gentle; he sensed my fear and never jumped on me. 9. 本文主题 　　温情成长类：陪伴治愈内心怯懦，善意与忠诚带来勇气，困境中的守护能够助力人成长蜕变。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Just as the fierce dogs prepared to attack，Rocco jumped out bravely. 　　衔接句1——What did Rocco do to protect Ava? What was the result? Rocco stood firmly in front of Ava, barked fiercely at the attacking dogs and finally drove them away successfully, protecting Ava from harm. Paragraph 2: This unexpected hero not only saved Ava but also changed her life greatly. 　　衔接句2——What changes took place in Ava? What is the ending? Moved by Rocco’s loyalty and bravery, Ava gradually walked out of her shell, became confident and active, and made more new friends in her new school. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：就在恶犬准备发起攻击时，罗科勇敢地冲了出来。 　　→①罗科挺身挡在艾娃身前，厉声威慑恶犬→②勇敢对峙、奋力驱赶，成功吓退所有恶犬→③危机解除，艾娃安然无恙、满心感动； 第二段：这位意外的英雄不仅救下了艾娃，也极大地改变了她的生活。 　　→①艾娃被罗科的忠诚与勇敢深深触动→②逐渐摆脱内向怯懦，主动与人交流、勇敢面对新生活→③彻底蜕变，自信开朗、拥抱崭新校园与生活。 四.段落续写 　　Just as the fierce dogs prepared to attack，Rocco jumped out bravely. He stood firmly in front of the terrified Ava, barking loudly and fiercely at the surrounding dogs. His mighty figure and intimidating roar scared the fierce dogs greatly. Instead of backing down, Rocco stepped forward continuously, forcing the aggressive dogs to retreat step by step. Soon, the pack of dogs fled in panic. Seeing everything, I breathed a huge sigh of relief and hugged my trembling daughter tightly. 　　This unexpected hero not only saved Ava but also changed her life greatly. Deeply touched by Rocco’s bravery and loyalty, Ava gradually let go of her timidity and loneliness. She became more courageous and willing to communicate with others. She started taking the initiative to make new friends at school and even shared her warm story of Rocco with her classmates. It was Rocco’s sincere companionship and brave protection that helped Ava walk out of her shell and embrace a confident new life. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $