2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---妈妈奔跑的温柔 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案聚焦读后续写专题，系统梳理叙事逻辑、情感线索、句式运用等核心考点，通过角色分析、时空线梳理、情节线构建等模块，以问题链（如细节问答）和任务单（如情节构造）引导学生自主搭建文本分析框架，形成完整的续写思维体系。 亮点在于诊断性文本分析和分层任务设计，如通过10个细节问答诊断学生对角色、情感线的理解漏洞，结合续写框架（情节构造、段落框架）引导学生自主优化叙事逻辑，培养思维品质与语言能力。每个模块配有情感线梳理表和句式仿写任务，帮助学生建立个性化表达体系，教师可通过学生续写框架完成度精准指导，实现因材施教。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 　　My parents and I were on vacation at a Florida hotel. It was the first Easter we had ever spent away from home. Being an anxious and sensitive six-year-old, I had asked my mom several times if the Easter Bunny would be able to find us. She assured me there would be eggs. 　　On Easter morning, we found the Easter Bunny had left eggs on the hotel’s main lawn (草地) for all the kids. As I joined the other kids, I found they were much bigger than me. The hotel staff member in charge of the hunt explained the rules — only kids could pick up the eggs and adults could just provide help or encouragement. My heart raced as I watched the other kids get into a pose to start. 　　When the staff member yelled (大叫) “GO!”, the other kids ran from tree to tree looking for the plastic Easter eggs filled with candy. I ran to the closest tree but found nothing. My dad waved me on encouragingly as my mom walked behind me. When I looked across the lawn and saw others holding up eggs, I knew my chances were becoming slimmer. 　　Just then, my mom pointed to a small tree. “Look! There’s one!” A shiny blue egg was resting on the ground against the base. I looked up at her with excitement. But instead of smiling back, she was staring to the left, at a bigger kid. My mom said to me, “Run after me!” 　　I had never seen my petite (娇小的) mom run before. She had been born with weak knees and had worn special shoes to correct a foot problem. To be honest, I sometimes felt embarrassed for my mom’s “strange” figure. I still remembered the school fair where other kids pointed at her and whispered. From then on, I always begged her to stay behind me in crowded places. She never complained — she would just smile and take a step back. 注意：1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 　　Desiring to get the egg, I followed my mom’s advice. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　I held up the shiny blue egg and smiled at my mom. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　________________________________________________________ 2．视角 　　第________人称 3．时空线 　　I spent Easter vacation in a Florida hotel--- _________________ --- I joined the Easter egg hunt--- _________________ --- I failed to find eggs and felt hopeless--- _________________ --- Mom spotted a blue egg and asked me to follow her--- _________________ --- I felt embarrassed about mom’s physical condition 4. 细节问答 　　Why did the author feel anxious before the egg hunt? ：___________________________________ 　　What was the rule of the egg hunt?：_________________________________ 　　Why did the author have slim chances to get eggs?：________________________________________________ 　　What was wrong with the author’s mom?：__________________________________________ 　　Why did the author feel embarrassed about her mom?：_____________________________________________ 　　What did the mom do when she spotted a blue egg?_________________________________________________ 　　What would the mom do to help the author get the egg?________________________________________________________ 　　What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 　　作者和父母在佛罗里达酒店度过复活节→_________________ →参加酒店草地寻彩蛋活动，对手都是高大的孩子→_________________ →作者一无所获，机会渺茫→妈妈发现一枚蓝色彩蛋并让作者跟着她跑→_________________ →作者因母亲身体缺陷曾感到尴尬→（续写）母亲强忍身体不适奔跑帮作者护住彩蛋→（续写）作者幡然醒悟，读懂母爱、心生愧疚与感动 6．情感线 　　I：anxious and worried→___________→disappointed and helpless→___________→ashamed of mom→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 　　________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 　　温情成长类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Desiring to get the egg, I followed my mom’s advice.　　______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: I held up the shiny blue egg and smiled at my mom.　______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：渴望得到彩蛋，我听从了妈妈的话。 　　→①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：我举起闪亮的蓝色彩蛋，对着妈妈微笑。 　　→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 　　Desiring to get the egg, I followed my mom’s advice. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　　I held up the shiny blue egg and smiled at my mom. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 　　I（敏感自卑、后期懂事成长的小女孩）；Mom（身形娇小、身患腿疾、深爱孩子、隐忍温柔的母亲）；other kids（高大、争抢积极的孩子） 2．视角 　　第一人称 3．时空线 　　I spent Easter vacation in a Florida hotel--- I worried about no Easter eggs far from home --- I joined the Easter egg hunt--- bigger kids surrounded the lawn and competed fiercely --- I failed to find eggs and felt hopeless--- Mom spotted a shiny blue egg --- Mom asked me to follow her--- I felt embarrassed about mom’s physical condition 4. 细节问答 　　Why did the author feel anxious before the egg hunt? ：It was her first Easter away from home, and she worried the Easter Bunny couldn’t find her. 　　What was the rule of the egg hunt?：Only kids could pick up the eggs while adults could only offer help and encouragement. 　　Why did the author have slim chances to get eggs?：Other kids were much bigger and faster, and they had found many eggs quickly. 　　What was wrong with the author’s mom?：She was petite, born with weak knees and foot problems, needing special corrective shoes. 　　Why did the author feel embarrassed about her mom?：Other kids pointed at mom and whispered about her strange figure in public. 　　What did the mom do when she spotted a blue egg? She told the author to run after her to get the egg before the big kid. 　　What would the mom do to help the author get the egg? She ran with great effort despite her physical pain to guide and help the author get the egg. 　　What does the story tell us?：Parental love is selfless and great, and we should cherish our parents and stop feeling ashamed of them. 5．情节线 　　作者和父母在佛罗里达酒店度过复活节→作者因离家过节担心找不到彩蛋→参加酒店草地寻彩蛋活动，对手都是高大的孩子→比赛开始后作者一无所获，机会渺茫→妈妈发现一枚蓝色彩蛋并让作者跟着她跑→作者回忆起母亲的身体缺陷，曾为此感到尴尬→（续写）母亲强忍膝盖疼痛奋力奔跑，帮作者抢到彩蛋→（续写）作者内心深受触动，摒弃虚荣，读懂伟大的母爱，完成自我成长 6．情感线 　　I：anxious and worried→nervous and tense→disappointed and helpless→ashamed and sensitive→shocked and touched→grateful and remorseful（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 　　中文：六岁的作者在复活节寻彩蛋活动中一无所获，曾因母亲身体残疾心生自卑与尴尬，而母亲强忍身体不适奋力奔跑帮她抢到彩蛋，让作者读懂了无私的母爱，褪去虚荣、学会感恩。 　　英文：A little girl failed to find Easter eggs in a hotel hunt and once felt ashamed of her disabled mother. However, her mother ran with great pain to help her get an egg, making her realize the selfless maternal love and grow up. 8. 句式 　　状语从句：When the staff member yelled “GO!”, the other kids ran from tree to tree looking for eggs. 　　非谓语动词：I watched the other kids get into a pose to start. 　　宾语从句：I knew my chances were becoming slimmer. 　　并列句：She never complained — she would just smile and take a step back. 9. 本文主题 　　温情成长类：母爱平凡而伟大，摒弃虚荣与偏见，珍惜亲人、读懂陪伴与守护的意义。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Desiring to get the egg, I followed my mom’s advice. 　　衔接句1——What did mom do? How did I feel? Mom ignored her physical pain and ran ahead to block the big kid, guiding me to grab the blue egg successfully, which shocked me deeply. Paragraph 2: I held up the shiny blue egg and smiled at my mom. 　　衔接句2——What did I realize? What change took place in me? I noticed mom’s painful legs and felt guilty for my previous shame, understanding mom’s silent love and deciding to cherish her forever. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：渴望得到彩蛋，我听从了妈妈的话。 　　→①妈妈不顾膝盖和脚部的病痛，奋力向前奔跑→②她抢先拦住高大的孩子，指引我拿到蓝色彩蛋→③我震惊地看着气喘吁吁、强忍疼痛的妈妈； 第二段：我举起闪亮的蓝色彩蛋，对着妈妈微笑。 　　→①我看清妈妈强忍不适的模样，为之前的虚荣自卑无比愧疚→②我主动抱住妈妈，读懂了她沉默无私的爱→③小小的彩蛋，让我完成成长，懂得珍惜与感恩母爱。 四.段落续写（标准答案） 　　Desiring to get the egg, I followed my mom’s advice. Strangely, my weak-kneed mom sprinted forward with all her strength, rushing ahead of the big kid. She panted heavily, her face turning pale with obvious pain, but she still guided me to the small tree firmly. I quickly picked up the shiny blue egg before anyone else could get it. Staring at my mom’s trembling legs, I was totally stunned, feeling a sharp ache in my heart and regret for my previous silly embarrassment. 　　I held up the shiny blue egg and smiled at my mom. I walked up to her and hugged her tightly, wiping the sweat off her forehead. That day, I finally understood mom’s silent and selfless love. She never cared about her pain but always tried her best to make me happy. The once embarrassing figure in my eyes became the most beautiful and warmest sight in my heart. I would never feel ashamed of my great mom again. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $