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Unit 1 The Changing World(变化的世界)写作素材
一、开头总起句(引出"变化"主题)
英文句子
中文翻译
用法/适用场景
★ Great changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years.
近年来我的家乡发生了巨大变化。
全文首句,现在完成时+take place,经典开篇
The world around me has changed greatly in the past few years.
在过去几年里,我周围的世界发生了巨大变化。
替代句,换主语避免重复
When I look back at the past, I can clearly see many changes around me.
当我回顾过去,我能清楚地看到身边的许多变化。
带时间状语从句的高级开篇
China has developed rapidly since the reform and opening-up.
改革开放以来,中国发展迅速。
宏观视角开篇,适合国家发展主题
It seems that our living conditions have improved a lot.
似乎我们的生活条件改善了很多。
It seems that句型,委婉表达观察
二、过去与现在对比句(主体核心)
英文句子
中文翻译
用法 / 适用场景
★ In the past, the roads were narrow, but now they are wide and clean.
过去道路狭窄,现在又宽又干净。
对比模板:In the past..., but now...
Ten years ago, people used to live in old houses, but now most of them live in modern apartments.
十年前人们住旧房,现在大多数住现代化公寓。
used to do 表过去常常,高分表达
When I was a child, there were no buses in the village, but now it's very easy to go there by bus.
我小时候村里没有公交,现在乘公交很方便。
When I was a child 时间状语+对比
People used to keep in touch with each other by letter, but now they communicate by cellphone or the Internet.
人们过去靠书信联系,现在用手机或网络交流。
通讯方式变化,keep in touch with 短语
★ In the past, people had little leisure time, but now they can enjoy various activities in their spare time.
过去人们几乎没有休闲时间,现在可以在空余时间享受各种活动。
生活方式变化,leisure/spare time 词汇
The environment used to be terrible, but now the air is fresher and the river is cleaner.
过去环境很差,现在空气更新鲜、河流更干净。
环境变化对比,适合环保主题衔接
三、发展与进步句(主体拓展)
英文句子
中文翻译
用法 / 适用场景
★ More and more people have received a good education and lead a better life.
越来越多的人接受了良好教育,过上了更好的生活。
lead a better life 过上更好生活,写作高频
Our country has made great achievements in many fields.
我国在许多领域取得了巨大成就。
make great achievements 取得巨大成就
The improvement of the environment has brought people a more comfortable life.
环境的改善给人们带来了更舒适的生活。
improvement 名词化表达,更书面
A great deal of development has taken place in our city.
我们城市发生了巨大的发展。
a great deal of + 不可数名词
People's lives have changed for the better.
人们的生活变得更好了。
change for the better 好转,简洁有力
With the development of technology, our life is becoming more and more convenient.
随着科技的发展,我们的生活越来越便利。
With the development of... 伴随状语,加分句型
四、个人感受与感悟句(情感升华)
英文句子
中文翻译
用法 / 适用场景
★ I think it is important to remember the past, live in the present and dream about the future.
我认为记住过去、立足现在、展望未来非常重要。
排比结构,满分金句,适合结尾前
Though I had no time to travel, I still felt very happy to see the changes.
虽然我没时间旅行,但看到这些变化我仍然很开心。
though 让步状语从句,不与but连用
I feel proud of the great changes in my hometown.
我为家乡的巨大变化感到自豪。
feel proud of 为……自豪
It's a comfort and an encouragement to see people living a happy life.
看到人们过着幸福的生活,是一种慰藉与鼓励。
抽象名词作表语,书面表达
I believe our hometown will become more and more beautiful in the future.
我相信未来家乡会变得越来越美丽。
宾语从句+比较级,展望未来
五、结尾展望句(收束全文)
英文句子
中文翻译
用法 / 适用场景
★ The world has changed for the better, and I believe it will continue to improve.
世界变得更好了,我相信它会继续进步。
总结+展望,标准结尾
We should make good use of these changes and work hard for a better future.
我们应该好好利用这些变化,为更美好的未来努力。
make good use of 利用,行动号召
Every small change can make life better. Let's work together to create a brighter future.
每一个小变化都能让生活更美好,让我们共同创造更光明的未来。
升华主题,呼吁行动
No matter what difficulties we meet, we should never give up.
无论遇到什么困难,我们都不应放弃。
no matter what 让步从句,励志结尾
I hope our country will develop faster and people will live a happier life.
我希望国家发展更快,人们生活更幸福。
I hope + 宾语从句,美好祝愿
Unit 2 Inspiring People(鼓舞人心的人物)
一、开头点题句(引出敬佩的人)
英文句子
中文翻译
用法 / 适用场景
★ The person I look up to most is ________. He/She is an inspiring pioneer.
我最敬佩的人是______,他/她是一位鼓舞人心的先锋。
万能开头,look up to = admire
There are many great people in history, but ________ touches my heart most.
历史上有许多伟人,但______最打动我的心。
转折对比式开头,touch one's heart 打动人心
★ To me, one of the most inspiring people in Chinese history is ________.
对我而言,中国历史上最鼓舞人心的人物之一是______。
课文原句,one of + the + 最高级 + 复数名词
Among all the people I know, ________ is the one who inspires me most.
在我认识的所有人中,______是最激励我的人。
Among all... 范围式开头
Now that we have learned about him/her in our textbook, I want to share his/her story.
既然我们在课本中学到了他/她,我想分享他/她的故事。
now that 既然,衔接课本内容
When people talk about great heroes, ________ always comes to my mind first.
当人们谈论伟大英雄时,______总是首先浮现在我脑海。
come to one's mind 浮现在脑海
二、人物身份与背景句(It 作形式主语核心句型)
英文句子
中文翻译
用法 / 适用场景
★ It is said that ________ was born in ________ and showed great talent at an early age.
据说______出生于______,年少时就展现出非凡天赋。
It's said that... 据说,单元核心句型
It is reported that he/she devoted all his/her lifetime to ________.
据报道,他/她毕生致力于______。
It's reported that... 据报道
★ He/She is well-known as a great ________, famous for ________.
他/她作为伟大的______而闻名,因______而著名。
be well-known as 作为……闻名;be famous for 因……闻名
He/She was born into a poor family, but he/she never gave up learning.
他/她出身贫寒,但从未放弃学习。
be born into 出身于,背景铺垫
At the early age of 15, he/she entered university and studied ________.
15岁时,他/她考入大学,学习______。
at the age of 在……岁时,课文钟扬原句
In fact, above all, he/she was a great thinker/scientist who ________.
事实上,最重要的是,他/她是一位伟大的思想家/科学家,______。
in fact 事实上;above all 最重要的是,课文墨子原句
三、生平经历句(年轻时志向 → 艰苦经历 → 克服困难)
英文句子
中文翻译
用法 / 适用场景
When he/she was young, he/she showed a deep love and curiosity for ________.
年轻时,他/她对______怀有深厚的热爱与好奇心。
show love and curiosity for 课文钟扬原句
★ He/She devoted all his/her lifetime to researching/studying ________.
他/她毕生致力于研究______。
devote oneself to doing 毕生致力于,高频短语
He/She spent many years searching for ________ and carried out plenty of experiments.
他/她花了多年寻找______,进行了大量实验。
spend time doing;carry out experiments 做实验
★ He/She overcame countless hardships and never gave up, even when he/she fell sick.
他/她克服了无数困难,即使生病也从未放弃。
overcome hardships 克服困难;fall sick 生病
It was very difficult for him/her to brave the cold weather and great heights.
对他/她来说,顶着严寒和高海拔实在太难了。
It's + adj. + for sb. to do;brave 动词"勇敢面对",课文原句
He/She travelled across ________ to collect seeds/data, working day and night.
他/她走遍______收集种子/数据,夜以继日地工作。
travel across 走遍;day and night 夜以继日
Faced with so many failures, he/she didn't back down. Instead, he/she kept trying.
面对如此多的失败,他/她没有退缩,而是继续尝试。
faced with 面对;back down 退缩;instead 反而
四、成就与贡献句
英文句子
中文翻译
用法 / 适用场景
★ His/Her great work helped millions of people and made great contributions to mankind.
他/她的伟大工作帮助了数百万人,为人类做出了巨大贡献。
make contributions to 为……做贡献,万能成就句
He/She collected more than 40 million seeds from around 1,000 plants.
他/她收集了超过1000种植物的4000多万粒种子。
具体数据增强说服力,课文钟扬原句
His/Her discovery saved millions of lives and changed the world.
他/她的发现拯救了数百万生命,改变了世界。
save lives 拯救生命
★ He/She became the first Chinese woman to win the Nobel Prize.
他/她成为首位获得诺贝尔奖的中国女性。
the first...to do 首位做……的人,屠呦呦素材
Their hard work provided the world with lots of new information about ________.
他们的努力为世界提供了大量关于______的全新资料。
provide sb. with sth. 为某人提供某物
He/She developed hybrid rice, which greatly increased rice output and fed more people.
他/她研发了杂交水稻,极大提高了水稻产量,养活了更多人。
which 非限制性定语从句,袁隆平素材
Though he/she achieved great success, he/she always remained modest and lived a simple life.
尽管取得了巨大成功,他/她始终保持谦逊,过着简朴的生活。
remain modest 保持谦逊;live a simple life 过简朴生活
五、精神品质评价句(It's + adj. + of sb. to do 核心句型)
英文句子
中文翻译
用法 / 适用场景
★ It is brave of him/her to keep trying after so many failures.
在如此多失败后仍坚持尝试,他/她真勇敢。
It's + adj. + of sb. to do(of 形容人的品质),单元核心句型
It is selfless of him/her to devote his/her life to saving/helping others.
他/她毕生致力于拯救/帮助他人,真无私。
selfless 无私的,白求恩素材
★ It is wise of us to learn from his/her spirit of perseverance and determination.
学习他/她坚韧不拔的精神是明智的。
perseverance and determination 毅力与决心,高分词块
It is necessary for us teenagers to learn from great people like him/her.
对我们青少年来说,向他/她这样的伟人学习是必要的。
It's + adj. + for sb. to do(for 形容事情),注意与 of 区分
He/She is such a diligent and determined person that we all admire him/her.
他/她是如此勤奋坚定的人,我们都敬佩他/她。
such...that... 如此……以至于……
His/Her courage and wisdom have inspired a whole generation of young people.
他/她的勇气与智慧激励了整整一代年轻人。
inspire a generation 激励一代人
What impresses me most is his/her famous saying, "________."
给我印象最深的是他/她的名言:"______"。
What impresses me most is... 主语从句,加分句型
六、影响与传承句
英文句子
中文翻译
用法 / 适用场景
★ He/She left behind more than just a huge collection of seeds/works; his/her spirit lives on.
他/她留下的不仅仅是海量种子/作品,他/她的精神永存。
leave behind 留下;live on 继续存在/流传,课文钟扬原句★
His/Her love for his/her job and research lives on in his/her students.
他/她对工作与研究的热爱在学生身上延续。
live on in sb. 在某人身上延续,课文原句
★ He/She set an inspiring example for all of us, especially for young people.
他/她为我们所有人,尤其是年轻人,树立了励志榜样。
set an example for sb. 为某人树立榜样
His/Her story has a huge influence on me. Because of him/her, I started to ________.
他/她的故事对我影响巨大,因为他/她,我开始______。
have an influence on 对……有影响
Though he/she lived more than 2,000 years ago, his/her ideas still live on today.
尽管他/她生活在2000多年前,他/她的思想至今流传。
课文墨子原句,though 让步从句
He/She once said, "My students will continue on the road of scientific exploration."
他/她曾说:"我的学生将继续走在科学探索的道路上。"
continue on the road of 继续走在……的道路上,课文原句
七、个人感悟句(学到什么)
英文句子
中文翻译
用法 / 适用场景
★ From him/her, I learn that we should hold on to our dreams and never give up.
从他/她身上,我学到我们应该坚守梦想,永不放弃。
hold on to one's dream 坚守梦想,万能感悟句
His/Her story tells me how important it is to keep working hard when facing challenges.
他/她的故事告诉我,面对挑战时坚持努力是多么重要。
face challenges 面对挑战
★ I think it is important for these people to feel good about themselves, and for us to learn from them.
我认为这些人拥有自信很重要,我们向他们学习也很重要。
课文原句改编,it is important for sb. to do
Whenever I want to give up my study, his/her spirit encourages me to keep going.
每当我想放弃学习时,他/她的精神鼓励我继续前进。
whenever 每当;encourage sb. to do 鼓励某人做
His/Her experience teaches me that success comes from hard work and perseverance.
他/她的经历教会我,成功来自努力与坚持。
come from 来自
I have learned that a person's true value lies in what he/she does for others, not in fame or wealth.
我学到一个人的真正价值在于他/她为他人做了什么,而不在于名利。
lie in 在于;fame or wealth 名利,升华立意
八、结尾行动句(收束全文)
英文句子
中文翻译
用法 / 适用场景
★ I will try my best to become a useful person to society in the future.
我将尽最大努力在未来成为对社会有用的人。
try one's best to do 尽最大努力;useful to society 对社会有用
I decide to face challenges bravely and never lose heart, just like him/her.
我决定像他/她一样勇敢面对挑战,永不灰心。
lose heart 灰心;just like 正如
★ I will stick to my dream and work harder to make the world a better place.
我将坚持梦想,更加努力,让世界变得更美好。
stick to one's dream 坚持梦想;make the world a better place
Actions speak louder than words. Let's learn from him/her and take action now!
事实胜于雄辩,让我们向他/她学习,现在就行动起来!
谚语+号召,有力结尾
I hope more and more people will be inspired by his/her story and make contributions to our country.
我希望越来越多的人被他/她的故事激励,为国家做出贡献。
be inspired by 被……激励
Where there is a will, there is a way. I believe I can also make a difference someday.
有志者事竟成,我相信有一天我也能有所作为。
谚语结尾,make a difference 有所作为/产生影响
课文人物素材卡
1. 钟扬 Zhong Yang — 种子科学家(课文主阅读人物)
身份
Chinese professor, well-respected biologist, seed scientist 中国教授、备受尊敬的生物学家、种子科学家
生平
Born in 1964; entered university at 15; studied radio engineering; later became interested in plants; professor at Fudan University 生于1964年,15岁考入大学,学习无线电工程,后来对植物产生兴趣,复旦大学教授
事迹
Travelled across Xizang to collect seeds since 2001; braved cold weather and great heights; sometimes fell sick but continued; trained local students 2001年起走遍西藏采集种子,顶着严寒和高海拔,有时生病但坚持工作,培养当地学生
成就
Collected more than 40 million seeds from around 1,000 plants; provided the world with new information about Chinese plants 收集了超过1000种植物的4000多万粒种子,为世界提供了中国植物的新资料
精神
Devoted his whole life to researching plants and seeds; his love for his job lives on in his students 毕生致力于植物与种子研究,对工作的热爱在学生身上延续
名言
"My students will continue on the road of scientific exploration and the seeds we have collected may grow hundreds of years from now." "我的学生将继续走在科学探索的道路上,我们收集的种子或许在数百年后会生根发芽。"
2. 墨子 Mozi — 伟大思想家(Section B 3a 课文人物)
身份
Great thinker, soldier, good at woodwork, inventor of the kite 伟大思想家、士兵、擅长木工、风筝发明者
时代
Lived during the Warring States Period (about 468-376 BCE) 生活在战国时期(约公元前468-前376年)
事迹
Many kingdoms were fighting; common people were hurt; he spent his life trying to bring peace 各国战乱不休,百姓深受其害,他毕生致力于追求和平
思想
Idea of love (jian'ai): everyone should show the same kindness and care to everyone else; states should avoid attacking one another 兼爱思想:每个人都应平等关爱他人,各国不应互相攻伐
影响
Though he lived more than 2,000 years ago, his ideas live on; still a great inspiration to many people 尽管生活在2000多年前,思想至今流传,仍激励着许多人
金句
"To me, one of the most inspiring people in Chinese history is Mozi." "对我而言,中国历史上最鼓舞人心的人物之一是墨子。"
3. 拓展人物:袁隆平 & 屠呦呦(写作常用素材)
袁隆平
Yuan Longping
Father of hybrid rice 杂交水稻之父
Dreamed of ending hunger; overcame hard conditions; developed hybrid rice; increased rice output and fed more people; lived a simple and modest life 梦想消除饥饿,克服艰苦条件,研发杂交水稻,提高产量养活更多人,生活简朴谦逊
屠呦呦
Tu Youyou
First Chinese woman to win the Nobel Prize 首位获诺贝尔奖的中国女性
Spent years studying TCM to fight malaria; did thousands of experiments; tested medicine on herself; discovered artemisinin; saved millions of lives 花多年研究中医药对抗疟疾,做数千次实验,亲自试药,发现青蒿素,拯救数百万生命
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