摘要:
**基本信息**
高中英语新授课同步练,聚焦人物介绍写作,通过“词汇-句型-语篇”三层递进设计,实现从基础积累到综合应用的知识巩固,培养语言能力与思维品质。
**分层设计**
|层次|知识覆盖|设计特色|
|----|----------|----------|
|基础层|单元核心词汇(如influential, sacrifice)|单词短语填空,直接巩固本单元基础词汇|
|进阶层|语块与语法运用(如定语从句、非谓语动词)|完成句子+句式升级(合并句子、强调句),提升表达准确性|
|应用层|语篇综合表达(演讲稿写作)|连句成篇+实战演练(投稿短文),实现知识迁移与综合输出|
内容正文:
Part 6 Writing
人物介绍
写作题目
假如你是高二学生李华,你校下周三将举办一场以“The person I admire most”为主题的演讲比赛,请你写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:1.介绍你所敬佩的人的经历;2.你从他/她身上学到了什么。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. adj.有影响力的 2. n.牺牲 3. adj.坚定的,坚决的
4. adj.杰出的,优秀的
5. adj.乐观的 6. adj.热心的,热衷的
7. 致力于 8. 为……努力/奋斗
答案
1.influential 2.sacrifice
3.determined 4.outstanding
5.optimistic 6.enthusiastic 7.devote...to
8.strive for
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:点出谁是你最敬佩的人
(1)The person I admire most is Helen Keller, (她是最有影响力的女性之一) in America in the 20th century.
第二段:介绍他/她的经历,突出其受尊敬和爱戴的原因
(2)When she was a young child, she became blind and deaf (由于一场严重的疾病).
(3)The disease (使她处于) utter darkness and silence.
(4)When she was seven, to get Helen a good education, her parents (做出了许多牺牲) and found her a teacher.
(5)Helen's exceptional intelligence and (坚定不移的努力) as well as her teacher's skill and patience helped her (取得了杰出的成就).
(6)She almost (把她的一生都奉献给了)helping the blind and deaf children.
第三段:结尾升华,介绍他/她对自己人生的影响
(7)Her (乐观热情的生活态度) always motivates me and pushes me (为我的目标而奋斗).
答案
(1)who was one of the most influential women (2)because of a serious disease
(3)left her in (4)made many sacrifices (5)determined effort;make outstanding achievements
(6)devoted her entire life to (7)optimistic and enthusiastic attitude towards life;to strive for my goal
2.句式升级
(8)将句(1)改写为含有同位语的句子。
(9)将句(2)和句(3)合并为含动词-ing形式作结果状语的句子。
(10)将句(5)改写为含with短语和combine的分词结构的句子。
(11)将句(7)改写为强调句。
答案
(8)The person I admire most is Helen Keller, one of the most influential women in America in the 20th century.
(9)When she was a young child, she became blind and deaf because of a serious disease, leaving her in utter darkness and silence.
(10)With Helen's exceptional intelligence and determined effort, combined with her teacher's skill and patience, she made outstanding achievements.
(11)It is her optimistic and enthusiastic attitude towards life that always motivates me and pushes me to strive for my goal.
连句成篇
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen!
The person I admire most is Helen Keller, in America in the 20th century.
When she was a young child, she became blind and deaf she was seven, to get Helen a good education, her parents made many sacrifices and found her a combined with , she made outstanding achievements. She almost devoted her entire life to helping the blind and deaf children.
always motivates me and pushes me to strive for my goal.
写作积累
关于人物介绍的增分佳句
开头:介绍
人物的个人
情况
1.He was born into a poor/rich family and lived a hard/happy life.他出生在一个贫穷/富有的家庭,过着艰苦/幸福的生活。
2.He began to make a living at an early age.他幼年就开始谋生了。
主体:介绍
人物的经历
和成就
1.He went to study in Peking University in 2004 and graduated four years later.他于2004年进入北京大学学习,四年后毕业。
2.He got his bachelor's/master's/doctor's degree in mathematics from...他从……获得了数学学士/硕士/博士学位。
3.He devoted his lifetime to...他把他的一生都奉献给了……
4.He won a prize in...他在……方面获奖了。
5.He made great progress in...他在……方面取得了很大的进步。
结尾:对人
物作出评价
1.He is one of the most outstanding persons.他是最杰出的人物之一。
2.He is regarded/considered as...他被认为是……
3.He has made great contributions to...他为……做出了巨大的贡献。
4.He sets an example to...他为……树立了一个榜样。
实战演练答案见P95
在你成长的过程中,总有一个人对你的思想和行为产生过重大的影响。请你写一篇短文介绍这个人并向校英文报投稿,内容包括:
1.人物简介;
2.对你的影响。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案与分层梯度式解析
Part 6 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
The Person Who Influences Me Most
Many people have a great influence on me, but I think no one can compare with my mother.
Working as a civil servant, she doesn't appear to be extraordinary in any way but she works faithfully and devotedly. At the same time, she never puts her family aside. It is my mother who teaches me to be kind, optimistic and persistent. When I come across someone in need, I'm willing to give a helping hand. When I encounter difficulties, I always constantly seek for approaches to them.
She is not only my mother but also my life mentor. Indeed, she is just the person affecting me greatly.
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