2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---奔跑治愈心灵 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案聚焦读后续写专题，系统梳理情节逻辑、人物情感发展、语言表达等核心考点，通过角色分析、时空线梳理、情节线与情感线构建等模块，引导学生把握文本内在联系，形成从文本解读到情节续写的完整认知框架。 亮点在于自主诊断与分层任务设计，如“细节问答”自测环节帮助学生精准定位文本理解薄弱点，“情节构造”任务单引导学生运用思维品质分析情节发展规律，“续写框架”模块培养语言能力。参考答案中的综合概括与句式示例辅助反思总结，支持教师因材施教，有效提升学生自主复习效率与续写能力。

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 　　Amina’s lungs burned as she reached the top of the hill, her feet pounding against the unfamiliar streets of her new hometown. As she ran, memories flashed through her mind. Six months earlier,Amina abandoned her war‑torn homeland. When she finally reached this small town in a country whose language she barely spoke, everything felt strange— the smells, the sounds, even the way people smiled too quickly. That first week, she had hardly left her tiny apartment. But on the eighth day, driven by a restlessness she couldn’t shake, Amina laced up her worn running shoes and stepped outside. 　　Initially, it was an escape from the terrible memories and pitying stares of strangers. But with each day and each mile, something began to shift. The rhythmic pounding of her feet became a way to process the hurt she’d suffered and the challenges that lay ahead. Weeks later, Amina had explored every street of her new town. Some faces became familiar on her runs: the elderly man waving, the smiling mother pushing a stroller. One day, to her surprise, she found herself waving back before she even realized what she was doing. 　　Now, as Amina pushed up the last hill of her route, she realized how far she’d come. Running had become her unique way to bridge the gap between her past and her present. When she approached her building one day, she noticed Mrs. Thompson from next door holding a sign that read, “Walnut Grove Running Club.” 　　Mrs. Thompson stepped forward, smiling warmly. “Amina, we’ve seen you running every day. We wondered if you’d like to join our club.” 　　Amina’s throat tightened with excitement. She nodded, a smile spreading across her face. “Yes,” she said, her accent still thick but her voice firm. As the group cheered and welcomed her, Amina realized she had been running through more than just physical borders. With each step, she had been crossing the boundaries of fear, loneliness and hurt. 注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右； 2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 　On her first club training, Amina stood nervously among the group of runners. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　Months went by, and running continued to change Amina’s life. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　________________________________________________________ 2．视角 　　第________人称 3．时空线 　　Amina fled her war-torn homeland and settled in a new town--- _________________ --- She began running to escape painful memories and loneliness--- _________________ --- She gradually got familiar with the new environment and people--- _________________ --- Mrs. Thompson invited her to join the running club--- _________________ --- Amina accepted the invitation happily 4. 细节问答 　　Why did Amina leave her hometown? ：___________________________________ 　　How did Amina feel about the new town at first?：_________________________________ 　　What was Amina’s original purpose of running?：________________________________________________ 　　What change did running bring to Amina at first?：__________________________________________ 　　Who invited Amina to join the running club?：_____________________________________________ 　　What did Amina realize about running?_________________________________________________ 　　What would the club members do to help Amina?________________________________________________________ 　　What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 　　阿米娜逃离战乱家乡，定居陌生小镇→_________________ →为摆脱伤痛与孤独，开始每日跑步→_________________ →跑步治愈内心创伤，慢慢接纳新生活、认识新朋友→邻居汤普森夫人邀请她加入跑步俱乐部→_________________ →（续写）第一次俱乐部训练，阿米娜收获温暖与陪伴→（续写）长久坚持跑步，彻底蜕变、拥抱新生活 6．情感线 　　Amina：scared and lonely→___________→healed and peaceful→___________→excited and hopeful→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 　　宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；独立主格　________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 　　成长治愈类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: On her first club training, Amina stood nervously among the group of runners. 　　衔接句1——How did the members treat Amina? What happened during the training? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Months went by, and running continued to change Amina’s life. 　　衔接句2——What great changes took place in Amina? What is the ending? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：第一次俱乐部训练时，阿米娜紧张地站在跑步人群中。 　　→①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：数月过去，跑步持续改变着阿米娜的生活。 　　→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 　　On her first club training, Amina stood nervously among the group of runners. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　Months went by, and running continued to change Amina’s life. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　Amina（历经战乱、内心孤独、坚韧勇敢、在奔跑中自我治愈的女孩）；Mrs. Thompson（善良热心、乐于助人的邻居）；running club members（温暖友善、包容互助的陌生人） 2．视角 　　第三人称 3．时空线 　　Amina fled her war-torn homeland and settled in a new town--- She felt alienated and lonely in the strange place --- She began running to escape painful memories and loneliness--- Running relieved her pain and calmed her heart --- She gradually got familiar with the new environment and people--- She opened her heart little by little --- Mrs. Thompson invited her to join the running club--- Amina realized running helped her cross inner barriers --- Amina accepted the invitation happily 4. 细节问答 　　Why did Amina leave her hometown? ：Because her hometown was destroyed by war and she had to flee for survival. 　　How did Amina feel about the new town at first?：She felt unfamiliar, strange, lonely and isolated in the new town. 　　What was Amina’s original purpose of running?：To escape terrible war memories and the pitying stares of strangers. 　　What change did running bring to Amina at first?：It helped her deal with inner hurt, face challenges and adapt to the new life gradually. 　　Who invited Amina to join the running club?：Her kind neighbor Mrs. Thompson invited her. 　　What did Amina realize about running?：Running helped her cross not only physical streets, but also fear, loneliness and inner hurt. 　　What would the club members do to help Amina?：They would encourage and accompany her, helping her integrate into the new community. 　　What does the story tell us?：Persistent efforts and warm interpersonal bonds can heal inner trauma, help us walk out of darkness and embrace a new life. 5．情节线 　　阿米娜逃离战乱家乡，定居陌生小镇→身处异乡倍感孤独，难以适应新生活→为摆脱伤痛与孤独，开始每日跑步→奔跑治愈内心创伤，慢慢接纳新生活、主动回应陌生人善意→邻居汤普森夫人邀请她加入跑步俱乐部→阿米娜顿悟奔跑的意义，欣然接受邀请→（续写）第一次俱乐部训练，阿米娜收获陪伴与温暖、不再胆怯→（续写）长久坚持跑步，彻底走出过往阴影，融入社区、开启全新人生 6．情感线 　　Amina：scared and lonely→restless and painful→healed and peaceful→grateful and touched→excited and hopeful→confident and positive（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：历经战乱的阿米娜移居陌生小镇后孤独迷茫，通过每日奔跑治愈内心创伤、消解恐惧与孤独，最终在邻居的邀请下加入跑步俱乐部，在坚持与陪伴中彻底蜕变，拥抱崭新生活。 　　英文：Having fled from war, Amina felt lonely and alienated in a new town. She healed her inner trauma through running, and finally joined a local running club, gaining warmth and courage to embrace her brand-new life. 8. 句式 　　独立主格：Amina’s lungs burned as she reached the top of the hill, her feet pounding against the unfamiliar streets. 　　状语从句：When she finally reached this small town, everything felt strange to her. 　　非谓语动词：Driven by a restlessness she couldn’t shake, Amina stepped outside to run. 　　宾语从句：Amina realized she had been running through more than just physical borders. 　　定语从句：She settled in a small town whose language she barely spoke. 9. 本文主题 　　成长治愈类：运动治愈创伤，坚持驱散迷茫，善意与陪伴能帮助人们走出困境、重塑自我、拥抱新生。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: On her first club training, Amina stood nervously among the group of runners. 　　衔接句1——How did the members treat Amina? What happened during the training? The friendly club members offered sincere encouragement and company, running slowly to match her pace, which eased her nervousness greatly. Paragraph 2: Months went by, and running continued to change Amina’s life. 　　衔接句2——What great changes took place in Amina? What is the ending? Amina got rid of loneliness and fear, became confident and outgoing, integrated into the new community and finally healed from her past pain. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：第一次俱乐部训练时，阿米娜紧张地站在跑步人群中。 　　→①初入集体的阿米娜局促不安、缺乏自信→②俱乐部成员温柔包容，主动陪伴、配合她的节奏→③轻松温暖的氛围让她慢慢放松、敞开心扉； 第二段：数月过去，跑步持续改变着阿米娜的生活。 　　→①日复一日的奔跑治愈了她的战乱伤痛与内心孤独→②她性格变得开朗自信，熟练融入小镇生活与集体→③奔跑跨越伤痛与隔阂，让她与新生活温柔相拥。 四.段落续写 　　On her first club training, Amina stood nervously among the group of runners. Unsure of her ability and still shy of talking to strangers, she lowered her head cautiously. Noticeable of her nervousness, a girl beside her smiled and initiated a conversation, comforting her gently. All members ran at a steady pace to keep up with her instead of rushing ahead. During the run, they shared small stories of daily life, filling the journey with warmth. Gradually, Amina relaxed and enjoyed the pleasant running experience. 　　Months went by, and running continued to change Amina’s life. She no longer hid in her apartment or trapped herself in painful memories. Instead, she became confident and outgoing, actively communicating with club members and neighbors. Running not only strengthened her body but also cured her inner wounds. She finally broke free from the shadow of the war, adapted to the new life perfectly and found her sense of belonging in this strange town. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $