摘要:
**基本信息**
初中英语九年级上册第二单元“Great ideas”写作同步练,聚焦发明创造话题,通过“基础夯实-综合应用”分层设计,实现从语言要素到语篇输出的进阶,适配单元复习与中考衔接,提升语言能力与思维品质。
**分层设计**
|层次|知识覆盖|设计特色|
|----|----------|----------|
|基础层(前置作业)|单元核心短语(18个)、功能句型(8句)、逻辑词(12个)|短语翻译夯实词汇基础,句子翻译强化句型应用,逻辑词默写提升语篇连贯能力,紧扣“人与社会—科学与技术”新课标话题|
|提升层(小试牛刀)|“问题—想法—过程—影响”四段式写作结构|模拟广州中考书面表达题型,提供范文与评分标准,实现从语言要素到综合语篇的能力迁移,培养思维逻辑与创新意识|
内容正文:
【九年级上册】【第二单元 Great ideas 发明创意】【Writing 写作训练】
【新课标话题归属:人与社会 → 科学与技术 → 发明创造】
【单元写作对标与话题归属】
本单元 Section 3 Writing 的写作任务为 “Writing an article about a great idea(介绍一项解决难题的伟大想法)”,要求以课本阅读 Archimedes and the golden crown 和本单元话题为依托,运用所学词汇与多种句型,按“问题背景 → 人物与想法 → 解决过程 → 影响与感悟”四段结构完成一篇说明/介绍类短文。
该任务与广州 2025/2026 年中考书面表达高度契合:中考作文多为“开放框架 + 要点约束”的实用文体(征文、演讲稿、书信等),词数约 80–120,满分 25 分(内容 8 + 语言 7 + 连贯 6 + 书写 4),注重情境真实、思维逻辑与立德树人。本套练习即据此模拟命制。
一、前置作业
(一)短语翻译(中译英)
要求:将下列中文短语译为英文,均为本单元话题及中考作文介绍发明/想法时的常用表达。
中文短语
英文翻译(默写)
提出一个好主意
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解决难题
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面临难题
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对……产生巨大影响
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给……带来巨大改变
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多亏;由于
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结果;因此
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起初;一开始
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尝试很多次
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放弃
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由……制成
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被用来做某事
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在日常生活中
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数百万的人
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全世界
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例如
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好好利用
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为……感到骄傲
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(二)句子翻译(中译英)
要求:将下列句子译为英文。括号内为可使用的短语 / 句型提示,仅供构思参考。
1. 许多伟大的想法都源于人们面临的难题。(come from; face difficult problems)
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2. 爱迪生在1879年发明了电灯泡,给人们的生活带来了巨大的改变。(invent; bring great changes to)
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3. 这个伟大的想法帮助人们解决了在黑暗中看书的难题。(solve the problem of)
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4. 一开始,许多人不相信这个新发明。(at the begining)
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5. 由于这项发明,人们可以在晚上工作和学习。(thanks to; be able to)
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6. 它不仅使我们的房间更明亮,还让世界变得更美好。(not only... but also...)
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7. 例如,医生现在可以在夜间进行手术。(for example; at night)
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8. 我们应该好好利用这些伟大的发明,让生活变得更便利。(make good use of)
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(三)逻辑词默写
要求:介绍发明/想法的文章须用连接词使句间、段间连贯。请根据中文意思默写对应的英文逻辑词(可写一种即可)。
中文意思
英文逻辑词(默写)
首先
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然后;接着
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最后
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此外;而且
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例如
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因为
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所以
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但是
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虽然
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过去;从前
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如今;现在
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总之
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二、小试牛刀(广州中考英语书面表达模拟)
(一)作文题目
为激发同学们的创新意识,你校英文报正在举办以 “Great Ideas Change the World / 改变世界的伟大想法” 为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下要点,写一篇短文投稿,介绍一项你认为伟大的发明或一个解决生活难题的好想法。
内容要点:
(1) What idea you think is great? ;Who made it?
(2) What problem can it solve? ;
(3)What influence has it had on people?
要求:
1. 词数 80–120;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 语句通顺,意思连贯,合理使用连接词;
4. 首尾已给出(模拟广州卷“给开头/结尾”形式),不计入词数。
评分标准(广州中考 25 分制)
维度(分值)
评分要点
内容要点(8 分)
四个要点齐全,词数达标(80–120),无遗漏关键信息。
语言表达(7 分)
词汇运用恰当,语法正确,时态(一般过去时叙事/一般现在时评价)、人称准确。
连贯性(6 分)
合理使用连接词(first, then, because, but, besides, in a word 等),过渡自然。
书写规范(4 分)
字迹工整,卷面整洁,格式正确。
Great Ideas Change the World
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订正/复写修改
为激发同学们的创新意识,你校英文报正在举办以 “Great Ideas Change the World / 改变世界的伟大想法” 为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下要点,写一篇短文投稿,介绍一项你认为伟大的发明或一个解决生活难题的好想法。
内容要点:
(1) What idea you think is great? ;Who made it?
(2) What problem can it solve? ;
(3)What influence has it had on people?
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Many great ideas came about because people faced difficult problems. _________
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参考答案(教师版)
一、前置作业答案
(一)短语翻译
1. 提出一个好主意 — come up with a great idea
2. 解决难题 — solve the problem / solve difficult problems
3. 面临难题 — face difficult problems
4. 对……产生巨大影响 — have a great influence on
5. 给……带来巨大改变 — bring great changes to
6. 多亏;由于 — thanks to
7. 结果;因此 — as a result
8. 起初;一开始 — at the beginning
9. 尝试很多次 — try many times
10. 放弃 — give up
11. 由……制成 — be made of
12. 被用来做某事 — be used to do sth.
13. 在日常生活中 — in our daily life
14. 数百万的人 — millions of people
15. 全世界 — all over the world
16. 例如 — for example / such as
17. 好好利用 — make good use of
18. 为……感到骄傲 — be proud of
(二)句子翻译参考
1. Many great ideas came about because people faced difficult problems.
2. Edison invented the light bulb in 1879 and brought great changes to people's life.
3. This great idea helped people solve the problem of reading in the dark.
4. At the beginning, many people did not believe in this new invention.
5. Thanks to this invention, people were able to work and study at night.
6. It not only makes our rooms brighter, but also makes the world a better place.
7. For example, doctors can do operations at night now.
8. We should make good use of these great inventions and make life more convenient.
(三)逻辑词默写答案
1. 首先 — first (of all)
2. 然后;接着 — then / next / after that
3. 最后 — finally / at last
4. 此外;而且 — besides / what's more / moreover
5. 例如 — for example / such as
6. 因为 — because / because of
7. 所以 — so / as a result / therefore
8. 但是 — but / however
9. 虽然 — although / though
10. 过去;从前 — in the past
11. 如今;现在 — nowadays / today
12. 总之 — in a word / in short / all in all
二、小试牛刀 · 教师参考范文
(题目:A Great Idea That Changes the World / 改变世界的伟大想法;约 110 词)
Many great ideas came about because people faced difficult problems. The electric light bulb is one of them.
In the past, people could only read or work during the daytime because there was no good way to light up the night. This was a big problem. Then Thomas Edison came up with a brilliant idea. He tried many times and never gave up. Finally, in 1879, he invented the practical light bulb. It is made of glass and is used to give us light.
Thanks to the light bulb, people can work and study at night. It has not only made our rooms brighter, but also brought great changes to the whole world. For example, factories can run longer and hospitals can help patients at night.
Great ideas like this make our life better and encourage us to think more creatively.
【范文亮点】运用本单元短语 come up with / solve the problem / thanks to / be used to / bring great changes to / all over the world;使用 then / finally / thanks to / not only ... but also / for example 等连接词保证连贯;一般过去时叙事、一般现在时评价,人称第三人称,符合中考评分标准一、二、三档要求。
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