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Unit 1
Happy Holiday
单元话题写作讲练
新八上RJ
能够理解文章的主旨和细节,回答关于“作者在苏格兰的假期经历”的问题,并且能够模仿文章结构,用过去时态描述自己的假期经历。
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Learning Objectives
能够理解并概括语篇的主要内容,包括时间、地点、人物和事件,例如作者在苏格兰度假的经历和遇到鹿的情景。
能够学习和掌握语篇中的关键词汇和句型结构(如过去时态的运用),并能在语境中正确使用。
Let’s look and say.
The Palace Museum, Beijing
Yulong Mountain, Lijiang
West Lake, Hangzhou
The Memorial Hall of the Nanjing Massacre, Nanjing
Oriental Pearl TV Tower, Shanghai
Victoria Harbour, Hong Kong
Terracotta Army, Xi’an
Hey guys! I’m Chen Jie. I really love travelling to spend my holidays. I visited so many cool places in China, like ____________________
____________________________.
The landscape there were __________👍!
West Lake in Hangzhou
and Yulong Mountain in Lijiang
excellent
Free talk
Red Square, Moscow, Russia
Statue of Liberty, New York, the US
Big Ben, London, the UK
Eiffel Tower, Paris, France
Sydney Opera House, Sydney, Australia
I also went to many foreign countries! __________ was amazing. ____________ there ____________________😱.
Moscow
Red Square
took my breath away
Free talk
during summer holidays
during national holidays
during winter holidays
I travel ________________________, ________________________, or ________________________. Each holiday gives me different experiences.
during summer holidays
during winter holidays
during national holidays
Free talk
I love ________________.
Every view makes me _________🙂 and _____________😌!
mountain scenery
forest scenery
sea scenery
city scenery
countryside scenery
mountain scenery
smile
feel relaxed
Free talk
I love ________ too, especially ________________________. It’s full of history and culture.
Let’s look and say.
squares
Tian’anmen Square China
Red Square Russia
Times Square the US
Tian’anmen Square in China
Let’s look and say.
train / railway stations
bus stations
subway stations
police station
Travelling is not just about happy memories. Once, I lost my passport, so I went to a ____________ for help. The policemen there were really kind and friendly.
police station
Someone may think I’m always on the way. Actually, sometimes I just _________________________.
Just as the saying goes, “_____________________________________________________________________”(读万卷书,行万里路。)
stay at home to read and relax
Reads as many as ten thousand books and travels as far as ten thousand miles.
What’s the name of the country?
Free talk
It’s The United Kingdom!
(The UK)
Let’s learn
The United Kingdom (UK) is made up of Scotland, England, Wales and the Northern Ireland.
Guess! Which part of the UK will we talk about?
Bagpipes
/ˈbæɡpaɪps/
(风笛)
kilt /kɪlt/
(苏格兰裙)
Edinburgh Castle
/ˈɛdɪnbrə/ /ˈkæsl/
(爱丁堡城堡)
Let’s learn
It’s Scotland!
Scotland is a beautiful country in the northern part of the united Kingdom. It’s famous for its green mountains, deep blue lakes (called "lochs(尼斯湖)"), and ancient castles. The capital city is Edinburgh, where you can see a huge volcano-shaped (火山形)hill called Arthur’s Seat(亚瑟王座).
(1) What is the passage mainly about?
My holiday in Scotland.
(2) What is the main content of the article about?
It's about deer.
Look and say
Reading Tip:
Before reading, we can read the title and look at the picture to predicet what we will read next.
While-reading
Read Gina’s holiday story and write down the things that she did.
Things that Gina did
took ______________________
stayed _____________________
went to ____________________
saw _______________________
ran home and _______________
a train to Scotland
in a comfortable house
the forest to explore
a deer
told her parents
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Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery. I live in a big city, so everything seemed so different. For example, beside the house, there was a huge forest.
On the last day, early in the morning, I went to the forest to explore. While there, something made a noise. I turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
I ran home and told my parents what I saw. My mum smiled and said, “The deer is probably looking for food and hoping to get some from you.” What a wonderful experience I had! I really hope I can go back again.
countryside /ˈkʌntrisaɪd/
n. 乡村;农村
turn around 转身;翻转
deer /dɪə(r)/ n. (pl. deer)鹿
surprised /səˈpraɪzd/ adj. 惊奇的;惊讶的
probably /ˈprɒbəbli/ adv. 很可能;大概
look for 寻找
感叹句
Read and learn
Read Gina’s holiday story again and think about how to tell a story.
When: Last autumn
Where: Scotland
What:
took a train to Scotland
stayed in a comfortable house
went to the forest to explore
saw a deer
ran home and told her parents...
Why: I live in a big city, so...
How: What a wonderful experience...
Who: My family
How to tell a story?
(1) When and where did the story happen? (时间和地点)
(2) Who is the main character? (人物)
(3) What happened in the story? (经过)
(4) Why did that happen? (原因)
(5) What is the end of the story? (结果--感受+收获)
How about your holiday experience?
Think of an unforgettable holiday experience and answer the questions.
3a
Use your ideas above to write a holiday story.
Last summer/winter holiday...
During the holiday...
On the first day of the trip...
I visited/went to/stayed in...
The place was...
I explored/tried/tasted/heard...
3c
Useful Expressions
I was excited/surprised/amazed/...
It took my breath away...
I couldn’t believe my eyes...
I learned about..../I’ll never forget...
I hope to visit/go back to...again
...
When&How
Where
Did What
Learned
What
Gina’s holiday
Last autumn
By train
Scotland
stayed in a house
went to the forest
saw a deer
ran home and told her parents
wonderful
got close to nature
Feel How
Summary
Use your idea above to write a holiday story.
How can we write our holiday story?
STEP1 : Brainstorming
STEP2 : Structure
STEP3 : Group discussion
STEP4 : Writing
STEP5 : Evaluation
3c
Pre-writing
When&How
&Weather
Where
My holiday
Pre-writing
Did What
Feel How
Learned
What
Last year
Last spring/summer...
Last summer holiday
Last winter holiday
...
The weather was hot and sunny.
It was rainy, so we take an umbrella.
...
When&How
&Weather
The travel time from Beijing to Shanghai is about 5 hours by train.
The journey time to the beach is 2 hours.
The flight time to London is 11 hours.
The driving time to my grandma’s house is 3 hours.
...
Pre-writing
Where
America
美国
Egypt
埃及
Holland荷兰
India
印度
China
中国
England
英国
Australia
澳大利亚
Italy
意大利
France
法国
Pre-writing
Did What
Sightseeing
观光
Hiking
徒步
Swimming游泳
Shopping购物
Taking photos
拍照
Trying local food
品尝当地美食
Visiting museums
参观博物馆
Boating
划船
Camping露营
Going to the beach
去海滩
Pre-writing
Feel How
Pre-writing
Learned
What
I learned about local traditions.
I visited famous landmarks and learned their history.
I learned how to read a map.
I made new friends from different countries.
Traveling teaches me many new things!
The world is so big and interesting!
Pre-writing
I feel _________ and learned___________________during the journey.
My holiday
The weather was ______________.
_______, I went to __________with______. It was _________.
The travel time from_____ to _______ is about _____ hours by _______.
I __________________and I felt really _______.
I liked this place because __________.
We also ______________.
When
Where
Who
How
Did What
Feel How
Learned What
Pre-writing
Did What
Last year
Last spring/summer...
Last summer holiday
Last winter holiday
...
The weather was hot and sunny.
It was rainy, so we take an umbrella.
...
When&How
&Weather
The travel time from Beijing to Shanghai is about 5 hours by train.
The journey time to the beach is 2 hours.
The flight time to London is 11 hours.
The driving time to my grandma’s house is 3 hours.
...
Writing bank
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Discuss with your partner
Pre-writing
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Writing
Time !
15 mins
Writing
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Sample
Last summer, I went to Sanya with my family for a week. It was an amazing trip!
The weather was sunny. We stayed in a hotel near the beach. Every morning, I woke up early to watch the sunrise. The sky turned orange and pink—it was so beautiful! During the day, I swam in the clear blue sea. We saw colorful fish and even a small turtle! In the evenings, we walked along the beach and ate delicious seafood. The best part was learning how to surf. It felt fantastic!
This trip taught me two things: First, nature is full of surprises. Second, if I keep trying, I can learn new skills. I hope to visit Sanya again next year!
Post-writing
本单元教材写作情境为“用自己的想法写一个假期故事”,属于“人与自
我”主题范畴中“生活与学习”这一主题群,涉及子主题“丰富、充实、积极向
上的生活”,学生可运用过去时态描述自己在假期参观的某个地方或自己的
旅途见闻及自己旅行后的收获。常见的写作任务是讲述自己的旅行经历及
见闻。体裁多为记叙文或日记、书信等应用文。
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(Unit 1 Section B 3c P9)
审题指导
1.文体:记叙文
2.人称:第一人称
3.时态:一般过去时
4.写作要点:①旅行目的地;②旅行所见所闻:上午,中午,下午;③我的
感受
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思路点拨
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教材写作品读
Last summer,my family ①took
a train to the Laojun Mountain for
a holiday.
It was sunny and cool there. In
the morning,we started our trip by
hiking along a path. Along the
way,the clear streams and the singing
birds made us relaxed. 教材原句
①【Section B 3a】My family took
a train to Scotland for a holiday.
(take a train to…for a holiday坐
火车去……旅行)
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There were many strange rocks,②
thousands of trees and colourful
flowers. I especially loved the
waterfall. It was so amazing that I
took a lot of great photos there. At
noon,we saw the sea of clouds on
the top. I ③felt like I was in a
fairyland. The landscape there ④took
my breath away. ②【Section B 1b】I saw an
artwork with thousands of glass
“tears” falling down.(thousands of
成千上万的)
③【Section B 1b】Sometimes I
felt like I was walking inside a
palace.(feel like感觉像)
④【Section A 2a】It just took my
breath away.(take one’s breath
away令某人惊叹)
续表
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In the afternoon,we tried something
special,such as glass skywalk and
skiing slides. We were ⑤so lost in
the beautiful scenery that we didn’t
notice the time.
It was ⑥such an unforgettable
experience.⑦The amazing scenery
made me smile and forget the
worries.I’m really looking forward to
visiting there again. ⑤【Section B 1b】We were so
happy that we didn’t notice the
time.(so…that…如此……以至
于……)
⑥【Section B 1b】It was such a
good experience!(such a/an+adj.+n.
这样……的一个……)
⑦【Section B 2c】The amazing
scenery makes them smile and
forget their worries.(make sb.do…
让某人做……)
续表
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开头句
Last month,we went on holiday to Beijing by plane.
仿写:上周五,我们坐大巴去乡下研学旅行了。
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Last Friday,we went on a study trip to the countryside by bus.
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中间句
1.The landscape there was amazing.(用take one’s breath away改写)
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2.They were very beautiful,so we took many photos.(用so…that 升格)
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3.The countryside made me think of the old-time happy life.
(用remind…of…改写)
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The landscape there took my breath away.
They were so beautiful that we took many photos.
The countryside reminded me of the old-time happy life.
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结尾句
1.I’m really looking forward to visiting there again.
仿写:我们期待着再次参观上海的名胜古迹。
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2.I had a wonderful experience.(用what感叹句升格)
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We are looking forward to visiting the places of interest in Shanghai
again.
What a wonderful experience I had!
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【名言积累】
1.He who travels far knows much.远行者见识广。
2.It’s better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books.
读万卷书不如行万里路。
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研学是一种很好的学习方式,它增加了学习的实践性和趣味性。假如
你是李华,你参加了上周五的研学之旅,请根据下面内容提示,用英语写
一篇短文,向大家介绍你的研学情况和你的研学感受。词数:不少于80词。
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审题指导
1.文体: ________
2.人称: __________
3.时态: ____________
4.写作要点:① ____________________________;② __________;③
__________
记叙文
第一人称
一般过去时
研学目的地、交通方式及人物
研学活动
我的感受
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思路点拨
Where we went;How we went there
he weather and what we did in the countryside
What I think of the trip and what I learnt from it
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小试身手
【基础版】One possible version:
My Study Trip
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Last Friday,I took a bus to the countryside with my classmates for a
study trip.
The weather was sunny,perfect for our trip. We were all excited to
visit the countryside. When we got there,I saw lots of colourful flowers in
the fields.They were very beautiful,so we took many photos.In the
morning,we walked around the farm and helped farmers pick fruit.
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It was really fun to pick fruit. In the afternoon,we learnt to grow and
water plants. The farmers were nice,and the countryside made me think
of the old-time happy life.
When it was time to leave,I was a bit sad to say goodbye.What a
wonderful experience I had!It was educational and relaxing.
【提升版】One possible version:
My Study Trip
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As the saying goes,“It’s better to travel ten thousand miles than to
read ten thousand books.”Last Friday,I went on a study trip to the
countryside with my classmates by bus.
The weather was sunny and warm. Everyone was excited to visit the
countryside. When we arrived,I was surprised to see thousands of colourful
flowers in the fields.They were so beautiful that we took many
photos.In the morning,we explored the farm and helped the farmers pick
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fruit. I could do nothing but focus on the work,which was really fun. In
the afternoon,we learnt how to grow and water the plants. The friendly
farmers and the peaceful countryside reminded me of the simple and
happy life in the past.
When it was time to leave,I was a bit sad to say goodbye. The trip
not only brought me pleasure but also left me many beautiful memories.
How I wish to go there again!
Beginning
Body
Ending
Travel
experience
(记叙文)
Activity
Person
Place
Time
Reason
Feeling
Feeling
Last summer/winter...
The weather was...
I went to...with...
I/We visited/ saw/ climbed/ took/ had...
I liked this place because I learned something important…
What an unforgettable experience!
Weather
The structure of the passage
Let’s summarize
Evaluation Form 评价表
Items 评价项目 Standard Scores
标准分值 Scores
得分
Format 格式 2
Person 人称 2
Simple past tense
一般过去时 2
Content 内容
1. 时间 2.天气 3. 地点
4. 人物 5. 事件 6. 感受 12
Hand-writing 书写 2
语法或单词拼写错误酌情扣分
Total 总分 20
Let’s write
Must-do 必做
1. Finish and polish your writing for 3c and submit it in next class.
Choose to do 选做
1. Search on the Intenet and learn more about Scotland.
Homework
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