UNIT 1 Period 5 Writing-【优学精讲】2026-2027学年高中英语必修第一册教用课件（人教版）

该高中英语课件核心聚焦应用文写作（建议信）与场景微续写，通过“李华给迈克写人际关系建议信”典型任务导入，以审题谋篇、遣词造句（对接单元词汇句式）、靓化表达、衔接成篇为学习支架，衔接实战演练与模板积累，构建从基础到应用的写作能力培养脉络。 其亮点在于主题引领情境写作，融合语言能力与思维品质培养。建议信部分提供基础句到靓化表达的改写（如用it作形式主语、宾语从句优化句式），微续写注重情感动作描写词汇及倒装句等语法运用，提升语言表达准确性与丰富性。通过“笔尖粮仓”模板和实战演练，帮助学生掌握写作策略，培养自主学习能力，教师可依托结构化流程高效开展教学。

Period 5　Writing 主题引领 情境写作 假定你是李华，你的朋友迈克(Mike)最近来中国某中学交换学习，他发来邮件说不知道如何跟新同学相处。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括： 1.你的建议； 2.表达祝愿。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 典题呈现 写作一　应用文写作(关于人际关系的建议信) 返回首页 　审题谋篇 返回首页 　遣词造句 1．__________ adj.　　　　　　 合适的 2．__________ n. 话题 3．__________ 报名参加 4．___________________adj. 课外的 5．__________ n. 解决办法；答案 　巧妙对接单元词汇 suitable topic sign up for extra-curricular solution 返回首页 [第一段]　点明写信目的 1．我很高兴得知你在中国学习。 I'm very glad to know ___________________________________． 2．关于如何与新同学好好相处，我的建议如下。 As to how to get along well with new classmates, _________________ _______________________________． 　巧妙单元句式、语法 that you are studying in China my suggestions are as follows 返回首页 [第二段]　提出合情合理的建议 3．你应该尝试和你的同学交流。 You should _________________________________________． 4．我认为文化差异是一个很好的话题。 I think cultural difference _______________． 5．关心同学是个好主意。 _____________________________________is a good idea. try to communicate with your classmates is a good topic Showing care to your classmates 返回首页 6．待人友好是交朋友的一个合适的办法。(动词-ing形式作主语) __________________________________________________________ 7．我建议你报名参加课外活动，以便你和你的新同学建立亲密的关系。(so that引导目的状语从句) I recommend you _________________________________________ _____________________________________with your new classmates. Being friendly is a suitable solution to make friends. to sign up for extra-curricular activities so that you can build close relationships 返回首页 [第三段]　表达自己的祝愿 8．我确实希望你在新学校过得愉快。 I _________________________________in your new school. do hope you will have a good time 返回首页 9．用it作形式主语改写句5 ________________________________________________________ 10．用含有宾语从句的复合句改写句7 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 　靓化表达促提升 It is a good idea to show care to your classmates. I recommend that you (should) sign up for extra-curricular activities so that you can build close relationships with your new classmates. 返回首页 　衔接成篇 __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ 返回首页 One possible version： Dear Mike， I'm very glad to know that you are studying in China. As to how to get along well with new classmates, my suggestions are as follows. Firstly, you should try to communicate with your classmates. And I think cultural difference is a good topic. Secondly, it is a good idea to show care to your classmates. After all, being friendly is a suitable solution to make friends. Last but not least, I recommend that you (should) sign up for extra-curricular activities so that you can build close relationships with your new classmates. I do hope you will have a good time in your new school. Yours， Li Hua 返回首页 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友安妮(Anne)因不擅长与他人交流，感到十分苦恼。最近，她来信向你求助。请你用英语给她写一封回信。内容包括： 1.劝她不必苦恼； 2.给她提出建议。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 实战演练 返回首页 Dear Anne， __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hua 返回首页 One possible version： Dear Anne， I'm sorry to hear that you are anxious about the problem that you can't communicate with others well. Actually, there is no need for you to worry too much about it. I'll give you some tips on how to do it well. First, try to invite your classmates to take part in some activities together, which will help you understand each other better. Besides, helping students who are in trouble can help you make more friends. I do hope my advice will be helpful to you. Yours， Li Hua 返回首页 笔尖粮仓应用文写作赋能站——建议信 第一段点明写信目的 1.Learning that you have difficulty with your English, I'm writing to give you some suggestions/advice.　