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高考英语应用文二轮复习之科学技术创新主题
Writing 1——短文投稿(理性看待 AI 辅助学习)
【试题创新】
假定你是李华,你校英文报 "Tech-Life" 栏目正开展主题为How Should We Make Good Use of AI in Study的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
(1)你对 AI 用于学习的总体看法;
(2)客观阐述其利弊;
(3)给同学们提出合理使用 AI 的建议。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【经典范文】
How Should We Make Good Use of AI in Study
From my perspective, AI should be regarded as a powerful learning assistant rather than a substitute for human effort.
Equipped with vast learning resources, AI enables us to clarify confusing concepts and refine our writing, thereby boosting our academic efficiency considerably. However, excessive reliance on AI may erode our independent thinking, leaving us reluctant to tackle problems through personal effort.
Therefore, a sensible approach is essential. We ought to capitalize on AI's strengths while guarding against over-dependence. Only by maintaining independent thinking can we make AI genuinely facilitate our intellectual growth.
一、书面表达解析
本篇要求考生以李华身份向校英文报投稿,围绕学生如何合理利用人工智能辅助学习展开论述。文章需明确总体态度,辩证分析利弊,并提出切实可行的使用建议。
二、写作思路
首段:表明立场:AI 是助手而非替代品
仿写句式:From my perspective, ... should be regarded as ... rather than ...
主体段:辩证分析——先扬后抑,指出便利与隐患
仿写句式:Equipped with ..., ... enables us to ..., thereby ...;However, excessive reliance on ... may ..., leaving us ...
结尾段:提出建议并升华——理性使用,强调独立思考
仿写句式:Therefore, a sensible approach is essential.;Only by ... can ...
三、范文精讲
1.高级替换
润色:refine→polish
阐明:clarify→elucidate
处理:tackle→cope with
充分利用:capitalize on→leverage
2.同义句改写
原句:From my perspective, AI should be regarded as a powerful learning assistant rather than a substitute for human effort.
拓展句:As far as I am concerned, what we should recognize is that AI is a powerful learning assistant rather than a substitute for human effort.**
解析:what引导主语从句,that引导表语从句。
3.高级句型讲解
(1)Equipped with vast learning resources, AI enables us to clarify confusing concepts and refine our writing, thereby boosting our academic efficiency considerably.
语法点:过去分词短语作原因状语;thereby boosting.. 为现在分词短语作结果状语,强调前后因果逻辑。
(2)However, excessive reliance on AI may erode our independent thinking, leaving us reluctant to tackle problems through personal effort.
语法点:动名词短语 excessive reliance on AI 作主语;现在分词 leaving... 作自然而然的结果状语(非谓语)。
四、范文背诵模板
From my perspective, ______ should be regarded as a powerful learning assistant rather than a substitute for human effort.
Equipped with ______, ______ enables us to ______ and ______, thereby boosting our ______ considerably. However, excessive reliance on ______ may erode our ______, leaving us reluctant to ______.
Therefore, a sensible approach is essential. We ought to capitalize on ______ while guarding against ______. Only by maintaining ______ can ______ genuinely facilitate our ______.
Writing 2——演讲稿(智能出行,拥抱科技)
【试题创新】
假定你是李华,学校英语角将举办主题为Smart Mobility的英语演讲活动。请你写一篇演讲稿,介绍自动驾驶技术并谈谈你的看法。内容包括:
(1)自动驾驶技术的现实应用;
(2)你的观点;
(3)呼吁理性接纳新技术。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【经典范文】
Dear fellow students,
It is my great honor to deliver a speech on smart mobility. As self-driving vehicles have been put into commercial operation in multiple Chinese cities, they have attracted widespread public attention.
Compared with traditional human-driven cars, autonomous vehicles can eliminate careless errors resulting from fatigue, thus significantly reducing accident risks. Nevertheless, confronted with complex traffic scenarios, they still suffer from technical limitations that remain to be addressed.
Rather than rejecting new technology out of hand, we should embrace it rationally. It is prudent to welcome technological advances while remaining vigilant about potential risks. Thank you!
一、书面表达解析
本篇要求考生以李华身份撰写英语角演讲稿,围绕自动驾驶这一智能出行话题展开。需介绍现实应用、发表个人观点,并呼吁理性看待新技术。
二、写作思路
首段:演讲开场,引出话题
仿写句式:It is my great honor to deliver a speech on...;As..., they have attracted...
主体段:对比优势,指出局限
仿写句式:Compared with..., ... can..., thus...;Nevertheless, confronted with..., they still...
结尾段:呼吁理性,致谢收尾
仿写句式:Rather than..., we should...;It is prudent to... while remaining vigilant about...
三、范文精讲
1.高级替换
根除:eliminate→eradicate
拥护:embrace→champion
审慎明智的:prudent→judicious
遭受:suffer from→be plagued by
2.同义句转换
原句:Rather than rejecting new technology out of hand, we should embrace it rationally.
拓展句:While we ought not to reject new technology out of hand, we should embrace it rationally.
解析:while引导让步状语从句。
3.高级句型讲解
(1)Compared with traditional human‑driven cars, autonomous vehicles can eliminate careless errors resulting from fatigue, thus significantly reducing accident risks.
语法点:过去分词短语 Compared with...作比较状语;现在分词resulting from fatigue作后置定语修饰errors;thus significantly reducing...为现在分词短语作结果状语。
(2)Nevertheless, confronted with complex traffic scenarios, they still suffer from technical limitations that remain to be addressed.
语法点:过去分词短语confronted with...作让步状语;that remain to be addressed为定语从句修饰limitations,to be addressed是动词不定式的被动结构。
四、范文背诵模板
It is my great honor to deliver a speech on ______. As ______, they have attracted widespread public attention.
Compared with ______, ______ can eliminate ______ resulting from ______, thus significantly reducing ______. Nevertheless, confronted with ______, they still suffer from ______ that remain to be addressed.
Rather than rejecting ______ out of hand, we should embrace it rationally. It is prudent to welcome ______ while remaining vigilant about ______. Thank you!
Writing 3——短文投稿(参观航天科技馆)
【试题创新】
假定你是李华,上周你班参观了本地航天科技馆。请你以 A Visit to the Aerospace Science Museum 为题,给校英文报投稿。内容包括:
(1)参观主要见闻;
(2)个人感悟。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【经典范文】
A Visit to the Aerospace Science Museum
Last Saturday, our class paid a visit to the local Aerospace Science Museum, where a wide array of spacecraft models were on display.
Walking through the exhibition hall, we marveled at rocket and space-station models while watching vivid documentaries chronicling China's space exploration milestones. Interactive installations even allowed us to experience simulated space travel, which ignited our intense curiosity about outer-space science.
Having witnessed our nation's remarkable achievements in the space industry, I felt immensely proud. Inspired by the astronauts' dedication, I am determined to strive for excellence and contribute to our country's space science in the future.
一、书面表达解析
本篇要求考生以李华身份,以 A Visit to the Aerospace Science Museum 为题向校英文报投稿。需记述班级参观航天科技馆的见闻,并结合所见所闻抒发个人感悟。
二、写作思路
首段:交代时间地点,引入场景
仿写句式:Last..., our class paid a visit to..., where...(where 引导非限制性定语从句)
主体段:描写展品与互动体验
仿写句式:Walking through..., we marveled at... while watching...;...which ignited...
结尾段:抒发自豪感与个人志向
仿写句式:Having witnessed..., I felt...;Inspired by..., I am determined to...
三、范文精讲
1.高级替换
大量的:a wide array of→a diverse range of
使惊叹:marveled at→admired
激起:ignited→sparked
极其地:immensely→exceedingly
2.同义句转换
原句:Last Saturday, our class paid a visit to the local Aerospace Science Museum, where a wide array of spacecraft models were on display.
拓展复合句:Last Saturday, our class went on an excursion to the local Aerospace Science Museum, boasting a diverse range of displayed spacecraft models.
解析:现在分词短语作非限制性定语。
3.高级句型讲解
(1)Walking through the exhibition hall, we marveled at rocket and space-station models while watching vivid documentaries chronicling China's space exploration milestones.
语法点:现在分词 Walking... 作时间状语;while watching...为省略结构(完整结构为while we were watching...);现在分词chronicling...作后置定语修饰documentaries。
(2)Interactive installations even allowed us to experience simulated space travel, which ignited our intense curiosity about outer‑space science.
语法点:which引导非限制性定语从句,指代前面整句话的内容,补充说明结果。
(3)Having witnessed our nation's remarkable achievements in the space industry, I felt immensely proud.
语法点:现在分词完成式 Having witnessed...作时间状语,强调该动作发生在谓语动词 felt 之前。
四、范文背诵模板
Last ______, our class paid a visit to ______, where ______ were on display.
Walking through ______, we marveled at ______ while watching ______ chronicling ______. Interactive installations even allowed us to ______, which ignited our intense curiosity about ______.
Having witnessed ______, I felt immensely proud. Inspired by ______, I am determined to strive for excellence and contribute to ______ in the future.
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