内容正文:
Part 4 Writing
写一次经历
写作题目
假定你是李华,曾经在一所聋哑学校做过助教。请根据以下要点用英文写一篇关于你的助教经历的文章。
1.一个对生活失去信心的失聪女孩Jean在你的帮助下对生活重拾信心;
2.当时你遇到的最大困难是沟通障碍;
3.你是如何克服困难的?你从中学到了什么?
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词填空
1. adj.难堪的,尴尬的2. adj.令人愉快的,讨人喜欢的
3. n.友谊;友好交往 4. adj.心烦意乱的,烦恼的
5. adv.然而,不过 6. v.锲而不舍,坚持不懈
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
Ⅰ.1.embarrassed 2.delightful 3.companionship 4.upset 5.nevertheless 6.persevere
Ⅱ.1.a delightful experience 2.that I faced 3.gather courage 4.escaping from them 5.establish companionship and mutual trust 6.persevere in what I was doing 7.contribute to our success 8.On the whole, it is a delightful experience to help Jean restore her confidence in life. 9.It was the communication barriers that were the biggest difficulty that I faced.
写作积累
与个人经历相关的表达
开头:引出
发生的事情
1.It was in...that I first encountered..., an experience that would later shape my perspective on...
正是在……,我第一次遇到了……,这段经历后来形成了我对……的看法。
2.Whenever I think back to..., I can still vividly recall..., as if it happened yesterday.
每当我回想起……,我依然能清晰地记得……,仿佛它就发生在昨天。
3.One incident that left a deep impression on me occurred during...
一件给我留下印象深刻的事发生在……期间。
主体:叙述
事件过程
1.At first, I struggled with..., but when I..., things gradually started to improve.
起初,我在……上举步维艰,但在我……后,情况逐渐开始好转。
2.Throughout this journey, I encountered numerous challenges, including...
在整个过程中,我遇到了无数的挑战,包括……
3.Instead of giving up, I sought help from...and devoted myself entirely to finding a solution.
我没有放弃,而是向……寻求帮助,并全身心投入寻找解决方案。
4.The process was far from smooth, as I had to deal with challenges such as...
这个过程远非一帆风顺,因为我必须应对诸如……之类的挑战。
结尾:总结
事件结果
1.This endeavor not only enabled me to achieve...but also helped me build profound confidence.
这次努力不仅让我实现了……,还帮助我建立了极大的信心。
2.Looking back, I realize that the most valuable outcome was not the success itself, but the personal growth I underwent.回首往事,我意识到最宝贵的成果不是成功本身,而是我经历的个人成长。
3.The experience ultimately taught me a lifelong lesson...这段经历最终教会了我一个受用终身的经验……
实战演练
(2026安徽部分学校学情诊断)
假定你是李华,你校英文报开设了一个“The Power of a Smile”的专栏。请你写一篇英语短文投稿,分享你的故事。内容包括:
1.一次你因为微笑而改变他人或自己的经历;
2.这次经历对你的影响或启示。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
The Power of a Smile
答案与分层梯度式解析
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
The Power of a Smile
Last winter, I noticed a new classmate, Lily, who always sat alone. One day, I gave her a warm smile, which was the first friendly gesture she had received in our class. It was this simple smile that encouraged her to open up and become my close friend later.
Not only did my smile change her, but it also deeply influenced me. I realized that a small act of kindness could make a big difference. Now, I always try to help others with a smile, which creates a positive atmosphere around me.
This experience taught me the power of a smile—a universal language that connects hearts and spreads warmth. Let's smile more to brighten our world!
1.重点词汇
①open up敞开心扉
②a small act of kindness一个小小的善举
③make a big difference产生巨大影响
④create a positive atmosphere营造积极的氛围
2.亮点句型
①One day, I gave her a warm smile, which was the first friendly gesture she had received in our class.(which引导非限制性定语从句;“she had received...class”为省略关系代词that的定语从句)有一天,我给了她一个温暖的微笑——这是她在我们班收到的第一个友好的举动。
②It was this simple smile that encouraged her to open up and become my close friend later.(强调句)正是这个简单的微笑鼓励了她敞开心扉,并且后来成为我的亲密朋友。
③Not only did my smile change her, but it also deeply influenced me. (部分倒装)我的微笑不仅改变了她,还深深地影响了我。
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