2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---失而复得的幸福戒指 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案系统梳理了读后续写专题，将情节分析、角色情感、逻辑衔接等核心考点通过文本分析（角色、时空线、情节线等）构建知识网络，通过细节问答问题链和情节构造任务驱动，引导学生自主推导故事发展规律，形成续写的整体认知框架。 亮点在于诊断性文本分析和结构化续写框架设计，如文本分析中的细节问答帮助学生自测情节理解，续写框架引导自主设计情节发展，培养思维品质和语言能力。每个模块配有情节线梳理和情感线分析任务，帮助学生建立个性化续写思路，教师可通过学情数据精准指导，提升学生自主复习能力。

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 　　Chris experienced a moment of pain when his wedding ring slipped off into the shimmering waters of the Persian Gulf. As he dove down in search of the ring, he was met with the reality of possibly sharing this sad news with his wife, Kathy, who was waiting on the beach. 　　Kathy quickly joined Chris in the search, but no luck. As they realized the challenge was greater than anticipated, Chris’s son‑in‑law, Philip, suggested reaching out on a local website. The response was nothing short of enthusiastic. Among the offers of support, one individual generously offered to lend an underwater metal detector. 　　Two days later, Chris and Philip returned to the beach, equipped with the metal detector, determined to locate the beloved ring. They spent hours searching, but the hunt proved a failure. Just as they were about to give up hope, Adam, a former professional diver, approached them and was eager to assist. With renewed hope, Adam took one last dive with the metal detector. Moments later, the air was filled with excitement as he emerged, joyfully exclaiming, “Got it!” 　　Chris was overjoyed, promising to keep the ring close from that day forward. He later shared their story on the website. Many people called it the “Miracle in the Gulf.” This beautiful experience not only reunited Chris with his treasured ring but also served as a wonderful reminder of the goodness that exists in humanity. 注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 　Holding the ring tightly in his palm, Chris turned to thank Adam sincerely. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　Inspired by this moving experience, Chris and Kathy came up with a meaningful idea. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　________________________________________________________ 2．视角 　　第________人称 3．时空线 　　Chris lost his wedding ring in the Persian Gulf--- _________________ --- They failed to find the ring and turned to a local website for help--- _________________ --- They searched with a metal detector but got nothing--- _________________ --- Former diver Adam volunteered to help and found the ring successfully--- _________________ --- Chris shared the warm story online 4. 细节问答 　　Why did Chris feel painful at first? ：___________________________________ 　　How did they ask for help after failing to find the ring?：_________________________________ 　　What help did they get from local people?：________________________________________________ 　　What was the result of their search with the metal detector?：__________________________________________ 　　Who helped them find the ring finally?：_____________________________________________ 　　What did Chris learn from this experience?_________________________________________________ 　　What would Chris do to repay the kindness?________________________________________________________ 　　What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 　　克里斯的婚戒不慎掉入波斯湾海中→_________________ →夫妻二人搜寻无果，在当地网站求助→热心网友提供水下金属探测器→_________________ →数次搜寻无果即将放弃，前专业潜水员亚当主动帮忙→亚当成功找回珍贵婚戒，克里斯万分欣喜→_________________ →（续写）克里斯真诚致谢，感念众人善意→（续写）夫妻二人受启发，用行动传递温暖与善意 6．情感线 　　Chris：sad and upset→___________→hopeless and disappointed→___________→overjoyed and grateful→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 　　宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；倒装句　________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 　　温情善意类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Holding the ring tightly in his palm, Chris turned to thank Adam sincerely. 　　衔接句1——How did Chris thank Adam? What was Adam’s reaction? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Inspired by this moving experience, Chris and Kathy came up with a meaningful idea. 　　衔接句2——What meaningful idea did they have? What positive influence did it bring? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：克里斯紧紧攥着戒指，真诚地向亚当道谢。 　　→①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：受这段感人经历的启发，克里斯和凯西想出了一个有意义的点子。 　　→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 　　Holding the ring tightly in his palm, Chris turned to thank Adam sincerely. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　Inspired by this moving experience, Chris and Kathy came up with a meaningful idea. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　Chris（珍视婚姻、懂得感恩、传递善意的主人公）；Kathy（温柔善良、与丈夫同心的妻子）；Philip（热心主动、积极帮忙的女婿）；Adam（无私助人、不求回报的前专业潜水员）；warm-hearted strangers（慷慨热心、乐于相助的当地人） 2．视角 　　第三人称 3．时空线 　　Chris lost his wedding ring in the Persian Gulf--- He and Kathy searched for the ring in vain --- They failed to find the ring and turned to a local website for help--- Warm strangers offered useful tools and support --- They searched with a metal detector but got nothing--- They were on the verge of giving up --- Former diver Adam volunteered to help and found the ring successfully--- Chris felt extremely delighted and shared the touching story online 4. 细节问答 　　Why did Chris feel painful at first? ：Because his precious wedding ring slipped into the sea and he failed to find it. 　　How did they ask for help after failing to find the ring?：They turned to people for help on a local website. 　　What help did they get from local people?：A kind local person lent them an underwater metal detector. 　　What was the result of their search with the metal detector?：They spent hours searching but still failed to find the ring. 　　Who helped them find the ring finally?：Adam, a former professional diver, helped them find the ring at last. 　　What did Chris learn from this experience?：He realized there was great kindness and warmth existing in humanity. 　　What would Chris do to repay the kindness?：He would pass on the warmth and kindness he had received to more people. 　　What does the story tell us?：Small kindnesses can create miracles, and kindness is a warm power that can be passed on endlessly. 5．情节线 　　克里斯的婚戒不慎掉入波斯湾海中→夫妻二人下海搜寻，一无所获→搜寻难度过大，一家人在当地网站求助→热心网友借出专业水下金属探测器助力搜寻→长时间搜寻依旧失败，众人濒临放弃→前专业潜水员亚当主动伸出援手，成功找回婚戒→克里斯欣喜万分，线上分享暖心经历收获无数点赞→（续写）克里斯真诚致谢亚当，感慨人间善意→（续写）夫妻二人萌生想法，主动传递善意、回馈社会，让温暖延续 6．情感线 　　Chris：sad and upset→anxious and helpless→hopeless and disappointed→surprised and hopeful→overjoyed and grateful→warm and willing to repay（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：克里斯珍贵的婚戒意外坠入海湾，历经多次搜寻无果后，在热心网友和潜水员亚当的无偿帮助下失而复得，这段温暖的经历让夫妻二人深受触动，决心将这份善意不断传递下去。 　　英文：Chris lost his precious wedding ring in the sea and failed to find it after many attempts. Finally, with the selfless help of warm strangers and a professional diver, he got the ring back, which inspired him and his wife to pass on the kindness to others. 8. 句式 　　定语从句：As he dove down in search of the ring, he was met with the reality of possibly sharing this sad news with his wife, Kathy, who was waiting on the beach. 　　非谓语动词：Two days later, Chris and Philip returned to the beach, equipped with the metal detector. 　　状语从句：Just as they were about to give up hope, Adam approached them and offered help. 　　宾语从句：This experience served as a reminder of the goodness that exists in humanity. 9. 本文主题 　　温情善意类：人间自有真情善意，无私的帮助能创造奇迹，善意可传递、温暖可延续。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Holding the ring tightly in his palm, Chris turned to thank Adam sincerely. 　　衔接句1——How did Chris thank Adam? What was Adam’s reaction? Chris expressed sincere gratitude and intended to reward Adam, who refused any payment and said helping others made him joyful. Paragraph 2: Inspired by this moving experience, Chris and Kathy came up with a meaningful idea. 　　衔接句2——What meaningful idea did they have? What positive influence did it bring? They decided to set up a small online platform to help people in need, making the warmth and kindness spread continuously. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：克里斯紧紧攥着戒指，真诚地向亚当道谢。 　　→①克里斯万分感激，想要重金酬谢亚当→②亚当婉拒报酬，坦言助人本就是初心→③克里斯深深被这份纯粹的善意打动； 第二段：受这段感人经历的启发，克里斯和凯西想出了一个有意义的点子。 　　→①夫妻二人决定搭建线上互助平台，帮助更多有困难的人→②持续传递收获的善意，温暖更多陌生人→③小小善意汇聚成光，让海湾奇迹持续延续。 四.段落续写（标准答案） 　　Holding the ring tightly in his palm, Chris turned to thank Adam sincerely. He was extremely grateful for Adam’s selfless help and insisted on giving him some money as a reward. However, Adam refused it gently, saying that he was glad to offer a hand and helping others brought him great joy. Moved by his pure kindness, Chris was lost in thought, realizing how precious the unconditional kindness from strangers was. 　　Inspired by this moving experience, Chris and Kathy came up with a meaningful idea. They decided to launch a small online community to gather warm-hearted local people. They volunteered to help residents deal with small troubles and offered free tools and support to those in need. By spreading the kindness they had received, they hoped the “Miracle in the Gulf” would never end. Gradually, more people joined them, making their small town full of endless warmth and love. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $