写作升级第一部分---句式升级 专练 -2027届高三英语一轮复习专项

**基本信息** 以“基础句式→复杂结构→综合运用”为逻辑主线，通过24个结构化句型（含公式+场景例句+分层练习）系统提升英语写作表达层次，强化语言能力与思维品质。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |句式升级|12句型（含并列句3、复合句3、非谓语3、综合3）|结构公式化（如“Doing..., 主语+动作链”）+场景化应用（情感/环境/心理描写）|从短句到长句，通过“动作链拓展→从句逻辑连接→非谓语修饰→多结构融合”递进| |结构升级|12句型（含从句4、非谓语6、特殊句式2）|功能化表达（如定语从句刻画特征、强调句突出重点）+画面感营造（无灵主语赋予情感）|从句子功能到画面层次，通过“从句增加逻辑→非谓语丰富修饰→特殊句式强化重点”深化|

写作升级：丰富表达，让语言有层次 丰富表达：让语言有层次 39 第一章　句式升级：从短句到长句 39 一、并列句拓展 39 句型一：连续动作链（用 and 连接多个连续动作） 39 句型二：动作＋介词短语作状语（用介词短语补充人物的情感或状态） 40 句型三：连续动作＋结果（用 and 连接动作与结果） 40 二、复合句拓展（状语从句、定语从句、名词性从句） 41 句型四：时间关系（用 when / after / before / until 等连接） 41 句型五：原因、结果关系（用 so...that... 等连接） 41 句型六：让步关系（用 although / though 表达"虽然……但是……"） 41 三、非谓语结构拓展 41 句型七：Doing＋主句 42 句型八：Done＋主句 42 句型九：主句＋形容词短语作状语 43 四、多种结构综合运用 43 句型十：非谓语＋动作链（用非谓语引出动作，再用 and 连接连续动作） 43 句型十一：非谓语＋动作＋介词短语（非谓语＋动作链＋情感/状态） 44 句型十二：综合句式升级（非谓语＋动作链＋状态/情感） 44 第二章 结构升级：让句子有功能、有画面 46 一、从句增加层次 46 （一）定语从句 46 句型一：who / which / that 限制性定语从句（刻画人物或事物特征） 46 句型二：where / when 定语从句（交代场景或时间背景） 46 句型三：非限制性定语从句 which（补充评论、情感或结果） 47 句型四：介词 + which / whom 定语从句（提升语言正式感与精准度） 47 （二）名词性从句 48 句型五：What 引导主语从句（聚焦核心内容） 48 句型六：that / what / whether 引导宾语从句（丰富动词后的内容） 48 句型七：表语从句（解释说明主语的内容或性质） 49 句型八：同位语从句（用抽象名词概括内容，增强逻辑性） 49 （三）状语从句（特殊结构） 50 句型九：be doing / be about to do... when...（正在做某事，突然……） 50 句型十：hardly / scarcely... when... / no sooner... than...（一……就……） 51 句型十一：as if / as though 方式状语从句（仿佛……，心理与画面） 51 句型十二：so that / in order that 目的状语从句（凸显意图与情感指向） 52 二、用非谓语丰富表达 52 （一）非谓语作定语 52 句型一：非谓语定语综合运用（长短语嵌套，丰富修饰） 52 （二）非谓语作状语 53 句型二：Having done / Having been done 作状语（强调动作先后） 53 句型三：非谓语作伴随状语（与主句动作同时发生） 54 句型四：only to do 作结果状语（出乎意料的结果） 54 句型五：非谓语作条件/让步状语（Given / Compared with / Seen from） 55 句型六：with + 宾语 + 非谓语（复合结构，丰富画面） 55 三、形容词/副词作状语（情感渲染） 56 句型一：形容词（短语）作状语（刻画即时状态与原因） 56 句型二：并列形容词作状语（情感叠加与对比） 56 句型三：形容词/副词 + as / though 倒装让步状语 57 句型四：方式副词置于句首（动作定格，画面感） 57 句型五：程度副词修饰情感/心理动词（强化内心强度） 58 句型六：评价性副词置于句首（表达说话人态度） 58 句型七：独立主格结构（名词 + 形容词/副词/分词，营造画面） 59 四、特殊句式强调重点 59 （一）强调句 59 句型一：It is/was + 被强调部分 + that/who... 59 句型二：do / does / did + 动词原形（强调谓语） 60 句型三：What... is/was... 强调结构 60 句型四：It is/was not until... that...（强调时间转折点） 61 句型五：It is/was not A but B that matters/counts（强调核心价值） 61 （二）倒装句 62 句型六：Only + 状语置于句首的部分倒装 62 句型七：否定词/否定短语置于句首的部分倒装 63 句型八：Not only...but also... 置于句首的部分倒装 63 句型九：So + 形容词/副词置于句首的部分倒装 64 句型十：Not until + 强调部分置于句首的部分倒装 64 句型十一：表语/分词/介词短语置于句首的全部倒装 65 （三）无灵主语 65 句型十二：情感/情绪名词作主语（赋予情绪以生命力） 65 句型十三：情感名词A + gave way to / was swept away by / was replaced by + 情感名词B 66 句型十四：One's heart pounded / thumped / raced with... as / when + 从句 66 句型十五：The sight / thought of sth. + made sb. + 情感形容词 / filled sb. with + 情感名词 67 句型十六：An idea / thought + occurred to / struck / hit sb.（灵感突现） 67 句型十七：时间/地点/自然景象作主语（赋予场景以情感） 68 第一部分　句式升级 一、并列句拓展 句型一：连续动作链（用 and 连接多个连续动作） 结构：主语 + 动作1，动作2，and + 动作3 例句1（情感互动） He stepped forward, patted me on the shoulder, and said softly, "Where there is a will, there is a way." （他走上前，拍了拍我的肩膀，轻声说道："有志者事竟成。"） 例句2（环境变化） The wind picked up, dark clouds gathered overhead, and a distant roll of thunder echoed across the valley. （风起了，乌云在头顶聚集，远处雷声在山谷间回荡。） 例句3（心理+动作） I reached into my pocket, pulled out the worn photograph, and stared at it until my vision blurred. （我伸手进口袋，掏出那张泛黄的照片，盯着它直到视线模糊。） 练习 1. 她深吸一口气，推开门，走了进去。 She ______________, ______________ the door, and ______________. 2. 他放下书包，拿出那封皱巴巴的信，又读了一遍。 He ______________ his schoolbag, ______________ the crumpled letter, and ______________ it again. 3. 我转过身，擦去眼角的泪水，朝他露出了一个真诚的微笑。 I ______________, ______________ the tears from the corner of my eyes, and ______________ a sincere smile. 4. 夕阳缓缓下沉，染红了天际，给大地披上了一层金色的薄纱。 The sun ______________ slowly, ______________ the sky red, and ______________ the earth in a golden veil. 句型二：动作＋介词短语作状语（用介词短语补充人物的情感或状态） 结构：主语 + 动作1 + and + 动作2 + with/in + 情感或状态 例句1（情感表达） His eyes lit up with pride, and he congratulated me with a broad smile. （他的眼睛里充满了自豪，他带着灿烂的笑容向我表示祝贺。） 例句2（环境拟人） The old house stood silently at the end of the road, with its broken windows staring blankly at the passing years. （那座老房子静静地立在路的尽头，破碎的窗户空洞地注视着流逝的岁月。） 例句3（心理描写） She sat motionless by the window, with her mind wandering far beyond the rain-streaked glass. （她一动不动地坐在窗边，思绪早已飘向雨痕斑驳的玻璃之外。） 练习 1. 她笑了笑，眼里充满喜悦。 She ______________ and ______________ with joy in her eyes. 2. 他深吸一口气，带着紧张的心情走上了舞台。 He ______________ and ______________ with nervousness. 3. 我擦去眼泪，带着感激朝老师点了点头。 I ______________ my tears and ______________ at my teacher with gratitude. 4. 他低下头，带着羞愧盯着自己的鞋尖。 He ______________ his head and ______________ at his shoes ______________. 句型三：连续动作＋结果（用 and 连接动作与结果） 结构：主语 + 动作1 + and + 动作2，结果 例句1（积极情感） She rushed toward me and threw her arms around me, unable to hide her excitement. （她朝我冲过来，张开双臂抱住我，无法掩饰自己的激动。） 例句2（挫折困境） He searched every pocket, emptied his bag onto the desk, and sank into the chair, his face pale with disbelief. （他翻遍了每个口袋，把书包里的东西全倒在桌上，然后跌坐在椅子里，脸色苍白，难以置信。） 例句3（探索发现） I pushed aside the overgrown branches, stepped into the clearing, and froze, my breath catching at the sight before me. （我拨开繁茂的树枝，走进那片空地，然后僵住了，眼前的景象让我屏住了呼吸。） 练习 1. 他跑向终点，倒在地上，累得一句话也说不出来。 He ______________ to the finish line, ______________ to the ground, ______________ to say a word. 2. 她打开礼物，惊讶地睁大了眼睛。 She ______________ the gift and ______________ her eyes in surprise. 3. 我听到这个消息，跳了起来，激动得说不出话来。 I ______________ the news, ______________ up, and ______________ with excitement. 4. 她翻开相册，指尖滑过那些泛黄的照片，泪水不知不觉模糊了双眼。 She ______________ the album, ______________ her fingers over the yellowed photos, and ______________, tears blurring her eyes unconsciously. 二. 复合句拓展（状语从句、定语从句、名词性从句） 句型四：时间关系（用 when / after / before / until 等连接） 结构：When / After / Before / Until + 从句，主句 例句 I still found it hard to believe until I attended the award presentation and got my certificate. （直到我参加颁奖典礼并拿到证书，我还是觉得难以置信。） 练习 1. 直到看到妈妈，我才意识到自己有多害怕。 I didn't realize how frightened I was until I ______________. 句型五：原因、结果关系（用 so...that... 等连接） 结构：so + 形容词/副词 + that + 结果 例句 She was so excited that she could hardly speak. （她太激动了，以至于几乎说不出话来。） 练习 1. 他如此紧张，以至于双手都在颤抖。 