Unit 3 Period 4 Writing-【优学精讲】2026-2027学年高中英语必修第一册教用课件（外研版）

该高中英语课件聚焦叙事类记叙文写作与场景微续写，通过“感恩父母”征文、“家庭回忆”征稿等情境任务导入，构建从审题谋篇（体裁、时态、结构）、遣词造句（词汇、句式、语法）到靓化表达（改写技巧）、衔接成篇的完整学习支架，辅以实战演练巩固写作能力。 其亮点在于以情境任务驱动语言能力提升，如应用文写作中用“with+宾语+宾补”改写句子增强表达；提供“笔尖粮仓”语料库（开头、经过、结尾句式）和续写词汇（动作、情感描写），培养思维品质；范文示例与实战演练助力学习能力发展。学生能系统掌握写作方法，教师可依托完整流程高效教学。

Period 4　Writing 主题引领 情境写作 典题呈现 假定你是李华，你校英语报正在开展“感恩父母”的征文活动，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.父亲或母亲令你印象最深刻的一件事； 2.自己的感想和从中得到的启示。 注意：写作词数应为80个左右。 写作一　应用文写作(叙事类记叙文) 返回首页 　审题谋篇 返回首页 遣词造句 1．________ v.　　　　　　　 走近，靠近 2．_______ 求助于 3．____________________ 与某人聊天 4．_______ v. 尊敬，敬重 巧妙对接单元词汇 approach turn to have a chat with sb. respect 返回首页 [第一段]　表达尊敬和感激 1．我最尊敬和感激的人是我的母亲，因为她对我无尽的关爱。 ____________________________________ is my mother because of her endless love for me. 巧用单元句式、语法 The person I respect and appreciate most 返回首页 [第二段]　详细介绍事情的经过 2．我仍然记得我中学时那次考试不及格的那一天。 I still remember the day _____________________________________． 3．因为我没有人可以求助，我非常难过。 ____________________________________, I was so sad. 4．她下班后注意到我很沮丧，走近我，和我温柔地聊了聊。 After work, she noticed my being upset，_______________________ ________________________． when I failed in an exam in middle school Because I had no one to turn to for help approached me and had a gentle chat with me 返回首页 5．她告诉我失败是成功之母，并鼓励我保持乐观和自信。(that引导宾语从句) She told me ___________________________________ and encouraged me to keep positive and confident. that failure is the mother of success 返回首页 [第三段]　表达自己的感受 6．我永远不会忘记母亲为我做的一切。 I'll never forget all the things _____________________________． 7．做她的孩子是我最大的幸福。[动词-ing(短语)作主语] _______________ is my greatest happiness. (that) my mum has done for me Being her child 返回首页 8．用“with＋宾语＋宾语补足语”改写句3 ______________________________________________ 靓化表达促提升 With no one to turn to for help, I was so sad. 返回首页 　 衔接成篇 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 返回首页 One possible version： The person I respect and appreciate most is my mother because of her endless love for me. I still remember the day when I failed in an exam in middle school. With no one to turn to for help, I was so sad. After work, she noticed my being upset, approached me and had a gentle chat with me. She told me that failure is the mother of success and encouraged me to keep positive and confident. I'll never forget all the things (that) my mum has done for me. Being her child is my greatest happiness. 返回首页 实战演练 你校英文报Lovely Family Memories栏目正在征稿。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.你对家庭的认识； 2.分享一则家人间的感人故事。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 返回首页 ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 返回首页 One possible version： It's true that the family is an important part of our life. The family gives us not only warmth and comfort, but also support and strength. Speaking of the lovely memory, one floods back instantly. Once my parents promised to give me a gift if I did well in exams. Unluckily, the result was bad. Instead of criticizing me, my father said，“No problem. Next time you can do better, and the gift is still for you！” I was greatly moved. Whenever I recall it, a classic saying comes to my mind，“East or west, home is the best.” 返回首页 笔尖粮仓应用文写作赋能站——叙事类记叙文 第一段 引出话题，介绍引起回忆的原因/事物 1.Every time I see it, I can't help thinking of that unforgettable thing in my life. 每当我看到它，我就会不由自主地想起我生命中那件难忘的事。 2.The lovely memory came flooding back. 美好的回忆如潮水般涌上心头。 3.I came across a diary in my drawer yesterday, which reminded me of something in the past.　昨天我在抽屉里偶然发现一本日记，它使我想起了过去的事。 返回首页 第二段 具体讲述回忆中事件的经过 1.My father kept encouraging me so that I could cycle around the garden shortly after my first try.　我的父亲不断地鼓励我，使我在第一次尝试后不久就能绕着花园骑自行车了。 2.I suddenly had a high fever, but my father was out on a business trip. In a hurry, my mother took me to see a doctor. 我突然发高烧，而我父亲正好出差在外。慌忙之下，母亲带我去看医生。 3.My mother was strict with my brother and me in study all the time. 我的妈妈对我和哥哥在学习上一直很严格。 4.With my special care, my mother recovered quickly. 在我的悉心照料下，妈妈很快就康复了。 返回首页 第三段 升华主题，总结说明这件事引发的思考与感悟 1.It is still one of my most precious things, for it was not only my first bike, but a symbol of my father's love as well as my courage.　它仍然是我最珍贵的东西之一，因为它不仅是我的第一辆自行车，而且是我父亲的爱和我的勇气的象征。 2.From this experience, I have learned that if we don't understand our parents' decisions, we should have a heart-to-heart conversation with them and try to put ourselves in their shoes.　从这次经历中，我明白了如果我们不理解父母的决定，就该和他们坦诚地交流，并试着站在他们的角度思考。 返回首页 积累教材续写语料——有效强化教考衔接 词汇积累 [动作描写]　 approach，chat，raise one's voice, respect, ignore, suit，jump in with both feet, sigh，observe，apologise，admire，judge，settle，contain [人物描写]　professional，talent，responsible，jaw，beard，skin，slim，cheek [情感描写]　be proud of 写作二　场景微续写(父子和解) 返回首页 佳句积累 [外貌描写]　1.In his thirties, he was quite thin and pale, and he had red, bushy hair. Nowadays，he's well-built and tanned. He's always had a square jaw, but now he's grown a beard.Strangely，his beard is still red even though his hair is turning grey！ 2.She still has smooth skin and straight black hair, and jogging has kept her slim and fit. 3.I still have light skin and black hair, of course.But I usually wear my hair in a ponytail these days as it has got a lot longer. Mum says I had cute rosy cheeks, but now I have freckles. [动作描写]　1.Alistair ran towards Jonny, caught him and started pulling him towards the finish line. 2.I woke up really early and tip-toed to the kitchen. [主旨升华]　I guess love is indeed a magical ingredient. 返回首页 重拳锤炼续写场景——积累内化应用提升 [场景呈现]　父亲和儿子在专业选择上产生分歧， 儿子因父亲不理解而生气，父亲叹气后靠近儿子并进行劝解，进一步宽慰并提出思考建议，儿子道歉并对父亲充满感激。 返回首页 第一步　完成句子 1．“我不敢相信你不理解！”儿子提高了声音， 对父亲喊道。(分词短语作状语) “I can't believe you're not understanding！” the son _________________, ________________________． 2．父亲深深地叹了一口气，走近儿子，把手放在儿子的肩膀上。(分词短语作状语) ________________， the father ___________________ and put his hand on his son's shoulder. raised his voice shouting at his father Sighing deeply approached his son 返回首页 3．“我尊重你的选择，但你选择了一条不适合你的路，”父亲平静地说，声音柔和却坚定。(定语从句) “I _______________， but you're choosing a path ______________，” the father said calmly, his voice soft but firm. 4．儿子点了点头并向他的父亲道了歉，大颗的泪珠顺着脸颊滚落。(with＋宾语＋宾语补足语) The son nodded and said sorry to his father, ______________________________________. respect your choice that doesn't suit you with big tears rolling down his cheeks 返回首页 5．儿子，你不必为你的梦想或选择道歉。 Son, you don't have to _________________________________________. 6．只要你快乐，并且在做你所坚信的事，我就会为你感到骄傲。 As long as you are happy and doing what you believe in, I'll _______________. apologise for your dreams or your choices be proud of you 返回首页 7．但是答应我，在你全心全意投入之前，你会充分考虑的。 But promise me you'll think it through ___________________________ ______________． 8．儿子擦去眼泪，看着父亲的眼睛，眼中满是感激。(独立主格) The son wiped away his tears and looked into his father's eyes, ______________________________. before you jump in with both feet his eyes filled with gratitude 返回首页 第二步　连句成文 ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 返回首页 One possible version： “I can't believe you're not understanding！”the son raised his voice, shouting at his father. Sighing deeply, the father approached his son and put his hand on his son's shoulder. “I respect your choice, but you're choosing a path that doesn't suit you，” the father said calmly, his voice soft but firm. The son nodded and said sorry to his father, with big tears rolling down his cheeks. “Son, you don't have to apologise for your dreams or your choices. As long as you are happy and doing what you believe in, I'll be proud of you. But promise me you'll think it through before you jump in with both feet，” the father said. The son wiped away his tears and looked into his father's eyes, his eyes filled with gratitude. 返回首页 笔墨延展读后续写多元话题库——感激 短语必记 1.be filled with gratitude　　　充满感激 2.express one's thanks/gratitude to sb. 向某人表达感谢 3.feel deeply grateful to sb. 对某人深感感激 4.with a heart full of thanks 心怀满满的谢意 5.gratitude welled up in one's heart 感激之情涌上心头 返回首页 必背金句 1.Gratitude welling up in my heart, I didn't know how to put my thanks into words.(独立主格) 感激之情涌上心头，我不知道该如何表达谢意。 2.It was your selfless help that made me get through the tough time, for which I owe you a debt of gratitude.(强调句；非限制性定语从句) 正是你无私的帮助让我度过了那段艰难的时光，对此我感激不尽。 3.With tears of gratitude glistening in my eyes, I hugged her tightly, words failing me.(with 复合结构；独立主格) 感激的泪水在我眼中闪烁，我紧紧抱住她，一句话也说不出来。 返回首页 必背金句 4.No matter how I express my thanks, I can't fully convey how grateful I am for what you've done.(让步状语从句) 无论我如何表达谢意，都无法完全表达我对您所做一切的感激之情。 5.She sent me a handwritten letter, in which she said she felt deeply grateful for the warm support I'd offered.(非限制性定语从句) 她给我寄了一封手写信，信中说她对我所提供的暖心支持深感感激。 返回首页 $