活动标记 Unit 3 Welcome to our school!(单元同步写作讲义)英语新教材译林版七年级上册

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本讲义围绕“我们的学校”主题,聚焦介绍新学校的写作任务,提供系统学习支架。包含校园场所、师生、活动及情感态度的分类词汇积累,开头、中间、结尾句式模板,佳句仿写练习,结合审题要点与谋篇布局思维导图的范文解析,以及多地区不同情境的实战写作题目,帮助学生从语言输入到写作输出逐步提升。 资料特色在于素材鲜活且结构化,通过分类词汇与句式模板夯实语言基础,提升语言能力。范文赏析中谋篇布局表格清晰呈现写作逻辑,培养思维品质。多样实战题目覆盖介绍学校、校园生活等情境,课中辅助教师高效教学,课后助力学生自主练习,查漏补缺,提升学习能力。

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Unit 3 Welcome to our school!单元同步写作讲义 本单元的话题是“我们的学校”,属于“人与自我:生活与学习”主题群中“多彩、安全、有意义的学校生活”子主题。本单元的写作任务是要求学生能够运用本单元所学与校园相关的核心词汇、句型、语篇和语法知识,介绍新学校,讨论彼此喜欢的校园场所及活动,准确表达个人感受,主动融入新的校园生活,树立积极的校园生活态度,开启绚丽多彩的初中生活。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 1.学校场所 gym健身房; classroom building教学楼; sports field运动场;操场;, dining hall食堂;餐厅; lab实验室; library图书馆; classroom教室; green space绿地;绿色空间; noticeboard公告栏; reading room阅览室; music room音乐室; computer room电脑室 perfect完美; wonderful精彩; quiet安静; special特别; modern现代; big宽敞; bright and clean明亮整洁; not big不大; great很棒; 2.校园师生 star student优秀学生; role model榜样;楷模; Music teacher音乐教师; form teacher班主任; read about ... of star students and teachers阅读关于优秀学生和教师的介绍。 care about ...关心……; kind善良; friendly友好; nice亲切; great出色; helpful乐于助人; 3.校园活动 have classes上课; do homework做作业;do sports做运动; play basketball/football/ tennis打篮球 / 踢足球 / 打网球; join a club加入社团; take part in activities参加活动; draw pictures画画; sing songs唱歌; dance跳舞; read books读书; have a meeting开会; raise the national flag升国旗 4.情感态度 like喜欢; love热爱; enjoy享受; hate讨厌; interesting有趣的; boring无聊的; exciting令人兴奋的; fun有趣的; wonderful精彩的; terrible糟糕的 句式积累 开头句: 1. Welcome to my new school! It is called Sunshine Middle School. 欢迎来到我的新学校!它叫阳光中学。 2. My new school is not far from my home. It looks nice and modern. 我的新学校离我家不远,看起来漂亮又现代化。 3. It lies in the centre of our city. There are about 750 students here. 它坐落在我们城市的中心,这里大约有 750 名学生。 4. I am very happy to study in this new school with many kind teachers. 能在这所新学校学习,遇见许多友善的老师,我很开心。 5. There are over 50 teachers in our school. Everything here is new to me. 我们学校有五十多位老师,这里的一切对我来说都是崭新的。 中间句: 1. Of all the buildings, I like our school library best, because there are many different books in it. 在所有建筑里,我最喜欢学校图书馆,因为里面有各种各样的书。 2. I often read books there after class. It helps me learn a lot. 课后我经常在那里看书,它帮我学到很多知识。 3. Our school has many wonderful activities, such as sports meetings and art festivals. 我们学校有很多精彩的活动,比如运动会和艺术节。 4. I can join different clubs at school. I want to join the reading club. 在学校我可以参加不同社团,我想要加入阅读社团。 5. I always have a good time when I take part in these colourful school activities. 参加这些丰富多彩的校园活动时,我总是过得很愉快。 结尾句: 1. I really enjoy my life in the new school. It brings me lots of happiness. 我十分享受新学校的生活,它带给我很多快乐。 2. I hope I can make more new friends with my classmates. 我希望我可以和同学们交到更多新朋友。 3. I plan to work hard at all my lessons from now on. 从现在起,我打算努力学好所有科目。 4. I will take part in more school activities to make my school life meaningful. 我会参加更多校园活动,让我的校园生活更有意义。 5. I believe my new school life will become more and more wonderful. 我相信我的新校园生活会变得越来越精彩。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句:A lot of interesting events take place there. 仿写:每天都有许多大事件发生。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句:Our school is not large, but it is a special place for me. 仿写:他们的学校很旧,但他们很喜欢。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句:I am happy to be a student here. 仿写:她很开心交了许多新朋友。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 典例 (原创)新学校,新起点。假设你是一名新生,请你以 “My New School” 为题,写一篇英语短文,向你的笔友介绍你的新学校。 内容要点包含: 1.学校的地理位置与大致情况; 2.校园里你最喜爱的一处地方,说明理由; 3.丰富多彩的校园活动; 4.你的内心感受与今后的学习、活动规划。 注意: 1.词数 80左右; 2.可适当发挥,增加细节; 3.文中请勿出现真实个人信息。 My new school ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ① 文体:记叙文(介绍类) ②人称:第一人称 I;时态为一般现在时(介绍学校现状、个人爱好、计划) ③ 写作要点:①学校概况 ②学习空间 ③校园生活与活动 ④个人感受与未来规划 谋篇布局 段落 板块 内容功能 对应思维导图模块 第一段(开头) 学校概况 欢迎引入,介绍校名、位置、外观、师生规模 Basic information 学校概况 第二段(正文 1) 学习空间 介绍校园学习场所,重点写最喜欢的图书馆,说明喜欢的原因 Learning Spaces 学习空间 第三段(正文 2) 校园生活 介绍学校各类活动、社团,写自己参与的活动,体现校园生活 Life & Activities 生活与活动 第四段(结尾) 感受与规划 抒发在校感受,写自己的愿望、学习与活动计划 Feelings & Plans 感受与规划 佳作展示 My new school Welcome to my new school! It is Sunshine Middle School. It lies in the centre of our city. It is not very big but very beautiful. There are about 800 students and 60 teachers in our school. There are many great places for us to study. Among all the buildings, I like the library best. It has many different kinds of books. I can read books or look for useful information there after class. It helps me learn more about the world. Our school has a wonderful life and colourful activities. We have sports meetings, art festivals and different kinds of clubs. I join the reading club and I often take part in club activities with my classmates. We always have great fun at school. I feel happy and lucky to study here. I hope to make more new friends. I also plan to work hard at all my subjects and take part in more school activities to make my school life more wonderful. 佳作赏析 亮点词汇 in the centre of our city 在我们城市的中心 different kinds of 各种各样的 look for useful information 查找有用的信息 learn more about the world 更多地了解世界 colourful activities 丰富多彩的活动 take part in 参加(活动、社团) have great fun 玩得很开心 feel happy and lucky 感到开心又幸运 make more new friends 交更多新朋友 work hard at all my subjects 努力学习所有科目 高分句型: 1. Welcome to my new school! 欢迎来到我的新学校!(介绍类作文万能开场句) 2. Among all the buildings, I like the library best.(书面加分句型,用于表达最喜欢的事物) 在所有建筑当中,我最喜欢图书馆。 句型:Among… , I like … best. 在…… 之中,我最喜欢…… 3. It helps me learn more about the world. 它帮助我更多地了解世界。 短语:help sb. (to) do sth. 帮助某人做某事,七年级高频考点。 4. I often take part in club activities with my classmates. 我经常和同学们参加社团活动。take part in +活动,固定搭配。 5. I feel happy and lucky to study here. 能在这里学习我感到开心又幸运。(抒发感受的万能结尾句) (一) (25-26七年级上·湖南邵阳·阶段检测)假设你是某中学的学生李华,下周几个外国朋友将来参观你的学校,学校想邀请你作为他们的导游,带领他们进行参观,请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文简单介绍一下你们学校。 1.学校建筑物的布局; 2.本学期开设的课程; 3.学校各种各样的俱乐部。 要求: (1)80词左右,文章的开头已给出不计入总数。 (2)包含提示内容;可适当发挥; (3)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 Hello, everyone! Welcome to my school. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (二) (25-26七年级上·江苏南通·期中)阳光中学的英语周系列活动开始了,其中包含以“My School Life”为主题的英文视频制作大赛。假如你是Daniel,准备参加这个比赛。请根据以下提示,完成一段视频文字稿。 要求: 1. 包含所有要点,可适当补充,要求语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范; 2. 词数80个左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数; 3. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。 My School Life Hello, everyone! I’m Daniel. Welcome to Sunshine Middle School. I’d like to tell you about my school life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (三) (25-26七年级上·辽宁盘锦·期中)假设你是李辉,为迎接“校园开放日”,帮助来访的家长和同学更好地了解你的学校,学校公众号正在征集“我的校园打卡点”英文介绍。请你根据以下内容提示,写一篇英文短文投稿。 内容提示: (1)推荐一个你最喜欢的校园场所,具体位置; (2)说明推荐的理由。 注意: (1)词数60左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数; (2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; (3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hui. Welcome to our School Open Day! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will like this place too. (四) (25-26七年级上·江苏镇江·期中)假如你叫李华,你收到了来自交换生Peter的一封邮件。请你仔细阅读这封邮件,根据邮件的内容给 Peter写封回信。 Dear Li Hua, I’m so happy that I will study in your school. I’m writing to ask about your school life. What is your school like? What places does your school have? What do you do in your favourite place? What is your favourite subject? Why? What do you think of the teachers and classmates in your school? I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Peter 要求: 1.内容完整,可适当发挥; 2.表达清楚,意思连贯,符合逻辑; 3.80词左右。开头已给出,不计入词数。 Dear Peter, I’m glad to get your email. I have a good time at my new school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua (五) (24-25七年级上·江苏盐城·期中)某英文杂志正在举办七年级学生英语征文活动。请根据要求,以My School Life为题,用英语写一篇短文投稿。 As a new student at middle school, you must have much to say about your school. What’s your new school like? What are your new teachers and classmates like? And how is your new school life? Please write something to tell us about that. 要求:1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯; 2. 必须包括所有的相关信息,并适当发挥; 3. 90词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数),不得使用真实姓名、学校和地名等。 My School Life I’m happy to tell you about my school life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (六) (25-26七年级上·江苏常州·期末)请用英语介绍你的校园:它是什么样的?它有哪些场所?你最喜欢哪个场所?为什么?要求:条理清楚、表达准确、语句通顺、意思连贯,5句话左右。 My school ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (七) 25-26七年级上·江苏无锡·期中)新学期已开始两个多月,相信你已渐渐熟悉自己的学校。假如你是阳光中学的李华,参与了学校与美国一所中学的友好交流项目。现在请你写一封邮件,从学校设施、师生情况和在校学习的感受三方面向你的美国新朋友Lucy介绍你的学校。 My School Teachers and classmates School facilities (设施) My feelings (感受) 注意事项: 1.邮件中不能出现你的真实姓名和学校名称; 2.内容涵盖所有要点,要求语句通顺,意思连贯; 3.词数不少于60个,开头和结尾已在答题卡上给出,不计入总词数; 4.邮件必须写在答题卡指定的位置。 Dear Lucy, How are you? I’m writing to tell you about my school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What about your school? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon, All the best, Li Hua (八) (25-26七年级上·江苏无锡·期中)时光的列车,悄然驶离了那个熟悉的小学校园,将我们载向一个崭新的站台。初中课程表上增多的科目像一扇扇等待开启的知识大门;丰富的课后活动锻炼了我们的体质,增长了我们的见识;这里还有有谆谆教诲的良师和志同道合的挚友。假设你是李华,你校英文网站现举办英文征文大赛,主题为“我和我的校园生活”。请你根据以下提示写一篇作文投稿。           注意事项: 1. 短文需包含所有要点,可适当发挥,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意; 2. 词数不少于80个; 3. 文中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称; 4. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ (九) (25-26七年级上·江苏徐州·期中)进入中学后,你一定有很多感受。请根据以下内容,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你的学校和校园生活。 要点: 1. What is your school like? 2. Which place do you like best? Why? 3. What activities do you take part in? 4. What are your teachers and classmates like? 5. What do you think of your school? 要求: 1.短文需包含所有信息; 2.70词左右,短文已给的部分不计入总词数; 3.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名。 My School Life A school is a wonderful place to start our dreams. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 试卷第1页,共3页 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $Unit 3 Welcome to our school!单元同步写作讲义 本单元的话题是“我们的学校”,属于“人与自我:生活与学习”主题群中“多彩、安全、有意义的学校生活”子主题。本单元的写作任务是要求学生能够运用本单元所学与校园相关的核心词汇、句型、语篇和语法知识,介绍新学校,讨论彼此喜欢的校园场所及活动,准确表达个人感受,主动融入新的校园生活,树立积极的校园生活态度,开启绚丽多彩的初中生活。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 1.学校场所 gym健身房; classroom building教学楼; sports field运动场;操场;, dining hall食堂;餐厅; lab实验室; library图书馆; classroom教室; green space绿地;绿色空间; noticeboard公告栏; reading room阅览室; music room音乐室; computer room电脑室 perfect完美; wonderful精彩; quiet安静; special特别; modern现代; big宽敞; bright and clean明亮整洁; not big不大; great很棒; 2.校园师生 star student优秀学生; role model榜样;楷模; Music teacher音乐教师; form teacher班主任; read about ... of star students and teachers阅读关于优秀学生和教师的介绍。 care about ...关心……; kind善良; friendly友好; nice亲切; great出色; helpful乐于助人; 3.校园活动 have classes上课; do homework做作业;do sports做运动; play basketball/football/ tennis打篮球 / 踢足球 / 打网球; join a club加入社团; take part in activities参加活动; draw pictures画画; sing songs唱歌; dance跳舞; read books读书; have a meeting开会; raise the national flag升国旗 4.情感态度 like喜欢; love热爱; enjoy享受; hate讨厌; interesting有趣的; boring无聊的; exciting令人兴奋的; fun有趣的; wonderful精彩的; terrible糟糕的 句式积累 开头句: 1. Welcome to my new school! It is called Sunshine Middle School. 欢迎来到我的新学校!它叫阳光中学。 2. My new school is not far from my home. It looks nice and modern. 我的新学校离我家不远,看起来漂亮又现代化。 3. It lies in the centre of our city. There are about 750 students here. 它坐落在我们城市的中心,这里大约有 750 名学生。 4. I am very happy to study in this new school with many kind teachers. 能在这所新学校学习,遇见许多友善的老师,我很开心。 5. There are over 50 teachers in our school. Everything here is new to me. 我们学校有五十多位老师,这里的一切对我来说都是崭新的。 中间句: 1. Of all the buildings, I like our school library best, because there are many different books in it. 在所有建筑里,我最喜欢学校图书馆,因为里面有各种各样的书。 2. I often read books there after class. It helps me learn a lot. 课后我经常在那里看书,它帮我学到很多知识。 3. Our school has many wonderful activities, such as sports meetings and art festivals. 我们学校有很多精彩的活动,比如运动会和艺术节。 4. I can join different clubs at school. I want to join the reading club. 在学校我可以参加不同社团,我想要加入阅读社团。 5. I always have a good time when I take part in these colourful school activities. 参加这些丰富多彩的校园活动时,我总是过得很愉快。 结尾句: 1. I really enjoy my life in the new school. It brings me lots of happiness. 我十分享受新学校的生活,它带给我很多快乐。 2. I hope I can make more new friends with my classmates. 我希望我可以和同学们交到更多新朋友。 3. I plan to work hard at all my lessons from now on. 从现在起,我打算努力学好所有科目。 4. I will take part in more school activities to make my school life meaningful. 我会参加更多校园活动,让我的校园生活更有意义。 5. I believe my new school life will become more and more wonderful. 我相信我的新校园生活会变得越来越精彩。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句:A lot of interesting events take place there. 仿写:每天都有许多大事件发生。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句:Our school is not large, but it is a special place for me. 仿写:他们的学校很旧,但他们很喜欢。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句:I am happy to be a student here. 仿写:她很开心交了许多新朋友。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. Many events take place every day. 2. Their school is very old, but they like it . 3. She is happy to make a lot of new friends. 典例 (原创)新学校,新起点。假设你是一名新生,请你以 “My New School” 为题,写一篇英语短文,向你的笔友介绍你的新学校。 内容要点包含: 1.学校的地理位置与大致情况; 2.校园里你最喜爱的一处地方,说明理由; 3.丰富多彩的校园活动; 4.你的内心感受与今后的学习、活动规划。 注意: 1.词数 80左右; 2.可适当发挥,增加细节; 3.文中请勿出现真实个人信息。 My new school ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ① 文体:记叙文(介绍类) ②人称:第一人称 I;时态为一般现在时(介绍学校现状、个人爱好、计划) ③ 写作要点:①学校概况 ②学习空间 ③校园生活与活动 ④个人感受与未来规划 谋篇布局 段落 板块 内容功能 对应思维导图模块 第一段(开头) 学校概况 欢迎引入,介绍校名、位置、外观、师生规模 Basic information 学校概况 第二段(正文 1) 学习空间 介绍校园学习场所,重点写最喜欢的图书馆,说明喜欢的原因 Learning Spaces 学习空间 第三段(正文 2) 校园生活 介绍学校各类活动、社团,写自己参与的活动,体现校园生活 Life & Activities 生活与活动 第四段(结尾) 感受与规划 抒发在校感受,写自己的愿望、学习与活动计划 Feelings & Plans 感受与规划 佳作展示 My new school Welcome to my new school! It is Sunshine Middle School. It lies in the centre of our city. It is not very big but very beautiful. There are about 800 students and 60 teachers in our school. There are many great places for us to study. Among all the buildings, I like the library best. It has many different kinds of books. I can read books or look for useful information there after class. It helps me learn more about the world. Our school has a wonderful life and colourful activities. We have sports meetings, art festivals and different kinds of clubs. I join the reading club and I often take part in club activities with my classmates. We always have great fun at school. I feel happy and lucky to study here. I hope to make more new friends. I also plan to work hard at all my subjects and take part in more school activities to make my school life more wonderful. 佳作赏析 亮点词汇 in the centre of our city 在我们城市的中心 different kinds of 各种各样的 look for useful information 查找有用的信息 learn more about the world 更多地了解世界 colourful activities 丰富多彩的活动 take part in 参加(活动、社团) have great fun 玩得很开心 feel happy and lucky 感到开心又幸运 make more new friends 交更多新朋友 work hard at all my subjects 努力学习所有科目 高分句型: 1. Welcome to my new school! 欢迎来到我的新学校!(介绍类作文万能开场句) 2. Among all the buildings, I like the library best.(书面加分句型,用于表达最喜欢的事物) 在所有建筑当中,我最喜欢图书馆。 句型:Among… , I like … best. 在…… 之中,我最喜欢…… 3. It helps me learn more about the world. 它帮助我更多地了解世界。 短语:help sb. (to) do sth. 帮助某人做某事,七年级高频考点。 4. I often take part in club activities with my classmates. 我经常和同学们参加社团活动。take part in +活动,固定搭配。 5. I feel happy and lucky to study here. 能在这里学习我感到开心又幸运。(抒发感受的万能结尾句) (一) (25-26七年级上·湖南邵阳·阶段检测)假设你是某中学的学生李华,下周几个外国朋友将来参观你的学校,学校想邀请你作为他们的导游,带领他们进行参观,请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文简单介绍一下你们学校。 1.学校建筑物的布局; 2.本学期开设的课程; 3.学校各种各样的俱乐部。 要求: (1)80词左右,文章的开头已给出不计入总数。 (2)包含提示内容;可适当发挥; (3)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 Hello, everyone! Welcome to my school. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 例文     Hello, everyone! Welcome to my school.     Our school is big and beautiful. There are three main buildings. The classroom building is in the center, and the library stands behind it. We have many interesting subjects this term, such as English, math and science. They are useful for us. Besides, there are all kinds of clubs. You can join the music club or the sports club. I am in the reading club.     I love my school very much. I hope you will enjoy your visit here. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步:审题立意] 确定文体:介绍类说明文,时态以一般现在时为主 明确要点:介绍学校建筑物布局;本学期开设课程;各类学校俱乐部;词数80左右,给定开头不计入总词数 确定人称:第一人称we/our 注意事项:覆盖全部要点,语句通顺,可适当拓展内容 [第二步:构思布局] 三段式结构: 开头段:沿用题目给出的开篇语句,欢迎来宾参观校园 主体段:介绍校园建筑分布布局,本学期开设课程和丰富的校园俱乐部 结尾段:抒发对学校的喜爱,祝愿大家参观愉快 [第三步:要点展开] 要点一:学校建筑物布局 事物选择:classroom building/library/playground等 细节描述:in the center/stand behind the classroom building/lie on the left side等 要点二:本学期开设课程 课程选择:English/math/science/history等 细节描述:useful/interesting/help us learn more knowledge等 要点三:学校各种各样的俱乐部 俱乐部选择:music club/sports club/reading club/art club等 细节描述:all kinds of/take part in after-school activities/develop different hobbies等 (二) (25-26七年级上·江苏南通·期中)阳光中学的英语周系列活动开始了,其中包含以“My School Life”为主题的英文视频制作大赛。假如你是Daniel,准备参加这个比赛。请根据以下提示,完成一段视频文字稿。 要求: 1. 包含所有要点,可适当补充,要求语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范; 2. 词数80个左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数; 3. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。 My School Life Hello, everyone! I’m Daniel. Welcome to Sunshine Middle School. I’d like to tell you about my school life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 例文 My School Life Hello, everyone! I’m Daniel. Welcome to Sunshine Middle School. I’d like to tell you about my school life. I have a new deskmate. He is tall with short black hair. He’s very outgoing and helpful, and he loves playing basketball. He often helps me study math. My favourite subject is English, and my English teacher is kind and patient. I like the library best because I can read many books there. We often have fun after-school activities and take wonderful field trips. I enjoy every day at school. I think my new school life is colourful and meaningful. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步:审题立意] 确定文体:介绍性记叙文,以一般现在时为主 明确要点:介绍同桌、喜爱学科、最喜欢校园场所、课后活动与校外研学,结尾抒发校园生活感受 确定人称:第一人称 (I/my) 注意事项:不得透露真实校名和人名;词数80词左右,使用给定开头 [第二步:构思布局] 三段式结构: 开头段:使用给定开篇,引出介绍校园生活的主题 主体段:依次介绍同桌、喜爱学科、校园场地、各类校园活动 结尾段:总结感受,评价丰富多彩的校园生活 [第三步:要点展开] 要点一:同桌介绍 外形性格:tall with short black hair/thin with big eyes/outgoing/quiet/helpful/warm-hearted等 爱好特长:playing basketball/reading/drawing/playing football等 要点二:喜爱学科 学科选择:English/Math/Chinese/Science等 老师评价:kind/patient/friendly/funny等 要点三:校园场所 场地选择:library/playground/garden/reading room等 活动内容:read many books/borrow storybooks/study quietly等 要点四:校园活动 活动类型:after-school activities/field trips/sports meetings/art clubs等 要点五:结尾感受 评价语句:colourful/meaningful/wonderful/enjoy every day at school等 (三) (25-26七年级上·辽宁盘锦·期中)假设你是李辉,为迎接“校园开放日”,帮助来访的家长和同学更好地了解你的学校,学校公众号正在征集“我的校园打卡点”英文介绍。请你根据以下内容提示,写一篇英文短文投稿。 内容提示: (1)推荐一个你最喜欢的校园场所,具体位置; (2)说明推荐的理由。 注意: (1)词数60左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数; (2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; (3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hui. Welcome to our School Open Day! ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you will like this place too. 例文: Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hui. Welcome to our School Open Day! Let me tell you about my favourite place—our school library. It is across from the teaching building. It is very big, clean, and quiet. There are many interesting books, like storybooks and science books. I often go there to read and borrow books after class. I love it because it helps me with my study. I hope you will like this place too. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步:审题立意] 确定文体:介绍性说明文,以一般现在时为主 明确要点:介绍最喜欢的地点(图书馆)及其位置、环境、藏书、个人活动和喜欢的理由 确定人称:以第一人称和第三人称为主 注意事项:文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称 [第二步:构思布局] 三段式结构: 开头段:自我介绍,欢迎来宾 主体段:点明要介绍的地点(图书馆),描述图书馆的位置、环境、藏书、个人活动及喜爱原因 结尾段:表达希望,邀请来宾参观 [第三步:要点展开] 要点一:地点与位置 地点选择:school library 位置描述:across from the teaching building / next to the playground / in front of the dormitory等 要点二:环境与藏书 环境描述:very big, clean, and quiet / bright and comfortable / modern and well-organized等 藏书类型:storybooks / science books / history books / picture books / magazines等 要点三:活动与原因 个人活动:go there to read and borrow books / do homework / search for information等 喜爱原因:helps me with my study / broadens my mind / makes me feel relaxed / provides a quiet place to think等 要点四:结尾表达 表达希望:I hope you will like this place too. / I’m sure you’ll enjoy it. / Welcome to visit it.等 (四) (25-26七年级上·江苏镇江·期中)假如你叫李华,你收到了来自交换生Peter的一封邮件。请你仔细阅读这封邮件,根据邮件的内容给 Peter写封回信。 Dear Li Hua, I’m so happy that I will study in your school. I’m writing to ask about your school life. What is your school like? What places does your school have? What do you do in your favourite place? What is your favourite subject? Why? What do you think of the teachers and classmates in your school? I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Peter 要求: 1.内容完整,可适当发挥; 2.表达清楚,意思连贯,符合逻辑; 3.80词左右。开头已给出,不计入词数。 Dear Peter, I’m glad to get your email. I have a good time at my new school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 例文 Dear Peter, I’m glad to get your email. I have a good time at my new school. My school is new and modern. There are many great places in my school. I like the library best, it is a perfect place to enjoy a wonderful book and some quiet time. My favourite subject is Geography. Because I can learn about all kinds of mountains and rivers from it. After school, I often play football with my classmates. Doing sports helps me stay healthy and happy. The teachers in my school are helpful. They are ready to help us with different problems. My classmates are great too. We often chat with each other. I’m sure you’ll like it here. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步:审题立意] 确定文体:应用文,用一般现在时为主 明确要点:学校整体印象/校园场所(最喜欢的地方及活动)/最喜爱的学科(原因)/对老师和同学的评价 确定人称:第一人称 注意事项:不得透露真实姓名和学校名称;回复邮件需涵盖Peter提问的所有要点 [第二步:构思布局] 三段式结构: 开头段:感谢来信,总体概括校园生活愉快 主体段:分点介绍学校面貌、最喜欢的地方及活动、最喜欢的学科及原因、对师生评价 结尾段:表达欢迎,期待对方到来 [第三步:要点展开] 要点一:学校整体印象 描述词语:new/modern/big/beautiful/clean等 要点二:校园场所(最喜欢的地方) 地点选择:library/playground/garden/classroom/computer room/art room等 活动内容:read books/study/play football/chat with friends/listen to music等 要点三:最喜爱的学科 学科选择:Geography/Math/Chinese/Science/PE等 要点四:对老师同学的评价 老师评价:helpful/kind/patient/friendly/ready to help等 同学评价:great/nice/friendly/active/chat with each other等 (五) (24-25七年级上·江苏盐城·期中)某英文杂志正在举办七年级学生英语征文活动。请根据要求,以My School Life为题,用英语写一篇短文投稿。 As a new student at middle school, you must have much to say about your school. What’s your new school like? What are your new teachers and classmates like? And how is your new school life? Please write something to tell us about that. 要求:1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯; 2. 必须包括所有的相关信息,并适当发挥; 3. 90词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数),不得使用真实姓名、学校和地名等。 My School Life I’m happy to tell you about my school life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文: My School Life    I’m happy to tell you about my school life. My new school is big and beautiful, with a tall teaching building, a modern library and a large playground. The trees and flowers make it even more lovely.     My teachers are kind and helpful. My English teacher often encourages us to speak bravely. My classmates are friendly. One of them even shared his lunch with me when I forgot mine. We often play basketball together after class.     Every day, I learn new things and make new friends. I feel excited and busy. I really enjoy my school life! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步:审题立意] 确认文体:这是一篇学校生活介绍类记叙文,时态以一般现在时为主 明确要点:需包含学校环境、新老师和新同学的特点、学校生活情况 确定人称:第一人称 (I, my, me, we) 注意事项:开头已给出,不计入总词数;不得出现真实信息 [第二步:构思布局] 三段式结构: 开头段:承接已给出开头,引出学校生活主题 主体段:介绍学校环境、老师特点、同学特点及具体事例 结尾段:总结学校生活的感受 [第三步:要点展开] 要点一:学校环境 学校描述:big and beautiful/modern and clean/new and nice等 具体设施:a tall teaching building/a modern library/a large playground/a bright dining hall等 环境点缀:trees and flowers make it even more lovely/green grass everywhere等 要点二:新老师 老师特点:kind and helpful/friendly and patient/warm and encouraging等 具体事例:encourages us to speak bravely/helps us with difficulties/explains things clearly等 要点三:新同学 同学特点:friendly/nice/warm-hearted/active等 具体事例:shared his lunch with me when I forgot mine/helped me find my classroom/showed me around the school等 共同活动:play basketball together/talk during lunch/help each other with homework等 要点四:学校生活感受 日常收获:learn new things/make new friends/gain knowledge等 感受表达:feel excited and busy/feel happy and lucky/enjoy my school life/love going to school等 (六) (25-26七年级上·江苏常州·期末)请用英语介绍你的校园:它是什么样的?它有哪些场所?你最喜欢哪个场所?为什么?要求:条理清楚、表达准确、语句通顺、意思连贯,5句话左右。 My school ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 例文 My school is small but beautiful. There is a dining hall, a playground, a library and 2 classroom buildings. My favourite place is the library because there are many interesting books in it. I can read all kinds of books and learn more about the world. I can also enjoy some quiet time there after school. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:材料作文; ②时态:一般现在时(描述学校的设施及自己最喜欢的地方); ③提示:介绍自己的学校虽小但很漂亮,有餐厅、操场、图书馆和两栋教学楼,最喜欢图书馆(因为里面有很多有趣的书,能读各类书籍了解世界,放学后还能在那里享受安静时光)。   [写作步骤] 第一步:总体描述学校(小但漂亮); 第二步:分述主要设施; 第三步:指出自己最喜欢的地方是图书馆,并说明原因(有很多有趣的书、能了解世界、享受安静时光)。   [亮点词汇] ①dining hall餐厅 ②playground操场 ③library图书馆 ④classroom buildings教学楼 ⑤quiet安静的   [高分句型] ①My favourite place is the library because there are many interesting books in it.(用“because”说明喜欢图书馆的原因,简单直接,逻辑清晰) ②I can read all kinds of books and learn more about the world.(用“and”连接读书的行为和收获,体现图书馆的价值,表达连贯) (七) 25-26七年级上·江苏无锡·期中)新学期已开始两个多月,相信你已渐渐熟悉自己的学校。假如你是阳光中学的李华,参与了学校与美国一所中学的友好交流项目。现在请你写一封邮件,从学校设施、师生情况和在校学习的感受三方面向你的美国新朋友Lucy介绍你的学校。 My School Teachers and classmates School facilities (设施) My feelings (感受) 注意事项: 1.邮件中不能出现你的真实姓名和学校名称; 2.内容涵盖所有要点,要求语句通顺,意思连贯; 3.词数不少于60个,开头和结尾已在答题卡上给出,不计入总词数; 4.邮件必须写在答题卡指定的位置。 Dear Lucy, How are you? I’m writing to tell you about my school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What about your school? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon, All the best, Li Hua 例文 Dear Lucy, How are you? I’m writing to tell you about my school. My school is very beautiful and modern. The teachers are always patient and helpful, and my classmates are kind and supportive. We often study and play together, which makes school life very enjoyable. Our school has great facilities. There is a large library with many books, a well-equipped computer room, and a sports field. These facilities provide us with a good environment for learning and playing. I feel very happy and lucky to study in such a wonderful school. I have learned a lot and made many friends here. What about your school? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon, All the best, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件; ②时态:时态主要为一般现在时; ③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求,适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步:承接开头,引出话题; 第二步:具体介绍老师、同学和学校设施; 第三步:书写结语,表达感受。 [亮点词汇] ①provide sb. with sth.给某人提供某物 ②make friends交朋友 [高分句型] We often study and play together, which makes school life very enjoyable.(which引导的非限制性定语从句) (八) (25-26七年级上·江苏无锡·期中)时光的列车,悄然驶离了那个熟悉的小学校园,将我们载向一个崭新的站台。初中课程表上增多的科目像一扇扇等待开启的知识大门;丰富的课后活动锻炼了我们的体质,增长了我们的见识;这里还有有谆谆教诲的良师和志同道合的挚友。假设你是李华,你校英文网站现举办英文征文大赛,主题为“我和我的校园生活”。请你根据以下提示写一篇作文投稿。           注意事项: 1. 短文需包含所有要点,可适当发挥,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意; 2. 词数不少于80个; 3. 文中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称; 4. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________例文 I’m Li Hua. I’m tall. I am kind and friendly. I enjoy playing ball games. My favourite place is the sports field because I can play football with my friends there. My favourite subject is Biology because I am interested in animals and plants. I’m in the School Football Club. I enjoy practising with other club members. My classmate Alex is my role model. We always read books about science together. I enjoy my school life. My school is a good place to learn and have fun. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材: 本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③提示:写作提示已给出,考生应注意不要漏写要点,适当发挥,使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步:介绍个人外貌、性格及爱好; 第二步:详细介绍喜爱的运动、科目、俱乐部等; 第三步:表达自己对学校生活的喜爱。 [亮点词汇] ① be interested in对……感兴趣 ② role model榜样 [高分句型] My favourite place is the sports field because I can play football with my friends there. (because引导的原因状语从句) (九) (25-26七年级上·江苏徐州·期中)进入中学后,你一定有很多感受。请根据以下内容,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你的学校和校园生活。 要点: 1. What is your school like? 2. Which place do you like best? Why? 3. What activities do you take part in? 4. What are your teachers and classmates like? 5. What do you think of your school? 要求: 1.短文需包含所有信息; 2.70词左右,短文已给的部分不计入总词数; 3.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名。 My School Life A school is a wonderful place to start our dreams. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 例文 My School Life A school is a wonderful place to start our dreams. My school is very big and beautiful. My favorite place is the library. I can read all kinds of interesting books there. I take part in many activities. I’m in the school basketball team. I also join the science club, where we do exciting experiments. My teachers are very kind and knowledgeable. They always help me when I have problems. My classmates are friendly. We often play and study together. I think my school is amazing. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:时态为一般现在时; ③提示:材料所给内容需完整表达,不得遗漏,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步:总体介绍学校的概况; 第二步:分别阐述最喜欢的校园地点及原因、参与的活动、老师和同学的特点; 第三步:表达对学校的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①all kinds of各种各样的 ②take part in参加 [高分句型] They always help me when I have problems.(时间状语从句) 试卷第1页,共3页 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $

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