2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---球场余温，父爱绵长 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案系统梳理了读后续写专题核心考点，涵盖情节逻辑、情感线索及语言表达，通过角色分析、时空线梳理、情节线构建等模块搭建文本解读框架，借助细节问答和任务驱动引导学生自主梳理文本内在联系，形成完整的故事分析与续写认知体系。 亮点在于自主诊断与思维品质培养，开篇设置细节问答自测文本理解，通过情节线、情感线分析任务引导学生逻辑推理，续写框架提供方法指导。每个模块配有参考答案对比反思，助力学生自主提升语言能力，教师可依据学情精准指导，有效支持因材施教。

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 　　My father has always loved playing baseball since he was a child. As an adult, the game still remained his pure pleasure. He brought me into a stadium when I was five. Years later, when I told him I had “big news”（I would soon have my first child）,his first thought was that I had got him tickets to a game. 　　At ninety‑two, dementia（痴呆） damaged his mind. I became his primary caregiver. To help him recall old memories，we often watched ball games together. These became our routine. When Dad was ninety‑six，we took him to watch a baseball game. We brought a wheelchair，though we had long resisted using one. I tried to keep him engaged，but Dad smiled halfheartedly and stared at the field, lost and far away. After the game, fans were allowed onto the field. We wheeled Dad through the crowd. People parted to let us pass, but his eyes stayed closed showing no interest. Then，we supported him to stand on his feet. As we stepped onto the field, I talked to him excitedly，pretending to replay an imagined exciting game. Dad came alive at once. He walked beside me happily. Our group had grown bigger, as more passersby joined in, clapping along. 　　When we reached the final spot on the field, Dad was wide awake, his eyes bright and eager. In his mind, he was back to the good old days of playing his favorite sport. Dad lived through one more game season before he left us peacefully. 注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 　Standing on the field, Dad stretched out his arms as if holding an invisible baseball bat. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　After Dad passed away, the baby boy was born as expected. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　________________________________________________________ 2．视角 　　第________人称 3．时空线 　　Dad loved baseball deeply since childhood and took me to watch games--- _________________ --- Dad suffered dementia at 92 and I looked after him--- _________________ --- I took 96-year-old Dad to watch a baseball game--- _________________ --- Dad regained vitality on the field and recalled old days--- _________________ --- Dad passed away peacefully after one more game season 4. 细节问答 　　What was Dad’s lifelong hobby? ：___________________________________ 　　What big news did the author have?：_________________________________ 　　What happened to Dad when he was ninety-two?：________________________________________________ 　　How did the author help Dad recall memories?：__________________________________________ 　　How did Dad feel at first when watching the game at 96?：_____________________________________________ 　　What made Dad come alive on the field?_________________________________________________ 　　What did Dad regain on the baseball field?________________________________________________________ 　　What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 　　父亲一生热爱棒球，从小带作者看球赛→_________________ →九十二岁父亲患上痴呆，作者悉心照料、陪看球赛唤醒记忆→_________________ →九十六岁父亲观赛全程神情恍惚、毫无兴致→踏上球场后被唤醒记忆，重获活力、重温青春时光→_________________ →（续写）父亲在球场尽情回味热爱的棒球岁月、收获短暂治愈→（续写）孩子出生，作者延续棒球情怀、传承父爱与温暖记忆 6．情感线 　　Dad：joyful and passionate→___________→dull and confused→___________→bright and peaceful→___________（续写） 　　Author：grateful and warm→___________→sad and worried→___________→moved and relieved→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 　　宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；独立主格　________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 　　温情亲情类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Standing on the field, Dad stretched out his arms as if holding an invisible baseball bat. 　　衔接句1——What did Dad do on the field? How did the author feel? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: After Dad passed away, the baby boy was born as expected. 　　衔接句2——What did the author do to remember Dad? What is the spiritual ending? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：站在球场上，父亲伸出双臂，仿佛握着一根无形的棒球棒。 　　→①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：父亲离世后，小男孩如期降生。 　　→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 　　Standing on the field, Dad stretched out his arms as if holding an invisible baseball bat. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　After Dad passed away, the baby boy was born as expected. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　Dad（一生热爱棒球、身患痴呆却被热爱治愈、温柔纯粹的老人）；Author（孝顺细心、珍视亲情、传承父爱的子女）；passersby（善良温暖、乐于祝福的陌生人） 2．视角 　　第一人称 3．时空线 　　Dad loved baseball deeply since childhood and took me to watch games--- Dad regarded baseball as lifelong pure pleasure --- Dad suffered dementia at 92 and I looked after him--- We watched ball games regularly to awaken his memories --- I took 96-year-old Dad to watch a baseball game--- Dad was dull and absent-minded during the game --- Dad regained vitality on the field and recalled old days--- He enjoyed one last game season --- Dad passed away peacefully 4. 细节问答 　　What was Dad’s lifelong hobby? ：Playing baseball was Dad’s lifelong and pure pleasure since childhood. 　　What big news did the author have?：The author was going to have her first child. 　　What happened to Dad when he was ninety-two?：He suffered from dementia, which damaged his mind. 　　How did the author help Dad recall memories?：The author accompanied Dad to watch baseball games regularly. 　　How did Dad feel at first when watching the game at 96?：He was dull, halfhearted, absent-minded and showed no interest. 　　What made Dad come alive on the field?：The author’s excited narration of the imagined game on the baseball field awakened him. 　　What did Dad regain on the baseball field?：He regained brightness, joy and his old memories of playing baseball in his youth. 　　What does the story tell us?：Love and persistent hobbies can heal pain and confusion, and warm family memories can be passed down forever. 5．情节线 　　父亲一生热爱棒球，从小带作者看球赛→棒球是父亲毕生纯粹的乐趣→九十二岁父亲患上痴呆，心智受损→作者贴身照料，坚持陪父亲看球赛唤醒记忆→九十六岁现场观赛，父亲全程神情恍惚、毫无兴致→踏上球场后被唤醒记忆，重获活力、重温青春棒球时光→父亲安详走完最后一个赛季、安然离世→（续写）父亲在球场复刻年少姿态，沉醉热爱、收获短暂治愈→（续写）新生命降临，作者以爱传承，让棒球与父爱记忆永续延续 6．情感线 　　Dad：joyful and passionate→confused and dull→dull and confused→bright and delighted→bright and peaceful→content and relieved（续写） 　　Author：grateful and warm→heartbroken and helpless→sad and worried→surprised and touched→moved and relieved→blessed and inheriting（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：毕生热爱棒球的父亲晚年患上痴呆，在子女的陪伴与球场的治愈下重拾青春记忆、安详离世，作者将这份热爱与温情传承给新生孩子，让父爱与美好记忆永远延续。 　　英文：The father who loved baseball all his life lost his mind due to dementia in his old age, but regained happy memories on the baseball field. After his peaceful death, the author passed on his love and warm family memories to the new-born baby. 8. 句式 　　定语从句：My father has always loved playing baseball since he was a child, which became his lifelong pure pleasure. 　　状语从句：When we stepped onto the field, I talked to him excitedly. 　　非谓语动词：I tried to keep him engaged, but he stayed lost and far away. 　　独立主格：Dad was wide awake, his eyes bright and eager. 9. 本文主题 　　温情亲情类：热爱治愈岁月，亲情抵御遗忘，美好的家庭记忆与精神可以代代传承、温暖永存。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Standing on the field, Dad stretched out his arms as if holding an invisible baseball bat. 　　衔接句1——What did Dad do on the field? How did the author feel? Dad swung his arms gently like a young player, wearing a pure and happy smile, which moved the author and surrounding onlookers deeply. Paragraph 2: After Dad passed away, the baby boy was born as expected. 　　衔接句2——What did the author do to remember Dad? What is the spiritual ending? The author named the baby after Dad and kept taking him to watch baseball games, passing down the warm memories and father’s lifelong love. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：站在球场上，父亲伸出双臂，仿佛握着一根无形的棒球棒。 　　→①父亲缓缓挥动手臂，复刻年少打球的姿态→②脸上绽放纯粹快乐的笑容，褪去痴呆的麻木→③众人动容，作者满心温暖与慰藉； 第二段：父亲离世后，小男孩如期降生。 　　→①作者以祖父之名命名孩子，寄托思念与期许→②坚持带孩子观看棒球比赛，延续父亲的热爱→③球场承载两代记忆，父爱与温情代代相传。 四.段落续写 　　Standing on the field, Dad stretched out his arms as if holding an invisible baseball bat. He swung his arms slowly and steadily, just as he did in his youthful days on the baseball field. A pure and bright smile spread over his face, completely driving away the dullness caused by dementia. The surrounding passersby watched quietly with gentle smiles. Standing beside him, I was overwhelmed by mixed emotions, feeling grateful that his lifelong passion had awakened his fading memories and brought him final peace and joy. 　　After Dad passed away, the baby boy was born as expected. I named him after my father, hoping to preserve my father’s love and spirit. I take my little son to watch baseball games every season, sitting on the stands just as I did with my father. The familiar baseball field witnesses the passing of warmth and memories. For me, baseball is no longer just a sport, but an eternal bond connecting three generations, keeping my father’s gentle love alive in every beautiful season. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $