摘要:
该初中英语课件围绕“Happy Holiday”主题,聚焦旅行类记叙文写作,核心知识点包括相关词汇(countryside, deer等)、四段式结构(Beginning-Development-Climax-Ending)、一般过去时运用及“时间、地点、事件、情感”要素。课堂导入通过Vincent旅行日记(天气、心情图标)回顾旧知,衔接Gina的苏格兰故事,以5W1H问题链搭建从阅读到写作的学习支架。
其亮点在于“读写结合”的教学逻辑,通过Skimming/Scanning分析Gina故事结构,培养思维品质;提供写作框架(时间/地点/意外事件等要素)和语言点(如surprised, look for)讲练结合,提升语言能力;融入“自然和谐”情感教育,如Gina与鹿的经历引导学生热爱自然。学生能掌握结构化写作并迁移至自身经历,教师可直接使用范文、练习等资源提升教学效率。
内容正文:
Unit 1
Happy Holiday
主讲人:XXX
课型:读写课
Section B 3a-3c
能掌握旅行与情绪类词汇及短语(countryside, forest, deer, surprised, wonderful,turn around, look for);学习掌握描述假期记叙文的四段结构(Beginning—Development—Climax—Ending)。(学习理解)
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能运用略读、细读梳理故事情节 + 情绪,整理文本框架,提取“时间、地点、意外事件、情感” 等关键信息;掌握“经历 + 意外瞬间 + 情感”的旅行类写作结构,正确使用一般过去时、形容词及连接词。(应用实践)
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能联系自身经历,运用所学叙事结构(聚焦一个瞬间)和写作技巧(细节、感受、对话、愿望),独立完成一篇6-8句话的假期故事;
在写作中学会发现旅途的意外之美,热爱与保护自然(迁移创新)
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学习目标
Lead-in
Language points
Pre-writing
Exercises
While-writing
Summary
Post-writing
Homework
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Contents
Contents
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Part 1
Lead-in
感
谢
观
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Do you remember Vincent’s trip diaries? How did he talk about his holiday?
Vincent’s Holiday
(Weather,
Place,
Activities,
Feelings)
July 17
July 18
When
Where
Who
What
How
Today we will read a story from Gina.
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Lead in
Where did Gina go? What animal will she meet?
Scotland
Deer
What do you know about Scotland?
a part of the UK
beautiful highlands
many old castles
wear tartan(传统格子)
play bagpipes(大风笛)
Now let’s
read Gina’s
story.How did
she tell it?
Part 2
Pre-writing
感
谢
观
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Read for Structure — 5W1H in Gina's Story
When did she go there?
Who did she go with?
What did she hear and see?
How did she feel?
Skimming
Where did she go?
Read the text quickly.Divide the story into 4 parts.
Skimming
Beginning
Development
Climax
Ending
Beginning
Development
Climax
Ending
Read for more details and answer the questions.
Scaning
1.How did Gina describe her holiday Para.1?
2.Why did everything look different?
Because she lives in
a big city.
The countryside
is totally new to her.
Beginning
new/curious
Read for more details and answer the questions.
Scaning
1. When Gina go to the forest and why?
2. What happened suddenly?
3. What did she see and how did she feel?
Early in the morning.
Because she went there to explore.
Development
&Climax
She heard a noise.
Read for more details and answer the questions.
Scaning
1. What did mom say about the deer?
2.How did Gina feel?
How did she show it?
It was probably looking for food and hoping to get some.
Ending
Feeling words
Actions
Dialogue
Wish
Finish the mind map.
Gina’s holiday
When
Who
How
What
Last autumn
With her family
the train
in a comfortable house
the forest
a deer
told her parents
curious/new
surprised/scared
wonderful/ helpful
The little surprising moments in nature
are the most unforgettable.
Enjoy nature and be friendly to wild animals.
Where
Scotland
What
Beginning
Development
&Climax
Ending
Beginning
Development
Climax
Ending
Retell the story.
Last autumn
Went to Scotland with her family and stayed in a nice countryside house.
She explored the forest and heard a noise.
She turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
Gina’s story
She ran home,
shared the story,
and hoped to go back.
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Part 3
While-writing
感
谢
观
看
Use your ideas above to write a holiday story.
1. When did it happen?
2. Where were you?
3. What did you do? ( “unexpected moment” )
4. How did you feel?
5. What did you learn?
Time
Living Environment
Scenery
Time
Action
Unexpected event
Reaction
Feeling
Personal action
Dialogue
Wish
3c
Beginning
Development
&Climax
Ending
Last summer, my family took a car to a small village in the mountains.
We stayed in a wooden house near a river.
One morning, I went ...
Suddenly, I saw...
I learned ......
Part 4
Post-writing
感
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观
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A possible version
Last summer, my family took a car to a small village in the mountains. We stayed in a wooden house near a river.
One morning, I went fishing by the river. Suddenly, I saw a little fox drinking water on the other side. I was so surprised that I didn’t move. It looked at me for a second and then ran away.
I ran back and told my parents. I felt excited and warm after seeing the lovely wild animal. It was a wonderful experience. I learned that we should protect nature to get close to wild creatures. I hoped to see wild animals again someday.
Part 5
Language points
感
谢
观
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练
countryside 不可数名词, 乡村;农村
in the countryside 在乡村;在农村
My grandparents live in the countryside.
句
讲
例
Let’s learn and take notes
We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery.
We often go to ________ to enjoy the beautiful nature.
A.cinema B.city C.country D.countryside
练
turn around 转身;翻转 turn on/off/up/down
surprised adj.吃惊的 surprising adj.令人吃惊的 surprise v.使吃惊
deer鹿(单复数同形)
She turned around when she heard her name.
I was so surprised that I couldn’t say a word.
There are many deer in the forest.
句
讲
例
Let’s learn and take notes
I turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
The visitors are very ____ to see so many _____ changes in Quanzhou.
A.surprise; surprised B.surprising; surprised
C.surprised; surprising
练
probably adv.很可能;大概
look for (强调寻找的过程) find (强调找到的结果)
He liked to look for shells (贝壳) at the seaside in the summer vacation.
I’m looking for my keys and I can’t find them.
句
讲
例
Let’s learn and take notes
The deer is probably looking for food and hoping to get some from you.
Tina is planning to ________ a job to work in a coffee shop.
A.look after B.look at C.look like D.look for
练
hope to do sth./ hope that+从句
wish (sb.) to do sth/ wish that+从句
I hope to buy a big house near the sea.
I wish that I could be a bird.
句
讲
例
Let’s learn and take notes
The deer is probably looking for food and hoping to get some from you.
She hopes _________(pass) the exam.
to pass
Part 6
Summary
感
谢
观
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Beginning
Development
Climax
Ending
Summary
Last autumn
Went to Scotland with her family and stayed in a nice countryside house.
She explored the forest and heard a noise.
Sheturned around and was surprised to see a deer.
Gina’s story
She ran home,
shared the story,
and hoped to go back.
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1. When did it happen?
2. Where were you?
3. What did you do? ( “unexpected moment” )
4. How did you feel?
5. What did you learn?
Time
Living Environment
Scenery
Time
Action
Unexpected event
Reaction
Feeling
Personal action
Dialogue
Wish
Beginning
Development
&Climax
Ending
Summary
Part 7
Exercises
感
谢
观
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1.When I walked through the forest, I _________ a squirrel climbing a tree.
A.see B.saw C.seen D.seeing
2.Forty per cent of the population of the city comes from the countryside. They come here to ________ new jobs.
A.look for B.clean up C.care about D.connect with
3.When I met Mike in the museum, I felt ________. I thought he was in the library.
A.bored B.boring C.surprised D.surprising
4.—Did he agree to go with you?
—He didn’t answer. Instead, he ________ and left the room.
A.turned out B.turned around C.turned up D.turned off
5.Nick will ________ visit Shanghai next month, but he isn’t sure.
A.truly B.hardly C.usually D.probably
Exercises
单项选择
Part 8
Homework
感
谢
观
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Homework
Homework
Need to do:
写一篇话(6-8句)描述一次你难忘的旅行或假期经历:什么时候发生的?去了哪里?做了什么?有什么惊喜?你学到了什么?
Choose to do:
录制难忘的旅行或假期经历视频,小组内展示。
感
谢
观
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