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Unit 6
Beyond Earth
人教版2024版九年级上册
Section B (3a-3c) 写作课
Learning Objectives
1.能够基于写作需求,在阅读3a范文后,在教师引导下开展写作准备,梳理“我的太空梦想”类作文的结构(如点明梦想、分点阐述理由、表达展望),列出自己太空梦想对应的“梦想—理由—展望”的内容要点。
2.能够将本单元所学航天主题词汇、一般将来时被动语态、表达观点的句型以及说理功能表达(如first, second, third等顺序连接词),迁移应用到自己的太空梦想写作当中。
3.通过自评(检查要点完整性、词汇语法正确性)和互评(交流梦想构想是否清晰、理由是否充分),改进写作初稿,优化语篇结构(使分点说理逻辑更清晰)、丰富内容细节(补充设想与具体作用描写)、打磨语言表达(修正语态时态、优化主题词汇),提升观点阐述类作文的质量。
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Section B
How far can we go into space?
What is this?
It is the moon.
Do you know any Chinese mythological stories(神话故事) related to the moon?
Wu Gang cut down the trees,and the goddess Chang'e flies to the moon.
Let’s watch.
send a spacecraft to the nearest star system
search for life in the solar system
build a satellite to collect the sun’s energy and send it to Earth
A reporter is interviewing three students about their space dreams. Let's take a look together.
3a Read about one teenager’s space dream. Then complete the chart.
Passage Analysis
太空梦
主题
观点议论文
文体
第一人称
第三人称
人称
一般现在时
一般将来时
时态
The space dream
For scientific research
New energy resources
Life and space tourism
Hope for the future
Passage Analysis
Passage Structure
总 分总结构
Passage Analysis
What?
Why?
My Space Dream
Reason 1: ______________________________________
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Reason 2: ______________________________________
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Reason 3: ______________________________________
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It offers a place for scientists to cooperate and do space research. New technologies developed there can help build stations on other planets.
One day a research station will be built on the moon.
We may find useful new energy resources
on the moon for people on Earth.
People can live, work and travel there.
Tourists can visit and enjoy space holidays.
My Space Dream
My space dream is that one day a research station will be built on the moon. I believe there are quite a few benefits.
First, it will be a good place for scientists to cooperate and do space research together. New technologies can be developed, tested, and operated there. These technologies can then be used to help build stations on Mars and other planets.
n.益处
v.合作
v.操作
Second, more resources will be found. I think the moon may have some special kind of energy resource that can be useful to Earth. It will just take time for scientists to find it.
Third, people may live and work there. Tourists will also be able to visit. I want to be one of the first visitors. I hope that one day we humans can spend holidays in space and explore the universe.
Humans have achieved many things that were once only dreams. I hope the research station on the moon will be built in the near future, and I hope it will happen during my lifetime.
能源
探索宇宙
1. I believe there are quite a few benefits. (教材P59 3a)
quite a few 相当多;不少
相当于many,修饰可数名词复数。
I’ve been there quite a few times. 我去过那里好多次了。
Quite a few students took part in the sports meeting held in our school.
很多学生参加了在我们学校举办的运动会。
词块拓展 quite a little 相当多;不少 修饰不可数名词
There is quite a little water left in the bottle. 瓶子里还剩下不少水。
Language Points
Language points
2. New technologies can be developed, tested, and operated there. (教材P59 3a)
operate /ˈɒpəreɪt/ v.操作;运行
He can operate the new machine by himself. 他能独立操作这台新机器。
This machine is operating well at high speed. 这台机器正高速运转,运行良好。
词义拓展 [不及物动词]动手术
operate on 给······动手术
The doctor will operate on his eyes. 医生将给他的眼睛动手术。
operation n.操作;运行
Language Points
Language points
3b Discuss the ideas about space. Which interests you the most and why?
build a research station on the moon
send a spacecraft to the nearest star system
search for life in the solar system
build a satellite to collect the sun’s energy and send it to Earth
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If we collect energy from space, we can reduce pollution on Earth. …
I want to send a spacecraft to the nearest star system. It can help us …
send a spacecraft to the nearest star system
My space dream is to ____________________________________.
First, I want to _______________________________________.
Second, I can __________________________________________.
Third, I hope to _________________________________________.
向最近的恒星系统发射航天器
send a spacecraft to the nearest star system
find Earth‑like planets
inspire kids to love science
help humans survive in the future
search for life in the solar system
My space dream is to ___________________________.
First, I want to _______________________________________.
Second, I can __________________________________________.
Third, I hope to _________________________________________.
在太阳系中搜寻生命
search for life in the solar system
know if we are alone
learn how life begins
protect Earth better.
build a satellite to collect the sun’s energy and send it to Earth
My space dream is to ___________________________________.
First, I want to _______________________________________.
Second, I can __________________________________________.
Third, I hope to _________________________________________.
建造卫星收集太阳能并将其输送到地球
build a satellite to collect the sun’s energy and send it to Earth
want to use clean energy
make power day and night
help poor areas get electricity
State your dream
Talk about the benefits
Express your wish
My space dream is that...
I think my dream is meaningful because...
I hope that...
3c Write your own space dream. You can include some pictures in your writing.
First, of all the planets in the solar system, the environment on Mars is the most similar to Earth’s. By exploring Mars, we can learn more about the formation and changes of planets. It can also help us find out whether humans can live on Mars in the future.
分点阐
述梦想
的具体
内容和
意义
3c Write your own space dream. You can include some pictures in your writing.
Second, I hope to look for water and other useful resources on Mars. These discoveries will help humans explore further into space.
分点阐
述梦想
的具体
内容和
意义
3c Write your own space dream. You can include some pictures in your writing.
Third, I want to take amazing photos of Mars and send them back to Earth. I’m sure that Mars has wonderful sights we have never seen before.
分点阐
述梦想
的具体
内容和
意义
3c Write your own space dream. You can include some pictures in your writing.
With the development of science and technology, I believe my space dream will come true. I will study hard from now on to make it possible.
总结全文
3c Write your own space dream. You can include some pictures in your writing.
开头:引出话题
段落布局
中间:分点阐述梦想的具体内容和意义
结尾:总结全文,表达实现梦想的决心
My space dream is to fly to Mars and study its environment... I believe this will be very meaningful.
第一点:First, ... learn more about the formation and changes of planets ... whether humans can live on Mars...
第二点:Second,...look for water and other useful resources...
第三点:Third, ... take amazing photos...
... I believe my space dream will come true. I will study hard from now on to make it possible.
3c Write your own space dream. You can include some pictures in your writing.
Checklist Self-evaluation Peer-evaluation Teacher-evaluation
Clear structure
Topic sentence
More relative information
Right linking words
Right grammar
Right spelling
Good handwriting
评价量规
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My Space Dream
My space dream is that one day we will send special tools to search for life in the solar system. I believe this project is really valuable.
First, these space tools will be sent to different planets. They can collect useful information and take photos. Scientists will know more about the environment of other planets.
Second, if some form of life is found, our understanding of life will completely change. We will not be the only living things in space.
Third, this exploration will push space technology forward. New
3c Write your own space dream. You can include some pictures in your writing.
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technology developed in this project can also help humans solve problems on Earth.
Humans have turned many old dreams into reality. I hope we can find signs of life in the solar system one day, and I hope this amazing discovery will happen in the future.
3c Write your own space dream. You can include some pictures in your writing.
Summary
1. New words: craft, spaceship, survey, crowded, operate
2. Sentences: ① Though many missions failed or had to be canceled, space
exploration never stopped.
② New technologies can be developed, tested, and operated
there.
真题速递
假设你们学校英文报正在举办以“My Dream of Exploring Space”为主题的征文活动,请根据以下问题,写一篇英语短文投稿。
1. What’s your dream related to space exploration?
2. Why do you have this dream?
3. What will you do to make it come true?
真题速递
My Dream of Exploring Space
My dream is to become an astronaut and explore the mysterious universe.
I have this dream because I’m deeply attracted by the unknown secrets of space. I wonder whether there is other life in space. Besides, I admire Chinese astronauts who make great achievements in space exploration.
To make my dream come true, I’m working hard on science and math at school. I read space books and join the school science club. I know it is a difficult goal, but I will stick to it and never give up. I hope I can see the amazing space scenery in person one day.
Homework
01.Must do
02.Choose to do
请以“My Space Dream”为题写一篇小短文。
Memorize the new words, expressions and sentences in Section B (3a-3c)
1.7.2013
Here is your homework for today. Please complete the written and oral tasks. Remember to practice speaking as much as you can. This will help you become more confident.
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