Unit 3 Family matters 家庭经历（单元写作精练）英语外研版必修第一册

**基本信息** 聚焦家庭经历写作，构建“词汇-句型-模板-范文-练习”五级递进体系，融合基础稳分与高阶提分策略，培养语言运用与逻辑表达能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作基础|词汇10个、句型12句（含开头/中间/结尾）|主题词汇分类记忆、场景化句型应用|从核心词汇到功能句型，搭建基础表达框架| |写作模板|1个通用模板|三段式结构（引入-叙事-感悟）、时空场景填充法|模板变量与主题内容结合，实现结构化写作| |审题构思|1道原题+提纲|体裁/人称/时态三要素定位法、事件-情感双线梳理|从题目要求到内容框架，培养审题逻辑性| |范文解析|基础/进阶2篇范文|词汇替换（如tidy up→sort out）、句式升级（定语从句/非谓语）|基础版保分与进阶版提分对比，体现能力梯度| |分层练习|基础8题汉译英+6题句型仿写；提升6道期末真题|汉译英夯实基础表达、仿写强化句型迁移、真题训练实战应用|从语言要素到篇章输出，实现能力螺旋上升|

Unit 3 Family matters 家庭经历 单元写作精练 【主题】家庭经历 【写作词汇短语】 1.precious family memory 珍贵的家庭回忆 2.warm family moment 温暖的家庭时刻 3.recall /look back on 回忆；回顾 4.spend time together 共度时光 5.gather together 团聚 6.share happiness and sorrow 分享悲欢 7.cherish the memory 珍惜这份回忆 8.generation gap 代沟 9.family bond 亲情纽带 10.be filled with warmth 充满温暖 【写作句型】 开头句 1.One of my most precious family memories still stays fresh in my mind. 我一段最珍贵的家庭回忆依旧历历在目。 2.Whenever I look back on my past, a warm family memory comes to my mind. 每当我回首过往，一段温暖的家庭回忆就浮现在脑海。 3.There is a special family memory that I will never forget. 有一段特别的家庭回忆我永远不会忘记。 中间句 1.The bright moonlight streamed through the window while we sat around the table chatting happily.（环境） 皎洁的月光透过窗户洒进来，我们围坐在桌边愉快地聊天。 2.My parents smiled gently as they prepared delicious dishes for the whole family. 父母温柔地笑着，为全家人准备美味的饭菜。 3.A sense of warmth and happiness washed over me at that moment. 那一刻，一股温暖与幸福涌上我的心头。 4.We laughed and talked about interesting stories that happened in our daily life. 我们笑着，聊着日常生活里发生的趣事。 结尾句 1.This special memory teaches me the value of family love. 这段特别的回忆教会我亲情的可贵。 2.Though time flies, this warm memory remains deep in my heart. 尽管时光飞逝，这份温暖的回忆深深留在我心底。 3.It is family love that makes our life full of warmth. 正是亲情让我们的生活充满温暖。 【写作模板】 One __________ family memory always stands out in my mind. It is one of the _______________ moments in my life. The unforgettable experience took place ________（具体时间/场景，如on a cold winter evening / during last summer vacation）. The _______________ was full of _______________ on that day. My _______________ and I spent the whole afternoon/ evening _______________ together. We talked about _______________ and enjoyed every minute of it. A strong feeling of _______________ came over me. I truly realize that _______________ is the most precious treasure in my life. Li Hua 【原题呈现】 假定你是李华，你在整理书架时偶尔看到妈妈曾经写给你的一些卡片。记得你刚进入高中时，你的学习压力很大，这些卡片是妈妈为了鼓励并帮助你走出困境，让你学会快乐的见证。请把这段美好回忆分享给你的朋友 Tom。 【审题构思】 1. 核心要素 (1)体裁：私人书信（给朋友Tom的分享信，语气真诚、亲切、自然） (2)人称：第一人称 I 为主，第二人称 you 为辅 (3)时态：一般现在时（开篇分享、感悟）+ 一般过去时（回忆往事） 2. 三段式标准写作提纲 第一段（开篇引入）：点明事由，整理书架发现妈妈的旧卡片，引出美好回忆，开启分享。 第二段（主体叙事）：回忆刚入高中的状态（学习压力大、焦虑迷茫），讲述妈妈用手写卡片鼓励自己、陪伴自己走出困境，学会乐观面对生活。 第三段（结尾感悟）：表达对妈妈的感恩，点明卡片的意义（成长见证、温暖力量），收尾抒情。 【范文呈现】 一、基础标准版范文（保底得分，适配高一基础水平） Dear Tom, How is everything going? Today, while tidying up my bookshelf, I accidentally found some old cards my mom wrote to me. Seeing these warm little cards, sweet old memories flooded back, and I’d like to share this story with you. When I first entered senior high school, I suffered from great study pressure. Difficult subjects and endless homework made me tired and anxious, and I even lost confidence in my studies. Noticing my bad state, my mom never blamed me. Instead, she left small cards with warm encouraging words on my desk every day. These simple words cheered me up gradually, helped me get through the tough time and taught me to face difficulties bravely. These plain cards are precious witnesses of my growth and my mother’s deep love. Thanks to her constant encouragement, I finally learned to stay positive and enjoy my school life. Whenever I see them, I feel warm and grateful for my mom’s gentle company. Yours, Li Hua 二、高分进阶版范文（培优提分，适配高一拔高水平） Dear Tom, Hope you’re doing well recently. While sorting out my bookshelf today, I stumbled upon some old cards from my mom, which instantly brought back my precious high school memories. I’m eager to share this touching experience with you. When I stepped into senior high school, I was overwhelmed by heavy academic pressure. Challenging courses and tight schedules made it hard for me to adapt, leaving me anxious and frustrated. Sensing my stress, my mom comforted me in her gentle way. She kept writing heartfelt encouraging words on cards and leaving them for me. These warm words were like sunshine, motivating me to move forward and pull through the tough period. These ordinary cards carry my mom’s selfless love and witness my growth. They have taught me to be optimistic in face of difficulties. This precious experience always warms my heart and remains a valuable treasure in my life. Yours, Li Hua 【亮点解析】 1. 基础版亮点（稳分优势） 词汇：用词简洁准确，如tidy up, accidentally, pressure, encourage, cheer up, witness，符合基础得分要求。 句式：以简单句、并列句为主，搭配基础状语从句、宾语从句，句式工整流畅，逻辑清晰，语法零失误，适配考场基础评分标准。 逻辑：严格遵循三段式结构，叙事完整，从发现卡片→回忆往事→抒发感悟，层层递进，条理清晰。 2. 进阶版亮点（提分核心） 高级词汇替换：摒弃基础通用词，升级高阶词汇，提升文采。 tidy up → sort out；accidentally → stumble upon；study pressure → academic pressure；hard time → tough period；encourage → motivate 丰富句式升级： (1) 运用非谓语动词作状语：Faced with challenging courses and tight study schedules, I struggled to adapt to the new school life. (2) 巧用定语从句：I stumbled upon a pile of old cards written by my mother, which instantly brought back precious memories. (3) 高级句型加持：be overwhelmed by（被……压垮）、pull through（渡过难关）、act as a ray of sunshine（化作一束光），句式多样不单调。 情感与表达升华：用词细腻生动，增加 heartfelt, selfless love, precious treasure, optimistic 等情感词汇，摆脱流水账叙事，立意更深刻，贴合高分作文“语言优美、情感真挚”的评分要点。 【基础必做】 一、汉译英（主题要点翻译） 1. 一次难忘的家庭回忆_____________________________________ 2. 和家人共度的美好时光_____________________________________ 3. 周末和父母一起做饭_____________________________________ 4. 奶奶给我讲有趣的故事。_____________________________________ 5. 那次经历深深地留在我的脑海里. __________________________________________________________________________ 6. 我感受到家庭的温暖。__________________________________________________________________________ 7. 虽然过去了很久，我仍然记得这件事。__________________________________________________________________________ 8. 那是我最珍贵的记忆。__________________________________________________________________________ 二、句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） 句型 1（回忆场景：It was a time when… 那是一段…… 的时光） 例句：It was a time when we often got together and laughed happily. 翻译：那是一段我们经常团聚、开怀大笑的时光。 👉仿写（完成句子） 1.It was a time when_______________________________.（那是我经常和爷爷去公园的时光） 2.It was a time when_______________________________.（那是全家人一起吃晚饭的时光） 句型 2（回忆感受：What I remember most is that… 我记得最清楚的是……） 例句：What I remember most is that my mom prepared delicious food for us. 翻译：我记得最清楚的是妈妈为我们准备了美味的食物。 👉仿写（完成句子） 1.What I remember most is that_______________________________.（爸爸给我买了一个生日礼物） 2.What I remember most is that_______________________________.（我们在夜里一起看星星） 句型 3（抒发感悟：This memory reminds me that… 这份回忆提醒我……） 例句：This memory reminds me that family love is the most valuable thing in life. 翻译：这份回忆提醒我，亲情是生命中最珍贵的东西。 👉仿写（完成句子） 1.This memory reminds me that_______________________________.（家人的陪伴很重要） 2.This memory reminds me that_______________________________.（我应该多花时间陪伴家人） 【提升必做】 1．（25-26高一上·山东淄博·期末） 你校英文报正在举办“A Warm Experience in My Family”主题征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： (1)你的经历； (2)你的感想。 注意： (1)写作词数应为100个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 A Warm Experience in My Family ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（24-25高一上·天津·期末） 假设你是晨光中学的李津，你校英文报最近开设了“Family Ties”栏目(column)，该栏目关注家庭故事、亲情纽带等。请你写一篇短文向该栏目投稿，讲述一件令你难忘的家庭亲情往事，内容包括： (1) 描述事情经过； (2) 表达感受和希望。 注意： (1) 词数不少于100； (2) 可以适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； (3) 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Editor, I’m Li Jin from Chenguang Middle School, and _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Jin 3．（25-26高一上·河南郑州·期末） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Mary and her parents were downstairs in the living room, anxiously watching the rain pour down outside. It had been raining continuously for three days, and the storm showed no sign of letting up. The wind howled fiercely, causing the trees to sway violently, while the rain hammered against the windows and roof. Mary had never seen a storm this bad. It was making her nervous. As they listened to the weather report on the radio, Mary’s heart raced with fear. The report confirmed their worst fears — the city was already flooded. Mary felt a surge of panic and said suddenly, “Mum, Dad, I think we should leave here right away.” “No, it’s too late.” said Dad, shaking his head. “We can drive our car through the floodwater. Let’s leave. I’m really scared,” cried Mary. “We can’t do that, honey,” explained Mum. “The water could wash the car away.” Mary walked to the door. She could hear the rain pounding against it and she couldn't resist the urge to see for herself how bad the flooding was. “Don’t open the door,” shouted Mum and Dad at the same time, “The water could flood in.” Dad moved the dinner table against the door, in case the floodwater forced the door open. Mum gestured for Mary to sit on the sofa. “Mary, don’t worry. Everything’s going to be OK,” she said softly, trying her best to comfort her daughter. Despite her comforting tone, Mary could sense the worry in her mother’s voice. Without saying a single word, Dad walked to the sofa and sat down. He wrapped his arms tightly around his wife and daughter, trying to provide comfort and security in the midst of the storm. The sudden silence in the house seemed to make the wind and rain outside even more frightening. As the storm raged on, a sense of anxiety lingered in the air. 注意： 1．续写词数应为50左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 All of a sudden, the floodwater forced the door open. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Being upstairs, they breathed a sigh of relief. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（25-26高一上·河南商丘·期末） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 In Thomas’s poor family, his mum’s skillful hands gave every old thing a new life. Old shirts became tablecloths; worn socks were carefully mended. Thomas’s schoolbag was no exception — its holes being patched (补) with cloth. His mum would also pick the best parts from worn-out jeans and sew them into oven mitts (隔热手套) for the weekend market, or offer repair services to the shopkeeper down the street in exchange for what they needed. One Thursday, Thomas with his mum walked past Mr. Henderson’s shop. On the shelf hung a green schoolbag. It was not bright, but it looked strong — thick cloth, wide soft straps (背带). Thomas slowed his steps, his eyes staying on it for a long time. His mum noticed. She glanced (瞥) from the bag to the price, then gently touched Thomas’s back to guide him along. “Come on, love,” she said softly. “We have something important to do.” Thomas nodded, falling into step beside her. He didn’t ask. He already knew the answer. Still, for the following days Thomas passed the shop, hoping the green schoolbag might be gone — taken by someone else so he could stop thinking about it. But it stayed on the shelf, and he kept silent. The morning of his birthday came. Thomas woke up early with a quiet hope that the day might feel different. But there were no balloons, and no wrapped box (礼品盒) waiting on the table. The small hope quietly faded (逐渐消失). He finished his breakfast, trying not to mind. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As Thomas opened the cupboard to get his old schoolbag, he caught his breath. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With the new schoolbag on his back, Thomas asked, “Mum! How did you pay for it?” ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（25-26高一上·山东日照·期末） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “Ruth! Are you up?” “Yes, Momma!” I jumped out of bed, trembling (颤抖) as the cold November air hit me. I hurried downstairs, imagining a hot breakfast, but the kitchen was freezing. The stove was cold, and the woodshed door hung open. Something was wrong. Momma rushed in with firewood, her expression tense. “Daddy’s sick,” she said, grasping a chair for support. “He has pneumonia (肺炎)” she whispered. Fear welled up in my heart, but she explained the doctor’s orders: rest, warmth, and medicine were all we could give. Seeing Momma had to take care of both me and Daddy, I desperately wanted to help, but was always told I was “too little.” Long weeks passed before Daddy was finally well enough for me to see him. One night, just before Christmas, Momma looked serious. “Ruth,” she began gently, “with doctor’s bills and no work, our money is almost gone. There won’t be any money for presents this year.” I hugged her tightly and said I didn’t care, but alone in bed, hot tears came. I had wished for a beautiful Barbie doll, just like the ones my classmates had. I felt disappointed at first, but then ashamed-knowing other children had far less. Christmas morning was bitterly cold. My room felt icy. Trembling in my bed, I felt sorry for myself: no heat, and no presents. Then I thought of Momma’s tireless work. Red-faced with guilt (愧疚), I dressed and hurried downstairs. Daddy sat by the crackling fire. “Merry Christmas!” he said, smiling weakly. “Merry Christmas, Daddy!” I responded, forcing a smile. 注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 But as I turned, a gift box under the Christmas tree caught my eye. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Holding the handmade doll, I hugged Momma tightly. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（25-26高一上·湖北十堰·期末） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Covid-19 saw us in remote school mode for almost half a year in 2020. The resulting difficulties made it impossible to go and visit family and friends as normal. For months, I did not see my grandma; nor did I make a call to her. I did not believe I could relate well to her because of her advanced age. “Peter, your gran won’t be around forever,” Mum said one day. Please give her a call today. She misses you a lot.” To be honest, calling Gran was the last thing I would do. That evening, urged by Mother, very unwillingly, I picked up the phone receiver and slowly dialled her number on the landline. Meanwhile I racked my brains, trying to brainstorm some topics Gran might be interested in. but I ended up with a blank mind. What could I possibly talk about with an old lady who is 55 years my senior? My call got through. A familiar female voice came over from the other end. It was Gran greeting me there in her gentle manner of speaking. What I did not expect at the time was that a phone call I had discounted as worthless was to make a world of difference to me. It would open the door not only to a new friendship across generations but to a fresh attitude towards life and Gran as well. Throughout the call, Gran did most of the talking. It seemed as if the elderly lady had a million questions on her mind. My worry before the call about having nothing to say was totally unnecessary. Gran asked me about school, meals, fashion, romance and even gaming. Before I knew it, half an hour had passed. 注意： (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Before I hung up, Gran invited me to go and have lunch with her the next Sunday . ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Over the meal, Gran shared with me a lot of stories about her retired life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【拓展选做】 1．（25-26高一上·云南大理·期末） 读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Ever since my Dad died, my life has changed. My Mom is always really busy with her work, and she doesn’t get to spend any time with me anymore. I have to go to a childcare center every day after school while I wait for Mom’s work to be done and I can have dinner with her, and she has to work on Sundays. One day, at dinner time, I asked Mom if we could go to the fair (集市) together. “Can we pleeeeaaase go to the fair this Sunday?” I begged. “Lilly, you know I have to work that day.” Mom told me. “Yes, I know… But we never get to spend time together anymore! Can’t you take Sunday off?” I asked. Mom placed a plate in front of me and kissed my head. I smiled and licked my lips as she had given me a piece of cherry pie. Then I looked into my Mom’s brown eyes and asked one last time, “Can’t you take Sunday off?” Mom raised one eyebrow and said, “We’ll see.” “Okay.” I said with a grin, “We’ll see.” It was Sunday morning, and I ran to see if Mom was awake. She was making pancakes and coffee in the kitchen with her work clothes on. “Mom, why are you in your work clothes?” I asked. Mom bent down next to me and put her hand on my shoulder, “Sorry, Lilly! I have to go to work today.” Tears streamed down my face as I yelled, “You never have time for me anymore!” And I ran into my room and slammed the door. As I was crying on my bed, I could hear Mom talk on the phone, “Hi, Charlie. I have work today and Lilly is in a bad mood. I was wondering if you could come over and watch her for a few hours? Great! Thanks so much! See you soon.” A few hours later, Charlie came over and Mom left. I heard him knock on my bedroom door and say, “Lilly, your Mom made pancakes. Do you want to come out and have some?” “No!” I screamed. “Aw, come on... Your Mom told me why you’re upset.” Charlie muffled. “She did?” “Yeah. And she left a note for you.” “She did?” I jumped off my bed and opened the door. Charlie led me to the kitchen table where Mom left me a plate of pancakes and a note. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I grabbed the note and read it. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ “What’s the plan?” I asked Mom again eagerly. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（25-26高一上·甘肃定西·期末） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 After graduating from college, the 21-year-old Alison moved back in with her parents and got her full-time job. One evening, she overheard her parents’ quarrel. “I feel I have been taken for granted for years,” said Alison’s mom angrily. “But I am always busy and struggling to support our family. When getting home, I am very tired,” said Alison’s father emotionally. What made Alison extremely sad was that she noticed her parents didn’t say a word to each other for a few days after that quarrel. Alison knew the importance of a good relationship in a family and that the little gestures of love and appreciation that used to be a regular part of her parents’ relationship had disappeared, so she said to herself, “Mom is getting neglected (忽略) by Dad, I should get involved in their relationship to make things better.” One Sunday afternoon, while walking past the local market, Alison happened to see a bouquet of roses on sale. They immediately reminded her of how long it had been since her mom received flowers the last time. An idea came to her suddenly, “A small, anonymous (匿名的) gesture might be what my mom needs to feel special again. And maybe it would spark something that would bring their relationship back to normal.” Without any delay, Alison bought the roses, wrote a simple note, and left them on their doorstep, signing it with “Your Secret Admirer”. Later, what started as a single bouquet quickly turned into a full-on event! Week after week, Alison left chocolates, handwritten letters, and little gifts on the doorstep, all in the name of the same admirer. The other evening, after yet another delivery from the “secret admirer”, Alison came home to find her parents sitting at the living room table. They looked very serious and confused. Mom’s hands were trembling slightly, and Dad stared at what Mom held. The atmosphere in the room was so strange. 注意： (1) 续写词数应为150个左右； (2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 “Alison, can you sit down for a moment?” Mom asked, eyes filled with excitement. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When hearing Alison’s explanation, Dad reached out to take her hand. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（25-26高一上·四川泸州·期末） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The Curious Boy and His Father’s Lesson When David was in primary school, his favorite thing was to tear (拆) toys. His room looked like a science lab. There were toy pieces in cardboard boxes, and cars that were only half put together everywhere. There were also his simple drawings of machines on the walls, and a small toolbox, which was his most valuable thing, on the study table. His mother was often angry about the mess, saying that David was just making a big mess and not really learning anything. But his father would just smile and say, “He’s learning.” One afternoon, his father came home early and found David sitting with his legs crossed on the living-room ground. Around him were parts of a brand-new toy airplane, an expensive birthday gift that had only lasted less than six hours. The plane was in many pieces. David was really focused on looking at a small motor (电动机) , turning it slowly. He didn’t notice his father coming. At first, his father got really mad. His face turned as red as a ripe tomato, and the lines on his forehead stood out. He was about to shout at David really hard for tearing such an expensive gift. But then he saw how concentrated David was. David frowned (皱眉), just like when he was trying to solve difficult math problems. His father took a deep breath to calm down, and then he knelt down gently next to David and calmly asked, “Why did you take it apart? You know it was a very valuable present.” David hesitated, with his eyes looking down, and replied, “I wanted to see how it works,” waiting nervously for the punishment. 注意： （1）续写词数应为150左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Surprisingly, his father relaxed with a gentle smile. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The next day, David took the plane to the park with his father. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2025·全国一卷·高考真题） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks, while my job was to have the backyard in order. There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play. There was just one thing I hadn’t counted on: My brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire. Though friendly, he could easily knock over my niece’s small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter. So, when my brother showed up, I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside. My plan was working out just fine. Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors. It was an awkward moment. I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn’t happy with driving home with a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue. A few days passed, and I hadn’t heard anything from my brother. I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again. His reply came as a surprise — a shock, actually: “Not a chance.” Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted. After all, I had left him little choice. Well, he’ll get over it, I reasoned. Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience (良心) kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going. 注意: (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I realized it was me who was at fault. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 1 / 14 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 3 Family matters 家庭经历 单元写作精练 【主题】家庭经历 【写作词汇短语】 1.precious family memory 珍贵的家庭回忆 2.warm family moment 温暖的家庭时刻 3.recall /look back on 回忆；回顾 4.spend time together 共度时光 5.gather together 团聚 6.share happiness and sorrow 分享悲欢 7.cherish the memory 珍惜这份回忆 8.generation gap 代沟 9.family bond 亲情纽带 10.be filled with warmth 充满温暖 【写作句型】 开头句 1.One of my most precious family memories still stays fresh in my mind. 我一段最珍贵的家庭回忆依旧历历在目。 2.Whenever I look back on my past, a warm family memory comes to my mind. 每当我回首过往，一段温暖的家庭回忆就浮现在脑海。 3.There is a special family memory that I will never forget. 有一段特别的家庭回忆我永远不会忘记。 中间句 1.The bright moonlight streamed through the window while we sat around the table chatting happily.（环境） 皎洁的月光透过窗户洒进来，我们围坐在桌边愉快地聊天。 2.My parents smiled gently as they prepared delicious dishes for the whole family. 父母温柔地笑着，为全家人准备美味的饭菜。 3.A sense of warmth and happiness washed over me at that moment. 那一刻，一股温暖与幸福涌上我的心头。 4.We laughed and talked about interesting stories that happened in our daily life. 我们笑着，聊着日常生活里发生的趣事。 结尾句 1.This special memory teaches me the value of family love. 这段特别的回忆教会我亲情的可贵。 2.Though time flies, this warm memory remains deep in my heart. 尽管时光飞逝，这份温暖的回忆深深留在我心底。 3.It is family love that makes our life full of warmth. 正是亲情让我们的生活充满温暖。 【写作模板】 One __________ family memory always stands out in my mind. It is one of the _______________ moments in my life. The unforgettable experience took place ________（具体时间/场景，如on a cold winter evening / during last summer vacation）. The _______________ was full of _______________ on that day. My _______________ and I spent the whole afternoon/ evening _______________ together. We talked about _______________ and enjoyed every minute of it. A strong feeling of _______________ came over me. I truly realize that _______________ is the most precious treasure in my life. Li Hua 【原题呈现】 假定你是李华，你在整理书架时偶尔看到妈妈曾经写给你的一些卡片。记得你刚进入高中时，你的学习压力很大，这些卡片是妈妈为了鼓励并帮助你走出困境，让你学会快乐的见证。请把这段美好回忆分享给你的朋友 Tom。 【审题构思】 1. 核心要素 (1)体裁：私人书信（给朋友Tom的分享信，语气真诚、亲切、自然） (2)人称：第一人称 I 为主，第二人称 you 为辅 (3)时态：一般现在时（开篇分享、感悟）+ 一般过去时（回忆往事） 2. 三段式标准写作提纲 第一段（开篇引入）：点明事由，整理书架发现妈妈的旧卡片，引出美好回忆，开启分享。 第二段（主体叙事）：回忆刚入高中的状态（学习压力大、焦虑迷茫），讲述妈妈用手写卡片鼓励自己、陪伴自己走出困境，学会乐观面对生活。 第三段（结尾感悟）：表达对妈妈的感恩，点明卡片的意义（成长见证、温暖力量），收尾抒情。 【范文呈现】 一、基础标准版范文（保底得分，适配高一基础水平） Dear Tom, How is everything going? Today, while tidying up my bookshelf, I accidentally found some old cards my mom wrote to me. Seeing these warm little cards, sweet old memories flooded back, and I’d like to share this story with you. When I first entered senior high school, I suffered from great study pressure. Difficult subjects and endless homework made me tired and anxious, and I even lost confidence in my studies. Noticing my bad state, my mom never blamed me. Instead, she left small cards with warm encouraging words on my desk every day. These simple words cheered me up gradually, helped me get through the tough time and taught me to face difficulties bravely. These plain cards are precious witnesses of my growth and my mother’s deep love. Thanks to her constant encouragement, I finally learned to stay positive and enjoy my school life. Whenever I see them, I feel warm and grateful for my mom’s gentle company. Yours, Li Hua 二、高分进阶版范文（培优提分，适配高一拔高水平） Dear Tom, Hope you’re doing well recently. While sorting out my bookshelf today, I stumbled upon some old cards from my mom, which instantly brought back my precious high school memories. I’m eager to share this touching experience with you. When I stepped into senior high school, I was overwhelmed by heavy academic pressure. Challenging courses and tight schedules made it hard for me to adapt, leaving me anxious and frustrated. Sensing my stress, my mom comforted me in her gentle way. She kept writing heartfelt encouraging words on cards and leaving them for me. These warm words were like sunshine, motivating me to move forward and pull through the tough period. These ordinary cards carry my mom’s selfless love and witness my growth. They have taught me to be optimistic in face of difficulties. This precious experience always warms my heart and remains a valuable treasure in my life. Yours, Li Hua 【亮点解析】 1. 基础版亮点（稳分优势） 词汇：用词简洁准确，如tidy up, accidentally, pressure, encourage, cheer up, witness，符合基础得分要求。 句式：以简单句、并列句为主，搭配基础状语从句、宾语从句，句式工整流畅，逻辑清晰，语法零失误，适配考场基础评分标准。 逻辑：严格遵循三段式结构，叙事完整，从发现卡片→回忆往事→抒发感悟，层层递进，条理清晰。 2. 进阶版亮点（提分核心） 高级词汇替换：摒弃基础通用词，升级高阶词汇，提升文采。 tidy up → sort out；accidentally → stumble upon；study pressure → academic pressure；hard time → tough period；encourage → motivate 丰富句式升级： (1) 运用非谓语动词作状语：Faced with challenging courses and tight study schedules, I struggled to adapt to the new school life. (2) 巧用定语从句：I stumbled upon a pile of old cards written by my mother, which instantly brought back precious memories. (3) 高级句型加持：be overwhelmed by（被……压垮）、pull through（渡过难关）、act as a ray of sunshine（化作一束光），句式多样不单调。 情感与表达升华：用词细腻生动，增加 heartfelt, selfless love, precious treasure, optimistic 等情感词汇，摆脱流水账叙事，立意更深刻，贴合高分作文“语言优美、情感真挚”的评分要点。 【基础必做】 一、汉译英（主题要点翻译） 1. 一次难忘的家庭回忆_____________________________________ 2. 和家人共度的美好时光_____________________________________ 3. 周末和父母一起做饭_____________________________________ 4. 奶奶给我讲有趣的故事。_____________________________________ 5. 那次经历深深地留在我的脑海里. __________________________________________________________________________ 6. 我感受到家庭的温暖。__________________________________________________________________________ 7. 虽然过去了很久，我仍然记得这件事。__________________________________________________________________________ 8. 那是我最珍贵的记忆。__________________________________________________________________________ 参考译文 1. an unforgettable family memory 2. the wonderful time spent with family 3. cook with my parents on weekends 4. Grandma told me interesting stories. 5. That experience stays deep in my mind. 6. I feel the warmth of my family. 7. Though it was a long time ago, I still remember it. 8. It is my most precious memory. 二、句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） 句型 1（回忆场景：It was a time when… 那是一段…… 的时光） 例句：It was a time when we often got together and laughed happily. 翻译：那是一段我们经常团聚、开怀大笑的时光。 👉仿写（完成句子） 1.It was a time when_______________________________.（那是我经常和爷爷去公园的时光） 2.It was a time when_______________________________.（那是全家人一起吃晚饭的时光） 参考答案 1. I often went to the park with my grandpa 2. the whole family had dinner together 句型 2（回忆感受：What I remember most is that… 我记得最清楚的是……） 例句：What I remember most is that my mom prepared delicious food for us. 翻译：我记得最清楚的是妈妈为我们准备了美味的食物。 👉仿写（完成句子） 1.What I remember most is that_______________________________.（爸爸给我买了一个生日礼物） 2.What I remember most is that_______________________________.（我们在夜里一起看星星） 参考答案 1. my dad bought me a birthday gift 2. we watched stars together at night 句型 3（抒发感悟：This memory reminds me that… 这份回忆提醒我……） 例句：This memory reminds me that family love is the most valuable thing in life. 翻译：这份回忆提醒我，亲情是生命中最珍贵的东西。 👉仿写（完成句子） 1.This memory reminds me that_______________________________.（家人的陪伴很重要） 2.This memory reminds me that_______________________________.（我应该多花时间陪伴家人） 参考答案 1. family company is very important 2. I should spend more time with my family 【提升必做】 1．（25-26高一上·山东淄博·期末） 你校英文报正在举办“A Warm Experience in My Family”主题征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： (1)你的经历； (2)你的感想。 注意： (1)写作词数应为100个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 A Warm Experience in My Family ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 A Warm Experience in My Family One cold winter night, I suddenly had a high fever and felt dizzy. My parents noticed it immediately, and my dad carried me to the hospital while my mom held my hand and comforted me all the way. During my stay in the hospital, they took turns looking after me, preparing warm porridge and reminding me to take medicine on time. Even though they were tired, they never complained. With their care, I recovered soon. This experience made me deeply feel the warmth of family. Their love is the most precious gift in my life, which teaches me to cherish the people around me and return their love with my own actions. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生围绕“A Warm Experience in My Family”主题写一篇短文投稿，讲述自己的一次家庭温暖经历并表达感想。 【解析】 1. 词汇积累 发烧：fever → high temperature 安慰：comfort → soothe 照顾：look after → take care of 珍惜：cherish → treasure 2. 句式拓展 合并句子 原句：One cold winter night, I suddenly had a high fever and felt dizzy. My parents noticed it immediately. 拓展句：One cold winter night, I suddenly had a high fever and felt dizzy, which was noticed by my parents immediately. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】My parents noticed it immediately, and my dad carried me to the hospital while my mom held my hand and comforted me all the way.（运用了while连接并列句） 【高分句型2】Their love is the most precious gift in my life, which teaches me to cherish the people around me and return their love with my own actions.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 2．（24-25高一上·天津·期末） 假设你是晨光中学的李津，你校英文报最近开设了“Family Ties”栏目(column)，该栏目关注家庭故事、亲情纽带等。请你写一篇短文向该栏目投稿，讲述一件令你难忘的家庭亲情往事，内容包括： (1) 描述事情经过； (2) 表达感受和希望。 注意： (1) 词数不少于100； (2) 可以适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； (3) 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Editor, I’m Li Jin from Chenguang Middle School, and _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Jin 【参考范文】 Possible version1: Dear Editor, I’m Li Jin from Chenguang Middle School, and I’d like to share a special family memory with our “Family Ties” column. One unforgettable moment was when I was sick in hospital with a very high fever. My parents stayed by my side throughout the night, looking very worried and tired. Despite their tiredness, they never left my side, comforting and encouraging me, which showed how much they loved and supported me. I felt so thankful and realized the depth of my parents’ devotion. It’s a memory that has shaped my understanding of family bonds. I am to be by their side whenever they need me. Thank you for allowing me to share this heartfelt story. Yours, Li Jin Possible version2: Dear Editor, I’m Li Jin from Chenguang Middle School, and I want to share a family story with you. Last month, I had a big argument with my mom about my study schedule. I felt stressed and thought she didn’t understand me. One night, I found a letter in my room. It was from my mom. She apologized for not being patient and said she was proud of me no matter what. Reading the letter, I felt so guilty. I realized that my mom cares so much about me. I hope we can talk more and understand each other better. I love my family and I’m grateful for their support. Thanks for listening to my story. Yours, Li Jin 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向学校英文报的“Family Ties”栏目投稿，讲述一件令人难忘的家庭亲情往事。 【解析】 1.词汇积累 尽管：despite→in spite of 鼓励：encourage→motivate 表达：express→convey 感谢：thankful→grateful 2.句式拓展 同义句 原句：One unforgettable moment was when I was sick in hospital with a very high fever. 拓展句：One unforgettable moment was the time when I was sick in hospital with a very high fever, suffering from severe pain and discomfort. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】 One unforgettable moment was when I was sick in hospital with a very high fever. (运用了when引导的表语从句) 【高分句型2】Despite their tiredness, they never left my side, comforting and encouraging me, which showed how much they loved and supported me. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 3．（25-26高一上·河南郑州·期末） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Mary and her parents were downstairs in the living room, anxiously watching the rain pour down outside. It had been raining continuously for three days, and the storm showed no sign of letting up. The wind howled fiercely, causing the trees to sway violently, while the rain hammered against the windows and roof. Mary had never seen a storm this bad. It was making her nervous. As they listened to the weather report on the radio, Mary’s heart raced with fear. The report confirmed their worst fears — the city was already flooded. Mary felt a surge of panic and said suddenly, “Mum, Dad, I think we should leave here right away.” “No, it’s too late.” said Dad, shaking his head. “We can drive our car through the floodwater. Let’s leave. I’m really scared,” cried Mary. “We can’t do that, honey,” explained Mum. “The water could wash the car away.” Mary walked to the door. She could hear the rain pounding against it and she couldn't resist the urge to see for herself how bad the flooding was. “Don’t open the door,” shouted Mum and Dad at the same time, “The water could flood in.” Dad moved the dinner table against the door, in case the floodwater forced the door open. Mum gestured for Mary to sit on the sofa. “Mary, don’t worry. Everything’s going to be OK,” she said softly, trying her best to comfort her daughter. Despite her comforting tone, Mary could sense the worry in her mother’s voice. Without saying a single word, Dad walked to the sofa and sat down. He wrapped his arms tightly around his wife and daughter, trying to provide comfort and security in the midst of the storm. The sudden silence in the house seemed to make the wind and rain outside even more frightening. As the storm raged on, a sense of anxiety lingered in the air. 注意： 1．续写词数应为50左右； 2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 All of a sudden, the floodwater forced the door open. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Being upstairs, they breathed a sigh of relief. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 All of a sudden, the floodwater forced the door open. The three of them stood frozen in horror as water gushed into the living room, quickly rising and soaking their feet. Mary screamed and grabbed onto her parents tightly. Mum acted quickly, grabbing a life jacket and putting it on Mary. Dad attempted to push the table against the door to stop the water from rushing in, but it was no use. Realizing the urgency of the situation, Dad made a quick decision. He carried Mary while holding Mum's hand, making their way up to the second floor. With each step, they could feel the water rising behind them. Being upstairs, they breathed a sigh of relief. They were safe for the moment. Looking out of the window, Mary could see the water continuing to rise, swallowing everything in its path. They huddled together, hoping the storm would pass soon. At this moment, the sound of sirens cut through the howling wind from a distance, indicating that rescue teams were on their way. A glimmer of hope sparked within them. Despite the chaos outside, a sense of unity and strength filled the room, reminding them that they could weather any storm as long as they stayed together. 【导语】本文以暴雨洪水为线索展开，讲述玛丽和父母在家中遭遇持续三天的特大暴风雨，城市被淹，洪水涌入家中，一家人在危急中互相扶持、紧急避险，最终等待救援、感受到亲情与希望的故事。 【解析】 1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“突然，洪水把门冲开了。”可知，第一段可描写洪水冲进客厅，一家人紧急避险、逃向二楼的过程。 ②由第二段首句内容“到了楼上，他们松了一口气。”可知，第二段可描写一家人暂时安全，观察灾情，听到救援声，重获希望。 2.续写线索：洪水破门——水涌入客厅——父母保护玛丽——迅速上楼——暂时安全——眺望灾情——救援声传来——充满希望 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①冲进、涌入：gush into/swarm into/rush into ②抓住：grab/grasp/catch hold of ③前往：make one's way to/leave for/go up to 情绪类 ①害怕、惊恐：in horror/scared ②宽慰、安心：breathe a sigh of relief/feel relieved 【点睛】 [高分句型 1] The three of them stood frozen in horror as water gushed into the living room, quickly rising and soaking their feet.（as 引导时间状语从句，现在分词作伴随状语） [高分句型 2] Looking out of the window, Mary could see the water continuing to rise, swallowing everything in its path.（现在分词Looking作状语，现在分词continuing作宾语补足语） [高分句型 3] Despite the chaos outside, a sense of unity and strength filled the room, reminding them that they could weather any storm as long as they stayed together.（that 引导宾语从句，as long as 引导条件状语从句） 4．（25-26高一上·河南商丘·期末） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 In Thomas’s poor family, his mum’s skillful hands gave every old thing a new life. Old shirts became tablecloths; worn socks were carefully mended. Thomas’s schoolbag was no exception — its holes being patched (补) with cloth. His mum would also pick the best parts from worn-out jeans and sew them into oven mitts (隔热手套) for the weekend market, or offer repair services to the shopkeeper down the street in exchange for what they needed. One Thursday, Thomas with his mum walked past Mr. Henderson’s shop. On the shelf hung a green schoolbag. It was not bright, but it looked strong — thick cloth, wide soft straps (背带). Thomas slowed his steps, his eyes staying on it for a long time. His mum noticed. She glanced (瞥) from the bag to the price, then gently touched Thomas’s back to guide him along. “Come on, love,” she said softly. “We have something important to do.” Thomas nodded, falling into step beside her. He didn’t ask. He already knew the answer. Still, for the following days Thomas passed the shop, hoping the green schoolbag might be gone — taken by someone else so he could stop thinking about it. But it stayed on the shelf, and he kept silent. The morning of his birthday came. Thomas woke up early with a quiet hope that the day might feel different. But there were no balloons, and no wrapped box (礼品盒) waiting on the table. The small hope quietly faded (逐渐消失). He finished his breakfast, trying not to mind. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As Thomas opened the cupboard to get his old schoolbag, he caught his breath. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With the new schoolbag on his back, Thomas asked, “Mum! How did you pay for it?” ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 One possible version:        As Thomas opened the cupboard to get his old schoolbag, he caught his breath. There, hanging in the place of his worn bag, was the exact green schoolbag from Mr. Henderson’s shop. For a moment, he stood frozen, a mix of disbelief and joy flooding him. “Happy birthday, Thomas,” his mum whispered from behind, her eyes soft with affection. Overwhelmed, he turned and hugged her tightly, his throat too tight for words. He carefully took the bag down, running his fingers over the sturdy fabric and wide straps. A proud smile spread across his face as he put it on, feeling taller and more confident already.          