He was so ______________ that his hands ______________. 句型六：让步关系（用 although / though 表达"虽然……但是……"） 结构：Although / Though + 从句，主句 例句 Although I was nervous, I stepped onto the stage bravely. （尽管我很紧张，我还是勇敢地走上了舞台。） 练习 1. 尽管我很害怕，我还是决定试一试。 Although I ______________, I ______________. 三、非谓语结构拓展 句型七：Doing＋主句 结构：Doing..., 主语 + 谓语... 例句1（互动场景） Patting my shoulder, he smiled affectionately. （他拍了拍我的肩膀，深情地笑了笑。） 例句2（哲理感悟） Watching the last leaf dance in the autumn wind, I suddenly understood what letting go truly meant. （看着最后一片叶子在秋风中起舞，我突然明白了放手的真正含义。） 例句3（克制情感） Struggling to keep my voice steady, I finally managed to say goodbye. （努力让自己的声音保持平稳，我终于说出了再见。） 练习 1. 听到这个消息，她立即跑了出去。 ______________ the news, she ______________ immediately. 2. 他微笑着走向我。 ______________, he ______________ toward me. 3. 她擦去眼泪，勇敢地站了起来。 ______________ her tears, she ______________ bravely. 4. 凝视着远方起伏的山峦，他突然感到一种久违的平静。 ______________ at the rolling mountains in the distance, he suddenly ______________. 句型八：Done＋主句 结构：Done..., 主语 + 谓语... 例句1（情感冲击） Stunned by the news, I was choked with emotion. （我被这个消息惊呆了，激动得哽咽了。） 例句2（环境描写） Bathed in the golden glow of sunset, the small village looked like a painting come to life. （沐浴在夕阳的金色光辉中，那个小村庄看起来像一幅栩栩如生的画。） 例句3（心理困境） Trapped in the endless cycle of self-doubt, he had almost forgotten what confidence felt like. （被困在无尽的自我怀疑循环中，他几乎忘记了自信是什么感觉。） 练习 1. 被老师的话感动了，我忍不住流下了眼泪。 ______________ by my teacher's words, I ______________. 2. 被朋友的支持鼓舞，我重新获得了信心。 ______________ by my friend's support, I ______________. 3. 沉浸在喜悦之中，他向我挥手表示祝贺。 ______________ in joy, he ______________ at me. 4. 被眼前壮丽的景色震撼，游客们纷纷掏出手机记录这一刻。 ______________ by the magnificent view before them, the tourists ______________. 句型九：主句＋形容词短语作状语 结构：主语 + 谓语，形容词短语 例句1（情感深沉） I hugged him tightly, unable to express just how much his faith in me had meant. （我紧紧地拥抱着他，无法表达他的信任对我而言有多么重要。） 例句2（氛围压抑） The room fell into a heavy silence, thick enough to choke the breath out of everyone present. （房间陷入了沉重的寂静，浓得让在场的每个人都喘不过气来。） 例句3（坚定与脆弱并存） She nodded slightly, her lips trembling but her eyes burning with determination. （她微微点头，嘴唇颤抖着，但眼中燃烧着坚定的光芒。） 练习 1. 我紧紧握住他的手，无法控制自己的眼泪。 I held his hand tightly, ______________. 2. 他瘫坐在椅子上，累得一句话也说不出来。 He collapsed into the chair, ______________. 3. 她站在那里一动不动，完全被眼前的景象迷住了。 She stood there motionless, ______________. 四、多种结构综合运用 句型十：非谓语＋动作链（用非谓语引出动作，再用 and 连接连续动作） 结构：Doing / Done..., 主语 + 动作1，动作2，and + 动作3 例句1（积极回应） Hearing the exciting news, he rushed over, hugged me tightly, and thanked me repeatedly. （听到这个令人兴奋的消息，他冲过来，紧紧抱住我，并反复向我表示感谢。） 例句2（悬疑紧张） Feeling a sudden chill run down my spine, I stopped, turned around slowly, and stared into the darkness behind me. （感到一阵寒意顺着脊背而下，我停下脚步，慢慢转过身，盯着身后的黑暗。） 例句3（探索追踪） Noticing the faint footprints in the snow, she bent down, examined them closely, and followed their trail without hesitation. （注意到雪地上淡淡的脚印，她弯下腰，仔细查看，然后毫不犹豫地沿着踪迹追去。） 练习 1. 听到好消息，她跑过来，抱住我，高兴地哭了起来。 ______________ the good news, she ______________, ______________, and ______________ with joy. 2. 被朋友鼓励后，我擦去眼泪，站起来，重新开始尝试。 ______________ by my friend's encouragement, I ______________, ______________, and ______________ again. 3. 看到老师的笑容，他走上前，握住老师的手，真诚地表达感谢。 ______________ his teacher's smile, he ______________, ______________, and ______________ his gratitude sincerely. 4. 闻到厨房里飘来的香味，我放下书本，冲进厨房，迫不及待地掀开了锅盖。 ______________ the aroma drifting from the kitchen, I ______________, ______________ into the kitchen, and ______________ the pot lid eagerly. 句型十一：非谓语＋动作＋介词短语（非谓语＋动作链＋情感/状态） 结构：Doing / Done..., 主语 + 动作1 + and + 动作2 + with/in... 例句1（感动致谢） Touched by his words, I wiped away my tears and smiled at him with gratitude. （被他的话感动，我擦去眼泪，带着感激朝他笑了笑。） 例句2（探索未知） Driven by a mixture of curiosity and fear, I pushed the door open, stepped inside, and found myself standing in a world I had never imagined. （被好奇与恐惧驱使，我推开门，走进去，发现自己站在一个从未想象过的世界里。） 例句3（沉浸自然） Overwhelmed by the beauty of the starlit sky, she lay back on the grass, gazed upward, and let her worries dissolve into the vast darkness. （被星空之美所震撼，她仰躺在草地上，向上凝望，让烦恼消散在浩瀚的黑暗中。） 练习 1. 听到这个消息，我跑向父母，紧紧抱住他们，脸上带着幸福的笑容。 ______________ the news, I ______________ to my parents, ______________ them tightly, and ______________ with a happy smile. 2. 被老师的鼓励感动，她站起来，走向讲台，脸上充满自信。 ______________ by her teacher's encouragement, she ______________, ______________ to the platform, and ______________ with confidence. 3. 被那幅画的美丽所吸引，他停下脚步，静静欣赏，眼中闪烁着惊叹的光芒。 ______________ by the beauty of the painting, he ______________, ______________ it quietly, and ______________ with wonder in his eyes. 句型十二：综合句式升级（非谓语＋动作链＋状态/情感） 结构：非谓语 + 主语 + 动作1，动作2，and + 动作3 + 状态/情感 例句1（成功喜悦） Hearing the result, I rushed to my parents, hugged them tightly, and thanked them with tears of joy in my eyes. （听到结果，我激动地跑向父母，紧紧抱住他们，并感谢他们，喜悦的泪水充满了我的眼睛。） 例句2（困境求生） Shivering in the biting wind, the lost hiker stumbled forward, collapsed against a pine tree, and stared at the distant lights with a mixture of relief and despair in his hollow eyes. （在刺骨寒风中瑟瑟发抖，那位迷路的徒步者踉跄前行，跌坐在一棵松树上，用空洞的眼睛盯着远处的灯光，眼中交织着解脱与绝望。） 例句3（重逢激动） Spotting a familiar figure in the crowd, I elbowed my way through, waved frantically, and called out her name at the top of my lungs, my heart pounding so hard that it seemed about to burst from my chest. （在人群中瞥见一个熟悉的身影，我挤过人群，疯狂地挥手，用尽全力喊她的名字，我的心跳得如此剧烈，仿佛要从胸膛里蹦出来。） 练习 1. 听到比赛结果，我激动地跑向父母，紧紧拥抱他们，并感谢他们一直以来的支持。 ______________ the result, I ______________ to my parents excitedly, ______________ them tightly, and ______________ them for their constant support. 2. 被朋友的话感动，我擦去眼泪，站起来，带着新的勇气面对困难。 ______________ by my friend's words, I ______________ my tears, ______________ to my feet, and ______________ the difficulty with renewed courage. 3. 看到老师满意的笑容，他走上前，握住老师的手，带着感激向老师道谢。 ______________ his teacher's satisfied smile, he ______________ forward, ______________ his teacher's hand, and ______________ his teacher with gratitude. 4. 意识到自己犯了错，他低下头，咬着嘴唇，内心充满了懊悔与自责。 ______________ that he had made a mistake, he ______________ his head, ______________ his lip, and ______________ with regret and self-blame. 参考答案 句型一 1. She took a deep breath, pushed open the door, and walked in. 2. He put down his schoolbag, took out the crumpled letter, and read it again. 3. I turned around, wiped away the tears from the corner of my eyes, and gave him a sincere smile. 4. The sun sank slowly, dyed the sky red, and wrapped the earth in a golden veil. 句型二 1. She smiled and her eyes sparkled with joy in her eyes. 2. He took a deep breath and stepped onto the stage with nervousness. 3. I wiped away my tears and nodded at my teacher with gratitude. 4. He lowered his head and stared at his shoes with shame. 句型三 1. He ran to the finish line, fell to the ground, too exhausted to say a word. 2. She opened the gift and widened her eyes in surprise. 3. I heard the news, jumped up, and was too excited to speak with excitement. 4. She opened the album, slid her fingers over the yellowed photos, and froze, tears blurring her eyes unconsciously. 句型四 1. I didn't realize how frightened I was until I saw my mother. 句型五 1. He was so nervous that his hands were trembling. 句型六 1. Although I was frightened, I decided to give it a try. 句型七 1. Hearing the news, she rushed out immediately. 2. Smiling, he walked toward me. 3. Wiping away her tears, she stood up bravely. 4. Gazing at the rolling mountains in the distance, he suddenly felt a long-lost peace. 句型八 1. Touched by my teacher's words, I couldn't help shedding tears. 2. Encouraged by my friend's support, I regained my confidence. 3. Immersed in joy, he waved at me. 4. Overwhelmed by the magnificent view before them, the tourists pulled out their phones to capture the moment. 句型九 1. I held his hand tightly, unable to hold back my tears. 2. He collapsed into the chair, too tired to utter a single word. 3. She stood there motionless, completely fascinated by the sight before her. 句型十 1. Hearing the good news, she ran over, hugged me, and cried with joy. 2. Encouraged by my friend's encouragement, I wiped away my tears, stood up, and started trying again. 3. Seeing his teacher's smile, he stepped forward, shook his teacher's hand, and expressed his gratitude sincerely. 4. Smelling the aroma drifting from the kitchen, I put down my book, rushed into the kitchen, and lifted the pot lid eagerly. 句型十一 1. Hearing the news, I ran to my parents, hugged them tightly, and beamed with a happy smile. 2. Touched by her teacher's encouragement, she stood up, walked to the platform, and glowed with confidence. 3. Attracted by the beauty of the painting, he stopped, admired it quietly, and shone with wonder in his eyes. 句型十二 1. Hearing the result, I rushed to my parents excitedly, hugged them tightly, and thanked them for their constant support. 2. Touched by my friend's words, I wiped away my tears, rose to my feet, and faced the difficulty with renewed courage. 3. Seeing his teacher's satisfied smile, he stepped forward, shook his teacher's hand, and thanked his teacher with gratitude. 4. Realizing that he had made a mistake, he lowered his head, bit his lip, and was filled with regret and self-blame. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $