06-U4 单元写作·以读促写（Writing & Project）（课件PPT）-【鼎成中考·活页好题】2026-2027学年八年级上册英语同步课时练(人教版·新教材)

该初中英语课件围绕“介绍神奇动植物”的写作主题，聚焦形容词/副词最高级的运用及“点明对象—介绍特点—总结升华”的逻辑结构。通过主题解读明确写作目标，结合蓝鲸范文赏析分析开头引出对象、主体描述特征、结尾呼吁保护的结构，为学生搭建从输入到输出的学习支架。 其亮点在于采用“以读促写”模式，通过范文结构分析、佳句仿写（如竹子生长速度、蜜蜂授粉作用）及素材储备（开头/中间/结尾句模板），培养学生语言能力（准确运用高级词汇）、思维品质（逻辑组织）和文化意识（保护生物多样性）。写作练笔结合具体要点与范文示例，助力学生提升表达能力，也为教师提供系统教学资源，提高课堂效率。

英 语 1 Unit 4 Amazing Plants and Animals 单元写作·以读促写（Writing & Project） 2 主题解读 1.本单元的写作主题是：介绍自然界中神奇的动植物。通过介绍动植物 的生存智慧与生态功能，探讨动植物与人类的联系，强调保护生物多样 性的重要意义。我们应主动守护生态平衡，用实际行动守护动植物的家 园，学会尊重自然，与地球上的所有生命和谐共生。 2.在写作时，你可以遵循“点明写作对象—介绍其具体特点—总结升华” 的逻辑结构。同时有意识地运用本单元的核心知识点——形容词/副词的 最高级来介绍动植物，突出其独特特征，使你的表达更准确、更生动。 3 范文赏析 An Amazing Animal—The Blue Whale When talking about the most amazing animals, I think of the blue whales first. Here are some amazing facts about the animal.__________开头段：引出介绍对 象 【范文结构分析】 1.请从开头段中找出引出 介绍对象的句子并抄写。 _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ ______ When talking about the most amazing animals, I think of the blue whales first. 4 The blue whales are special in many ways. As we all know, the blue whales are the largest and heaviest animals on earth. A blue whale can weigh as much as 200 tons. What's more, although the blue whales are really huge, they don't eat the big fish. In fact, they eat the tiniest animals in the ocean. Last but not least, the blue whales can live up to 90 years. It's really a long life for animals.__________主体段：具体介绍蓝鲸的特别之 处 2.请从第二段中找出介绍 蓝鲸的与人们印象中不同 的特征的句子并抄写。 _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ ______________________ What's more, although the blue whales are really huge, they don't eat the big fish. In fact, they eat the tiniest animals in the ocean. 续表 5 Blue whales play an important role in the sea ecosystem. But they are in danger now. So we should try our best to call on people to stop hurting them and protect the sea. After all, protecting blue whales is protecting our earth.__________结 尾段：总结蓝鲸的重要性，并呼吁保护蓝鲸 3.请从第三段中找出表达 作者呼吁与号召的句子并 抄写。 _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ ________________ So we should try our best to call on people to stop hurting them and protect the sea. 续表 6 【佳句仿写】 1.A blue whale can weigh as much as 200 tons. 一头蓝鲸可以重达 200吨。 仿写：一些竹子可以在一天之内长高一米。 _______________________________________________________________ 2.Blue whales play an important role in the sea ecosystem. 蓝鲸在海 洋生态系统中发挥着重要作用。 仿写：蜜蜂在花朵的授粉中发挥着重要作用。 _______________________________________________________________ Some bamboo can grow as much as one metre in a day. Bees play an important role in the pollination of flowers. 7 素材储备 【开头句】 1.Among all the animals/plants, I love … the best. I think they are the … animals/plants in the world. 在所有动/植物中，我最喜欢……。 我认为它们是世界上最……的动/植物。 2.When talking about the most … animals/plants, I think of … first. 当谈到最……的动/植物时，我最先想到的是……。 3.There are many amazing plants and animals in the world, and … is my favourite. 世界上有很多神奇的动植物，其中……是我最喜欢的。 4.Here are some amazing facts about … 以下是关于……神奇的地方。 8 【中间句——特征描述】 1.One interesting fact is that whales can jump high out of the water and sing songs. 一个有趣的事实是，鲸鱼可以跳出水面并唱歌。 2.The most amazing thing about … is that …, even though it looks … 关于……最神奇的是……，即使它看起来……。 3.Different from other large sea animals, the blue whale does not feed on big fish but lives on tiny sea animals. 与其他大型海洋动物 不同，蓝鲸不以大鱼为食，而是以微小的海洋生物为食。 9 【中间句——生态意义】 4.As one of the most popular plants in China, bamboo is famous for its growth speed, goodness, and wide use. 作为中国最受欢迎的植 物之一，竹子因它的生长速度、美好寓意以及广泛的用途而闻名。 5.Chinese people love the ginkgo, as it is a symbol of hope and long life. 中国人喜欢银杏，因为它是希望和长寿的象征。 6.The bee is one of the most important animals in the world. Many plants can't live without it. 蜜蜂是世界上最重要的动物之一。许多植 物离开它们都不能存活。 10 7.Butterflies play an important role in nature. They can also help with the pollination of plants. 蝴蝶在大自然中起着重要作用。它们也 能帮助植物授粉。#7 【结尾句】 1.We should try our best to tell people the importance of protecting animals/plants. 我们应该尽最大努力告诉人们保护动/植物的重要性。 2.Actions speak louder than words. Let's work together to make a better place for wild animals! 事实胜于雄辩。让我们共同努力，为野 生动物创造一个更美好的家园！ 3.That's why I think … is the most amazing animal/plant. Let's take action to protect it right now！ 这就是我认为……是最神奇的动 /植物的原因。让我们一起立刻行动起来保护它吧！ 12 【俗语谚语】 1.Nature is not a place to visit. It is our home. 自然界不是度假胜地。 它是我们的家园。 2.No buying, no killing. 没有买卖，就没有杀害。 3.Loving animals is loving ourselves. 爱护动物就是爱护我们自己。 13 写作练笔 动物是人类的朋友，它们和我们互相帮助、互相依靠、和谐共生， 一同构成了这个五彩斑斓的世界。你最喜欢什么动物？作为中学生，你 认为我们可以为保护动物做些什么？请你结合以下信息用英语写一篇短 文，介绍自己最喜欢的动物，并提出一至两条保护动物的建议。 14 写作要求: 1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称; 2.词数80左右。 One possible version: _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ As we all know, animals play an important part in our life. Among all animals, my favourite is the panda. I love pandas because they are cute and smart. They are black and white with a round face. They can do many things, such as climbing trees and standing on their back legs. To help them, we should do something meaningful. We should plant more trees to 15 _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ make them live better. Also, it is important to tell more people to join us. All in all, animals are our friends. Let's try our best to protect them! $