UNIT 2 读后续写——夯基赋能·直击高考-【优学精讲】2026-2027学年高中英语必修第一册教用课件（译林版）

该高中英语课件系统梳理了读后续写的叙事模式（Exposition、Rising Action、Climax等）及情节发展线索，通过情节山模型和实战微练表格，将文本段落与情节阶段对应，帮助学生构建“情节-情感”双线知识网络。 其亮点在于理论与实践结合，如用表格梳理“我与科卡”故事的Exposition至Climax阶段，培养学生分析和推断的思维品质，续写任务提升语言表达能力。分层设计让学生精准把握续写逻辑，教师可依托资料高效开展针对性复习。

读后续写——夯基赋能·直击高考 故事类记叙文有两条线索，一是情节(plot)发展线索，二是情感(feeling)发展线索。通常情况下，随着故事情节的发展，文章中主要人物的情感也会随之产生变化。所以，对文章的整体把握包括两个方面：情节和情感发展线索。 了解叙事模式是把握情节发展的基础。情节山(Plot Mountain)是整理文章脉络的最佳方式。 奠基续写写作思路——读通·读后续写情节发展 返回首页 一、了解叙事模式 返回首页 一般情况下，在读后续写提供的语篇中，已经出现了三部分：Exposition、Rising Action、Climax。其中Climax中出现最大、最迫切需要解决的问题。需要续写的两段分别对应Falling Action(问题的解决过程)和Resolution(解决的结果)。 返回首页 二、情节山   一般情况下，可以通过绘制情节山整理文章脉络和梳理文章的情节发展线索，为下一步的续写做好铺垫。 返回首页 阅读下面的材料，完成以下任务。 [1]My best friend, Cocoa, and I live in a senior-citizen apartment complex in a lovely small town. Cocoa is a ten-year-old poodle (卷毛狗) and I am a sixty-nine-year-old lady, so you can see we both qualify as senior citizens. 重拳锤炼续写场景——驰文思·试锋芒 返回首页 [2]Years ago, I promised myself that when I retired I would get a chocolate poodle to share my golden years. From the very beginning, Cocoa has always been exceptionally well-behaved. I never have to tell him anything more than once. He is extremely neat—when taking toys from his box to play, he always puts them back when he is finished. I have been accused of being obsessively neat, and sometimes I wonder if he mimics me or if he was born that way, too. 返回首页 [3]He is a wonderful companion. When I throw a ball for him, he picks it up in his mouth and gives it back to me. He does many amusing things that make me laugh, and when that happens, he is so delighted that he just keeps it up. I enjoy his company very much. [4]But almost two years ago, Cocoa did something that challenged comprehension. Was it a miracle or a coincidence? It is certainly a mystery. 返回首页 [5]One afternoon, Cocoa started acting strangely. I was sitting on the floor playing with him when he started pawing and sniffing at the right side of my chest. He had never done anything like this before, and I told him, “No.” Usually, one “no” is sufficient, but not that day. He stopped briefly, then suddenly ran toward me from the other side of the room, throwing his entire weight—eighteen pounds—at the right side of my chest. He crashed into me and I yelled in pain. It hurt more than I thought it would have. 返回首页 [6]Soon after this, I felt a lump (肿瘤). I went to the doctors, and after X-rays, tests and lab work were done, they told me I had cancer. 注意：续写词数应为150个左右。 When cancer starts, a wall of calcium(钙) builds to which the lump or cancer attaches itself. __________________________________________________________ Was Cocoa just aware of what he was doing? _________________________________________________________ 返回首页 情节阶段 对应段落 具体内容 Exposition Para.1 “我”(69岁的女士)和最好的朋友——10岁的卷毛狗科卡(Cocoa)，住在小镇的__________________里，两人都算得上是老年人 老年公寓综合体 返回首页 情节阶段 对应段落 具体内容 Rising Action Paras. 2-3 “我”退休前承诺自己要养一只巧克力色的卷毛狗共度晚年；科卡行为举止 ____________，非常爱干净，还会模仿“我”；他是很棒的伙伴，会陪“我”玩球、做有趣的事逗“我”开心，“我”很享受他的陪伴 格外良好 返回首页 情节阶段 对应段落 具体内容 Climax Paras.4-6 两年前的一天下午，科卡行为异常：先是__________________ “我”的右胸，“我”制止他却没用；接着他猛地冲向“我”，用全身重量撞“我”的右胸；不久后“我”摸到肿块，去医院检查后，医生告知“我”____________ 用爪子扒、用鼻子嗅 得了癌症 返回首页 情节阶段 对应段落 具体内容 Falling Action 续写 第一段 医生说科卡的撞击__________________，打破了钙壁，让肿瘤更早被发现；“我”庆幸有科卡的____________ Resolution 续写 第二段 “我”很确信科卡知道自己所做的一切。 “我”康复后，更加珍惜和科卡的时光，明白他的异常行为不是______或______，而是对“我”的守护，这份陪伴是“我”晚年最珍贵的礼物 意外帮了“我”大忙 及时提醒 奇迹 巧合 返回首页 $