得知你在英语上有困难，我写信给你一些建议。 2.I'm sorry to know that you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely. 很遗憾听说你现在在与人交流方面有些困难，你可能会经常感到孤独。 返回首页 第二段提出具体、合理的建议 1.First(ly), I recommend that you (should) talk to your friend about his behaviour face to face.　首先，我建议你和你的朋友面对面谈谈他的行为。 2.What's more, it is also a good choice/idea for you to read English every morning. 另外，每天早上阅读英语对你来说也是一个不错的选择/主意。 3.In my opinion/From my point of view, it would be wise for you to do some voluntary work.　在我看来，做一些志愿工作对你来说是明智的。 4.More importantly, you can turn to your teachers for help. 更重要的是，你可以向你的老师们寻求帮助。 5.Why not join a club? If you do this, you can make friends. 为什么不加入一个俱乐部呢？如果你这样做的话，就会交到朋友。 返回首页 第三段表达自己的祝愿或期望 1.I firmly believe, through your efforts, you can manage to overcome these difficulties. 我坚信，通过努力，你会设法克服这些困难的。 2.I do hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you./I really hope you will find these suggestions useful. 我真的希望我的建议对你有益。/我真的希望这些建议能帮到你。 返回首页 积累教材续写语料——有效强化教考衔接 写作二　场景微续写(汤姆悔悟弃游戏) 词汇积累 [情感描写]　prefer, content, confused, responsible, be attracted to, addicted, addicted to [动作描写]　volunteer, debate, challenge, graduate, recommend, sign up (for sth.), quit, focus on [活动描写]　ballet, movement, suitable for, advance, extra-curricular, adventure, survival, behaviour 返回首页 佳句积累 [情感描写]　1.Obviously, I was unhappy, but I won't quit. 2.I'm a bit worried about keeping up with the other students in my advanced course. 3.I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. [动作描写]　Every Wednesday, we work at a soup kitchen and hand out food to homeless people in the community. [主旨升华]　Studying hard isn't always fun, but I'll be well prepared for university or whatever else comes in the future. 返回首页 [场景呈现]　整个学期，汤姆都沉迷于电脑游戏。然而，对当时的他来说，放弃玩电脑游戏很难。后来他的期末考试结果出来了，他对此不满意。一想到自己犯了那么多愚蠢的错误，他非常羞愧和内疚。并且当他想到父母失望的表情时，他产生了一种深深的羞愧感。他羞愧得快要哭了。他几乎失去了信心，打算彻底放弃。幸运的是，他的父母来安慰他，鼓励他对自己和未来负责。他最终决定从此停止玩电脑游戏，专心学习。 重拳锤炼续写场景——积累内化应用提升 返回首页 1．____________________________________the whole semester. However, 2._______________________________ (it＋be＋adj.＋for sb.to do sth.) playing computer games at the time. Then came the result of his final examination and 3.__________________________. The thought of making so many silly mistakes made him extremely ashamed and guilty.And when he thought of the disappointed expression of his parents，4.____________________________________ (无生命名词作主语).5.___________________________ (倒装句) he was about to cry. He almost lost heart and intended to give up completely. Luckily, his parents came to comfort him, 6._______________________ ____________________________________(现在分词短语作状语).He finally decided to 7.____________________________________________ ___________from then on. Tom was addicted to computer games it was difficult for him to give up he was not content with it a deep sense of shame spread into his mind So ashamed was he that encouraging him to be responsible for himself and his future quit playing computer games and focus on his study 返回首页 笔墨延展读后续写多元话题库——羞愧和自责 短语必记 1.lower/drop/bow one's head in shame 　羞愧地低下头 2.be struck dead with shame 羞愧得要死 3.feel embarrassed and guilty about... 对……感到尴尬和羞愧 4.with a deep sense of shame/guilt 带着深深的羞愧/自责感 5.feel one's face burning 感觉脸发烫 6.feel the blood rushing to one's face 感到血液涌到脸上 返回首页 必背金句 1.An expression of shame crossed his face.　他面露愧色。 2.She was so ashamed that she was close to tears.　她羞愧得快要哭了。 3.His face was hot with shame/guilt.　他羞愧/愧疚得脸上火辣辣的。 4.So ashamed was he that he could feel his face burning.　他羞愧难当，感觉脸发烫。 5.I felt embarrassed and guilty about my silly mistake.　我为自己愚蠢的错误感到尴尬和羞愧。 6.She stood still, head bowed, hands put in front of her.　她一动不动地站着，低着头，双手放在身前。 返回首页 $