With the new schoolbag on his back, Thomas asked, “Mum! How did you pay for it?” “Well, I sold every oven mitt I made from those old jeans at the market last Saturday,” his mother explained. “And you know Mrs. Carter’s torn curtains? I repaired them in exchange for a little extra.” Thomas listened, his initial excitement slowly replaced by a deeper warmth. He realized each stitch in his new bag represented hours of her labour and love. Moved by her quiet determination, he gave her another hug, knowing this gift was far more than just a schoolbag — it was a symbol of her unwavering devotion. 【导语】本文以“绿色书包”为线索展开，讲述了家境贫寒的托马斯看中亨德森先生店里的一个绿色书包，因知晓家庭条件无法开口索要，生日当天也未抱期待，最终意外收到母亲用辛勤劳动换来的这个书包，感受到母亲深沉母爱的故事。 【解析】 1. 段落续写：     ①由第一段首句内容“当Thomas打开橱柜去拿他的旧书包时，他屏住了呼吸。”可知，第一段可描写Thomas发现绿色新书包时的震惊与喜悦，他与母亲之间的情感互动，以及他背上新书包后自豪而自信的表现。     ②由第二段首句内容“背着新书包，Thomas问道：‘妈妈！你是怎么付钱的？’”可知，第二段可描写母亲解释她如何通过出售手工制品和提供修补服务换取书包，以及Thomas由此产生的深刻感悟——认识到礼物蕴含的劳动与爱。 2. 续写线索：橱柜惊喜——询问缘由——得知付出——感悟母爱   3.词汇激活 行为类 ①站着不动；僵住：stand frozen/stand still/stand rooted to the spot ②低语：whisper/murmur ③拥抱：hug/embrace 情绪类 ①喜悦：joy/delight ②兴奋：excitement/thrill 【点睛】 【高分句型1】For a moment, he stood frozen, a mix of disbelief and joy flooding him. (运用了独立主格结构) 【高分句型2】A proud smile spread across his face as he put it on, feeling taller and more confident already.(运用了as引导的时间状语从句和现在分词短语“feeling taller and more confident already”作状语) 5．（25-26高一上·山东日照·期末） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “Ruth! Are you up?” “Yes, Momma!” I jumped out of bed, trembling (颤抖) as the cold November air hit me. I hurried downstairs, imagining a hot breakfast, but the kitchen was freezing. The stove was cold, and the woodshed door hung open. Something was wrong. Momma rushed in with firewood, her expression tense. “Daddy’s sick,” she said, grasping a chair for support. “He has pneumonia (肺炎)” she whispered. Fear welled up in my heart, but she explained the doctor’s orders: rest, warmth, and medicine were all we could give. Seeing Momma had to take care of both me and Daddy, I desperately wanted to help, but was always told I was “too little.” Long weeks passed before Daddy was finally well enough for me to see him. One night, just before Christmas, Momma looked serious. “Ruth,” she began gently, “with doctor’s bills and no work, our money is almost gone. There won’t be any money for presents this year.” I hugged her tightly and said I didn’t care, but alone in bed, hot tears came. I had wished for a beautiful Barbie doll, just like the ones my classmates had. I felt disappointed at first, but then ashamed-knowing other children had far less. Christmas morning was bitterly cold. My room felt icy. Trembling in my bed, I felt sorry for myself: no heat, and no presents. Then I thought of Momma’s tireless work. Red-faced with guilt (愧疚), I dressed and hurried downstairs. Daddy sat by the crackling fire. “Merry Christmas!” he said, smiling weakly. “Merry Christmas, Daddy!” I responded, forcing a smile. 注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 But as I turned, a gift box under the Christmas tree caught my eye. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Holding the handmade doll, I hugged Momma tightly. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 范文 But as I turned, a gift box under the Christmas tree caught my eye. Wrapped in simple paper, it seemed almost magical in the dim morning light. No sooner had I knelt to examine it than Momma’s gentle voice came from behind, “Go ahead, open it.” Inside lay a handmade doll, carefully sewed from worn cloths, with button eyes and yarn hair — a creation that reflected every late-night effort Momma had hidden from me. It was not until that moment that I truly understood how much love had been poured into saving this Christmas. Holding the handmade doll, I hugged Momma tightly. Tears filling my eyes, I whispered, “She’s more beautiful than any Barbie.” Momma, her own cheeks wet, smiled softly and explained, “I made her while watching over Daddy, hoping she’d keep you company.” That morning, sitting by the fire that crackled cheerfully, I learned that the greatest gifts are not bought but built — from sacrifice, creativity, and unwavering care. It was a Christmas I would carry in my heart forever, far beyond any store-bought doll. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了11月的寒冷天气里，作者的父亲患上肺炎，家里花光积蓄，没钱买圣诞礼物。作者虽失望却理解家人。母亲熬夜亲手缝制布娃娃送给她，让作者明白最珍贵的礼物是爱、牺牲与陪伴，这个圣诞节令她终生难忘。 【解析】 1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“但当我转过身时，圣诞树下的一个礼品盒吸引了我的目光。”可知，第一段可描写母亲熬夜亲手缝制布娃娃送给作者。 ②由第二段首句内容“我捧着这个手工娃娃，紧紧抱住了妈妈。”可知，第二段可描写作者明白最珍贵的礼物是爱、牺牲与陪伴，这个圣诞节令她终生难忘。 2.续写线索：发现礼物——打开礼物——看到布娃娃——作者感动——拥抱妈妈——作者感悟 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①检查：examine/inspect ②打开：open/unfold ③购买：buy/purchase 情绪类 ①高兴地：cheerfully/gladly ②温柔：gentle/soft 【点睛】 [高分句型1] Tears filling my eyes, I whispered, “She’s more beautiful than any Barbie.”（运用了独立主格结构） [高分句型2] It was a Christmas I would carry in my heart forever, far beyond any store-bought doll.（运用了省略关系代词that/which的定语从句） 6．（25-26高一上·湖北十堰·期末） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Covid-19 saw us in remote school mode for almost half a year in 2020. The resulting difficulties made it impossible to go and visit family and friends as normal. For months, I did not see my grandma; nor did I make a call to her. I did not believe I could relate well to her because of her advanced age. “Peter, your gran won’t be around forever,” Mum said one day. Please give her a call today. She misses you a lot.” To be honest, calling Gran was the last thing I would do. That evening, urged by Mother, very unwillingly, I picked up the phone receiver and slowly dialled her number on the landline. Meanwhile I racked my brains, trying to brainstorm some topics Gran might be interested in. but I ended up with a blank mind. What could I possibly talk about with an old lady who is 55 years my senior? My call got through. A familiar female voice came over from the other end. It was Gran greeting me there in her gentle manner of speaking. What I did not expect at the time was that a phone call I had discounted as worthless was to make a world of difference to me. It would open the door not only to a new friendship across generations but to a fresh attitude towards life and Gran as well. Throughout the call, Gran did most of the talking. It seemed as if the elderly lady had a million questions on her mind. My worry before the call about having nothing to say was totally unnecessary. Gran asked me about school, meals, fashion, romance and even gaming. Before I knew it, half an hour had passed. 注意： (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Before I hung up, Gran invited me to go and have lunch with her the next Sunday . ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Over the meal, Gran shared with me a lot of stories about her retired life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Before I hung up, Gran invited me to go and have lunch with her the next Sunday. I agreed at once without hesitation, which made her very happy. I started to look forward to the meeting, wondering what the lunch would be like and what else we could talk about. I even prepared some small gifts for her, hoping to make her happy. The whole week, I was full of anticipation for the coming Sunday. Over the meal, Gran shared with me a lot of stories about her retired life. She told me about her morning exercises in the park, her flower-planting experience and her chats with old friends. She also told me some interesting things that happened when she was young. I listened carefully and asked her many questions. We laughed a lot during the meal. I found that Gran was such a lovely and interesting person. This lunch made our relationship closer and I cherished the time with her deeply. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，主要讲述了作者在疫情期间，因母亲的催促，不情愿地给祖母打电话，结果发现与祖母的交流非常愉快，祖母邀请作者共进午餐，作者欣然前往，并在午餐时了解了祖母的退休生活，增进了祖孙感情。 【解析】 1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“在我挂断电话之前，祖母邀请我下星期天和她一起吃午饭。”可知，第一段可描写作者同意邀请，并期待与祖母的见面。 ②由第二段首句内容“吃饭时，祖母和我分享了很多她退休后的生活故事。”可知，第二段可描写祖母分享退休生活，作者发现祖母很有趣，增进了祖孙感情。 2. 续写线索：接受邀请——期待见面——准备礼物——分享故事——发现有趣——增进感情 3. 词汇激活 行为类： ①欣然接受邀请：agreed at once without hesitation/accepted the invitation readily ②期待见面：look forward to the meeting/anticipate the gathering ③询问：aske/inquire 情绪类： ①高兴的：happy/pleased ②珍惜：cherish/value 【点睛】 【高分句型1】I agreed at once without hesitation, which made her very happy.(运用了which引导的定语从句) 【高分句型2】She also told me some interesting things that happened when she was young.(运用了that引导的定语从句，when引导的状语从句) 【拓展选做】 1．（25-26高一上·云南大理·期末） 读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Ever since my Dad died, my life has changed. My Mom is always really busy with her work, and she doesn’t get to spend any time with me anymore. I have to go to a childcare center every day after school while I wait for Mom’s work to be done and I can have dinner with her, and she has to work on Sundays. One day, at dinner time, I asked Mom if we could go to the fair (集市) together. “Can we pleeeeaaase go to the fair this Sunday?” I begged. “Lilly, you know I have to work that day.” Mom told me. “Yes, I know… But we never get to spend time together anymore! Can’t you take Sunday off?” I asked. Mom placed a plate in front of me and kissed my head. I smiled and licked my lips as she had given me a piece of cherry pie. Then I looked into my Mom’s brown eyes and asked one last time, “Can’t you take Sunday off?” Mom raised one eyebrow and said, “We’ll see.” “Okay.” I said with a grin, “We’ll see.” It was Sunday morning, and I ran to see if Mom was awake. She was making pancakes and coffee in the kitchen with her work clothes on. “Mom, why are you in your work clothes?” I asked. Mom bent down next to me and put her hand on my shoulder, “Sorry, Lilly! I have to go to work today.” Tears streamed down my face as I yelled, “You never have time for me anymore!” And I ran into my room and slammed the door. As I was crying on my bed, I could hear Mom talk on the phone, “Hi, Charlie. I have work today and Lilly is in a bad mood. I was wondering if you could come over and watch her for a few hours? Great! Thanks so much! See you soon.” A few hours later, Charlie came over and Mom left. I heard him knock on my bedroom door and say, “Lilly, your Mom made pancakes. Do you want to come out and have some?” “No!” I screamed. “Aw, come on... Your Mom told me why you’re upset.” Charlie muffled. “She did?” “Yeah. And she left a note for you.” “She did?” I jumped off my bed and opened the door. Charlie led me to the kitchen table where Mom left me a plate of pancakes and a note. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I grabbed the note and read it. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ “What’s the plan?” I asked Mom again eagerly. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 I grabbed the note and read it. It said that Mom was really sorry that she couldn’t take me to the fair and that she had a plan for us tonight. I smiled at Charlie and told him what the note said. Then I poured some maple syrup on my pancakes and gobbled them all up. I waited for hours and hours for Mom to come home that day and finally I saw her park in the driveway. I ran outside and gave her a big hug. She swung me around and kissed me. “What’s the plan?” I asked her. Mom grinned, “You’ll see.” Once we said goodbye to Charlie, Mom put me down on the couch and smiled at me. “What’s the plan?” I asked Mom again eagerly. Mom gave me a tight hug, “Lilly, I go to work so often not because I like it, but because I make money that can pay for food and clothes. But now I’ve decided to take a rest and tomorrow… Guess what?” I looked up at her, “What?” “Tomorrow I’m taking you to the fair.” “Really?” I smiled. Mom nodded as she held me close. Then she tapped me on the nose and said, “I love you, Lilly.” I laughed, “Love you too, Mom. And you are the best Mom ever” While being busy with work, Mom actually cared about me very much. Only then did I realize that the mutual understanding and support between us could make a big difference. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，主要讲述了作者因父亲去世后母亲忙于工作，很少有时间陪伴她，她渴望母亲能陪她去集市，但母亲因工作无法实现，作者感到伤心，最后母亲决定调整工作陪她去集市的故事。 【解析】 1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“我抓起纸条读了起来。”可知，第一段可描写作者看到母亲的留言后，心情好转，等待母亲回家，母亲回来后，作者询问计划。 ②由第二段首句内容““有什么计划？”我又急切地问妈妈。”可知，第二段可描写母亲向作者解释工作原因，并决定明天带她去集市，作者感到开心，意识到母女间的理解和支持很重要。 2. 续写线索：读留言——心情好转——等待母亲——询问计划——母亲解释——决定去集市——作者开心——意识到重要性 3. 词汇激活 行为类： ①询问：ask/inquire ②挣钱：make money/earn money ③决定做：decide to do/make up one’s mind to do 情绪类： ①抱歉：really sorry/apologetic/regretful ②爱：love/adore/cherish 【点睛】 【高分句型1】I smiled at Charlie and told him what the note said. (运用了what引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】While being busy with work, Mom actually cared about me very much.(运用了while引导状语从句的省略) 2．（25-26高一上·甘肃定西·期末） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 After graduating from college, the 21-year-old Alison moved back in with her parents and got her full-time job. One evening, she overheard her parents’ quarrel. “I feel I have been taken for granted for years,” said Alison’s mom angrily. “But I am always busy and struggling to support our family. When getting home, I am very tired,” said Alison’s father emotionally. What made Alison extremely sad was that she noticed her parents didn’t say a word to each other for a few days after that quarrel. Alison knew the importance of a good relationship in a family and that the little gestures of love and appreciation that used to be a regular part of her parents’ relationship had disappeared, so she said to herself, “Mom is getting neglected (忽略) by Dad, I should get involved in their relationship to make things better.” One Sunday afternoon, while walking past the local market, Alison happened to see a bouquet of roses on sale. They immediately reminded her of how long it had been since her mom received flowers the last time. An idea came to her suddenly, “A small, anonymous (匿名的) gesture might be what my mom needs to feel special again. And maybe it would spark something that would bring their relationship back to normal.” Without any delay, Alison bought the roses, wrote a simple note, and left them on their doorstep, signing it with “Your Secret Admirer”. Later, what started as a single bouquet quickly turned into a full-on event! Week after week, Alison left chocolates, handwritten letters, and little gifts on the doorstep, all in the name of the same admirer. The other evening, after yet another delivery from the “secret admirer”, Alison came home to find her parents sitting at the living room table. They looked very serious and confused. Mom’s hands were trembling slightly, and Dad stared at what Mom held. The atmosphere in the room was so strange. 注意： (1) 续写词数应为150个左右； (2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 “Alison, can you sit down for a moment?” Mom asked, eyes filled with excitement. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ When hearing Alison’s explanation, Dad reached out to take her hand. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 “Alison, can you sit down for a moment?” Mom asked, eyes filled with excitement. Alison hesitated and then took a seat. “Honey, you must have noticed all the presents I’ve been receiving lately. This special admirer reminds me that I have not been ignored, but I want to know who the secret admirer is,” Alison’s mother said happily, her eyes shining with warmth. Then Alison explained that she was the secret admirer and she just wanted to make both realize how much they still meant to each other, hoping they would have a good relationship. When hearing Alison’s explanation, Dad reached out to take her hand. His eyes widened in shock. “Alison, you did this?” Then he continued, “I really appreciate what you have done. I shouldn’t ignore your mother. A good relationship is not only about gifts and notes but also communication, trust, understanding and being together with each other. From now on, I will try my best to be a good husband and father.” Mom nodded with a bright smile. All three of them were locked in a hug. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了21岁的Alison大学毕业后与父母同住，偶然发现父母因长期缺乏沟通、爱意表达消失而关系冷淡、发生争吵。她深知良好家庭关系的重要性，便以“秘密仰慕者”的身份，持续给母亲送鲜花、巧克力、手写信件等小礼物，试图缓和父母关系，最终被父母发现的故事。 【解析】 1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“‘Alison，你能坐一会儿吗？’妈妈问道，眼里满是兴奋。”可知，第一段可描写母亲向Alison提及自己收到的神秘礼物，表达内心的疑惑与感动，随后Alison向父母坦白一切，说明自己做这些事的初衷。 ②由第二段首句内容“听到Alison的解释后，爸爸伸手握住了她的手。”可知，第二段可描写父亲得知真相后的震惊与愧疚，反思自己忽视母亲、疏于经营婚姻的问题，同时表达对女儿的感激，最后父母和解，一家人重获温馨。 2. 续写线索：父母邀约谈话——母亲展示礼物并表达疑惑——Alison 坦白匿名送礼的真相——父亲得知后震惊愧疚——父亲反思自身问题并承诺改变——父母和解，一家人相拥暖心 3. 词汇激活 行为类 ①收到：receive/accept/get ②解释：explain/account for/make clear ③忽视：ignore/neglect/be taken for granted 情绪类 ①震惊：shock/astonishment/surprise ②感激：appreciate/show one’s gratitude/be thankful 【点睛】 【高分句型 1】Then Alison explained that she was the secret admirer and she just wanted to make both realize how much they still meant to each other, hoping they would have a good relationship.（运用了that和how much引导的宾语从句，现在分词hoping作伴随状语和省略了that的宾语从句） 【高分句型 2】Alison’s mother said happily, her eyes shining with warmth.（运用了独立主格结构her eyes shining with warmth作状语） 3．（25-26高一上·四川泸州·期末） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The Curious Boy and His Father’s Lesson When David was in primary school, his favorite thing was to tear (拆) toys. His room looked like a science lab. There were toy pieces in cardboard boxes, and cars that were only half put together everywhere. There were also his simple drawings of machines on the walls, and a small toolbox, which was his most valuable thing, on the study table. His mother was often angry about the mess, saying that David was just making a big mess and not really learning anything. But his father would just smile and say, “He’s learning.” One afternoon, his father came home early and found David sitting with his legs crossed on the living-room ground. Around him were parts of a brand-new toy airplane, an expensive birthday gift that had only lasted less than six hours. The plane was in many pieces. David was really focused on looking at a small motor (电动机) , turning it slowly. He didn’t notice his father coming. At first, his father got really mad. His face turned as red as a ripe tomato, and the lines on his forehead stood out. He was about to shout at David really hard for tearing such an expensive gift. But then he saw how concentrated David was. David frowned (皱眉), just like when he was trying to solve difficult math problems. His father took a deep breath to calm down, and then he knelt down gently next to David and calmly asked, “Why did you take it apart? You know it was a very valuable present.” David hesitated, with his eyes looking down, and replied, “I wanted to see how it works,” waiting nervously for the punishment. 注意： （1）续写词数应为150左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Surprisingly, his father relaxed with a gentle smile. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The next day, David took the plane to the park with his father. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】       Surprisingly, his father relaxed with a gentle smile. “I understand your curiosity, son. Wanting to know how things work is the first step to learning,” he said, patting David on the shoulder. He then sat down and helped David examine the motor, explaining its simple structure patiently. Together, they sorted out all the parts and made a list of them. That night, father and son spent two hours putting the airplane back together. Though it was a bit tricky, David followed his father’s guidance carefully and finally saw the plane’s propeller spin again. His eyes lit up with joy. The next day, David took the plane to the park with his father. He held the repaired airplane tightly, proud to show it to his friends. When they saw the plane fly smoothly in the sky, they cheered loudly. David also shared what he learned about the motor with them. On their way home, David said to his father, “Thank you for not punishing me. I learned more than just how to fix a plane.” His father smiled and replied, “Curiosity is a gift. Never stop asking ‘why’.” From then on, David became more eager to explore, and his father always stood by his side. 【导语】本文以“大卫拆玩具的好奇心”为线索展开，讲述了小学生大卫热衷拆玩具探索原理，母亲不满其乱糟糟的状态，而父亲始终包容引导，在大卫拆掉珍贵的新玩具飞机后，父亲未加惩罚反而耐心陪伴修复，最终教会大卫好奇心可贵的道理。 【解析】 1. 段落续写： ① 由第一段首句“令人意外的是，父亲舒展开眉头，露出了温和的笑容。”可知，接下来可描写父亲包容大卫的行为，耐心询问并讲解玩具电机原理，陪伴大卫整理零件、共同修复玩具飞机。 ② 由第二段首句“第二天，大卫和父亲一起带着这架飞机去了公园。”可知，接下来可描写大卫向朋友展示修复的飞机，分享所学知识，向父亲表达感谢，以及父亲传递“好奇心是礼物”的道理。 2. 续写线索： 父亲包容微笑并讲解原理——父子共同整理零件、修复飞机——大卫向朋友展示飞机并分享知识——大卫向父亲致谢——父亲传递好奇心可贵的道理——大卫更热衷探索、父亲持续陪伴 3.词类激活： 行为类 ①轻拍：pat/tap ②帮助：help/assist ③维修：repair/mend/fix 情绪类 ①眼神闪烁着喜悦：eyes lit up with joy/eyes sparkled with joy ②欢呼：cheer/exclaim 【点睛】 【高分句型1】He then sat down and helped David examine the motor, explaining its simple structure patiently.（运用了现在分词explaining作状语） 【高分句型2】 David also shared what he learned about the motor with them.（运用了what引导的宾语从句） 4．（2025·全国一卷·高考真题） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks, while my job was to have the backyard in order. There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play. There was just one thing I hadn’t counted on: My brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire. Though friendly, he could easily knock over my niece’s small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter. So, when my brother showed up, I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside. My plan was working out just fine. Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors. It was an awkward moment. I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn’t happy with driving home with a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue. A few days passed, and I hadn’t heard anything from my brother. I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again. His reply came as a surprise — a shock, actually: “Not a chance.” Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted. After all, I had left him little choice. Well, he’ll get over it, I reasoned. Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience (良心) kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going. 注意: (1)续写词数应为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I realized it was me who was at fault. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 One possible version: I realized it was me who was at fault. I had been so focused on keeping the party under control that I failed to consider how important Toby was to my brother during this difficult time. My pride had kept me from reaching out, and now months had passed without a proper conversation. One evening, I picked up the phone and left him a voice message, apologizing for my behavior and asking if we could meet. To my relief, he called back the next day, and we agreed to get together soon. With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. He opened it with a surprised smile, and for a moment, neither of us spoke. Then we hugged — something we hadn’t done since before his wife passed away. We sat on the porch with Toby resting beside us, and I handed him the box of biscuits. “Thank you,” he said quietly. We talked for hours, laughing, remembering old times, and slowly rebuilding what had been lost. As I watched Toby gently rest his head on my brother’s leg, I knew we were finally on the path to healing. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者因担心弟弟的狗Toby影响聚会，要求弟弟看好狗，后因天气变化导致弟弟提前离开并心生芥蒂。两个月后作者意识到自己的过错，主动带着妻子做的饼干登门道歉，最终兄弟俩和解的故事，展现了亲情中理解与包容的重要性。 【解析】 1. 段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“我意识到是我错了。” 可知，第一段可描写作者反思自己在聚会上只顾控制局面，忽视了Toby对弟弟的重要性，因骄傲迟迟未联系弟弟，最终通过电话留言道歉并约定见面。 ②由第二段首句内容“带着妻子做的饼干，我来到了弟弟家门口。”可知，第二段可描写弟弟开门时的惊讶与沉默，兄弟俩拥抱和解，坐在门廊上谈心，看着Toby依偎在弟弟腿边，明白亲情修复的意义。 2. 续写线索：反思过错——电话留言道歉——约定见面——带饼干登门——拥抱沉默——谈心和解——领悟亲情 3. 词汇激活 行为类 ①道歉：apologize/say sorry/make an apology ②拥抱：hug/embrace ③重建：rebuild/restore/reconstruct 情绪类： ①宽慰：relief/comfort/satisfaction/ease ②惊讶：surprised /shocked/astonished 【点睛】 [高分句型1] I had been so focused on keeping the party under control that I failed to consider how important Toby was to my brother during this difficult time.（运用了“so...that...”引导结果状语从句以及how引导宾语从句） [高分句型2] One evening, I picked up the phone and left him a voice message, apologizing for my behavior and asking if we could meet.（运用了现在分词短语作状语以及if引导的宾语从句） [高分句型 3] As I watched Toby gently rest his head on my brother’s leg, I knew we were finally on the path to healing.（运用了as引导时间状语从句以及省略that的宾语从句） 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 1 / 14 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $