Unit 6 Seasons天气和季节（单元写作精练）英语新教材译林版八年级上册

**基本信息** 以季节主题写作为核心，构建“词汇-句型-篇章”三级训练体系，通过审题构思、范文解析提炼实用写作方法，适配中考高频题型，提升语言表达与逻辑思维能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |词汇积累|5类主题词|分类记忆法（季节/景物/活动等）|从核心词到情感词，构建描写词库| |句式积累|5类句型|句型升级策略（基础→非谓语/从句）|语法考点（一般现在时/从句）融入表达| |审题构思|1典例|三段式提纲法（开头点题-主体描写-结尾升华）|体裁（书信）与结构规范对应| |范文解析|1篇|亮点要素提炼（词汇/语法/句式/结构）|以范文为载体示范方法落地| |基础必做|2题型（翻译/仿写）|翻译仿写结合，夯实基础表达|从单句翻译到句型迁移，能力递进| |提升必做|3题型（话题/图画/应用）|体裁专项训练（书信/演讲稿等）|综合运用词汇句型，适配中考命题|

Unit 6 Seasons 天气和季节（认识自我） 单元写作精练 【写作主题】 写作要求：介绍自己最喜欢的季节。该写作紧扣单元季节与自然生活核心话题，适配中考高频话题作文、书信写作题型；核心考点：一般现在时描述常态、形容词/副词描绘景色、and/because/when引导的并列句与状语从句。 本单元主题属于“人与自然”范畴，涉及“自然景观欣赏、季节生活体验”。该单元旨在培养学生观察自然、感受四季之美的能力，引导学生用英语描绘季节景色、天气特征与季节性活动。通过积累季节相关词汇和场景句型，学生可以熟练完成季节类话题写作，这有助于提升学生的景物描写能力和生活化书面表达能力，树立热爱自然、热爱生活的积极态度。 【词汇积累】 1.季节与天气：spring春天，summer夏天，autumn秋天，winter冬天，sunny晴朗的，windy多风的，cool凉爽的，warm温暖的，hot炎热的，cold寒冷的 2.自然景物：blow吹，shine照耀，leaf树叶，flower花朵，grass草，fruit水果 3.季节活动：fly kites放风筝，go hiking去远足，have picnics野餐，pick fruits摘水果，make snowmen堆雪人 4. -y后缀形容词：windy adj. 多风的；sunny adj. 晴朗的；rainy adj. 多雨的；snowy adj. 下雪的；noisy adj. 喧闹的；sleepy adj. 困倦的；healthy adj. 健康的；foggy adj. 有雾的 5. 情感与场景类：pleasant adj. 宜人的；colourful adj. 五彩缤纷的；lazy adj. 慵懒的；perfect adj. 完美的；memory n. 回忆 【句式积累】 1. 基础句型 ① I like … best because it is a beautiful season.（我最喜欢……，因为它是一个美丽的季节。） ② The weather is pleasant in this season.（这个季节的天气很宜人。） ③ It is the best time to do outdoor activities.（这是做户外活动的最佳时节。） 2. 升级句型 ① The days are windy and bright, making it a perfect time to fly a kite.（微风和煦、阳光明媚，是放风筝的绝佳时节。） ② As the days get shorter and the temperature drops, farmers begin to harvest crops.（白昼渐短、气温下降，农民们开始收割庄稼。） ③ I have many sweet memories of lazy afternoons and cool ice cream in summer.（我对夏日慵懒的午后和清凉的冰淇淋有着许多美好的回忆。） 【原题呈现】 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom正在学习四季相关的知识，他来信想了解你最喜欢的季节。请你根据以下提示给他回一封邮件，介绍你最喜欢的季节。 提示：1. 你最喜欢的季节；2. 该季节的天气与景色特点；3. 你常做的活动及喜欢它的原因。 要求：1. 词数100左右；2. 内容完整，语句通顺；3. 书写规范，无语法错误。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题构思】 体裁：书信（邮件） 人称：第一人称（I/My）为主，第二人称辅助 时态：一般现在时（核心时态，介绍客观季节特征与日常活动） 三段式写作提纲 1. 开头：礼貌问候，开门见山点明自己最喜欢的季节 2. 主体：详细描写季节天气、自然景色，介绍日常户外特色活动 3. 结尾：总结个人感受，表达对该季节的喜爱，礼貌收尾 【范文欣赏】 Dear Tom, I’m glad to hear from you. Among the four seasons, autumn is my favourite one. Autumn brings pleasant weather. The days are cool and bright, and the temperature is just right. The leaves turn brown and fall onto the ground, making the whole world colourful. It is also a harvest season. Farmers are busy harvesting crops in the fields. It is the best time for outdoor activities. I often walk in the park or have a picnic with my family. These sweet moments give me wonderful memories. I love autumn because it is beautiful and peaceful. Yours, Li Hua 【亮点解析】 1. 单元核心词汇落地：精准使用教材核心词汇pleasant, colourful, harvest, temperature, memory，完全贴合单元词块积累要求，无超纲词汇。 2. 核心语法考点运用：熟练运用S+V+P（The days are cool and bright.）、S+V+O（Farmers harvest crops.）等单元重点句型，动词运用准确，语法规范。 3. 高分句式加持：使用非谓语动词making the whole world colourful、固定句型It is the best time for...，提升句式丰富度，摆脱简单句堆砌。 4. 结构工整流畅：严格遵循三段式框架，开篇点题、中间细节分层描写、结尾升华情感，逻辑清晰，符合中考书信写作评分标准。 【基础必做】 一、汉译英（主题要点翻译） 1. 我最喜欢的季节 2. 万物复苏 3. 温暖的阳光 4. 外出野餐 5. 欣赏美丽的花朵 6. 吹凉爽的微风 7. 堆雪人 8. 去远足 9. 收获庄稼 10. 度过愉快的时光 二、句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） 句型1：My favourite season is spring because the weather becomes warm.我最喜欢的季节是春天，因为天气变得暖和起来。 仿写任务： 1. 我最喜欢秋天，因为到处都有香甜的水果。 2. 冬天是我最喜欢的季节，因为我可以玩雪。 句型2：It is nice to take a walk outside on sunny days.晴天到户外散步十分惬意。 仿写任务： 1. 在凉爽的下午去爬山很不错。 2. 在春天放风筝十分有趣。 句型3：When spring arrives, trees turn green and flowers come out.春天到来时，树木变绿，花儿开放。 仿写任务： 1. 当秋天来临，树叶变黄并纷纷落下。 2. 夏天到来时，我们可以去河里游泳。 句型4：What I love most about summer is the bright sunshine.关于夏天，我最喜欢的是明媚的阳光。 仿写任务： 1. 关于冬天，我最喜欢的是洁白的雪花。 2. 关于秋天，我最喜欢的是清新的空气。 句型5：This season brings me lots of joy and unforgettable memories.这个季节带给我许多欢乐与难忘的回忆。 仿写任务： 1. 这个季节带给我很多亲近大自然的机会。 2. 每一年，我都期盼这个美好的季节。 【提升必做】 一、话题作文 （一） 一年四季，景色不同，特点各异。在每个季节里，我们心中都有一份对自然的赞美与感悟。大自然如此美丽，哪一个抓住了你的心呢？请以“My favorite season---- ______”为题，写一篇英语短文。词数80左右。 内容要点：1. 请补全标题； 2. 你最喜欢哪个季节； 3. 你喜欢该季节的原因（如：气候、景色、活动、感受等）。 注意事项：1. 必须包含所有内容要点； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。 My favorite season— _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） 春天是大家都喜欢的季节，你的家乡的春天是什么样的呢？请根据下面所给提示以“Spring in My Hometown”为题描写一下你家乡春天的天气和景色。 要求：1.所给提示词全部用上； 2.句子通顺完整； 3.60词左右。 提示词：come back to life，weather，flower，tree，green，hopeful（给人以希望的） Spring in My Hometown _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 二、图画作文 （一） 请根据表格内容及提示词汇，写一篇关于各大城市未来24小时天气预报的短文。词数：80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 提示词汇：below zero (零度以下)，degree (度)。 　Good morning, everyone. Here is the weather report today. It’s rainy and snowy in Beijing. It’s very cold. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Enjoy your day! （二） 假如你是李明，是学校的播音员，你每天为学校播报天气信息，下面表格列出了三天的天气，请为大家播报。 星期 Friday Saturday Sunday 天气 建议 多云，天气凉爽， 适合课后进行室外活动（如打篮球） 雨天， 可以在家做家庭作业，帮父母做家务，和爷爷下象棋… 天气晴朗， 适合和家人去参观农场…… 参考词汇：do housework 要求：1．70词以上（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2．必须包括表格内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 Good morning, boys and girls! I’m Li Ming. Now I’d like to tell you the weather on Friday, Saturday and Sunday. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you for your listening! 三、应用文 （一）电子邮件 1.假设你是李辉，你的澳大利亚好友Alex给你发来一封电子邮件，请你仔细阅读这封邮件并写一封回信，内容包括： 1.介绍四季的特点以及人们的活动；2.推荐并邀请。 Dear Li Hui, How is everything? I’m planning a trip to China next year. I’m so excited! But I don’t know what the weather is like in different seasons. Could you tell me about the four seasons in your city? Which season do you think is the best for visiting? Yours, Alex 要求： 1.词数80—100词，开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 Dear Alex, Thanks for your email. I am happy to talk about the seasons in my city. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui 2．假设你是李明，你的好朋友王刚想了解你家乡四季的情况，请你给王刚写一封电子邮件，告诉他你家乡的细节。 写作提示： 1. 介绍家乡四季美景（春季五彩缤纷；夏季炎热；秋季凉爽；冬季经常下雪）。 2. 介绍四季人们不同的活动（春季踏青；夏季游泳；秋季可以收集树叶；冬季可以滑雪、滑冰）。 3. 邀请好朋友来家乡游玩。 写作要求： 1. 文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80左右（文中已给出内容不计入总词数）。 参考词汇： everywhere 到处；colorful 五彩缤纷的；leaves 树叶（复数）；skate 滑冰 Dear Wang Gang, How are things going? I hope you are well. Let me tell you about my hometown. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can come for a visit. You will have a good time here. Yours, Li Ming （二）推荐信 1．假设你是Bobby，你的笔友Anna计划来沈阳游玩，想了解沈阳的天气情况和最适合游玩的季节。请你写封回信，给出建议。内容包括： 1.沈阳的气候情况； 2.推荐最适合游玩的季节及原因； 3.表达期望。 要求：1.词数 80—100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Anna, I am glad to know that you are coming to Shenyang for a holiday. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Bobby 2.假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Jack计划今年暑假来日照旅游度假。请你根据以下提示，给他写一封信。 1.介绍日照地理位置、气候环境等； 2.向他推荐一至两处景点； 3.询问具体计划，以便做好准备。 要求： 1.根据提示内容，不要逐字翻译； 2.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名； 3.词数90左右。 Dear Jack, I’m glad to learn that you are coming to Rizhao for your summer vacation. ______________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Lihua （三）演讲稿 1．春之繁华，夏之碧叶，秋之硕果，冬之静雪，四季更迭，每一季都有它独特的韵味。你校将开展以“My Favorite Season in My Hometown”为主题的英语演讲比赛。假如你是Peter，请根据以下问题提示并适当发挥想象，写一篇英语演讲稿。提示： 1. What is the weather like? 2. Why do you like this season? (at least two points) 3. What does your city look like? 4. What activities do people enjoy doing in this season? (at least two points) 5. What do you think of your hometown in this season? 要求： 1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2.必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； 3.词数为100左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)，不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 My Favorite Season in My Hometown Good morning, everyone! My name is Peter. It’s my great honor to introduce my favorite season in my hometown here! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you for listening! 2．学校英语角开展“感悟季节之美”的演讲活动，请你写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的季节。 内容提示：1. Which season do you like best and why? 2. How’s the weather and what do you wear? 3. What activities do you have in this season? 写作要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名； 2. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear teachers and classmates, I’m very glad to be here today to talk about my favorite season with you.   ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening! 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 4 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 6 Seasons 天气和季节（认识自我） 单元写作精练 【写作主题】 写作要求：介绍自己最喜欢的季节。该写作紧扣单元季节与自然生活核心话题，适配中考高频话题作文、书信写作题型；核心考点：一般现在时描述常态、形容词/副词描绘景色、and/because/when引导的并列句与状语从句。 本单元主题属于“人与自然”范畴，涉及“自然景观欣赏、季节生活体验”。该单元旨在培养学生观察自然、感受四季之美的能力，引导学生用英语描绘季节景色、天气特征与季节性活动。通过积累季节相关词汇和场景句型，学生可以熟练完成季节类话题写作，这有助于提升学生的景物描写能力和生活化书面表达能力，树立热爱自然、热爱生活的积极态度。 【词汇积累】 1.季节与天气：spring春天，summer夏天，autumn秋天，winter冬天，sunny晴朗的，windy多风的，cool凉爽的，warm温暖的，hot炎热的，cold寒冷的 2.自然景物：blow吹，shine照耀，leaf树叶，flower花朵，grass草，fruit水果 3.季节活动：fly kites放风筝，go hiking去远足，have picnics野餐，pick fruits摘水果，make snowmen堆雪人 4. -y后缀形容词：windy adj. 多风的；sunny adj. 晴朗的；rainy adj. 多雨的；snowy adj. 下雪的；noisy adj. 喧闹的；sleepy adj. 困倦的；healthy adj. 健康的；foggy adj. 有雾的 5. 情感与场景类：pleasant adj. 宜人的；colourful adj. 五彩缤纷的；lazy adj. 慵懒的；perfect adj. 完美的；memory n. 回忆 【句式积累】 1. 基础句型 ① I like … best because it is a beautiful season.（我最喜欢……，因为它是一个美丽的季节。） ② The weather is pleasant in this season.（这个季节的天气很宜人。） ③ It is the best time to do outdoor activities.（这是做户外活动的最佳时节。） 2. 升级句型 ① The days are windy and bright, making it a perfect time to fly a kite.（微风和煦、阳光明媚，是放风筝的绝佳时节。） ② As the days get shorter and the temperature drops, farmers begin to harvest crops.（白昼渐短、气温下降，农民们开始收割庄稼。） ③ I have many sweet memories of lazy afternoons and cool ice cream in summer.（我对夏日慵懒的午后和清凉的冰淇淋有着许多美好的回忆。） 【原题呈现】 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom正在学习四季相关的知识，他来信想了解你最喜欢的季节。请你根据以下提示给他回一封邮件，介绍你最喜欢的季节。 提示：1. 你最喜欢的季节；2. 该季节的天气与景色特点；3. 你常做的活动及喜欢它的原因。 要求：1. 词数100左右；2. 内容完整，语句通顺；3. 书写规范，无语法错误。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题构思】 体裁：书信（邮件） 人称：第一人称（I/My）为主，第二人称辅助 时态：一般现在时（核心时态，介绍客观季节特征与日常活动） 三段式写作提纲 1. 开头：礼貌问候，开门见山点明自己最喜欢的季节 2. 主体：详细描写季节天气、自然景色，介绍日常户外特色活动 3. 结尾：总结个人感受，表达对该季节的喜爱，礼貌收尾 【范文欣赏】 Dear Tom, I’m glad to hear from you. Among the four seasons, autumn is my favourite one. Autumn brings pleasant weather. The days are cool and bright, and the temperature is just right. The leaves turn brown and fall onto the ground, making the whole world colourful. It is also a harvest season. Farmers are busy harvesting crops in the fields. It is the best time for outdoor activities. I often walk in the park or have a picnic with my family. These sweet moments give me wonderful memories. I love autumn because it is beautiful and peaceful. Yours, Li Hua 【亮点解析】 1. 单元核心词汇落地：精准使用教材核心词汇pleasant, colourful, harvest, temperature, memory，完全贴合单元词块积累要求，无超纲词汇。 2. 核心语法考点运用：熟练运用S+V+P（The days are cool and bright.）、S+V+O（Farmers harvest crops.）等单元重点句型，动词运用准确，语法规范。 3. 高分句式加持：使用非谓语动词making the whole world colourful、固定句型It is the best time for...，提升句式丰富度，摆脱简单句堆砌。 4. 结构工整流畅：严格遵循三段式框架，开篇点题、中间细节分层描写、结尾升华情感，逻辑清晰，符合中考书信写作评分标准。 【基础必做】 一、汉译英（主题要点翻译） 1. 我最喜欢的季节 2. 万物复苏 3. 温暖的阳光 4. 外出野餐 5. 欣赏美丽的花朵 6. 吹凉爽的微风 7. 堆雪人 8. 去远足 9. 收获庄稼 10. 度过愉快的时光 【参考答案】 1. my favourite season 2. everything comes back to life 3. warm sunshine 4. go out for a picnic 5. enjoy beautiful flowers 6. blow cool winds 7. make snowmen 8. go hiking 9. harvest crops 10. have a wonderful time 二、句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） 句型1：My favourite season is spring because the weather becomes warm.我最喜欢的季节是春天，因为天气变得暖和起来。 仿写任务： 1. 我最喜欢秋天，因为到处都有香甜的水果。 2. 冬天是我最喜欢的季节，因为我可以玩雪。 参考答案： 1. My favourite season is autumn because there are sweet fruits everywhere. 2. Winter is my favourite season because I can play with snow. 句型2：It is nice to take a walk outside on sunny days.晴天到户外散步十分惬意。 仿写任务： 1. 在凉爽的下午去爬山很不错。 2. 在春天放风筝十分有趣。 参考答案： 1. It is nice to climb mountains on cool afternoons. 2. It is great fun to fly kites in spring. 句型3：When spring arrives, trees turn green and flowers come out.春天到来时，树木变绿，花儿开放。 仿写任务： 1. 当秋天来临，树叶变黄并纷纷落下。 2. 夏天到来时，我们可以去河里游泳。 参考答案： 1. When autumn arrives, leaves turn yellow and fall down. 2. When summer comes, we can go swimming in the river. 句型4：What I love most about summer is the bright sunshine.关于夏天，我最喜欢的是明媚的阳光。 仿写任务： 1. 关于冬天，我最喜欢的是洁白的雪花。 2. 关于秋天，我最喜欢的是清新的空气。 参考答案： 1. What I love most about winter is the white snowflakes. 2. What I love most about autumn is the fresh air. 句型5：This season brings me lots of joy and unforgettable memories.这个季节带给我许多欢乐与难忘的回忆。 仿写任务： 1. 这个季节带给我很多亲近大自然的机会。 2. 每一年，我都期盼这个美好的季节。 参考答案： 1. This season brings me many chances to get close to nature. 2. Every year, I look forward to this wonderful season. 【提升必做】 一、话题作文 （一） 一年四季，景色不同，特点各异。在每个季节里，我们心中都有一份对自然的赞美与感悟。大自然如此美丽，哪一个抓住了你的心呢？请以“My favorite season---- ______”为题，写一篇英语短文。词数80左右。 内容要点：1. 请补全标题； 2. 你最喜欢哪个季节； 3. 你喜欢该季节的原因（如：气候、景色、活动、感受等）。 注意事项：1. 必须包含所有内容要点； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。 My favorite season— _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 My favorite season---spring Spring is the season which I like best. I think spring is the most beautiful season in a year. The weather gets warmer and warmer. Everything begins to grow. Trees turn green. Many kinds of flowers start to come out. They give the earth a pretty coat. The fields are covered with fresh green grass. Rivers pass through the countryside and the cities quietly. Look! The swallows are coming back again. All these things give me hope and a new start. At this time I always make new plans for the coming year and work hard in the following year to achieve them. That’s why I like spring best. 【写作解析】 1. 题干解读：文章是一篇半命题作文。主要以“My favorite season---- ______”展开描写，首先要确定这个季节，然后对该季节带来的一些变化进行描写，衬托着喜欢这个季节的原因，把题目中的要求写清楚出写具体即可。 2. 点评：文章主要分两段描写。第一段主要具体的写出了春天带来的一些变化；第二段主要写出了喜欢春天的原因以及在这个季节自己要做的一些事情。整个文章结构完整，思路清晰，语言优美，表达准确柔和。 3. 高分亮点： 短语：比较级and比较级；come out；be covered with；pass through；come back。 句型：which引导的定语从句；why引导的表语从句；I think+宾语从句。 （二） 春天是大家都喜欢的季节，你的家乡的春天是什么样的呢？请根据下面所给提示以“Spring in My Hometown”为题描写一下你家乡春天的天气和景色。 要求：1.所给提示词全部用上； 2.句子通顺完整； 3.60词左右。 提示词：come back to life，weather，flower，tree，green，hopeful（给人以希望的） Spring in My Hometown _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Spring In My Hometown Spring returns in March. Many things come back to life. The weather gets warmer and warmer. And it often rains. People say that the rain helps plants grow fast. Trees turn green and flowers begin to come out. The children like flying kites in the field and playing games. The farmers are busy planting. This is a hopeful season. I like spring. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求以“Spring in My Hometown”为题进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍春天万物复苏； 第二步，介绍家乡的春天是什么样的； 第三步，书写结语，表达对春天的喜爱。 [亮点词汇] ①come back to life复苏 ②warmer and warmer越来越暖 ③begin to come out开始开花 [高分句型] People say that the rain helps plants grow fast.（that引导的宾语从句） 二、图画作文 （一） 请根据表格内容及提示词汇，写一篇关于各大城市未来24小时天气预报的短文。词数：80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 提示词汇：below zero (零度以下)，degree (度)。 　Good morning, everyone. Here is the weather report today. It’s rainy and snowy in Beijing. It’s very cold. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Enjoy your day! 【参考范文】 Good morning, everyone. Here is the weather report today. It’s rainy and snowy in Beijing. It’s very cold. The temperature in Beijing is around -5℃, so please wear warm clothes. Shanghai is cloudy all day with a temperature of about 8℃. Hong Kong is sunny and warmer at around 10℃, where you can do outdoor activities. While in Chengdu, there is thick fog today, so drivers must be careful when driving. The temperature in Chengdu is around 5℃. Dalian is cloudy and freezing at around -10℃. Xi’an is sunny after the rain with a temperature of about 0℃. Enjoy your day! 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：以一般现在时为主，描述天气情况； ③提示：根据表格内容及提示词汇，介绍各大城市未来24小时的天气。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头引出话题（已给出）； 第二步，分别介绍各地的天气情况； 第三步，结尾表达祝福（已给出）。 [亮点词汇] ①a bit一点儿 ②all day全天 ③thick fog浓雾 [高分句型] ①Hong Kong is sunny and warmer at around 10℃, where you can do outdoor activities. (where引导非限定定语从句) ②While in Chengdu, there is thick fog today, so drivers must be careful when driving.（so引导的结果状语从句） （二） 假如你是李明，是学校的播音员，你每天为学校播报天气信息，下面表格列出了三天的天气，请为大家播报。 星期 Friday Saturday Sunday 天气 建议 多云，天气凉爽， 适合课后进行室外活动（如打篮球） 雨天， 可以在家做家庭作业，帮父母做家务，和爷爷下象棋… 天气晴朗， 适合和家人去参观农场…… 参考词汇：do housework 要求：1．70词以上（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2．必须包括表格内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 Good morning, boys and girls! I’m Li Ming. Now I’d like to tell you the weather on Friday, Saturday and Sunday. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you for your listening! 【参考范文】 Good morning, boys and girls! I’m Li Ming. Now I’d like to tell you the weather on Friday, Saturday and Sunday. It’s cloudy on Friday. So it’s cool. It’s a good time to play basketball after class. But on Saturday, it’s a rainy day. You can stay at home to do your homework. And you can help your parents to do housework. Then you can play chess with your grandfather. On Sunday, it’s a sunny day. You can go to the farm with your family.   That’s all. Thank you for your listening! 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为天气信息播报； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：注意不要遗漏表格中给出的要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。表格中列出了三天的天气，为同学们播报天气信息。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。首先点出本次播报的主题是周五、周六和周日的天气；其次具体介绍这三天的天气情况及活动建议。 第三步：书写结语。表示感谢收听。 [亮点词汇] ①stay at home呆在家里 ②play chess下象棋 ③go to the farm去农场 ④do housework做家务 [高分句型] ①You can stay at home to do your homework.（情态动词后跟动词原形） ②It’s a good time to play basketball after class. （it为形式主语，动词不定式为真正的主语） 三、应用文 （一）电子邮件 1.假设你是李辉，你的澳大利亚好友Alex给你发来一封电子邮件，请你仔细阅读这封邮件并写一封回信，内容包括： 1.介绍四季的特点以及人们的活动；2.推荐并邀请。 Dear Li Hui, How is everything? I’m planning a trip to China next year. I’m so excited! But I don’t know what the weather is like in different seasons. Could you tell me about the four seasons in your city? Which season do you think is the best for visiting? Yours, Alex 要求： 1.词数80—100词，开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 Dear Alex, Thanks for your email. I am happy to talk about the seasons in my city. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui 【参考范文】 Dear Alex, Thanks for your email. I am happy to talk about the seasons in my city. There are four seasons in my city. Spring is warm and beautiful. People often go for a picnic to enjoy the flowers. Summer is hot, so swimming in the pool is very popular. Autumn is cool and comfortable. It is a good time to climb mountains and pick fruits. Winter is cold and sometimes it snows. We can make snowmen and have snowball fights. I think autumn is the best season for visiting because the weather is neither too hot nor too cold. I hope you can come to my city this autumn. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hui 【写作解析】 写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体和时态：应用文（书信），以一般现在时为主。 明确要点：1.介绍所在城市四季的特点及人们的活动；2.推荐最佳旅游季节并发出邀请。 确定人称：第一人称（I, my）和第二人称（you）。 注意事项：词数80—100，开头结尾已给出，不得出现真实信息。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 第一段（承接已给开头）：承接已给开头“Thanks for your email. I am happy to talk about the seasons in my city.”，自然过渡到对四季的介绍。 第二段（四季特点+活动）：分述春夏秋冬四个季节的天气特点和人们的活动。 第三段（推荐+邀请+结尾）：推荐最佳旅游季节，发出邀请，表达期待回复。 要点一：四季特点与活动 Spring: warm and beautiful/go for a picnic/enjoy the flowers/fly kites/take a walk in the park等 Summer: hot/go swimming/eat ice-cream/stay in air-conditioned rooms/go to the beach等 Autumn: cool and comfortable/climb mountains/pick fruits/enjoy the colorful leaves/ go hiking等 Winter: cold/make snowmen/have snowball fights/wear warm coats/stay at home等   要点二：推荐与邀请 I think autumn is the best season for visiting./The weather is neither too hot nor too cold./You can enjoy the beautiful views./I hope you can come to my city./I’m looking forward to your reply./Welcome to my hometown.等 2．假设你是李明，你的好朋友王刚想了解你家乡四季的情况，请你给王刚写一封电子邮件，告诉他你家乡的细节。 写作提示： 1. 介绍家乡四季美景（春季五彩缤纷；夏季炎热；秋季凉爽；冬季经常下雪）。 2. 介绍四季人们不同的活动（春季踏青；夏季游泳；秋季可以收集树叶；冬季可以滑雪、滑冰）。 3. 邀请好朋友来家乡游玩。 写作要求： 1. 文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80左右（文中已给出内容不计入总词数）。 参考词汇： everywhere 到处；colorful 五彩缤纷的；leaves 树叶（复数）；skate 滑冰 Dear Wang Gang, How are things going? I hope you are well. Let me tell you about my hometown. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can come for a visit. You will have a good time here. Yours, Li Ming 【参考范文】 Dear Wang Gang, How are things going? I hope you are well. Let me tell you about my hometown. In spring, everything becomes colorful and flowers are everywhere, painting the whole town in bright shades. We often go hiking and have picnics in the warm sun. Summer is hot, so we love swimming in the cool river to cool off and play water games with friends. When autumn comes, the weather turns cool, and we enjoy collecting beautiful fallen leaves. Winter is cold and snowy, which is perfect for skiing down the hills and skating on the frozen lake. I hope you can come for a visit. You will have a good time here. Yours, Li Ming 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，引出话题； 第二步，按顺序介绍四季特点以及各季节对应的活动； 第三步，邀请好朋友来家乡游玩。 [亮点词汇] ①have picnics野餐 ②cool off凉快下来 ③have a good time玩得开心 [高分句型] Winter is cold and snowy, which is perfect for skiing down the hills and skating on the frozen lake.(which引导的非限制性定语从句) （二）推荐信 1．假设你是Bobby，你的笔友Anna计划来沈阳游玩，想了解沈阳的天气情况和最适合游玩的季节。请你写封回信，给出建议。内容包括： 1.沈阳的气候情况； 2.推荐最适合游玩的季节及原因； 3.表达期望。 要求：1.词数 80—100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Anna, I am glad to know that you are coming to Shenyang for a holiday. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Bobby 【参考范文】 Dear Anna, I am glad to know that you are coming to Shenyang for a holiday. There are four seasons in Shenyang, spring, summer, autumn and winter. It’s warm in spring. It is hot and rainy in summer. The temperature drops rapidly in autumn. I think the best season to visit Shenyang is winter. In winter, when it snows, everything is white. You can enjoy the snow scenery. If you are a skiing lover, you can have a try. You can see a lot of beautiful snow sculptures and ice lanterns. Hope you will enjoy your trip! Yours, Bobby 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ① 题材：本文为一篇应用文，为书信作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：要点内容已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，完善表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍沈阳的气候情况； 第二步，推荐最适合游玩的季节及原因； 第三步，希望对方玩得开心。 [亮点词汇] ① have a try试一试 ② snow sculptures雪雕 [高分句型] ① I think the best season to visit Shenyang is winter.（宾语从句） ② In winter, when it snows, everything is white.（when引导的时间状语从句） ③ If you are a skiing lover, you can have a try.（if引导的条件状语从句） 2.假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Jack计划今年暑假来日照旅游度假。请你根据以下提示，给他写一封信。 1.介绍日照地理位置、气候环境等； 2.向他推荐一至两处景点； 3.询问具体计划，以便做好准备。 要求： 1.根据提示内容，不要逐字翻译； 2.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名； 3.词数90左右。 Dear Jack, I’m glad to learn that you are coming to Rizhao for your summer vacation. ______________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Lihua 【参考范文】 Dear Jack, I’m glad to learn that you are coming to Rizhao for your summer vacation. Sunshine in southeastern Shandong Province, China, its temperature is neither too high nor too low. Rizhao Wulian Mountain Scenic Area is a combination of Wulian Mountain and Jiuxian Mountain. Rizhao Seashore National Forest Park is a rare natural seashore bathing ground in northern China. Do you have any good plans? Give me a call before you come. I'll show you these beautiful sceneries. Yours, Lihua 【写作解析】 假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Jack计划今年暑假来日照旅游度假。请你根据以下提示，给他写一封信。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。 （三）演讲稿 1．春之繁华，夏之碧叶，秋之硕果，冬之静雪，四季更迭，每一季都有它独特的韵味。你校将开展以“My Favorite Season in My Hometown”为主题的英语演讲比赛。假如你是Peter，请根据以下问题提示并适当发挥想象，写一篇英语演讲稿。提示： 1. What is the weather like? 2. Why do you like this season? (at least two points) 3. What does your city look like? 4. What activities do people enjoy doing in this season? (at least two points) 5. What do you think of your hometown in this season? 要求： 1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2.必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； 3.词数为100左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)，不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 My Favorite Season in My Hometown Good morning, everyone! My name is Peter. It’s my great honor to introduce my favorite season in my hometown here! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you for listening! 【参考范文】 My Favorite Season in My Hometown Good morning, everyone! My name is Peter. It’s my great honor to introduce my favorite season in my hometown here! My favorite season is autumn. The weather in autumn is neither too hot nor too cold. My city looks like a golden world. The leaves on the trees turn yellow and fall gently. I like autumn because it’s also the harvest season. We can enjoy the fruits and grains. Besides, the temperature is just right for outdoor activities. People enjoy going for a picnic in the park and taking beautiful photos of the scenery. Some also like to climb mountains and enjoy the views from the top. I think my hometown is most charming in autumn. The peaceful and beautiful scene makes me feel relaxed and happy. That’s all. Thank you for listening! 【写作解析】 [第一步：审题立意]   确定文体：景物描写类演讲稿，全文以一般现在时为主 明确要点：①天气状况：秋天气候不冷不热，舒适宜人 ②喜爱理由：丰收时节，可以品尝各类瓜果粮食；温度适宜，很适合开展户外活动 ③城市样貌：整座城市宛如金色天地，树叶泛黄缓缓飘落 ④市民休闲活动：公园野餐、拍照赏景；登高爬山欣赏风光 ⑤个人评价：家乡的秋日最迷人，静谧美景令人舒心愉悦 确定人称：第一人称(I) 注意事项：控制词数，不得透露真实信息 [第二步：构思布局]   三段式结构： 开头段：题目固定开篇，问候听众，点明演讲主题 主体段：依次按照天气→城市景色→喜爱缘由→人们日常活动的顺序完整叙述 结尾段：抒发个人对家乡秋天的感受评价，收尾致谢听众 [第三步：要点展开]   要点一：介绍家乡的秋天 气候：My favorite season/neither too hot nor too cold/undoubtedly my favorite season all year round/mild and pleasant/temperature is just perfect等 城市：looks like a golden world/turn yellow and fall gently/is covered in warm golden colors/drift down slowly in the soft wind/becomes a fantastic golden paradise等 原因：the harvest season/enjoy the fruits and grains/just right for outdoor activities/a fruitful harvest season/taste fresh fruits and crops we grow ourselves/makes outdoor activities wonderful/after months of hard work等 活动：enjoy going for a picnic in the park and taking beautiful photos of the scenery/climb mountains and enjoy the views from the top/to appreciate wide views on peaks/have park picnics and take photos/popular for enjoying wonderful scenery等 要点二：抒发个人对家乡秋日的看法 评价：most charming in autumn/peaceful and beautiful scene/makes me feel relaxed and happy/brings the greatest beauty to my hometown/calms my heart and fills me with joy/the most attractive season/delighted等 2．学校英语角开展“感悟季节之美”的演讲活动，请你写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的季节。 内容提示：1. Which season do you like best and why? 2. How’s the weather and what do you wear? 3. What activities do you have in this season? 写作要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名； 2. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear teachers and classmates, I’m very glad to be here today to talk about my favorite season with you.   ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening! 【参考范文】 Dear teachers and classmates, I’m very glad to be here today to talk about my favorite season with you. My favorite season is autumn. I like it because the weather is cool and comfortable. In autumn, I usually wear a light jacket and comfortable jeans. Autumn is a beautiful harvest season. The leaves turn yellow and red, and the golden rice looks so lovely. I often go hiking with my family. Sometimes we have a picnic in the park. I also love flying colorful kites. I truly enjoy autumn for its pleasant weather and wonderful outdoor activities. It brings me peace and happiness every year. Thank you for listening! 【写作解析】 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文（演讲稿），用一般现在时 明确要点：最喜欢的季节（秋天）及原因（天气凉爽舒适）、天气（凉爽舒适）及穿着（轻便夹克和舒适牛仔裤）、季节活动（爬山、野餐、放风筝） 确定人称：第一人称（I） 注意事项：需包含所有要点，开头结尾已给出，词数80左右，注意演讲稿的交流感 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：已给出，引出最喜欢的季节是秋天并说明原因（天气凉爽舒适）及穿着（轻便夹克和舒适牛仔裤） 主体段：描述秋天的景象（美丽的收获季节、树叶变黄变红、金黄的稻谷）及季节活动（和家人爬山、公园野餐、放五彩风筝） 结尾段：总结对秋天的喜爱（宜人的天气和美好的户外活动带来平静和快乐） [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：最喜欢的季节及原因、穿着 季节表达：My favorite season is autumn/Autumn is the season I love best等 原因表达：the weather is cool and comfortable/not too hot or too cold等 穿着表达：wear a light jacket and comfortable jeans/wear a light jacket, jeans and sports shoes等 要点二：季节景象 景象描述：a beautiful harvest season/the leaves turn yellow and red/golden rice looks so lovely等 要点三：季节活动 活动一：go hiking with my family/enjoy family hiking trips等 活动二：have a picnic in the park/enjoy outdoor picnics等 活动三：flying colorful kites/fly kites in the open field等 要点四：总结感受 感受表达：enjoy autumn for its pleasant weather and wonderful outdoor activities/autumn brings me peace and happiness等 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 4 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $